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 Posted: Fri Nov 01, 2013 12:46 pm
The only issue I had with your sheet (Fujiko Satake) was the lack of some sort of limiter on the Bankai imprisonment ability. As it currently reads the character can make a perfect prison and just stab his enemies to death from outside even though it's completely blinding for the enemy and he can still see them. It seems a little bit of a 'I win' sort of ability as it reads now. Once I see a more reasonable description things should be good. Otherwise I liked the sheet.
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Posted: Fri Nov 01, 2013 12:49 pm
Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Life's been busy moving countries and all : ) Anyway, I see nothing wrong with your sheet. I approve.
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Posted: Fri Nov 01, 2013 12:51 pm
I approve. Just gotta get Hime or Twi to slap on some approvals.
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Posted: Fri Nov 01, 2013 1:34 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2013 7:55 pm
Somber Ash Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Life's been busy moving countries and all : ) Anyway, I see nothing wrong with your sheet. I approve.That's alright uvu and aww sweet ovo just one more approval~ uvu Can't wait to RP! ovo
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Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2014 2:21 am
 ✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: Siras Cortage ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Siras Cortage
Race: Shinigami
Gender: Male
Birth Date: 8/14
Age: 310
Blood Type: A-
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Appearance:
Height: 6'
Weight: 175lbs
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Tattoos or Scars: Siras has led a rather violent life, gaining many scars, though many have now faded in the time since he gained access to the Fourth Division and their wonderful healing abilities.
On his back, there is a tattoo that takes up most of his back.
Anything Unusual: Siras keeps has a silver cross dangling from his belt, but will dodge the question if asked about it.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Kido: Siras specializes in barrier kido
Shunpo Level: Siras is considered a fast fighter, able to outrun the majority of the opponents, and only a few can match.
Hakuda: Siras is an able hand to hand combatant, able to match most unarmed oppenents with his own body.
-In terms of his fighting style, he is largely self taught, most of his fighting came from trial and error. Therefore his style seems very mixed up, very flashy and some would say that he expends energy needlessly. Though he will just respond to that with a challenge.
Zanpakuto Name: Nanabashira
Zanpakuto Appearance: The zanpakuto Siras wields is relatively plain, a zanpakuto with a cloudy steel blade. It would be unrecognisable from any other zanpakuto without it's seven ring hilt, each ring bisected by a metal protrusion.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Shikai Incantation: Be at peace
Shikai Appearance: Siras' blade elongates and becomes a spear.
Shikai Abilities: Siras' shikai is an interesting one of the bunch, given that it's abilities can only be used once, and he cannot achieve bankai without using all seven. Though, by using all seven, he is presented with a choice, he can either use his bankai, or he can recharge his seven abilities. The cycle repeats.
Sahasrara- Siras holds the ability to teleport to his shikai.
Ajña- Shains made of what seems like solid shadow appear to restrain the target. (Can be dodged, but the chains will chase for two posts)
Vishuddhi- Placing his spear on a wounded ally allows him to heal their wound, or he can heal himself, reducing his wounds by roughly 75%.
Anahata- Siras channels the Wind Pillar, allowing him to spawn a tornado from his arm, leg, or spear.
Manipura- Channeling the spirit of flame, Siras can channel a pillar of flame to where he points his spear.
Svadhisthana- Activating the Water Pillar, Siras uses his spirit energy to bring up water from underground, causing an eruption of water from below ground, or a geyser.
Muladhara- Channeling the mighty earth spirit, Siras slams his spear into the ground, creating a powerful seismic wave emenating from the spear.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Bankai Name: Kessho Nanabashira
Bankai Appearance: The bankai does not change shape, specifically, from it's shikai form.
Bankai Abilities: Siras pushes his spear into the ground, a white glow emenates from the spear. From the spear, seven lines of light move out in all directions, stopping after going the same distance. Where they stop, a large pillar descends, roughly eight feet tall. From the pillars, barriers appear, trapping any within.
