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 Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:41 am
RPC Name: Aya Gensai
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan: Bushin Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: The Bushin are warriors among warriors, the elite among elite. Trained since birth after being chosen, they become the best of the best, honing their instincts, and talents throughout the beginning stages of their lives. They are trained to follow orders, and finish the mission without any complaints, and to finish it, or die trying. From their lineage, the Bushin are naturally attractive. They are usually incapable of escaping a genjutsu, being forced to administer pain in order to escape. Their own genjutsu is weaker by one rank, and they are unable to learn Village styles.
RP Sample:
--- Aya sighed, leaning against the back of a large sandstone building. She was in the middle of the desert, low on supplies, and lacking proper protection from the sand, and sun. The woman crossed her arms, amaranth hues glancing forward in the direction she was facing. It would still be a day or two until she could reach Suna, which was where her target was supposedly resting at the moment. There, she could find him, or just continue to follow him by gathering information from the locals like she had done in several other villages. This man was really turning out to be a pain, but she needed to finish the mission before returning, even if she had gone over her leave by about a month. No doubt her contractor had either forgotten her, hired someone else, or was out looking for her. The latter was highly unlikely, since the b*****d really didn't care who was killed during the mission. She was allowed to kill anyone she wanted to get the mission done, even if they were innocent children, or wise elders. Aya shrugged, letting out a sigh, and straightening herself. It was time to check on the trader.
--- A moment later she was standing in the doorway, peering into the shadowed building. A questioning expression pasted itself onto her face. Where was the trader? He said it would only take thirty minutes, and it's been at least an hour. She heard something smash against the floor in the back room, and immediately moved into a combat ready stance. Reaching into her pocket she pulled out a scroll, sliding it open and activating it. A rather regular looking katana appeared, which she snatched out of the air, and held ready at her waist. She didn't want to bother with a drawn out fight with a villain, it would just be boring, since she wanted to get moving as fast as possible. Careful steps were taken towards the back room, and in seconds she was looking into the storeroom for the trader. Her foot felt wet, and as she looked down, she could see a trail of blood, which led to a fresh corpse lying on the floor a few meters away. Next to it was a familiar man holding a bloodied kunai in one of his hands. It only took a moment for her to recognize that this was her target.
--- With a quick step towards the target she drew her blade in one swift, elegant motion, bringing it down on his shoulder, and back up for a second cut. Blood suddenly exploded from his shoulder, the arm falling to the ground, dead. The man began to scream, his remaining hand reaching to grab the fresh wound. Aya moved over to the man and placed one slender hand upon his head, closing her eyes as she began to focus. With a suddenly jolt her chakra was forced into his head, nearly destroy his brain as it began to force him into a coma. The bleeding began to slow, his posture weakening, and his eyes began to close. Once he was out, she worked furiously to bandage the wound. She wasn't supposed to kill him, just bring him back alive. The contractor didn't ask what kind of state to bring him back in, so once she was done, she grabbed whatever supplies she needed, and set out to turn in the job. Ignoring the blood that was spattered onto her appearance, she frowned. "I hope that arm doesn't come out of my pay."
{ { Jutsu(s) Used: [Iaidō], [Turning Swallow Cut], [Bushin Mind Alteration] } }
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:07 pm
Kibi Yonin Rpc Name: Kamoku Shiin (Ushio) Village: Otogakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ushio What you know about the clan/bl:1) Exmtremely intelligent, to the point people believe they gain their intelligence straight from the gods themselves. 2) They are thought to have a sixth sense, and have not technically denied it, only replying with you can not understand what you can not perceive. 3) They truely get their "Sixth Sense" From their extreme reactionary abilities caused by their chakra activly pulsing through their nerves, and automatically adjusting them in a fight to dodge or block attacks, sometimes even to counter. 4) Ushio are made up of four families, each one guards a different island of the Land Hidden in the Waves. 5) The Ushio clan has had problems with low ranking members assassinating the Head of the Clan. 6) The Head of the Ushio clan will only teach one student at a time, and so most Ushio children fight to become his student. 7) Most Ushio are female, due to the fact that Ushio males are rare to find, and even more rare to birth. 