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 Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:10 pm
I did but that was before my deployment I completely forgot what I was going to do with that character or what his inspiration was. I can still work with him but it will be a stretch for me.
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:59 pm
Well, if its been that long, then fine, you can switch.
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 11:17 pm
Attempt number two with the bone clan. I have edited it with more of the canon jutsus as per instruction. Quote: Rpc Name:Gabriel Kaguya (last name if approved ) Village: Iwa Rank:Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for:Shikotsumyaku What you know about the clan/bl: Just about everything really. It allows the user to manipulate the bones within their body and create multiples of those bones. They can alter the density, and size of said bones as well. They also have the ability to regenerate their bones if they are ever broken. Rp Sample: Prologue: A large snake demon has been causing trouble in the forest surrounding the Hidden Mist Village. In hopes of vanquishing the demon, the Village has hired help to deal with capturing the massive beast. At the moment, the beast has cornered a Mist ninja in a shed near a small river.Flinging open the door, the woman prepared to run, but was stopped by the penetrating glare of the giant beast in front of her. It must have been 40 feet tall even with the majority of its ghostly body coiled around the small shack that had previously served as her shelter. It was looking back at her with its piercing yellow eyes as its forked-tongue flickered between it pale silver lips. As it let out a slow and prolonged hiss, it displayed several rows of sharp and curved fangs. Underneath its extended jaw, several streams of blood trailed down its naturally silver and red body. The woman smiled nervously to herself as she observed and took in this massive and fearsome creature. "So, he did get you." She stated as she swayed slightly at the feeling of a small breeze. "Serves you right, you slimy son of a-" She was unable to finish her sentence as the snake lounged forward to swallow her whole. A blood chilling screech echoed through the small plain. A man stood with his back to the woman who was now holding her arms up as a mean of defense. As she lowered her arms to see what had made the creature shriek, her once nervous smile turned into a full-hearted smirk. The man stood in front of her, but the snake nowhere to be seen. "Took you long enough, Gabriel. You didn't here me the first time I yelled?" The man, now identified as Gabriel, looked to the woman with a raised brow. "You call that a yell? From where I am from we call that screaming." The woman stuck her tongue out at Gabriel, but he continued as he turned back to face the beast. "Besides you seemed to have been having fun aggravating it; but then again that is your speciality is it not, Sira-san?" Gabriel didn't wait for an answer as the snake shot out from the woods in a lightining fast movement. He barely had time to grab Sira's arm and pull them both away from the strike before the already damaged shelter shattered under the immense strength of the demon. Gabriel stood up right again, unconsciously pulling Sira to her feet as well. "Stay out of this." He mumbled as he ran toward the snake’s outstretched neck leaving Sira beside the stream. As he reached the snake he leapt high into the air, his arm pulled back in a mock palm strike, as a long white lance of bone protruded from his palm [Dance of the Willows]. Gravity quickly took its toll as Gabriel fell back down to earth, positioned so he would land on the monsters neck. However, the demon quickly coiled its neck back to where the rest of its body was and left Gabriel's intended attack to bury itself in the ground. He looked up immediately to keep his eyes on the snake as he had learned before that once you lose sight of it, you were screwed. Gabriel kept eye contact as he began to stand up right. He stood slowly as to avoid making any sudden movements. He retracted the bone in his palm as another one extended from his shoulder.[Dance of the Camelia] He slowly pulled the bone out and brought it down to his side in a ready stance. Gabriel flicked his wrist in an attempt to gain the snakes attention. It worked; the snake’s eyes flicked between Gabriel's face and his hand. It was so pre-occupied that it failed to register the kunai flying toward it's face until it actually made contact. It screeched once more as it turned it's head way from it's primary assailant, which was a bad move. A second kunai, this one with an explosive tag and a spirit tag tied to it, embedded itself into it's neck. A flash of light and cloud of dust erupted from the snake. Gabriel had expected the snake would run off after such an attack. When the smoke cleared, it revealed that not only did the snake demon not move, but it's mouth was now held shut and leashed by a Kusari-gama (chained sickle) held by none other than Sira. "Hurry, up Gabe. This thing isn't easy to hold down you know!" She was right; it was taking all