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KiyoshiKyokai

PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 9:09 pm


It was ShadowDragon's idea to create this thread--a kind of showcase for the works we post in the writer's subforum. If a mod could sticky this sometime... that might be nice.

Anyway, from those of us who write, to those of you who read, here is a collection of our best from the writer's subforum. If you find something here that catches your eye, why not get involved, browse the forum, and help us continue and improve our work. Besides--how often do you get to watch your favorite story unfold before your eyes--or even see your comments shape it? How often do you get to meet the author of a story you read, and hear his/her opinions about the characters and worlds?

We're not Stephen Kings, or Tolkiens, or even Terry Pratchets, but the original works you can find in the writing subforum have a charm that I don't think you can find in pop literature--the charm of watching a story seed become a novel, or a novice writer refine his work into that of a master.

That said, we regular posters in the subforum will take turns posting our top-quality works here for you, linking back to the subforum threads from which those works originate. If you like the samples here, take a look at the longer pieces within.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 9:10 pm


This is a serial fiction I'm writing, Dark Magical Orchestra, which updates once a week on Mondays. Please enjoy, and leave comments in the main thread here if you liked it, or noticed anything that needs improving. ^_^

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First Movement: Dark Magical Houseguests

Deep recessed in the mountains of Eastern Europe, a quaint villa stood, cut off from humanity. It is here, in the year 1950, where one might find the abode of young Cosette Garidion. On this calm, fair-weathered day of her eighteenth year, she was to be found reading alone in her study.

She turned another page of the musty grimoire on the desk in front of her, then gave a sigh of something not unlike boredom. Her white hair fell across her pale back, over a black and raspberry-colored dress handed down through the ages of her illustrious family. Her golden-hazel eyes, however, shone with a sharpness and force of will that mere boredom could not allay.

On a piece of paper beside, her, she was making various calculations, notes, and thoughts. Every few moments, she would stand up and walk over to a large board, covered with an ornate map of the world, study it for a bit, then return to her previous seat to continue making notes.

Upon her board were various pieces, like soldiers or chariots or kings. Even monsters and eldritch creatures loomed among them. Every few moves, after consulting her books and papers extensively, Cosette would move a few pieces, and slide a dial on the table forward once notch.

Cosette began moving more rapidly now, adding and removing pieces, replacing them with deep red pieces from a chest nearby. After a hundred trips to the table and back, with four hours of work behind her, the dial at last read 2050 as Cosette removed the last non-red piece from the board.

With a huff of frustration, she scuttled the red pieces off the board and replaced them into the chest, returning the board to its previous state, and resetting the dial to 1950, its initial value.

“A hundred years is too long to rebuild the empire.” She sighed, looking up at a picture which hung above the study’s old mantle. It was an oil painting of the Roman Emperor, Caligula, a figure Cosette still traced her family lines back to, and whose legacy it had been her life’s dream to restore.

It was too early for a fire, but she would probably have to put one together soon. The spring still wasn’t warm enough to stay up too late without proper heat. Perhaps she could call Narshe to do it for her. Servants must have some use, right?

As she was considering calling upon the one other soul within fifty miles, she was met with the sound of a loud crash, followed by the whining voice of her compatriot. “Ohhh, Coseeeeeette! Heeeeeelp meeeee!”

There was not a sense of urgency in the words, and they were drawn out in an annoyingly blithe singsong way. Even after she heard the crashing downstairs and felt the shaking of the old villa, she couldn’t be too bothered to hurry.

She traipsed down the red carpeted hallway and descended the staircase, stopping to brush some dust from a vase, before another shockwave rumbling through the house almost knocked her from her feet.

“What is it now, Narshe?” Cosette called back, in a voice that didn’t attempt to hide a single ounce of annoyance.

From the door to the basement, another young-looking woman appeared. She had reddish eyes behind thick spectacles, and a light brown cloak over her blue skirt and shirt. Disarrayed brown hair was sticking out at odd angles, and her glasses sat slightly astray. Her figure was tall, but full in the important places, making her seem much more mature than the somewhat childlike Cosette.