In this state, Siras can call upon any of the pillar's powers, though each takes time to recharge (3 Posts). During this time, the barriers fall, allowing for people to come in or escape.
This technique is his ace in the hole. If it fails, he has nothing left. The process is draining, and do not expect him to use his bankai again until fully rested again.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Personality: Siras is a strong willed man with fierceness in his heart. He tends to challenge others into contests whatever way he can, from a basic foot race to all out combat. Though on the outside he may seem an exasperating person, at his core is bravery and loyalty. Should you be his friend, he will fight with you until the end.
Personal Likes: Birds, Guitar, Waterfalls, and a Cool Winter Day. They make Siras feel calm.
Personal Dislikes: Freeloaders, Bullies, 'Jackasses' as he eloquently calls them.
History: When Siras came to the Soul Society, he was alone. Out in the Rukon District 60. A violent district, everyone some sort crime lord or gangster. As such, Siras learned to get strong or die. He chose to live, and during his fifty years there, he killed anyone that tried to stand against him. It was a hollow life, it was just violence, a mad cycle that wouldn't end. There had to be a reason for it, there had to be another way.
He took to meditation, trying to decide something to do with his 'worthless' existence. Though, he kept trying to make sense of what his existence was, he couldn't find meaning, no matter how hard he thought, he had no idea what to do. Until, one day, he looked out the window of his run down home, and saw some local thugs terrorizing a newcomer. His jaw clenched, and something inside him broke. He leapt from his window with his blade. Putting himself between the newcomer and the attackers, and with relative ease, he defeated them both.
Then, Siras knew his calling. Sitting here, fighting his way to the top of a mountain of corpses was not his destiny. His destiny had further reaches, the Seireitei and the Gotei 13. On that day, Siras began his journey by enroling in the Shinigami Academy. There he learned to refine the primal way that he fought, becoming more than just some fighter. Over his years, he was transformed from a Rukon brute into a Shinigami of the Soul Society.
When Siras finally learned the release of his Zanpakuto, roughly two years before his graduation, he was granted an officer's position in Division Six, and there he served, honing his skills. In time, he learned his Zanpakuto's name, and how to unleash his bankai. Upon learning this, he became eligible for a Captain's seat. Division Three, to be accurate.
After testing with the Head Captain, he was accepted as the Captain of Division Three. He led rather well, and did several deeds that allowed him to gain notice from the rest of the Soul Society. On one occasions, he teamed up with a fellow captain, Kilk Nagara of the Thirteenth Division, and they fought a Vasto Lorde who was attempting to attack the Seireitei. This resulted in a heroic victory for the two, and earned peace for the Seireitei.
Family Line: Cortage
Friends/Acquaintances: Kilk Nagara
Rivals/Enemies: There are very few people of officer rank that he hasn't challenged at least once to some form of contest.
Love Interest: None at the moment.
Affiliation: Gotei 13
Squad: 3
Rank: Captain
~✣✚✣~
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2014 5:25 pm
I approve of Siras. Finally. XD
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Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2014 7:00 pm
I approve of Sirus. (Assuming he can't summon more than 4 chains with his chain ability...since a number wasn't given)
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Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2014 8:01 pm
I approve of Siras's profile.
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 12:35 am
✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: xXHeartlessTimeXx╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Tsukai Ori
Race: Shinigami
Gender: Male
Birth Date: 12/25
Age: 454
Blood Type: A negative
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Appearance: 
Height: 5'9
Weight: 175
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Purple
Tattoos or Scars: Scar on right arm starting at the inner elbow down to the bottom of his wrist.
Anything Unusual: N/a
✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Kido: 1-77
Shunpo Level: Expert near level of master if continued practice.