of her strength and half of the newly arrived Hunter-nin just to keep it from slithering away. Gabriel wasn't one to look a gift horse in the mouth though. He aimed his bone sword toward the demon and with a sickening snap the bone blade was sent flying through the air. The snake's body twisted and turned in failed attempts to free itself from its muzzle, but Gabriel's bone hit its mark. Unfortunately the beast’s, stronger than steal, hide was barely scathed by the attack. Gabriel cursed as he realized his Kekkei Genkai wouldn't penetrate its hard skin. "Fine, if I can't get through your skin, I'll go through something else." With that said Gabriel once again sprinted at the snake. It momentarily stopped struggling as it glared at Gabriel's approaching form and made a hard jerk in his direction. The new and sudden movement of the snake caused most of the participants in the tug-of-war to release their hold or pulled them into the stream; giving the snake plenty of room to strike at Gabriel. However, its mouth was still shut and Gabriel had full intention of going head on. As the demon's head became leveled with his, Gabriel leapt over its mouth and came face to face with the snake. Two sharp bones escaped the flesh of his palms and in quick succession he thrust his palms forward [Dance of the Willows], impaling the demon in the eyes, blinding it. The monster jerked its head skyward and Gabriel was sent flying through the air until gravity began to work again and he was falling back toward the beast. Unintentionally, the demon whipped its body around in a quick thrash and it's tail slammed into Gabriel chest which resulted in him crashing back into the destroyed hut. Taking advantage of the blinded serpent, the hunter-nin surrounded it and laced strong cables wrapped in spirit tags around the demon. After it was secured, Sira ran over to Gabriel with a worried look. "You ok?" Gabriel groaned in response but sat up reluctantly and after 10 minutes began to walk back over toward the captured demon. With his palms now back to normal, Gabriel laid his hand on the top of the giants head. It thrashed under his touch, but halted as it heard his icy tone. "You aren't going to be a problem anymore." Jutsus used, Dance of the Willows X2 Bone Bullets Dance of the Camelia
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 1:00 am
Remember what I told you in the pm...other than that, approved ^_^
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 4:06 am
Rpc Name: Katelyn
Village: Konaha
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan bloodline.
What you know about the clan/bl: This bloodline gives you the ability to have a power that any other animal currently obtains. Although, like every animal, you cannot go on forever. Every living thing has a point where it must stop seeing as it's tired and needs to rest.
Rp Sample: Through the tree's, you could see a young girl running from 3 other men. Seeing as she was outnumbered she felt like her skills alone wont get her anywhere near a chance of winning. The people following here were 3 shinobi store owners, wanting revenge on the girl for stealing some healing medicine for animals. But what they didnt know was that it was for a good cause but Katelyn had no money to spend for it. Her only choice was, to steal. Suddenly, Katelyn started to get cramps in her leg, she was running for too long and now was the time to get a break. She knew she couldnt stop though, if she did she would be a goner. Using her quick thinking skills, she quickly examined the area. There was a tree right up ahead with many branches. Spotting this, she knew it was her only chance of getting away. Quickly, she jumped onto the branch, waiting for their next move. When the store owners found her, they quickly jumped the tree after her, throwing kunai at her. Dodging every ounce of it by swinging under the branch, she swung firecely back up and kicked the one in the face. When the next came, she swung down only to realize the guy had been on it the whole time and he wasnt on the bottom.
As Katelyn emerged back up the branch, the owner made his move. He swiftly grabbed her by her foot and dangled her right above the ground. "Gotcha!" The owner said shaking her around. Sweat dripping down Katelyn's face, she couldnt find another escape route. Suddenly, the branch began to crack, falling off the side a bit. Too much weight had been added onto it as they were fighting and it could no longer hold all. "What was that noise..?" Katelyn asked him as she looked down. The guy was too busy blabbering on about capturing her, he didn't notice the unusual noise. In 3 seconds later, the branch cracked once more but louder this time, breaking in half forcing anything that had been on it to slide right off. "What the.." Was the guys words before he slid off, falling face first to the floor. Crashing to the ground, a huge thump could be heard a mile away. Once the guy had finally gotten up, he realized his grip on Katelyn was no more. Feeling angered, he searched for her but could not find her. Luckily, Katelyn had found a hiding place after the fall. Heavy breathes could be heard as Katelyns energy was running low.