“Ah, well, there was a problem with my binding spell.” She shrugged, straightening her glasses.

“What did you set loose this time?” Cosette’s lips curled into a disdainful sneer.

“Hmm… a Destroyer?” Narshe scratched the back of her head with a laugh. “I needed demon tears for my experiment.”


You can’t bind a Destroyer.” Cosette’s mouth hung open a bit, giving her servant a disbelieving look. “What sort of fool... why didn’t you just summon a Mourner, they practically give away tears.”

Narshe gave a coy look, “Well the summoning would have involved us performing a hedonistic ritual under the full moon, and the last time you said that it made you really uncomforta-”

“That never happened, and stop involving me in your decadent fantasies. There are twelve ways to summon Mourners, why do you only know that one?” Cosette’s hands rested on her hips in a kind of pout.

At about that moment, the house shook again, and with a colossal force, a terrific beast smashed through the wall which separated the main villa from Narshe’s laboratories.

A huge beast, around eight feet tall burst into the foyer of the villa, its skin was a dark brown, and reeked of sulfur, while red hair ran down its head and back. Large green eyes glanced hastily around the room, while feral teeth clicked a few times, eager for something to devour.

“You there,” Cosette pointed to the beast in a rather imperialistic manner, “desist immediately!”

The demon gave her a critical look, then heaved a three hundred year-old statue of one of Cosette’s grandfathers over its head and lobbed it at the girl. Tipping her head to the side impassively, Cosette dodged as the statue whizzed by a hair’s breadth to the left.

“How dare you defy me?” She pouted, stamping her foot.

Narshe looked up at the demon towering over her and gave a little shriek, as she took a step back. The demon grabbed her with a swift movement, preventing her escape, and lifted her over its head.

“Oh, Coseeeeette! It’s got meeeee!” Narshe whined.

“That sounds like the result of a critical error on your part.” Cosette sneered. The impact of the statue against the villa wall had turned the old relic nearly to dust, and the girl was kneeled down, collecting fragments of the statue into her hand.

“That’s true...” Narshe mumbled. With a snapping sound, her whole body dissolved into a red mist, which floated out of the demon’s fingers just as it was about to crunch down on her head.

Cosette walked calmly down the stairs, “listen here, listen here.” She got the demon’s attention. “You’ve got a lot of nerve to break into my palace and start destroying my things, but I can kind of respect that.” She held out a hand to signal that she wasn’t done yet. The demon scratched its claws into the ground beneath its feet, splintering the old wood, yet it listened to her speak.

“Actually, it’s my villa.” The red mist collected itself together and resumed the form of Narshe.

“Yes, but I own you.” Cosette scowled back. She was walking in a circle around the demon now, as she spoke. “I realize you like to break stuff, but really, you could be more polite. At least it was great-great-great..." She paused to count greats, "great-great-grandfather Calval. I didn’t really like him anyway.” She paused at the spot where the statue used to stand and looked down with a slight smirk, before resuming her pacing.

“Anyway, point in point.” The girl continued, “You like to break stuff, and I have things that I want broken. Why don’t we work out something more beneficial to both sides?”

“Your suggestion presents no gain for me, mortal. Whether I destroy you and your things or some other’s, it’s all the same for me. I can, and will, destroy you first, then move on to the others.” The demon spoke in a raspy, infernal tone, and it lifted a massive fist to crush Cosette in a single blow.

“There’s a certain critical flaw in your plan.” Cosette held up a finger and gave a slight smirk, as the demon’s fist fell above her.

In a flash of light, the creature’s hand shot back, burning in white fire, repelled by some invisible force.

“A circle of bone shall bind Calamity.” A trickle of white limestone dust from the ruined statue fell from Cosette’s hands, which she clapped together in an attempt to clean off. Surely enough, a ring of the substance followed the path she had walked, a complete circle around the demon. “Now that you’re in my power, the table turns, destroyer. Will you still refuse me?”