8 ) Their Water jutsu are highly weak to raiton techniques, and often injure the user when blocked by a Raiton technique. 9) They are known for having great chakra control, probably because they require you to have chakra control as a ninja type. 10) Their ability to not have to speak the words of the jutsu make the cost to use a jutsu double. they can also use jutsu below their level without handsigns. Rp Sample: Kamoku Shiin stood at the mouth of the alley way, his back against the wall. He had come to this hustle and bustle city for an information exchange, money for his information, and he was going to get it. " Tch. He is late. I hate late people. Well, I guess I'll just have to find him. " Kamoku said smiling, his back turned to the alley behind him, he heard a small grating noise, like gravel on hard pavement. He spun around quickly, his eyes catching sight of a fist flying directly at him. He twisted out of the way, grabbing the man's arm as his fist shot past his head. Continueing the spinning movement, Kamoku used the man's force to pick him up off his feet and sling him into the street behind him, a speeding vehicle, one of those new things that Kamoku had last gathered info on to help the creator make them function. The man's ribs and neck snapped sickeningly as it collided with the full metal hull of the large bulky vehicle, who was moving in exess of fifty miles per hour. " That couldn't have worked out better. " Kamoku said smiling. He knew that he hadn't thrown the money man, because he hadn't felt the urge to hold onto the guy. His eyes would have picked up the man having any money pouches, or any hidden pouches on his body he could have been keeping the money in. Kamoku finished his spin, looking directly into the alleyway, but he had dropped to a half splits, his right hand on the ground, his other catching the knife from the man he had just thrown's belt. It had come loose in the spin and upward thrust movement Kamoku had used. Kamoku smiled as he saw three other men each with different features. Kamoku smiled, these were the Painful Five. The one he had just dispatched was the weapons master. That left only four, one of which was probably far away, or right behind him, picking up the scraps of their ally, hoping that his mad medical abilities could save him. " So, he sent you five after me? Oh wait, I forgot, that's four now. " Kamoku said smiling. He scanned the three infront of him from left to right, and placed each one of them according to their looks, and the equipment they held. on the left was the Taijutsu master, in the middle, and slightly behind the other two was the Genjutsu master, and on the right, was the Ninjutsu master. But this didn't seem exactly right, the walls weren't the same as they had been before, they were reversed. " Damn, Optical reverse... " he mutered under his breath. " You think you are pretty smart don't you? " The Taijutsu one said smiling, running forward. " Well then, prepare to die! RAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!! " He said, running directly at Kamoku. He swung down, aiming to drive his fist into Kamoku's head. Kamoku's body responded quickly and easily, He just thought to himself that everything was reversed before the huge idiot got to him. He smiled, dodging to the outside of the man's punch, he caught hold of the man's forearm, and pushed against his elbow joint, locking it in place. " You can't break my arm you b*****d! I have too much muscle! " The Taijutsu master said laughing. It was true, no matter how much Kamoku would have tried, he couldn't exert enough force to beat this idiot's muscles. " Duh, that's why you're here." Kamoku said smiling. As soon as the taijutsu master's hand touched the ground, his entire punch's force short up his arm to his elbow, shattering it completely as well as forcing it to his shoulder. This in turn made him dive forward, and after using his mighty rush ability, he was unable to stop in time, he hit the gravel and slid out into the street. He was lucky, the vehicle swerved to avoid him, but then again, it would have probably been the vehicle to get damaged in that crash. But then again, his face was probably worn to the bone, and he did have a knife stuck in his forearm, that since it got pushed up to his shoulder, the knife was lodged somewhere in his humerus right at that moment. His humerus nerve must have been be really stinging." Come on, I know your little tricks. " Kamoku said, moving around slightly. Just as he had expected, after he had seen through the Genjutsu master's technique the genjutsu master had canceled it. " Come on, You there, Ninjutsu boy, Come at me! You know your little genjutsu pal there won't! " He said, smiling and focusing chakra into his vocal cords. He smiled as the rain he had heard falling hit the ground, quickly dousing everything. " Wow! This is a real down pour. " He said smiling, his left hand behind his back. He had it twisted so it looked like he had injured his back in that movement, but in truth, a flow of water was building up in his hand, a technique that was called Tsunami Tama no-jutsu (Tsunami Sphere Jutsu. This technique was extremely nice because he didn't even really have to aim, he just had to throw it at them, release it's orb