It began to get louder, giving away her position. The owner made his move right near the tree, waiting for the right chance to move. His back against it, patiently waiting. The running had gone on for too long, and all because of that Katelyn quickly lost control of herself and fell to the ground. "How could you run all that way and not feel tired?..." She whispered to the man in tiny breathes as she lay silently. "Energy drinks man, maybe you should steal those from my store as well." He smirked walking closer over to the fallen body. He figured Katelyn was smart enough to get away if he just picked her up. Weakening her was his one and only choice if he wanted to get revenge. Picking up 3 kunai out of his pocket pouch, his direction turned to Katelyn. Aiming them, he took note of where they would land and how far it could reach. "You'll never get away." He whispered as he chucked the kunai at high speeds, straight at Katelyn. She quickly freaked out, seeing them flying towards her. She knew if she didn't move she was done for. Katelyn took hold of her grasp on the ground by picking up her foot and trying her best to get away, but it was too late. One had kicked her running foot down, shoving her hold to the ground. The others emerged right into her sides. She let out a weak shout as she felt the pain rising. Her eyes began to blur, but before any of that she saw the manager. "You wont win.." Katelyn growled outraged by the fact of being defeated by an employer. Her eyes began to glow a yellowing dark color. Anger showing in her eyes, glowing darker with every step closer he took. Swifly, she searched the area for any sort of animals. A cat had been walking to its home, taking note of the battle going on. Its scaredness reaching a max, it journeyed home as fast as it could not wanting to get involved. Katelyn's eyes began to glow as she recieved sharp nails just like a cats and swiftly got up. She charged at the owner, every ounce of anger pouring out of her mindless head. The jump was too sudden for him, there was no time of dodging as he had already been too close. Scratching him right in the face, the force had pulled him down to the earthy ground. Taking a chance, she kept scratching at his flesh, no end coming around. After a while, her paw began to hurt from scratching too many times with it. She took her time to heal it by jumping backwards on a tree licking it. The man slowly rose up, holding onto his head as if it would fall of at any moment. "WHY YOU LITTLE!" He shouted as both his legs had helped his weight stand all the way up. He ran over to the same tree Katelyn had been sitting in and kicking it so hard, that the force made an explosion like noise and blew the trees stem right out of the ground and sent it into the air. As Katelyn had also been in the air, she took note of 2 birds flying high in the sky. Taking the same skills as them, she was also able to fly. She used it to get away as she didn't have much time left for herself to survive. But flying away wasnt helping, as he was catching up super fast. The man jumped a tree branch, and used it like a seesaw to jump sky high into the air at super high speeds, straight out kicking Katelyn right out of the sky. The force was so much that it pulled her right back down to the earth, smashing a hole right into the dirt. Dust blowing everywhere, you could barely see what was inside. Taking this last chance, she dug right into the dirt like a bear hiding in winter. The man took a long time searching for her, but couldnt.
Thats when Katelyn's cat form had really ruined the moment. She felt a hairball in her mouth, choking it out and making loud noises with it trying to get it out. This had created the man to find her almost instantly. "Whats wrong, choking?" He smirked as he peered into the hole. The hairball finally coming out, she used force to spat it out at the man. His anger now reaching a boiling point, he went to punch into the hole straight at Katelyn. Using her cat like paw to catch it, she realized she was still into her cat form and prayed it was enough to stop the force. He had punched right into the paw, sending it to the ground. Her cat form going away, she didn't know if she could make it or not. The only way was to take a chance climbing out and running as her energy was reaching its limit. But the man quickly took hold of her as she climbed out. Carrying her by the shirt, he smiled right into her face. "You cant escape now." He laughed. But when he thew Katelyns body, it poofed in a bunch of smoke. Looking around but not finding her, he realized he won anyway and just took the chance to walk home.
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 3:50 pm
Rpc Name: Yukio Yuuto
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Satetsu
What you know about the clan/bl: I don't know much, aside from the fact it was made to miic the ichibi by the third(?) Kazekage, and that the third was made into a puppet by Sasori. It uses small bits of metal, commonly iron, and uses it like the Ichibi uses sand. That's about all I know aside from Katon melts it.
Rp Sample:
Yukio stood in the middle of the canyon, sighing as he looked around himself at the holes in the ground which soft grey bits of dirt were pouring into. In reality the bits of dirt were his iron sand grinding their way to the rich iron deposit he was standing directly on top of. He technically was tresspassing on Iwagakure's land, but it was so far out in their territory that there shouldn't have been a patrol group coming through. Shouldn't have being completely wrong.
Suddenly two chunnin ranked ninjas burst from the ground, one already stringing handsigns, and inhaling to expell a burst of fire, the second closing their eyes and shooting forward, a flash of white behind him, his movements were almost unparralelled by any Yukio had ever seen.