“I thought you said that Destroyers couldn’t be bound...” Narshe made a thoughtful gesture, biting one of her long, red fingernails.

“I said you can’t bind a Destroyer. For me, it’s a paltry feat.” Cosette tossed her hair back, laughing. “I’m a descendant of King Solomon, after all.”

The demon roared in anger, slamming its fists several more times against its mystic prison, before curling up upon the floor and nursing its wounds.

“Narshe.” Cosette turned to her accomplice. “Bring me a vessel, and some rings.”

“Ah, right away, mistress.” Narshe headed off.

“And don’t call me ‘mistress’.” Cosette’s yell chased her off.

“Release me now, and I will leave you in peace.” The demon spoke again, in as civil a tone as a Destroyer can manage. If you bind me, you shall come to dearly regret it, mortal. My master is the Archdemon Knale, a twelfth-ranked sovereign of the pit, and reserves dear tortures to those interfering with her servants.”

“Consider your offer considered... and declined.” Cosette shrugged, “If your master had disciplined you well enough to kill me rather than listen to my speech, perhaps I would be afraid of her.”

Narshe returned, carrying a set of polished bone bangles in one hand, and the lifeless body of a what appeared to be a young girl over her shoulder.

“This was a really fun one.” She dumped the girl on the floor, licking her fingers. Two bite marks were clearly visible on the girl’s neck, as well as various other places on her body. Narshe knelt down and affixed the bangles to the girl’s wrists, ankles, and neck.

“You really are a despicable creature, you know that?” Cosette stepped past Narshe and grabbed hold of the dead girl’s arm, tugging. The corpse moved a few inches across the floor, despite decent effort from Cosette.

“Move her over there.” The young Cosette nodded her head toward the other end of the room, dropping the corpse’s arm in as dignified a manner as she could manage.

“As you wish, mistress.” Narshe giggled, hefting the form of the girl with one hand, and carrying it across the room.

“Now, we can do this the easy way...” Cosette addressed the demon, pointing an imperialistic finger at it, “or the long way.”

“Don’t presume to torture me, pathetic mortal. That is a glory reserved for Lord Knale alone.” The demon struck again, succeeding in injuring itself even more badly.

“No, I can’t force you to do anything, of course...” Cosette laughed. “But I know what demons like you fear the most.”

“I fear nothing!” The demon struck again, blasting itself with another crash of white flames.

“Precisely, precisely. I’m just going to leave you here alone until you decide to join me. Let me know when the boredom gets to you, and we’ll talk again.” Cosette made a motion with her fingers for Narshe to follow, and the two left.

Five minutes later...

“Damn you, mortal! I concede!” The demon bellowed, and Cosette and Narshe popped back out from the other room.

“Hehe… even weaker than you imagined.” Narshe snickered.

“Do what you like, wretch, just let me out of here!” The demon roared.

“Of course. Once you inhabit this body, you’ll be free to move around as you like.” Cosette tipped her head again to Narshe, and the vampire lifted the girl’s body into the air, tossing it to the demon.

Throwing its head back, the demon seemed to dematerialize as its essence was absorbed into the corpse. In a bright flash of light, then total silence, the corpse collapsed onto the ground, immobile.

With a twitch, it moved, then set its feet on the ground. As though pulled up by marionette strings, the body rose to a full standing position. The form of the girl was there, but it was the demon’s aura glowing behind her, a radiant power impossible to ignore.

“Now to destroy you both for this indiscretion...” the voice was a bit higher pitched, but still a somewhat low mismatch for the body the demon inhabited. It began to walk towards Cosette, stepping over the circle with ease.

“Stop there, servant.” Cosette ordered. The body of the demon halted automatically at her command.

“What is this?!” The demon strained against some cosmic force, but her body seemed unwilling to obey.