form, and jump upwards to protect himself from the release of water. It was going to be bad, this entire quarter of the village could be turned into a lake because of this jutsu. It was Kage ranked after all. " Catch! " He said, throwing the ball at the two. The Ninjutsu master made some quick handsigns, but was too late. The Genjutsu user on the other hand had made his handsigns quickly, not needing to use very many due to his position as a support ninja. The Genjutsu user shot up into the air, a blast of air easily noticable behind him. " Nice use of assassin's rush. " Kamoku said smiling. It was, he had never thought to use it in that fashion. But it didn't matter, because he was climbing the wall, easily keeping up with the Genjutsu specialist. They both reached the roof of this sky scraper which creaked and began to lean due to the fact that it's lower two or three stories had just been cleanly destroyed by the Tsunami Tama no-jutsu technique.Now, let's do this! " Kamoku said smiling. He laughed, and focused chakra into his vocal cords again. he brought his arm back, and noticed a slight change in the area. His vision had been flipped, and it kept switching. From upside down to usidedown mirrored, and it just kept changing over and over, in no pattern what so ever. Kamoku's hands began to emit a white mist,Touketsu-Tacchi (Frozen Touch jutsu), and he cursed a loud. He couldn't use Kai to get rid of this genjutsu because he couldn't bring his hands together. " Damn you! " Kamoku said, focusing his chakra into his vocal cords. His vision went a little blurry, he didn't have a clear shot, and his auto adjust was about to shut off due to the over exertion of his nerves. he had used his "Sixth Sense" about twenty five time, twenty-six, twenty-seven, twenty-nine... and then it all went down. His aim had been true, and he pulled his fists toward him. He had used his clan's most secret technique, Mizu-Seishi (Water Control Jutsu). The Genjutsu Specialist's eyes exploded, causing him to lose focus and his genjutsu to be dispelled. " Ha! Now I'll allow you to find your final resting place! " Kamoku said, running forward. The sky scraper was now falling, and the Genjutsu specialist had fallen off the edge. Kamoku was about out of chakra, so he though that now he could just use a technique by saying it's name. " Mizu Hebi-Kengotsu (Water snake fist jutsu)! " Kamoku said, laughing. Water from the rain all around him and the genjutsu specialist converged on his arms, and shot out toward the Genjutsu speciaist. The hands that formed wraped their thick sausage fingers around the genjutsu specialist, and began to freese, freezing him in a perfect block of ice. The block of ice hit the tsunami's water, causing a slightly massive wave, and the surface of the water to ripple. " s**t s**t s**t s**t s**t! " Kamoku said slanting his body so he would hit the water far enough away from the ice he wouldn't run into it, but close enough he wouldn't smash himself on the calming surface of the Tsunami's waters. He hit the water, and surfaced. Quickly swmming over to the block of ice and holding on for dear life. truth be told, he was deathly afraid of water. he technically couldn't swim, and that's why he had left the island of the cresent moon. He couldn't stand to be surrounded by so much water. He pulled himself onto the ice block and sat there for a couple of minutes, noticing someone standing on a building just tall enough it wasn't submerged. " Damn b*****d... " Kamoku said, as the block of ice floated over to the roof, Kamoku got off and onto the roof. " Do you have my money? " Kamoku said, his eyes glistening with pure indifference. He was in business mode, he wasn't going to let his emotions get in the way of a pay check. " Do you have my Info? " The man asked, smiling. " Oh, and perfect slaughter of the Painful Five, now you get a nice bonus, and I'll keep half of my payment to them! " The man said rubbing his hands together and smiling. The man was putrid, bald, with his remaining hair combed over the top in a desperate attempt to hide his baldness, huge fat lips that were cracked and chapped. Buck teeth and an overbite that let his teeth sit infront of his two inch thick bottom lip. His nose was covered and warts and shone brightly, which was disgusting because there was barely any light out due to the terrible storm overhead that was probably about to turn into a hurricane. " Give me my cut first, and then I'll give you my Info, because a fight with those bastards was never in the deal. " Kamoku said, in a flat monotone voice. It seemed like he was bored with this, but in truth he had an acceptable punishment for making him have to destroy an entire city quarter, and alerting his famliy as to where he had been. They were literally on the shores of the mainland, and it wouldn't take that long for Luo, The head of the Main family, to learn about the sinking of this town. " Ok, ok. Here, you happy? " The disgusting man said, tossing over a briefcase stuffed ful of bills, all in a protective water covering. This b*****d had been planning to make him fight this whole time. " Ok, here is your info. " He said, looking up at the disgusting old man. He smiled slightly, the chakra focused in his vocal chords. Mizu Gyakuryuu