Yukio smiled, moving his glasses up on his nose, as they had fallen down, he raised both of his hands and smiled, the iron sand bursting out of the ground, atleast two tons of it pouring from the ground. Around the first ninja about to use his Katon technique the sand turned into a wall and began to spin rapidly in a circle, leaving only the top corners and the bottom corners to solidify when the fire began hitting it, as the iron melted together the rest tore it apart again. The rest flying to Yukio's body and solidifying all over him, aside from his eyes and mouth. Yukio felt a slight pressure as the Iwa ninja's kick hit him, most of the impact taken from the kick by the foot of iron dust which held Yukio up, and was being used as defence.
The Ninjutsu opponent jumped back since the sheer power of the fire ball made the recoil of the blast sing his eyebrows, possibly more. The taijutsu user slide away, still in the position they had stopped with the kick in, the force of the hit sending him sliding away. The first one began to string more handsigns andInhaled yet again, ready to release yet another fireball, probably of greater force. The Second closed their eyes to focus again, this time the white light flaring off their arms and legs at the same time, and then the ninja disappeared, or atleast seemed to, suddenly there were about three different impacts on Yukio's armor, the ninja stopped at the site of the third impact.
Yukio smiled, deciding to first deal with the fire spitter. His eyes darted in that direction, all the iron sand he hadn't used in his armor, about half of the total sand, flew in his direction, half on top, and half under the ground, creating a shpere around him as he launched the fire out. the sphere was small enough that if Yukio hand't have given it his full attention then holes would have developed in the sphere from lack of speed in the rotation of the sphere. After a split second, it had become a solid sphere, not a single grain of iron sand was left, and the sphere was white hot. Unless the girl was fire proof, she was ashes by the power of that fire blast. Yukio turned his attention to the one who was still shooting out white from it's limbs, by now that person had begun to retract their leg from the kick they had delivered earlier. Yukio smiled and sent six inches of his twelve inch thick armor at the Taijutsu user. the taijutsu user was soon coated in the iron sand, which began to line up in chains and rush quickly all over his body, in a cross pattern. Meaning that one centimeter width chain went up the person's body, while the two centimeter width chains on either side went in the other direction, not only sanding away skin, but ripping it on precise lines. Soon the sand became red with blood, and began to slow as the soft tissue was reduced to nothingness and the bones were being ground.
After all was said and done Yukio dispersed his armor and sent it at the giant sphere of metal to break it down. He was almost out of chakra, and would have to find another site. " Damn... I only got a fourth of the Iron in this deposit... " He muttered, weaving handsigns together and disappearing into the ground.
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 9:37 pm
@KateIyn: Not bad for a first try. Its acutally really good though I need to see more in the knowledge section - try adding in weaknesses and additional bonuses to members with the Anigan. Continuing with my last statement, I would like to see more reference to weaknesses and jutsus made within the rp sample. So for now, Denied and good luck.
@TvIaMsOqTuHeYz: Good rp sample though same with KateIyn, I would like to see some more of the bloodline jutsus incorporated into the sample. I saw a lot of freelance weilding of the sand and though that's fine, I was still hoping to see more techniques involved. If you reread through the bloodline located here I'm sure you can find some more information to put into the info section - limitations and such. So Denied for now and good luck on your next application.
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:54 am
 Some days love will find youI looked through the bloodline description, but the only weakness I saw is when either the animal you turn into has something bad about it to make your situation worse, or when it weakens you. I added more into the request, but I'm not sure if this is the kind of weakness you guys are looking for. :/ Break those chains that bind you! ♥
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 4:46 am
White Water Lilly @KateIyn: Not bad for a first try. Its acutally really good though I need to see more in the knowledge section - try adding in weaknesses and additional bonuses to members with the Anigan. Continuing with my last statement, I would like to see more reference to weaknesses and jutsus made within the rp sample. So for now, Denied and good luck.
@TvIaMsOqTuHeYz: Good rp sample though same with KateIyn, I would like to see some more of the bloodline jutsus incorporated into the sample. I saw a lot of freelance weilding of the sand and though that's fine, I was still hoping to see more techniques involved. If you reread through the bloodline located here I'm sure you can find some more information to put into the info section - limitations and such. So Denied for now and good luck on your next application. heh, I was thinking that, and when I looked back through, Sand armor is actually a second stage jutsu, but I didn't feel like editing it if I could avoid it. I'll make a new one here pretty soon.
