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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:03 pm
Approved--please create a profile thread in the appropriate subforum before you begin RPing. C=
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:04 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:11 pm
Actually, he's rather over powered. I can't approve him until you tone down those abilities. He can teleport, use shadows for stealth, create shadow weapons, use them to bind energy....AND move, reshape all metal (including making this into weaponry) AND has a hybrid transformation that increases his physical prowess by twenty-five times. Teleportation, stealth, unlimited weapons, binding, increased speed/strength...That is way too wide a skill set. I would recommend either decreasing both the metal and shadow abilities, or taking one full ability away before I approve him. Thank you. C=
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:18 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Actually, he's rather over powered. I can't approve him until you tone down those abilities. He can teleport, use shadows for stealth, create shadow weapons, use them to bind energy....AND move, reshape all metal (including making this into weaponry) AND has a hybrid transformation that increases his physical prowess by twenty-five times. Teleportation, stealth, unlimited weapons, binding, increased speed/strength...That is way too wide a skill set. I would recommend either decreasing both the metal and shadow abilities, or taking one full ability away before I approve him. Thank you. C= ==Ren Akuma== [Hell has no fury like a fallen angel seeking vengeance] [Student] I am known as Ren I have 16 candles on my birthday cake. I am obviouslymale. I am very much attracted to almost everyone that is why my sexual preference is Straight I'm aAngel/Demon Hybrid, and I stand around 69 in and weigh around57-60 kg. Expect me to be Lazy most of the time friendly and somewhat playful when Im angry I change completely I become serious , I can hurt people and I stop caring for anyone who hurts my friends And this is my story I am the b*****d child of a fallen angel and Satan, when my mother was pregnant she ran away because she knew satan wouldn't accept me a hybrid as a child, he thought that hybrids were filthy, so my mother ran away and lived in peace .
On my sixteenth birthday, satan sent his son my half brother to kill my mother for betraying him, he managed to fatally wound my mother ,when I saw what happened I snapped, I was enraged , the only thought in my head was ripping his throat out ,I dashed and grabbed my brother by the throat "Who sent you?!?!" but my brother watched in fear "how is that possible your still ali...." I didn't make him finish his sentence I ripped out his throat.
I went to check on my mother she was dying "Ren.... your..f.. father sent him, Satan sent him" After saying that my mothers hand fell on the floor and she died. to this day my only goal in life is to destroy satan. I'm gifted with the abilities of: ✓1.Shadow Manipulation(Can teleport and hide through shadows and has total control over them creating Tentacles/tendrils,Swords, Arrows, Clones, chains and/or threads to attack or bind.) ✓3.Ren transforms (into his hybrid form and gains 25x state boost for about 10 minutes and this power can only be used once every 24 hours in this form he cant use his powers in this form ) Likes: ✓Sunny days with a little clouds ✓Sweets ✓Fruits ✓Nature Dislikes: ✗Hurting innocent people ✗Sour candy ✗Satan ✗Destruction Other facts you should know about me areNone My favorite song is: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rY5Jrq1UO5k The one beyond the fourth wall is Rush and crush Normal form:  Hybrid form:  Thank you for your response i removed his metal power smile is he ok now?
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 3:06 pm
He's approved now. Just remember to obey all rules about autohitting and other forms of godmodding since he's still quite powerful. C=
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 6:58 pm
 [ Sethrian Terkhynna "Do I look evil to you?" Student I am known as Sethrian. Not Seth. Sethrian. I have 18 candles on my birthday cake. I am obviouslymale. I am very much attracted to females that is why my sexual preference is heterosexualI'm aUnseelie Fae, and I stand around6'2" feet(or inches) and weigh around150 kilograms(or pounds).Expect me to be grumpy. And morose. And gloomy. And generally moody and serious. He is blunt to the point of being rude and does not mince words for anyone. Unpopular, and often alone, Sethrian has few friends owing to his rather unpleasant personality. Though he is stand offish, with a no-nonsense exterior, Sethrian is a lonely person. He has little self confidence and expects to be rejected for his oddities. Because of this, he doesn't give the people around him a chance to reject him; he rejects them first.
