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 Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:11 pm
So Masamune, you like it?
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:25 pm
Yeah, I think it's interesting. It's also suspensful which makes me want to read on.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:31 pm
Masamune 5.0 Yeah, I think it's interesting. It's also suspensful which makes me want to read on. cool, Chapter 4 should be up later today, unless I screw up.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:41 pm
I just want you to know that just because I haven't really commented doesn't mean I don't read this because I do.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:42 pm
N-N-N-NEW CHARACTERS domokun
Good stuff all around. Human quality added to the characters, very rational logic behind much of the thinking and philosophizing and such. You've got yourself a subscribed reader.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:42 pm
Zen Rider I just want you to know that just because I haven't really commented doesn't mean I don't read this because I do. As long as I know who my readers are I am good, thanks Glad you like it
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:47 pm
Allwing N-N-N-NEW CHARACTERS domokun Good stuff all around. Human quality added to the characters, very rational logic behind much of the thinking and philosophizing and such. You've got yourself a subscribed reader. I am glad that you like it, by human qualities you mean?
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:48 pm
Sauvie Allwing N-N-N-NEW CHARACTERS domokun Good stuff all around. Human quality added to the characters, very rational logic behind much of the thinking and philosophizing and such. You've got yourself a subscribed reader. I am glad that you like it, by human qualities you mean? Multi-layered, complex in their simplicity. Most of the other cult stories have had this quality too, but I like stating it as many authors forget it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:50 pm
Allwing Sauvie Allwing N-N-N-NEW CHARACTERS domokun Good stuff all around. Human quality added to the characters, very rational logic behind much of the thinking and philosophizing and such. You've got yourself a subscribed reader. I am glad that you like it, by human qualities you mean? Multi-layered, complex in their simplicity. Most of the other cult stories have had this quality too, but I like stating it as many authors forget it. oh okay, I thought you meant that nobody had any outlandish like superhuman abilities... My head is still out of it sweatdrop , any way though not many some people will have some non human traits, but that is expected
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:56 am
Did you screw up? To my disappointment, I don't see a chapter 4...
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 5:15 am
I was sick as a dog last night, and I needed a confirmation from a cultie so yeah... I screwed up
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:44 am
the quite long, chapter 4 is written just need an edit so it will be up today 100%
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 12:15 pm
biggrin awesome. *awaits ch. 4*
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 12:16 pm
Koosei biggrin awesome. *awaits ch. 4* great I have readers biggrin
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 12:17 pm
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