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:25 am
Rpc Name: Yukio Yuuto
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Satetsu
What you know about the clan/bl: I don't know much, aside from the fact it was made to mimic the ichibi by the third(?) Kazekage, and that the third was made into a puppet by Sasori. It uses small bits of metal, commonly iron, and uses it like the Ichibi uses sand. That's about all I know aside from Katon melts it.
At second stage, you are basically better at using the techniques, but you still can't control anything large like a Fuuma shuriken.
Rp Sample:
Yukio sat in the middle of the gourge, While through conventional means most of Iwagakure had strip mined the area, Yukio knew that there was far more iron down below, over a mile below ground where the ninja couldn't reach easily enough to mine effectivly. He smiled and closed his eyes as he sent all of his Iron sand down below to retrieve the iron as more sand. This would take maybe half an hour, but not anything major. He had actually kept just enough Iron sand to coat his body with, as well as his several ninja tools, and the summoning scrolls to produce many mre ninja tools.
Yukio had been sitting there for about twenty minutes when out of the ground shot several bandits who had once been called ninja. There were five in total, one dressed in a blood red ninja suit, the res wore regular bandit clothing. The one closest to Yukio turned towards him and whipped out his sword and charged, twisting and atempting to hack Yukio's head off.
" Satetsu Yoroi. " Yukio said simply, making a handsign. The Iron sand he had kept surged to his body and coated him quickly, fitting together perfectly making extremely solid armor. The blade stopped as soon as it hit his metal armor. yukio then smiled and dispelled his armor followed by a second technique. " Tekkoudan. " Yukio said grimly, putting one hand on the blade to keep it from moving, and putting his other directly, two inches away, from the bandit's head. A spear like object, three inches in length formed in Yukio's hand, forcing the bandit off his center of balance as well as putting the tip of the spear in his forehead. Then suddenly the spear shot forward with amazing speed. You can guess what happened then.
The other bandits all cringed at the sight of their comrade's death. Then the red one muttered something and another one charged at Yukio, taking out dozens upon dozens of shuriken and launching them at him.
" Ninja Bihin Ejin Giryou. " Yukio said the blade in his hand turning into iron sand, and it plus all the other iron sand he had used for his armor and for the spear suddenly converged on his arm and created a tower shield of amazing durability. Yukio kneeled to the ground and placed the sheild between himself and the bandit. As soon as the shower of shuriken ended, fifty-five hits in total yukio stood up and made more handsigns, this time his expression was emotionless. " Haganeryuu Rendan " He said, a dragon rising from the ground behind the bandit, turning almost immediatly toward him and opening it's mouth, firing a sphere of metal at him. The sphere easily broke the bandit's spine, and fell to the ground where it sank back into the ground. The dragon flew up into the air, and let out a roar. It sounded more like metal scraping metal next to a microphone.
Now the Bandits were worried, The red looked to the two that were left and nodded, seeming to smile under his mask as the two ran forward, side by side. The two began to quickly close the distance between themselves and Yukio, who during this entire fight had been slowly shifting himself backward to get a greater distance between the point where his sand was about to surface, and the point where he would be safe from this next technique.
When the bandit duo hit the area where his sand would come up Yukio quickly shouted the name of a jutsu and made some handsigns. " Hagane Ame no Jutsu. " He said, suddenly small spheres shot from the ground, both piercing the duo's bodies, as well as shoting past them. Once in the air, the pellets disappated and returned to being Iron sand. " Satetsu Kaihou " Yukio said, the Iron sand forming into long spikes and raining down to pierce the duo yet again, their bodies having never reached the ground from the barage upwards, making their corpses hang limply in the air.
The Red ninja sighed and took out a sword that was wrapped in dampened cloth. " Now, you shall taste the flame! " He said, making handsigns with one of his hands, Fire engulfing his blade. the ninja shot forward, cutting cleanly through the bars of solid iron in his path as he made his way quickly, almost instantly to Yukio. He quickly brought the blade up and began to swing downwards.
Yukio quickly recovered from the fact that this man had just closed the gap in less than a second. thinking quickly yukio used a technique that he never thought he'd use. " Military Movement. " He said quickly, shooting into the ground and emerging in the middle of the field of spikes where the two corpses had been hanging until the thicket had been cut down. " Hmmm, I'll have to end this quickly! Erai Gyokushou Kane Kame! " He said, the spikes shifting into iron sand again, the sand from the ground that had been waiting for the Red ninja, who completely shot past it without Yukio's notice, Rose to the surface, bending around Yukio's body and forming a giant turtle. " Now, Die! " Yukio said, this guy's speed was amazing, something Yukio would need to be careful of.