no Jutsu (Water Reverse Flow Technique) was the technique he was beginning to use. The disgusting old man grabbed his throat, and began coughing, falling to his knees and gasping for air. In truth he was breathing just fine, but neither the old man's body, nor his eyes could tell the difference. " Mizu Gyakuryuu no Jutsu (Water Reverse Flow Technique) A torture technique. It is a genjutsu, and it is harmless, the only problem is that you aren't a ninja, and you can't dispell it. I'll let you rot here. He said, walking over and picking up the other breif case, possibly the one with the Painful Five's payment money in it. " I'll see you in hell you b*****d! " Kamoku said smiling, waving behind himself as he walked toward the edge of the building, the flooding had gone down considerably. Kamoku jumped off the edge and make some handsigns " summoning jutsu! " He said, summoning a small boat with a sail on it. he landed inside of it in the water, and began to sail toward home, in the opposite direction of the Land Hidden in the Waves. The greasy, disgusting old man had rolled onto his back, and had actually drowned do to the fact he began to swallow the rain, breathing it in and out.List of used jutsu: Takai Chikaku (High Perception) Tsunami Tama no-jutsu (Tsunami Sphere Jutsu) Touketsu-Tacchi (Frozen Touch jutsu) Mizu-Seishi (Water Control Jutsu) Mizu Hebi-Kengotsu (Water snake fist jutsu) Mizu Gyakuryuu no Jutsu (Water Reverse Flow Technique) And a made up summoning jutsu to summon a boat. I'm reposting this so it is easily accessable for a moderator who is capable of accepting this.
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Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:28 pm
@Kibi: APPROVED. Just remember what we talked about.
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Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:53 pm
Rpc Name: Kenji Hajime Nara
Village: Mist
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hyoton
What you know about the clan/bl: I know what I've from the anime, as well as the specific rules for the guild which states that Hyoton jutsus have a weakness for lightning jutsus. Resistant to fire jutsus, yet demon fire, such as the Nibi would melt through ice jutsus. Hyoton has two stages, the second stage is only reached at Jounin after defeating three shinobis of my rank or higher and going through strenous training in the ice element. Also, the most important thing: the Ice Kekkei Genkai is created by manipulating the water element in one hand, the wind element in another and combining them together through the flow of seals and the molding of chakra. In other words, manipulate the water and use the wind element to drop the temperature so drastically that the water freezes.
Rp Sample:
"Alright son...It's time for me to teach you the finer points of the abilities of our bloodline," exclaimed Kenji happily as he patted his boy's head. He was now a father teaching his own son how to perform Hyoton jutsu so that when he takes the chuunin exam, he'll be able to use the abilities of his bloodline. "First of all, you have to remember that against lightning users it's best to use our wind element rather than our bloodline abilities. Also, ice that we create is far stronger than fire jutsus. As long as you remember that then you'll be set to go," Kenji continued explaining as he walked over to a small pond nearby. "First and foremost you have to use the most basic jutsu in order to create the ice: Reido. So long as there is water or moisture present, you may be able to freeze it by combining water and wind elemental manipulation, like so," Kenji explained as he formed the proper seals using only one hand and placed his hand over the pond. His chakra flowed out of it gently as the water began to freeze over almost instantly. Within seconds the puddle was frozen solid.
"Now that you have ice, you'll be able to perform all kinds of awesome jutsu," Kenji continued with his lesson. "For example...the Hyouga Bunshin no Jutsu!" cried out Kenji as he formed several seals with his right hand and slammed his palm unto the ice. Suddenly, the ice erupted upwards, taking form and shape and looking exactly as Kenji did. The resemblance was uncanny, to the point that even family wouldn't be able to tell real from clone. "The Glacier clone can take multiple hits but is very weak to fire jutsus," Kenji continued to explain as he watched his son perform the jutsu flawlessly. The boy did have talent that much was sure. Deciding to try something more complicated, Kenji decided to show his son a more advance jutsu.
"Now, this final jutsu that I'm about to teach you can actually be fairly effective against taijutsu specialist," Kenji continued as he stepped atop of the ice. Forming several seals with only his right hand, Kenji molded his chakra and gathered it throughout his body. The moisture in the air began freezing over his upper body as he became encased in armor, an armor of pure hyoton ice. "This is the frozen armor. It melts upon contact with fire jutsu but it can withstand three genin attacks and one chuunin attack. It's perfect for going into the chuunin exams with it," Kenji finished explaining as he placed his hands on his waist as if some super armored super hero.