“A ghoul can’t disobey the commands of the vampire who creates it.” Narshe shrugged, tapping her neck to remind the demon of the bite marks which covered her body.

“Or the master of that vampire.” Cosette smirked coolly at the bound demon before her. “These rings of bone will bind you to the body, which only obeys our commands. So then, so far as no harm comes to me, Narshe, or our possessions, you are free to do as you wish within the grounds of this manor. Consider yourself dismissed, slave.”

“Raaaaaaaaah!!!” The demon roared and swung her fist, which stopped a hair’s breadth from Cosette’s face. “Damn you, witch!”

“Ah, I’m sure we’ll be having lots of fun together, my new pet...” Narshe licked her lips, snapping back into a red mist, which whisked out of the room and back into her laboratories. “Come here, and I’ll make you cry some tears for me.”

Cosette laughed a high pitched laugh, and waved the demon off. Despite its curses and cries of protest, it followed Narshe to the south end of the villa.

Back in her study, Black Cosette drew another piece from the chest beside her table, and placed a red destroyer demon beside her own piece on the board.

KiyoshiKyokai


Leavaros
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 10:06 pm


Good idea, ShaDragon, KiyoKyo. We aren't Tolkein yet--at least until the name change goes through! Ha!

Oh, but I guess I should get to posting, huh?
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*Working Title*
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Prologue

VelArian
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Always, always, the future rewrites over the past. From old ages come new, and so, this time, it must seem that once again, new life is birted from old stone.

But that assumption would be entirely incorrect.

Because this time, somthing is different. A new change begins, and I can't quite tell why, or how I know. It is just a knowledge, like that, somehow this knowledge isn't really mine at all. I wonder, sometimes, if by writing this, and the right person reads it, how much will change. How much suffering would the world avoid if the proper person were to take the power of the past and forge from it a new Fate, with it's unavoidable errors and new possibilities?

But if this were to fall into the wrong hands, if this would become a bane to the world's becoming, and rebirth, would my name ever be uttered in anything but a curse?

In the end, these thoughts are idle. They have no place in my mind, because my heart has already made the decision to write. And write I shall, because I would not see the world come to what I have seen another time.

So, here I will record here perhaps the only memory of me that will ever survive this time, as I fade into that old age and a new one replaces this one. The memory of joy and sorrow, of love and hate, of grudges and forgivenesses, of kindness and old cruelties, but above all, the hope that the beauty that has for so long captured my heart live on forever past me.

I understand that this may never be read. I understand that all my efforts might be in vain, but I claim my effort as mine none the less--as a wise woman always told me, we all die in our last attempt to live. That should frighten me, or sadden me, but it doesn't. Death would be easier. But life is worth the hardship.

And besides, it's not for me that I write this. It is for memory's sake, so nothing like the Collapse can ever happen again.

But perhaps the tale should start with a proper introduction....
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Chapter 1: Broken Memories and Bittersweet Beginnings

Velarian
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I'm afraid my accounting of these earliest years will be a bit...off. There is no word for what happened to them, some are too pastel or too bold, too jagged or too smooth, and all too dreamlike to be considered true memories.

I'm not sure if this is because there was such trauma that I could never remember my childhood place, or if it is because my memories have meshed with the older memories of that place, where children a bit too tall and a bit too bright to be human played just as I had. Perhaps, rather, it is a blending of the old and the new, just as the place itself was, and its inhabitants. And me.

That place, where I grew up with friends and family, that place that always smelled of flowers blooming and fresh rain was rightly called Springvale, but all of its denizens just called it Vale.

I don't remember much of it. I remember what the little town looked like, and how my mother used to smile so gently, and how father would steal a kiss from her when he thought I wasn't looking. I remember the smells of hearth and home, and those pink and green scents of the early Spring that was my home's namesake.

But I also remember the fire. And the charred stink of ashes. Even then, I knew it wasn't a clean fire. No one knew what caused it. Only a handful of us, parents and children, survived. I was one of them. My parents were not.