The Red ninja sighed and turned, quickly once again closing the gap between them and attempting to melt one of the turtle's legs with his flaming blade.
Yukio smiled and had the tutrle rear up onto it's hind legs, half of it's front right leg melting from the heat of the man's blade. " Satetsu Shigure! " Yukio said, quickly dispersing his turtle and having the iron sand shoot down at his opponent, to the point where the area around his opponent was a shower of iron clumps, all extremely deadly.
After Yukio landed he quickly brought his hands together again and let off another jutsu. " Kurogane Chiri Bakugou... " He muttered, His body disappating into sand, and seeming to rebuild itself quickly. He then ran directly at the storm of Iron sand, weaving inbetween the empty spaces toward the man who was twirling his blade to melt oncoming clumps, making the metal pile up around him, and creating a slight barrier. By the time Yukio had made it to him, the man was residing in a small metal hut like formation. Yukio quickly dived into a hole only to meet the edge of the man's blade. Yukio smiled, the part of his body where he had been cut was melted into iron. " Boom. " The Clone said smiling as it exploded, with enough force to send bits of schrapnel all over the shelter, and even blow parts of it apart.
Yukio stood outside the storm, breathing heavily. that was the hardest he had fought in quite some time, not since he had taken on the previous Tsuchikage for attempting to desert the village had he fought that hard. " That was... too much work for this amount of iron ore... " yukio said, exhausted he sat down, sighing and fanning himself. His shoulder red with a first degree burn, just from being close to the fire earlier.
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:18 pm
Rpc Name: Aiko Mizrahi
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Origami No Dara
What you know about the clan/bl: Quite a bit actually. The basic concept of the bloodline is the manipulation of paper crated by the combination of the Doton and Suiton elements, similar to the Mokuton bloodline, but refined a bit further into paper instead of wood. The manipulation includes the ability to fold, shape, and move the paper, as well as change the density and sharpness, making it an effective weapon. In the Manga/Anime Konan, the only female member of the Akatsueki, uses this bloodline. I know that the users of the bloodline are weak to Katon and Raiton jutsu's do to the fact that these jutsus can ignite paper.
Rp Sample:
It was a clear and sunny afternoon, the young Kunochi sat atop a thick tree branch, her legs dangling freely as she enjoyed a small snack; consisting of an apple and a few grapes. Squirrels ran from tree to tree, chasing each other and chirping happily. The birds sang their usual songs, giving off a peaceful melody to the otherwise gloom of the thick forest. The usually thick mist, that covered the forest, had all but evaporated into the clouds above, allowing her to see a great distance. Finishing up, she stood and stretched her arms high above her head, then her eyes drifted to a small pond, where she could see a small family of ducks floating in the water. Jumping down from the tree, she landed with a gentle thud then walked to the water and cupped her hands, then filled them with water and splashed a bit across her face, the cool water felt great and cleaned away the little bits of sweat and dirt that she had from her training. Standing she turned away from the pond, only to spot a group of shinobi making their way from branch to branch not too far off in the distance. She froze, not sure if they were friendly or not; the forests were used by many villages as a way to sneak about stealthily.
Hearing the voice of a male address the others, panic began to settle in. Looking up, she then noticed they had changed course and were now headed right for her. With her heart pounding in her chest, she made a break for the nearest tree, where she would hopefully hide. With her back now against the rough bark of the tree, she listened carefully, there were three separate thuds of someone landing from the high treetops, then one of the men called out, "You cant hide from us, come on out" By now she was holding her breath she didn't know what to do. Thinking quickly he placed her hand against the tree and made a seal, her chakra then began to flow into the tree, changing its composition into a gooey substance, known as pulp. She then extracted the pulp and began to morph it with her chakra. After a few moments it became flat and turned white like paper. She repeated the process a few times until she had a few sheets of paper; luckily her pursuers were unsure of her location.