Jutsus used: Reido (Freezing Point), Hyouga Bunshin No Jutsu [Glacier Bunshin Technique] Hyougai no Jutsu (Frozen Armor).
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:58 pm
@Unrelinquished: APPROVED. However, be very much aware that the Mind Alteration technique is probably going to go under revision. It's too OP to have the ability at chuunin to basically destroy someone's brain without the destruction being repairable.
@Ronin: APPROVED.
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Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:24 am
Sorry, but you're going to need a lot more than that before anyone can really judge this application. The best sample would be a battle scene showing off the various abilities.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:40 am
{ { I'm applying to take Shay's spot in the bloodline, since she hasn't posted with the character since February 1st, and has made no hiatus log. } } Rpc Name: Nishimoto Miiko Village: Otogakure Rank: Chuunin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Konaga What you know about the clan/bl: Seeing as I've used this bloodline countless times, I know quite a bit about it. The majority of children born with this bloodline die before reaching adolescence, and even when they do, their bodies are endlessly tortured by their gift, or curse, or an endless supply of chakra. Not all of it is at the conscious disposal, and using too much can often render the user useless via the "Raging Spirit." They also have fantastic chakra control required to use their unique abilities which increase their physical performance beyond the norm. That, however, also comes at a price. Each time it is used, users experience a burn on the limb, and black lines lace it, although sometimes the user may not notice. When used too much, the limb because useless until a full round of meditation. Which brings me to that last thing, they never sleep, only meditate. RP Sample: Miiko let out a breath of exhaustion. She wanted to win this fight without using her bloodline abilities, to prove that it wasn't the only thing that made her strong, but that was too far gone now. There were several scratches and bruises covering what was visible of her skin, all the making of the devious assassin shinobi that she had been tasked with to fight. The main problem was that she believed one of the senbon needles that had hit her was poisoned, and Miiko had only one way to get rid of it before it began to debilitate her any further. Closing her eyes, her concentration zeroed in on the affected area, massive amounts of chakra flooding the area. As it flooded into her left forearm, the poison was quickly being destroyed, along with the surrounding cells in her arm. After a few seconds her arm went limp, it was useless now. A kunai embedded itself in the tree she was leaning against, forcing her into action. Miiko rolled out of the way, cradling her useless arm to make sure she didn't break it during a manuever. She could hear him running circles around her, but she couldn't see him, and she was at her limit. There would be nothing stopping her from coming out anymore, since she was the other personality that facilitated difficult fights, and missions. The other her. As she stepped behind a tree, the personality of Miiko began to fade, and the conscious body was taken over by the other, Mizax. The woman let a devilish grin contort her lips, ignoring the obviously useless arm that Miiko had handed her. "Poor girl couldn't keep up, eh? Sad thing you are Miiko, let Onee-chan show you how it's down." Chakra flooded into her left eye as Mizax began moving, the world going completely black before it, seeing nothing but chakra signatures, which meant that she could see the assassin. His figure stood out boldly against the black backdrop. The man was assembling more tools from one of his scrolls, he wouldn't be able to hurt Miiko, or anyone else again, because when she was done with him, he would be dead. Once again chakra began to ignite within her, this time covering her entire body. The world slowed to her eyes, what she could see of it anyway, and her physical form disappeared as she moved towards her opponent. While the technique was still active, the kunoichi risked further injury. Pain washed through her working arm like a tsunami as the chakra blade extended from it. The moment has passed where here Shift techinque has been active, and she was now standing before the assailant, holding the chakra blade ready to strike. A yelp of horrified surprise was all he could utter before she brought it down on his head. Death had taken him immediately, which is something she shouldn't have given to him. It was over now, and Miiko would probably whine about now being able to beat him herself, but it was still over, and both of them were alive. An hour later while travelling back to the village, Mizax fell to her knees as her breathing became heavier, more stressed. Pain pulsated through her body as if the augmentations had been fresh, threatening to overcome her. The pain wasn't something Miiko would be able to stand without reverting back to her again, so she concentrated on it, and began to cede. Miiko once against became the dominant personality.
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:08 am
Rpc Name:Gabriel Kaguya (last name if approved )
Village: Leaf
Rank:Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Shikotsumyaku
What you know about the clan/bl: Just about everything really. It allows the user to manipulate the bones within their body and create multiples of those bones. They can alter the density, and size of said bones as well. They also have the ability to regenerate their bones if they are ever broken.