And so, each went their separate way. The few children whose parents lived went away, to another village with other relatives. Some of the adults who had lost children went away. I never found out what happened to them, though I have my suspicions. The worst were the young women, knowing what their future held. They went away too, and though I was to young to know then, now I have no doubt as to what their profession would be.

I count myself lucky, because I was taken away by an aged man in a robe with kind eyes who called himself Magister Nova. He told me that he knew what I had gone through, as he had lost parents at a young age, too. I remember asking him if it ever got easier, and his kind eyes grew ancient and sad. Something in me felt kinship with him. I know now that he chose me because I had magical talent, but then I did not even know what a "magister" was, though every country bumpkin on earth has heard of magic. I wonder now, if his attentions had been swayed because of the first, and I suspect that this is so. He was a quick oldster, I'll give him that.

My health was remarkably good for having missed a few days of food and drink, aside from a waterskin that Nova eventually got me to drink. I didn't like it--it tasted like goat. When I told him so, he just laughed and ruffled my raven blue-black hair, and told me that while it must taste awful it's better than ashes. I had to agree, though I sulked a while, to his initial dismay, and later laughter. He taught me a little song about wands and staves, and the right woods to make them out of. He got me to smile, and laugh, and that was good.

We went first to Treehaven, a close little village nearby, where he had me checked over. I had no burns, remarkably, and I was physically unscathed by the past few days. I was going to complain about my hunger, when my stomach did it for me, much to the humor of both the village Wisewoman and my elderly provider. I pouted, but eventually, the warm smell of broth won me over, and I sat there and ate with them, Nova acting like nothing had happened, and ruffling my hair, while flirting with the Wisewoman half his age, and managing to eat vociferously, too. He taught me--as much by experience as by words--that we who wield magic must learn to multitask. In years to come, I would retort that that does not mean flirting with every young woman one should chance upon. To that, he would laugh and disagree robustly, saying that one should take every opportunity one can, while minimizing risk. And I would roll my eyes and sigh. Later, I would come to treasure those simplest days with him best.

But at that earliest of dates, I could be not be past my seventh year.
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Well, the rest is here

Love and Vale,
-LD
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 10:10 pm


Also, check out the Valens Poetry Thread. It's a thread dedicated to my poetry, and once a month, poetry by friends of mine that I love to read. It'll be interesting, I promise! heart

Love and Vale,
-LD

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 9:59 pm


Might as well jump on the bandwagon. Haha. This is my story, read and if you like, link at the bottom.


Maroque
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The Story Begins


A strange place for a story to start, no? Our ‘heroine’, if she can be called such, is at work in Kerry’s Book Store, nestled in downtown Barrie. The Dunlop St. Store has been there quite a while - when a lot of the stores downtown fizzled, this one still stood. The men who owned it hadn’t sold, but they’d hired her the previous year, just a few months after Anianka’s eighteenth birthday in May of 2012. It was July 19th, 2013 now and she was out back, across from the Salvation Army store where the poor and homeless would congregate for supper later on - just across from the nucleus of the city, Barrie Bus Terminal. She watched people go to and from the Terminal while smoking a cheap Native cigarette. They didn’t always taste the best, but they were affordable.

Tweakers, losers, assholes... Anianka’s thoughts were of all the people she saw. Retards, niggers, Jews... By no means was she a racist; Anianka hated all races equally, including her own. If you asked her, and she was feeling particularly nice, she’d tell you she just hated humanity. “No one special,” she might say, “just all the people on Earth.”