Taking a sheet, she began to pour chakra into the paper, which began to fold on its own. Moments later it became a butterfly, which began to flap its makeshift wings and float around her. Taking a few more sheets she repeated until she had six butterflies flying around her. Standing she peeked her head around the tree, she spotted the three men looking around for her. Making a seal, two of the butterflies began to make their way towards the nearest man, whom had his back turned. With another seal, the butterflies began to morph and turn into paper shuriken, which gained speed and flew straight until they pierced the mans back. The man turned around with a loud howl of pain. The others, who were scattered about returned to the man, and helped remove the shuriken from his back then turned in the direction of the tree that the girl was hiding behind.
The girl didn't panic, instead she reached into her pouch and grabbed an explosive tag, and like the paper, she began to morph it into a butterfly, which began to float around her along with the others. She then listened carefully hearing the sound of footsteps approaching. Making another seal ,she began to move and directed the butterflies around her to spread out and move around the tree. She then made another seal, turning all but the one made of explosive tags into shuriken, which flew at the men. One of them spotted them however and quickly made some seals and placed two fingers to his mouth, then a torrent of fire shot from his mouth and reduced the shuriken to ash. Seeing this, the girl realized that she was going to have a problem with that shinobi, fire could completely negate anything she used against them. Thinking quickly, she rushed behind another tree and began pressing pulp once again, this time in much larger quantities. Eventually she had a descent sized stack of paper, which she then began to form together, after a moment it took the form of a cat, which sprang to life and darted in the direction of the three men. Then three spotted it and began tossing kunai and shuriken at it, but it was rather agile and was able to dodge the blasts. Then the same man from before, began making more seals and then began to spit fire once again. This time however, the girl directed then cat to jump high above them, then she made a few more seals and the cat exploded in a multitude of shuriken and kunai, which rained down upon the men. With the men temporally incapacitated, she took the remainder of paper, and crafted a set of wings, which attached to her back and began to flap, lifting her off of the ground, and with that she disappeared into the sun.
Jutsu's Used
Art of Pressing Pulp
Kimitate-assembly
Chou Tokkoutai-Butterfly Kamikaze unit
Chou tokkoutai-butterfly kamikaze unit(part two)
Art of Cutting blast
Paper wings
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 2:16 pm
@Katelyn: Well I sent you a pm on what I thought was missing and its good to see you incorporting some of the more bad traits in the sample but now if you could possibly add in some techniques than that would be great.
Some suggestions:
Name of Jutsu: Ikimono Sacchi- Animal Sense
Rank of Jutsu: D Rank
Description: A useful jutsu for the Chiroku Clan because it allows detects them to detect any nearby animals (anything in the Animalia Kingdom) like a radar. In their mind the animal show up as red dots on a grid. This jutsu doesn't require handsigns and can activate by the Chiroku closing his or her eyes. When a Anigan user gets to the final stage they are able to use this jutsu without closing their eyes at all.
Name of Jutsu: Ikimono Ishindenshin- Animal Telepathy
Rank of Jutsu: C Rank
Description: To members of the Chiroku Clan, animals are truly their best friends and they are able to understand them more. With this skill a Chiroku will be able to speak telepathically to animals to get them to fight alongside them or do certain task for them. The user will just have to make eye contact with the animal for five seconds and then they will be able to build a mind link. With this they may speak to the animal, the animal may speak back, and they may ask it to do things for it. This is especially useful for spying missions since animals do not give off chakra and would not be caught unless they are seen acting suspiciously, but most ninja below Jounin will not even begin to notice the animal acting suspiciously.
You're almost there. Keep trying. Till then, Denied
@TvIaMsOqTuHeYz: Good job. Though I still feel that the knowledge section is lacking something, your rp sample more than proves you know how the bloodline functions along with how to properly use its techniques. Have fun rping. Approved!
@Burakku: Good work. Approved!
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 12:24 pm
Thank you very much! Yeah I forgot to edit the what you know section. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:41 am
Rpc Name: Katelyn
Village: Konaha
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan bloodline.
What you know about the clan/bl: This bloodline gives you the ability to have a power that any other animal currently obtains. Although, like every animal, you cannot go on forever. Every living thing has a point where it must stop seeing as it's tired and needs to rest.