Hakuda: Expert. Tsukiyubi, Tesshō
Zanpakuto Name: kusabana (Flower)
Zanpakuto Appearance: Same as in appearance picture.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Shikai Incantation: Hanabira ga nagare (Petals Flow)
Shikai Appearance: 
Shikai Abilities:
Shikai Ability - Meimei kusabana (Invisible Flower) White crystal flower petals rush out of the Scythe to scatter across the air. Allows the user to blend in almost becomeing invisible (Can only use once every 4 post) (can last 2-3 post if not cought.)
Shikai Ability -
Kusabana doku (Flower of Poison) The flower petals in the air turn a lucid green, while dripping black oils off of them selves. The petals can be sent towards the enemy to try and poison them, (Makes small Cuts on the person if they make contact of skin. Slows their movement and decreases their vision.) (Can be used once every 5 post,) (Can last 3-4 post.)
Shikai Ability - Kusabana kuchiku (Flower of destruction) the flower petals turn a glowing red before the send bursting waves of destruction with in a small radius of the petal field, causing all with in it to be damage to a certain point. (User is not damage) (Can be used once every 6 post. Or if another battle occurs right after the next.)
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Bankai Name: Kuro Kadou (Black Vortex)
Bankai Appearance: 
Bankai Abilities:
Kadou kahen (Vortex petal) The zanpakuto sends out black oily petals that are in fact vortexes, they are also floating/flowing through the air surrounding a radius of 25 meters. User can control them with his will and send them at his enemy like razor blades or he can make a single petal big enough to send his arm through and make multiple attacks at his opponent through them. ( Can use 5 vortexs at a time to attack through at a time.) (These petals do allow the user to blend in, There is still the chance of being seen.) (opponent can use 2 vortexs at a time, but also takes minor damage for using it.) (Can be used once every 5 post.)(Can last as long as 3-4 post.)
Hikō no hana (Flying flower): Slashing at the opponent, air, or ground, can send a furry or dagger like petals in a single direction causing enormous amounts of pain if a full blown hit is taken. (can be used once ever 2 post.) (Width radius 10 meters, length radius 15 meters, meant for mid range combat)
Shi hanabira (Death petal) User spins around causing dagger like petals to spiral around him and upwards, sucking everything into it, enemies, allies, anything with in its sucking reach, to destroy. If a possibly body found its way to the center of the petal tornado, they would find larger petals flying at a higher rate of speed. (Can be used once every 6 post) (User has full control over petals and can stop it at anytime.) (The width of the tornado is 25 meters, the sucking radius of it is 15 meters. Total of 40 meters.)
Hanabira kōsoku (Petal restraint) Sticky petals made from high bonding liquids are sent flying at a opponent to keep them stuck or unable to maneuver at all for a short duration. (can be used once every 3 post and last only a single post)
✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Personality: Tsukai is a very careless guy, always putting him self and others in dangers way. Being said he also has never trusted anyone other them himself, which has allowed him to be ruthless and sadly careless at all times. He is very strong willed and see's to all his goals to make sure his plans don't fall apart. Tsukai can be short sighted at times, focusing on the small objectives instead of the whole objective or a mission.
Personal Likes: Food, as he loves to cook. Peaceful meditations near a waterfall, being alone.
Personal Dislikes: Being around people, having to deal with incompetence, and people with arrogance nature.
History:
Tsukai was born into a lesser known family of Japan’s royal descent. His father agreed that Tsukaii would be highly educated. Using the family’s wealth sent him out in to the world at the age of 12 despite the Mother and little sisters protests. Tsukai even at the age of 12 calmly stated that one day he will be back and not to cry for him. So Tsukai went out across the world traveling through most of Europe and gaining knowledge on languages and evening cooking, which he had gained a strange interest in before leaving his family. At the age of 16 Tsukai returned to his family home finding his Father had died from an unknown illness. Tsukai being the oldest son decided to run the family and help expand their small empire. Tsukai now being able to speak not only Japanese, English, German, French and Spanish used his talent to create trade embargos with many European trade merchants. This gained positive and negative audience with many of the other Royal families. Tsukai was almost killed 3 times during his 12 years of ruling Tsukai was trained in the art by the English known as speed dueling. He wasn’t the biggest guy so he used his light yet incredibly tough body to fight using a combination of Scythe and Katana. Tsukai knew how to fight and even kill yet he tried to avoid death when it was not necessary.