Rp Sample:
Prologue: A large snake demon has been causing trouble in the forest surrounding the Hidden Mist Village. In hopes of vanquishing the demon, the Village has hired help to deal with capturing the massive beast. At the moment, the beast has cornered a Mist ninja in a shed near a small river.
Flinging open the door, the woman prepared to run, but was stopped by the penetrating glare of the giant beast in front of her. It must have been 40 feet tall even with the majority of its ghostly body coiled around the small shack that had previously served as her shelter. It was looking back at her with its piercing yellow eyes as its forked-tongue flickered between it pale silver lips. As it let out a slow and prolonged hiss, it displayed several rows of sharp and curved fangs. Underneath its extended jaw, several streams of blood trailed down its naturally silver and red body. The woman smiled nervously to herself as she observed and took in this massive and fearsome creature. "So, he did get you." She stated as she swayed slightly at the feeling of a small breeze. "Serves you right, you slimy son of a-" She was unable to finish her sentence as the snake lounged forward to swallow her whole. A blood chilling screech echoed through the small plain. A man stood with his back to the woman who was now holding her arms up as a mean of defense.
As she lowered her arms to see what had made the creature shriek, her once nervous smile turned into a full-hearted smirk. The man stood in front of her, but the snake nowhere to be seen. "Took you long enough, Gabriel. You didn't here me the first time I yelled?" The man, now identified as Gabriel, looked to the woman with a raised brow. "You call that a yell? From where I am from we call that screaming." The woman stuck her tongue out at Gabriel, but he continued as he turned back to face the beast. "Besides you seemed to have been having fun aggravating it; but then again that is your speciality is it not, Sira-san?" Gabriel didn't wait for an answer as the snake shot out from the woods in a lightining fast movement. He barely had time to grab Sira's arm and pull them both away from the strike before the already damaged shelter shattered under the immense strength of the demon. Gabriel stood up right again, unconsciously pulling Sira to her feet as well. "Stay out of this." He mumbled as he ran toward the snake’s outstretched neck leaving Sira beside the stream. As he reached the snake he leapt high into the air, his arm pulled back in a mock punch, as a white fragment protruded between his third and fourth knuckle. Gravity quickly took its toll as Gabriel fell back down to earth, positioned so he would land on the monsters neck. However, the demon quickly coiled its neck back to where the rest of its body was and left Gabriel's intended attack to bury itself in the ground. He looked up immediately to keep his eyes on the snake as he had learned before that once you lose sight of it, you were screwed.
Gabriel kept eye contact as he began to stand up right. As the fist that was now in a crater, was pulled out, one long pale white, blade-like bone came with it. It took sometime for the bone to be released from the earth's grip as Gabriel made sure he made no sudden movements. After freeing the bone, Gabriel flicked his wrist in an attempt to gain the snakes attention. It worked; the snake’s eyes flicked between Gabriel's face and his hand. It was so pre-occupied that it failed to register the kunai flying toward it's face until it actually made contact. It screeched once more as it turned it's head way from it's primary assailant, which was a bad move. A second kunai, this one with an explosive tag and a spirit tag tied to it, imbedded itself into it's neck. A flash of light and cloud of dust erupted from the snake. Gabriel had expected the snake would run off after such an attack. When the smoke cleared, it revealed that not only did the snake demon not move, but it's mouth was now held shut and leashed by a Kusari-gama (chained sickle) held by none other than Sira. "Hurry, up Gabe. This thing isn't easy to hold down you know!" She was right; it was taking all of her strength and half of the newly arrived Hunter-nin just to keep it from slithering away. Gabriel wasn't one to look a gift horse in the mouth though. He aimed his fist toward the demon and with a sickening snap the bone blade was sent flying through the air. The snake's body twisted and turned in failed attempts to free itself from its muzzle, but Gabriel's bone hit its mark. Unfortunately the beast’s, stronger than steal, hide was barely scathed by the attack. Gabriel cursed as he realized his Kekkei Genkai wouldn't penetrate its hard skin. "Fine, if I can't get through your skin, I'll go through something else."
With that said Gabriel once again sprinted at the snake. It momentarily stopped struggling as it glared at Gabriel's approaching form and made a hard jerk in his direction. The new and sudden movement of the snake caused most of the participants in the tug-of-war to release their hold or pulled them into the stream; giving the snake plenty of room to strike at Gabriel. However, its mouth was still shut and Gabriel had full intention of going head on. As the demon's head became leveled with his, Gabriel leapt over its mouth and came face to face with the snake. Two sharp bones escaped the flesh of his palms and in quick succession he thrust his palms forward, impaling the demon in the eyes, blinding it.