Rp Sample: Through the tree's, you could see a young girl running from 3 other men. Seeing as she was outnumbered she felt like her skills alone wont get her anywhere near a chance of winning. The people following here were 3 shinobi store owners, wanting revenge on the girl for stealing some healing medicine for animals. But what they didnt know was that it was for a good cause but Katelyn had no money to spend for it. Her only choice was, to steal. Suddenly, Katelyn started to get cramps in her leg, she was running for too long and now was the time to get a break. She knew she couldnt stop though, if she did she would be a goner. Using her quick thinking skills, she quickly examined the area. There was a tree right up ahead with many branches. Spotting this, she knew it was her only chance of getting away. Quickly, she jumped onto the branch, waiting for their next move. When the store owners found her, they quickly jumped the tree after her, throwing kunai at her. Dodging every ounce of it by swinging under the branch, she swung firecely back up and kicked the one in the face. When the next came, she swung down only to realize the guy had been on it the whole time and he wasnt on the bottom.
As Katelyn emerged back up the branch, the owner made his move. He swiftly grabbed her by her foot and dangled her right above the ground. "Gotcha!" The owner said shaking her around. Sweat dripping down Katelyn's face, she couldnt find another escape route. Suddenly, the branch began to crack, falling off the side a bit. Too much weight had been added onto it as they were fighting and it could no longer hold all. "What was that noise..?" Katelyn asked him as she looked down. The guy was too busy blabbering on about capturing her, he didn't notice the unusual noise. In 3 seconds later, the branch cracked once more but louder this time, breaking in half forcing anything that had been on it to slide right off. "What the.." Was the guys words before he slid off, falling face first to the floor. Crashing to the ground, a huge thump could be heard a mile away. Once the guy had finally gotten up, he realized his grip on Katelyn was no more. Feeling angered, he searched for her but could not find her. Luckily, Katelyn had found a hiding place after the fall. Heavy breathes could be heard as Katelyns energy was running low.
It began to get louder, giving away her position. Thinking quick, she eyed the surroundings noticing a squirrel. Using her telepathy, she began to ask the squirrel to help her. "Do you think you can possibly distract him?" The squirrel listened closely, thinking about how to do it. Nodding, it answered "yes" as it walked closer tot he owner. It slowly walked up to him, trying not to seem suspicious. The guy hadnt noticed it there, and began to stare. The squirrel showing effection, rubbed its head against his foot. "Aw so cute." He thought, the distraction was actually really working. Trying to escape the scene, Katelyn rose up off her legs, running as fast as her legs could carry her. But Katelyn quickly lost control of herself and fell to the ground. Her chakra had been too low after that last skill, there wasn't much energy for her to do anything whatsoever. He smirked walking closer over to the fallen body after realizing the squirrel was her diversion to get away.. He figured Katelyn was also smart enough to get away if he just picked her up. Weakening her was his one and only choice if he wanted to get revenge. Picking up 3 kunai out of his pocket pouch, his direction turned to Katelyn. Aiming them, he took note of where they would land and how far it could reach. "You'll never get away." He whispered as he chucked the kunai at high speeds, straight at Katelyn. She quickly freaked out, seeing them flying towards her. She knew if she didn't move she was done for. Katelyn took hold of her grasp on the ground by picking up her foot and trying her best to get away, but it was too late. One had kicked her running foot down, shoving her hold to the ground. The others emerged right into her sides. She let out a weak shout as she felt the pain rising. Her eyes began to blur, but before any of that she saw the manager. "You wont win.." Katelyn growled outraged by the fact of being defeated by an employer. Her eyes began to glow a yellowing dark color. Anger showing in her eyes, glowing darker with every step closer he took. Swifly, she searched the area for any sort of animals. A cat had been walking to its home, taking note of the battle going on. Its scaredness reaching a max, it journeyed home as fast as it could not wanting to get involved. Katelyn's eyes began to glow but then slowly began to fade. Her colors disapearing, her chakra still hadn't truly recovered. She would never alot more then 30 minutes to recover all of it in order to have a fighting chance. The man took note of her not having the strength to fight anymore, he felt victorious. Walking slowly up to her, he whispered. "Give up yet?" Katelyn struggled to get up, but the weakness of her running out of chakra grew weaker each time she tried her best to get up. Figuring she lost this fight, the only thing she could do was think and sit. There was no other chance of getting out. She used every ounce of her energy. "Alright, you got me. " Looking up, the man hadn't been there. Confused, she searched the area but he was completely gone. Noticing the squirrel she talked to, she saw him wink at her. And all his buddies. They must of all fought the owner. Smiling, she winked back before she lay her head on the soft dirt. Eyes closed, beginning to take a break and rest for the days ahead.
(Edited the other a bit. Just wanted to save the other in case. So heres what I edited a bit.)
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:36 pm
@KateIyn: Much better. APPROVED! Have fun rping. smile
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