Underneath the gloomy exterior, Sethrian has a dry sense of humor and a love for pranks (which he pulls off with a flawless poker face). He is the sort that falls in love easily, but always with the wrong girl--one who doesn't love him in return. But regardless, he tends toward the morose and has a cynical, pessimistic personality. Even when he's attempting to be polite, he usually comes across like a jerk. And this is my story...Sethrian's mother, a woman of Roma descent, had a fling with some stray Unseelie knight and ended up pregnant. Not wanting to be saddled with a half faerie child to raise, she dumped him with her parents and siblings, and promptly disappeared. In spite of finding themselves with an unexpected grandchild, and one who wasn't quite Human, at that, Seth's grand parents did their best to raise him normally alongside his many cousins. And it went reasonably well for a while. He was a bright, outgoing child with a lot of friends. Outside his silly pranks and an adorably mischievous nature, Sethrian caused few problems as a young child. Things went well and Seth settled into their family well. Until the fae attributes decided to assert themselves in his pre-teens. It started with what looked like a rash of some kind, on his shoulders. It eventually spread over his back, neck, hips, and the sides of his legs. And then the scales began to grow in. His eyes began to change as well, and his bewildered grandparents took him to numerous doctors to figure out what was wrong with him, assuming some kind of illness was to blame. At the time, Seth's fae heritage was completely unknown to them, as their daughter hadn't exactly given them any details about his father.
However, in the end, the changes were permanent and there was no medical explanation beyond that he was not entirely Human. It was then that they turned to their clan's drabani for help. Even then, no cure was found and, against the wishes of his grandparents (and under the assumption he was cursed) he was branded with the mark of the evil eye to protect the people around him from the supposed curse. Seth's physical oddities caused people to shy away from him and being to ostracize him. Among the others in his family, he stood out too much, and became a target of bullying. It was only his abilities that saved him from being beat up on, on a nearly daily basis. After the first time he instinctively spit venom at another boy, people began to outright avoid him. He was ostracized and rejected, and even his grandparents were slightly afraid of him, though they tried their best to hide it. He became withdrawn and sullen, his personality souring as he realized that it would likely be like this his entire life. He dreamed of finding the Unseelie court to see if he might be better accepted among them but he had no idea where to look.
It so happened that he came across an Unseelie knight (not his father) once, but Sethrian was utterly repulsed by the creature's strange behavior and realized that with his Human upbringing, he would likely never fit in among the Fae either. In addition, the knight he met didn't seem all that fond of Seth's 'clan' further alienating the boy from his father's people.
Eventually, Sethrian was sent to school in the hopes a bit of a break from his hometown would help him sort himself out. I'm gifted with the abilities of:✓Sethrian has a passive ability that emits a sort of aura of fear around him. Most people experience this as a feeling foreboding, or just a generally uncomfortable feeling when around him. In general, most people find him intimidating, but can't place why. This ability is especially strong when people first meet him but often fades over time. He can't really stop it from being there and it often increases when he's annoyed or angry. However, it affects everyone differently--some more so than others. ✓Sethrian possesses some attributes similar to reptiles, such as the ability to sense heat sources nearby temperature changes. He also has venom sacks in his mouth and is able to spit or inject venom into people. The venom is a mild neurotoxin that causes temporary paralysis and/or seizures. It takes a few minutes to work, and wears off within a couple of hours. It's possible that a powerful enough dosage could do serious physical damage--he hasn't used it enough to learn if it's possible to kill with it. Likes:✓Cooking--he is very good at it. ✓Fencing/sword combat ✓Reading ✓girls ✓jewelry Dislikes:✗being rejected ✗bullies ✗show offs and attention whores ✗cold weather ✗being called "Seth" Other facts you should know about me are ~Sethrian has several distinctive physical features. First, his eyes lack the typical "white"--this part of the eye being black, instead. He has a bifurcated (forked) tongue, and fang-like teeth, as well as black scales that cover his back, sides, shoulders, and creep up the side of his neck and face. ~He sheds the skin over his scales every so often. He finds it utterly revolting and tries to hide it from the people around him in spite of the fact that it makes him miserable and itchy and very, very, very grouchy. Most of the time his scales are hidden from sight beneath his clothes--the ones on his neck only barely peek above his collar so they often go unnoticed unless one scrutinizes him. ~Happens to be ambidextrous. ~Sethrian wears a lot of jewelry--from bangles to pendants, a variety of decorative belts and multiple earrings in each ear. Most of his things have special significance to him from being good luck charms, to protective charms. ~When Sethrian was a child, his right hand was branded with a protective charm against the evil eye--a large scar in that shape remains to this day. ~Fairly superstitious. ~He's bilingual and can be frequently heard using words and sayings in his native Romani dialect. ~Sethrian has ectothermic qualities--his body has difficulty regulating his body temperature internally so he's greatly affected by the surrounding temperature. He does not sweat or shiver and has to find other ways to cool off or warm up in extreme weather. Cold, in particular, is dangerous for him and he's highly susceptible to hypothermia in cold weather.My favorite song is: [Theme Song(optional)] The one beyond the fourth wall isStrawberryZ0mbie
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Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 2:21 am
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Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:48 pm
[ ==Elizabeth Sandridge== "If dreams can come true...what about nightmares?" Student I am known as Elizabeth, Liz, Lizzy I have 17 (in human years) candles on my birthday cake. I am obviouslyFemale. I am very much attracted to Strong people who know what they want that is why my sexual preference is Straight I'm a Spinx, and I stand around5 fee) and weigh around 120 pounds Expect me to be A loud, bubbly girl. I cant hold grudges too well, and I am a hopeless romantic. I am a loyal friend, and I will do anything I can for friendship. I can be a bit of a blonde *points to hair color* and gullible, very gullible And this is my story... As i grew up my life was filled with happiness. I had a mother and a father, who cared for me for my whole life. It was a wonderful time, till it came crashing down. My race was attacked by humans, the humans we swore to protect and serve. They saw us as monsters, that would turn on them, the ones we swore to protect. One by one i watched my family be killed, till i was the only one left. I searched for others like me, but yet I found none.
