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(Sorry about jumping ahead.)

Deugaro had finally made his was to the kitchen with both his mind and the abbey intact, with a small bit of help from that man.
"Blast it all.", He thought angrily. "I wont have enough time to finish the brew."
He quickly searched for a decent sized kettle, amazingly making little noise whilst browsing through the pots and pans. The dark haired male found what he was looking for.
"Dakoon." He murmured.
A strong gust of wind blew through the kitchen and into the dining hall as an onyx shaded oval opened and within an instant Deugaro leapt through, leaving only a boot print and a few disturbed pots behind.

He appeared little more than five feet in the air, about a mile east from the abbey.
"Now that I have some room I can release some of the taint."
After a series of locking mechanisms the gauntlet fell off and struck the earth hard, leaving a small depression in the ground.
His charcoal colored digits had little time to revel in the sunlight as they were quickly stabbed into the soft dirt.
"I am sorry Earth..."
Poisonous energy lanced out of his fingertips like burning stingers. However, the assassin would not scream as he had long ago learned to endure.
So he watched the trees around him decay and collapse on themselves in agonizing silence.

Yes, I am. Thank you for saying that.
Man, you guys are getting so good I only have to give you the minimal help now. Makes my life much easier. Its a good solid post. The only recurring problem you seem to have is using the word 'he' too much as the start of a sentence. Remember, you can move the word 'he' if you add 'ing' to whatever verb you happen to be using, then adding it after the action. Or you could have switched parts of the sentence, depending on how long your sentences where or if there was any description after your action.
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Thats about it.

I love this post of yours girl. It really brings out the flavor of your character and gives us an idea of the type of environment that he might have grown up in. XD
There is some good reaction there to seeing new things that he hasn't ever seen before. Good sentence structure, interesting read. Class act post. One thing though.

You might want to note that he's going back to looking around a second time in a way such as:

Thats all, just a little change to make it clear he paused then went back to it. Otherwise it sounds kinda redundant because you used almost the same exact wording the first time. Observing the room could be seen as observing the people in the room as well.
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Good job again and keep it up.

Lets see, nice little post you have here. I like how you've been developing this character of yours. He's so interesting. I don't think that in all my rping I've ever dealt with a dragon kin of any sort so when I go to make my next character post (sometime within the next day or two) I definitely and going to have to get creative with how I handle you. Okay, so there aren't tons of problems, but there are some.

You tried to do something good here, but I believe it got out of control and you kinda just ended up mumbling. It might be though that you just couldn't find the right wording at the time and that is the option I'm going to stick with. This would have been a better way of going about it:

Not exactly the same as you had written, but I didn't know quite what else to do. I know what you were trying to say and it was rather difficult to put properly. Good job on the fact I was even able to understand it. = @ @ =
This:

Is a good sentence. Its interesting and you've given up some information about how your character perceives things and thus perhaps how things where for him growing up.
Last little picky thing, "stood" should be "stands". ;3 Nice post though. Very interesting.

Being a graduate means I'm not grading you anymore. You are welcome to post freely because the only time Ill spend on your posts is perhaps a pm here or there if anything at all. :3 I don't mind at all if you post and help move things along. ::Laughs:: Its easy enough for me to just skip over your post though and go on to people who are currently getting taught. So please, don't worry. (Please also don't take what I said as anything bad. = @@ = I realized with how I worded it, that might be the case. I would love to have your around if you want to stay, but I also don't want to keep you here if other rps call to you. :3 )

((Raoden wasn't observing the room the first time around. He was observing the people in it. 3nodding Also, after that last post he doesn't really have anythinng to do until the food is served or someone notices him.))

(ah, okay then. I'd be glad to stay, there aren't really all that many RPs calling out to me yet. None of them particularly interest me...Though I might not be posting all that much. I'm working on a story of my own that's taking a while to finish...Dumb muses...>.>)