She found it sickening that the whole town basically spider webbed from the Terminal, and the lake, Kepmenfelt Bay, not more than a two minute walk from where she stood now. And the city never did fix the Sunday and nighttime bus service to meet the demands of the growing population - which had been growing fairly steady since about nineteen ninety-five or so. It still only ran once an hour from seven pm on week- and Saturday nights, and once and hour from ten am to about six or seven pm on Sundays. At least during the week it was on the half hour

She snuffed out her smoke and went back in. She’d had three customers since her shift started at nine in the morning. And old woman and two young adults, probably no more than twenty fives years old each. The old woman had bought a romance novel; the young adults had gone for the fantasy and science fiction. Anianka preferred murder mysteries herself, but no one knew that except her and her bosses. And they were both drunks, so who cared?

Anianka working cash was more of her form of a joke. “Watch me fool people into thinking I’m somewhat normal!” she might have told a friend, if she had one. Besides, she needed the money for food, smokes, and shelter - and in that order, too.

About the only memories Anianka had were bad; her father beating her purple for not cleaning her room; the other kids teasing her in fifth grade for her home-pierced nose; the teachers telling her to take it out and her blunt refusal because she had the right to express herself. And OH! How furious those morons had been with her! How exquisitely pissed off they got when she told them NO! Had she ever been quite so happy since that day? Not that she could remember, but maybe...

A man, possibly in his mid-thirties, came into the store. They smiled at each other and he went to browsing the shelves near the back. He was almost an attractive man in Anianka’s mind, but for the most part she hated him before he even walked into the building. If he was feeling talkative she might slip him her number; she wasn’t adverse to sleeping with someone every now and again, even if she hated human kind. She was promiscuous, but she was safe about it.

She fixed her shirt to show a bit more cleavage and unzipped the sides of her skirt, upwards, to show more thigh. When she felt her appearance was ‘slutty’ enough she went out from behind the counter to fix some of the shelves a bit. He came back to the counter with a Stephen Davis novel, she likes his books, and when he looked at her she heard his breath catch in his throat. She turned, playing the innocent flirt, and she giggled on her way back to the counter.

“Hello.” she said, amiably and cutely. “Will that be all?”

He stuttered a bit before he got the reply of “all for the books, yeah.”
Real smooth, dude, she thought, then said “for the books?” and giggled.
After five minutes of poor flirting on his part, and gentle pressing on hers, she gave him her number and his book.

Another casualty of war, she mused to herself, slipping back to her usual morbid demeanor, zipping her skirt back down and re-readjusting her shirt.
She was studying human behavior in her spare time, reading up on it, watching people every chance she got. It was manipulation she was really learning, and OH! Was she ever getting GOOD at it! Just for shits and giggles, to see how easy she would bend the rest of the world to her will. It was nothing to her, and it was oh-so-fun. But the main reason was the power; she had power over people. That was what was important, that was what turned her on. He would probably call later tonight, or tomorrow evening.

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The rest can be found here, if you like it. I hope you read the rest and leave me some comments and suggestions and constructive criticisms. <3
PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 2:29 pm


I'm sorry, but don't we have exactly this IN the Writer's Subforum? Granted, you aren't posting your OWN, well, most people have chosen not to, stories in the sticky threads designated for exceptional writing. So having this is quite... redundant. We have a writing forum for a reason, is there really a need to needlessly self-promote outside that forum?

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Sl1pstr3am2010

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 2:55 pm


Yes, because we have more activity in the main forums than in the sub forums and the writer's corner got redundant having the same few people posting, this way if the people want to read more, they have to come into the writer's corner, and if they like what they are reading they should post a comment.

*edit: basically we're trying to advertise the writer's corner so that people actually check it out, we take portions of our stories and put them in this thread, if they want to read more then they have to go into the writers corner. So if you want more than just the same usual people (you, me, LD, KK, Tommy, CM, Snow) to post then i would post part of your story here, I have yet to post any because I need to go through and edit mine, once that's done then I'll post some here.

Is that reasonable??
PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 8:15 am


All right, I'll concede that the Writers Sub doesn't get a lot of attention from all the members of the guild, but remember, this is a book guild, not a writing guild. I understand the need to want to publicize your work, so might I interject an idea that would not turn off people new to the guild or even those who do browse this thread?