The monster jerked its head skyward and Gabriel was sent flying through the air until gravity began to work again and he was falling back toward the beast. Unintentionally, the demon whipped its body around in a quick thrash and it's tail slammed into Gabriel chest which resulted in him crashing back into the destroyed hut. Taking advantage of the blinded serpent, the hunter-nin surrounded it and laced strong cables wrapped in spirit tags around the demon. After it was secured, Sira ran over to Gabriel with a worried look. "You ok?" Gabriel groaned in response but sat up reluctantly and after 10 minutes began to walk back over toward the captured demon. With his palms now back to normal, Gabriel laid his hand on the top of the giants head. It thrashed under his touch, but halted as it heard his icy tone. "You aren't going to be a problem anymore."
((The attacks used were custom ones with the exception of the bone blade through the palm. After awhile I'll request for custom attacks, but that won't be done until my RPC hits at least a Chunin.))
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:25 am
@Azeiel The Fallen: I liked the story but, because you showed custom attacks that have yet to be made and absolutely nothing else about the bloodline, I cannot approve it. I would suggest a revised version using various other abilities listed in the bloodline and even the weaknesses your character may have.
On an unimportant side note: Welcome to Konoha and PotS in general! I personally would of suggested joining Iwa so that you would be close to your head of bloodline.
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:36 am
Thanks and will do. Also the only reason I didn't really show any weaknesses in my sample was because I have yet to pick a class for my character so its kinda up in the air. I will think of something though. Furthermore is Iwa active I will join if it is but I don't want to be stuck in a dead village, clan head or no. Also
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:45 pm
Rpc Name:Zhou Beifong
Village:Leaf
Rank:Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Ranmaru
What you know about the clan/bl: Just about everything its my favorite.
Rp Sample: Alright here we go this will be a stage two high level version of my character.
Zhou sat alone meditating in a small temple on the outskirts of the hidden leaf village. Not ten feet away from him stood a lone bandit. He had proposed a question to the bandit,"Which is worse, destruction of the body or mind." The man responded with," Of course the mind my body will heal your mind wont." Zhou stood and gazed into the mans eyes and said," Very well I will make you beg for your death."His eyes flashed red as he bombarded the mind of the man with images of his own dark and bloody demise at the hands of his most trusted friends. Zhou ended the genjutsu as the man fell to the floor. He struggled to get back up and was breathing rather erratically. Zhou smiled at this. The man was still sane even after taking the full force of one of his genjutus'. He would have a little fun with this man. His eyes flashed once more as he continued the mental assault on the man. This time he would show him images of an incredibly beautiful woman alone with him. Zhou grinned as he saw the man smile. The dream was about to come crashing down as Zhou changed the woman to a creature from the darkest nightmares of man in a burst of blood. He enjoyed breaking people. His smile grew wider as he heard the man scream. It was a shame hearing males scream it had no finesse to it unlike with females. The man rolled over onto his back and began to twitch. What happened next surprised even Zhou. The man began muttering gibberish and began to beg for his death. Zhou smiled, he thought the man would last longer, as he drew a elegant dagger from his belt and made his way over to the man. He knelt next to him as he carved a small slice into the mans wrist severing the radial artery. Zhou stood and wiped the blood off on the mans shirt before returning his dagger to its rightful spot. He turned and left the now laughing man to bleed out. Zhou faded away into the darkness his eyes still glowing a brilliant crimson.
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:42 pm
You chose not to continue with the Shikotsumyaku character? Very well. Under the area asking what you know about the clan, you put and I quote Quote: Just about everything its my favorite. . This tells me absolutely nothing about your knowledge of it. Try telling me more about what abilities and bonuses it gives or a little history of the character it originated from. Your RP sample consisted of an unknown genjutsu and nothing else. it really did not show anything that had to do with the effects of the bloodline in the least. I would suggest that you edit it or submit a different RP sample that Showcases the bloodline better. As it stands, I cannot approve you for this bloodline.
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:46 pm
I will edit the first part and use some of the official jutsus but I cant really do anything for showing the use of the bloodline since there are no jutsus for the stage one it just is kinda there.
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 10:55 pm
Wait, time out. Azeiel, don't you already have a character in Suna? The one with your custom bloodline?
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