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Pudin Cute

PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:05 pm


May**Be**If**I**Look**Up**Towards**The**Sky....

I have one Naruto and one Loveless one I like alot and I'm going to add them here. Please give me constructive critisism if you don't like a certain part or if it doesn't flow really good.
---------------Naruto----------------
"That b*****d
The one with the black hair
The girls love him so much
Which is more then I can bare
But there is a reason for this
It's the girl with the beautiful name
Her nice voice, and fragile personality
Makes me go out of my head, go insane
She has light pink hair
And green sparkling eyes
Yet she obviously likes the b*****d
Sadly, to my demise
The b*****d doesn't like her
It's really obvious to see
Infact, he hates her
Unlike me
I wish that she would turn around
And look me in the eyes
And say that she loves me
But that's bullshit, a bunch of lies
And her blond friend, Ino
Loves the b*****d, just the same
But of course he doesn't like her
Actually, he doesn't even know her name
And I hate that b*****d
With much intensity
That when he finally grasped it
He also hated me
But I really don't care about him
And everyone knows
Even the Sasuke fans
And they hate me, it shows."
-------------Loveless--------------
"The days go on
But Seimei is dead
The years go by
As I lay in my bed

The hands on my clock move on
But I can not
Nightmares and depression
Keep me awake alot

But then sorrow morphs into anger
Anger into annoyance and pain
The scatter of his blond hair
Outside my windowpane

And then the scatter of the leaves
Had brought unspoken adversity
He would always come around my school
But only to follow and say he loves me

At first I said nothing
But then he mentioned it more
The statement was no longer nothing
It became something I couldn't ignore

The statement made me think
That he said it because of him
That he really didn't feel that way
The words were just dim

My nightmares morphed
From skulls to butterflies
To the way he smiled at me
To the color of his eyes

The ache in my heart
Would throb when his picture came to my eyes
But no one would see the pain there
Or hear my muffled cries

Why do I love him so?
He didn't even mean it
He says it so many times
That it couldn't mean s**t

Now it's nightmares to dreams
Happy dreams with him and me
But in the end, it means nothing
He'll just be the ordinary Soubi."

....I'll**see**You**And**Your**Smile...
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:23 pm


biggrin The Naruto one was really adorable. haha. I also support the Naru/Saku.

sorry, but I don't watch Loveless; so I don't think i get your poem. sweatdrop Continue your drabbles though~

MoonlitElegy


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Dapper Genius

PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 10:35 am


Awww. The Naruto one is so cute. It's from Naruto's point of view right? heart I think Naruto and Hinata should be together. She's so cute when she's around him. It's like a little kid. whee
Anyways good poem.

I don't watch Loveless either though. In fact I kinda hate it. sweatdrop The poem sounds good though.
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