If you all are just trying to advertise, which there is nothing wrong with, why would you post the first part of the story? That doesn't seem logical. Take a novel for instance, you read the back cover, or most do, to get an idea of what the book is about. So why doesn't everyone who wants to get a little more notoriety from other members write up an extended synopsis? That would 1) be easier for new members and writing/reading hopefuls to digest, 2) would shorten the overall length of the thread by at least 400% and 3) it would make navigation of the thread much easier on the other members.

So let's just rethink our approach shall we? Instead of posting huge blobs of writing, why not just put a little effort into writing up something that makes our stories seem worthwhile to read, then post a link to the thread?

I'm pretty sure this makes a lot more sense than what is already going on.

the Lion

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Sl1pstr3am2010

Dapper Lunatic

PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 8:23 am


Actually it does, to have a shortened kind of summary of the book would be good, then that way the members wouldn't have to read through all of it, they could read the summaries then pick the ones that they do want to read, then go into the writers corner and read them...
hmm... we'll have to talk to Kiyo, and LD about this.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 8:51 am


just a friendly bump for the new members, go check out the writers corner and read a few of our members works, comment and post your thoughts.

Sl1pstr3am2010

Dapper Lunatic


bubbles53577

PostPosted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 8:28 pm


first chapter:

How to Date a Dork
Chap. 1

Teenagers. You probably think it doesn’t get any worse. Well try being one. Actually try being me. My life is far worse than any normal or abnormal teenagers, so to tell you just how good your teen years are; let me tell you about the most dreaded 4 years of my life. High school.
* * *
“Hey, oh my gosh its been since like 8th grade since I’ve seen you girl.” Isabelle, I will never understand why she talks to everyone like there her friends, I don’t even know her that well.
“ERICA,” and the next thing I know I’m in a tight bear hug. Rose is my best friend, I actually saw her every day during summer break; but its felt like forever. We walked to all our classes together because we pretty much had them all together.
Sadly, Rose and I aren’t just best friends, we’re spies. In July we fled our spy school, the academy of highly intelligent young women, because, 1) we already passed 11th grade there and 2) we’ve never seen the world outside. It’s not like our schools gated or anything, but there’s spy cameras everywhere. Once you’re in the academy you’re not out till you pass the final grade; at our school there are actually 19 grades. That’s why Rose and I are now at Palatal High School.
We fit in perfectly there. Everyone is so different, but you can see the cliques very obviously. Rose and I look a lot alike so it’s not that hard to find each other. Rose is tall, lean and pure blond. She’s not anorexic, but at first glance that’s what you probably think she is. She’s extremely smart and very good at thinking up a last minute plan. Although, she’s all those things, we both know I’m better.
I grew up in Las Angeles, and that there makes me super tan. I used to play a ton of sports, so I am as athletic as I am smart, though no one knows that. I’m just as lean as Rose but she’s taller, and a downside about being me is well Rose has the body of a supermodel and I am so close to that body but quite. My taness makes up for it.
For those reasons, it probably explains why we instantly made the cheer team with no auditions.
“Hey, you guys,” said an eagerly girl that looked like a superstar and supermodel mixed in one.
“Us?” Rose and I said at the exact same time, we were on our way to science.
“Yes, you girls. How would you like to be on the cheer team?” Rose and I looked at each other, and a grim smile grew on Rose’s face. She mouthed the words; it would be a perfect cover. Although she was right, because who would expect a cheer leader to be a spy, I kept thinking I’m not as outgoing as her. Before I could say or mouth anything Rose loudly announced, “Absolutely!!”
“Fabu, by the way my names Isabelle, I am the cheer captain and I heard we got some new students and I told the principal I would come and meet them. If you need any help just ask me. Also come to practice today after school at 3:00 and I’ll get your uniforms and everything else you will need.”
“Thank you.” Isabelle seemed like such a nice and thoughtful person, maybe high school won’t be as bad as we thought; but of course we were wrong.  
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