I have found friends in books, and she got lost in the stories. As she would walk down the streets of cities others would laugh at her, cause she wouldnt go out with those her ages. One point though she did make a friend, she and him were in separable, she felt that once again there was someone in her life who was important to her. That was till he left to go to school.
"School? i do not know what this is.....I have read about it. is it like the books? "
she would ask herself this question all the time before she went to bed. Soon enough though she went and decided, it was time for her to stop hiding behind her books and go and look. I'm gifted with the abilities of: ✓Wing Manifestation- User has or is able to manifest wings that grow or are attached to the body allowing flight. They may also protect from rear attacks or detach and re-grow for quick getaways Limitations: May cold suffer from altitude sickness if not careful, unless the users have adapting skills to the changes to altitudes. Dependent of the users physical abilities, stamina and strength. Needs enough thrust and and lift, so the size/condition of wings and the thickness of air are obvious problems to overcome. ✓Predator Instinct: allowing user to become masters of hunting and tracking. Likes: ✓Music ✓Reading ✓Drinking Coffee ✓Lollipops ✓Being a smart a** at times Dislikes: ✗Cooked Carrots ✗Being Cold ✗Working ✗Annoying people ✗Pointless Fighting Other facts you should know about me are I love lollipops.......oh there so good! My favorite song is: Radioactive - Lindsey Sterling and Pentatonix The one beyond the fourth wall is The Ghost of Lenne Sphinx form:
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Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 4:47 pm
Hi there--I can't approve your character quite yet.... Unlimited knowledge of pretty much everything is a touch over powered. Even if the character is limited by your personal knowledge, this kind of thing can still be very easily abused--not saying you would do so intentionally, but there are many subtle forms of godmodding that I have seen people fall into with this type of character. Especially for a school RP, innate knowledge of all the things can become problematic. I assume that the last statement means that just because she knows the logistics of something (like how a spell works) that doesn't mean she can put the knowledge to use. That is a good limitation. But I feel you need to pare back her innately having full understanding of pretty much every subject there is, as well. Perhaps limit the scope of her innate knowledge to a smaller selection of subject matter? Edit: Also can you change the pic? I'm using that pic already for Churuine ;D -Angel Mhai
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Posted: Fri Apr 26, 2013 2:04 am
sorry, didnt see you had that pic razz i see your point about the godmod, i just took it out and used a different power for her. I hope this one work better
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Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 12:16 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 1:44 am
Yes, sorry! I've been busy revamping another guild and forgot to check back here. She is approved now. Thank you for editing. <3
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Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:09 pm
 [ Marcarius Loewe "I spent my whole life trying not to be careless. Women and children can afford to be careless, but not men." Mafioso emotion_awesome I am known as Marc I have 57 candles on my birthday cake. I am obviouslymale. I am very much attracted to females that is why my sexual preference is heterosexualI'm aVampire, and I stand around6'3" feet(or inches) and weigh around165 kilograms(or pounds).Expect me to be...Though he likes to present a calm, collected front, Marc is high strung and excitable. He is easily flustered or sent into a panic. He has a great deal of insecurities, but also a lot of pride. Even trivial mistakes will haunt him for months, even years. But if he holds himself to a high standard, he holds others to a high standard as well. And those who don't meet the standard, he treats with open scorn.
Something of a misogynist, Marcarius doesn't have a need or desire for romance as he finds most females frivolous and dull. That isn't to say shrewd girls with a good head on their shoulders can't catch his eye. But he has no use for anyone good for little else besides being someone else's arm candy. Due to his somewhat chauvinistic outlook, he's more comfortable in the company of men than women; he simply cannot relate to the fairer sex and has little respect for women in general. Despite his upbringing, he has a strong sense of honor and tries to always keep his word. And this is my story... Descended from fallen nobility, the Loewe family heads a large, notorious crime syndicate. Headed by Gaspare Loewe, Marc's father, the family is heavily entrenched in a variety of shady businesses from selling information, weapons or technology on the black market, to loan sharking, and illegal gambling--not to mention copious amounts of extortion. They have long been a force to be reckoned with the underground, and Marc, as the only son of the Don, has been groomed to head the family himself, one day. Though he has a reputation for for being a troublemaker.
He has been surrounded by a world of crime and death since he was very young and his father never once made an effort to shield his son from the grim reality of the family business. Marc, in turn, has never tried to turn away or hide from what his family does. Having been part of several shoot outs and fierce battles, Marc has plenty of experience in how to handle skirmishes with other families, or small gangs that might crop up. When need requires, he is utterly ruthless to any and all enemies of his family.I'm gifted with the abilities of:✓Like all vampires, Marc has enhanced senses and physical capabilities as well as fast regeneration ✓Marc has the ability to create ice from the moisture in the air, and manipulate that ice in various ways. Likes:✓loose women (liking and respecting are entirely different things) ✓Chess ✓Dogs (he has four great Danes that he adores) ✓attention ✓When things go his way Dislikes:✗Gaudy clothing ✗Airheaded women (or women generally lacking intellect and personality) ✗manipulative people ✗liars ✗sweets Other facts you should know about me areMarc is not an "undead" type vampire--he is very much a living creature, just from a race that happens to be called "vampires." As such, he doesn't suffer from being in the sun, or holy artifacts or the like and looks down on vampires that do. Excellent marksman and not too bad at brawling. Plays piano Is quite good with deductive reasoning and piecing together solutions to mysteries, puzzles, etc. Decent chess player. My favorite song is: [Theme Song(optional)] The one beyond the fourth wall isStrawberryZ0mbie
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Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 8:13 pm
Marc is accepted emotion_awesome
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Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 6:59 pm
==皇瑩== Wong Ying Student I am known as Jade I have 19 candles on my birthday cake. I am obviouslya man. I am very much attracted to sexy curves and beautiful pink hair that is why my sexual preference is completely straight. I'm agifted human, and I stand around5’7” and weigh around148 pounds. Expect me to be -blunt: he states things how he sees them, and doesn't really care for sugar coating. - quiet: he doesn't talk very much, which is odd because as a child he did nothing but talk. - he asks that I point out that he's a gentle lover..... (-sigh-) - determined: he won't let anything stand in his way when he wants something. And this is my story...XXXXXThe eldest child –and only son- of the Triad’s head, Jade was always meant to take over when he came of age. But when his eighteenth birthday came and went, his father retained his position, claiming the boy wasn’t ready, despite the years of training and schooling he’d received from his servant Abhik. It was infuriating! But, what could he do? He wouldn’t go against his family just to take the position he’d get later on. XXXXXBut, it was only a few months before he discovered that his father had been abusing his power and the women of his family; including Jade’s little sister. Outraged, Jade challenged his father to a fight. Little did he suspect how strong his father truly was. The boy was hospitalized for five months with severe internal injuries that would have slowly killed him. On his nineteenth birthday, and what he thought would be his last moments on this earth, he found himself face to face with an ancient beast who offered him the deal of his life. His soul, in exchange for a second chance. How could he refuse? Ever the impulsive one, he agreed without another thought, only regretting it seconds later when the dragon entered his body and he was engulfed in flames.XXXXXMuch to the shock of the doctors, he left that same afternoon; determined to kill his b*****d of a father and save his sister. This time, he had little struggle, discovering quickly that with the dragon inside him, he could breath fire. With his father dead and his family now safely protected, the young man took over as head of the Triad, moving to a new location to make a name for himself. He just never expected her to be there. I'm gifted with the abilities of: - fire control: a raging flame resides within him, pulsing through his veins alongside his blood. He can control this heat, forcing it to stay within his hands or spraying it out of his mouth. -transformation: he can allow the dragon within to take over, changing him into a legendary beast. Likes: - money - fist fighting - guns - good looking women {especially Eliza, but don’t tell her that!} Dislikes: - loosing - loosing money - hurting Eliza/Abhik/Jing - rude people Other facts you should know about me areI’m always followed by my right hand man, Abhik, and my sister, Wong Jing, has been known to show her face every so often as well My favorite song is: King of the World by Porcelain and the Tramps The one beyond the fourth wall isPure T0rture[abhik1][abhik2]{Wong Jing}
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