Tsukai was killed at the age of 28. He died when an Assassin came and took one of his sister’s hostage. Knowing his skill the Assassin led him into a narrow room. Tsukai tricked the Assassin but was poisoned during the ensuing fight. His Sister lived but Tsukai died hours after that after his body finally succumbed to the poison. Tsukai wandered as a ghost through his family home he grew bored at one point but when a hollow which he believed to be a demon from hell, come to collect him attempted to eat him. Only to find a soul reaper to save him at the last moment. Tsukai was at disbelief at this point and shrugged when he was sent to the soul society not wishing to stay in this world any longer after all his Sisters left to be married. Tsukai wandered the soul society for many years’s no longer being able to remember his life before but remembering the skills of cooking and languages. He soon found himself joining the Gotei 13. While getting notes on how light and fast he was, even if his body weighed slightly more than it should have to allow him to move that fast. He was sent to squad 2 for his use of speed, and skill with Kido and his blade.
Family Line: Unknown, memories slowly come back as fragments to him letting him add each piece together like a puzzle.
Friends/Acquaintances: Does not disclose this to others as he keeps names of people a secret.
Rivals/Enemies: Anyone he can not beat will eventually become a rival until the day he can rise above them.
Love Interest: Does not care for the word love, as he can't ever remember having it in his life..
Affiliation: There is always that go to guy when you need someone gone, or taken care of, even if its only retrieving people for questioning. Tsukai has always been that person for the captain of squad 2. Always doing the things that matter no matter what happens.
Squad: 2
Rank: Lieutenant
~✣✚✣~
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 12:43 pm
I approve of Hikiko Morimoto!
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 3:24 pm
I like the profile. ^^ Good concept and all
that stuff~. I approve, on two conditions.
1: Fix the run-on sentences in the history.
2: Just elaborate on the personality a wee bit.
Honestly it's easier to get a better overview of
him if it's in complete sentences.
Once you're done, go ahead and put up your
profile under the Shinigami Profiles subforum,
and you can go ahead and start {in the
appropriate place}. ^^
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 3:45 pm
I have a couple of questions before I approve: 1) Kusabana doku- What effect does the poison have? Does it slowly kill them or perhaps affect their movement or vision instead? Can it affect the user if he's somehow forced into their path? 2) Kusabana Kuchiku- Is this concentrated reiryoku that causes the destruction? Does it cut or is the impact so jarring that it throws them away? 3) Kadou kahen- Can someone else punch back through these petals once he makes them large enough? 4) Shi hanabira- You describe these petals as sucking in anything within reach but how far is that reach? And does this mean it will begin to tear at buildings or trees and draw them into the vortex? 5) As Hime mentioned, a bit more description on the personality would be appreciated~. 6) Tessho is expert level so I'm going to assume that's where he's at in regards to Hakuda. However I would appreciate it if you put it down there.
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 4:11 pm
Hello Heartless Time~! Okay, so I also had a minor issue with the profile. Aside from everything else that everyone has mentioned above (which needs to be fixed as well razz ) I had one major concern. • Traveling at the age of 5: There are a number of reasons why I am not fond of the idea. Mostly at around that age a child is still somewhat incapable of fending for him/herself and required the guidance of some parental figure. I understand he has servants, but it doesn't make sense politically or emotionally why he would be sent out like that. If the child made that decision himself it would be odd, because a child of that age wouldn't be able to make a mature decision like that… and if they could, would likely not be taken seriously. I recommend making him around the age of 9, 10, or 11- which is a great age as it was seen as something of a turning point for a child. By that point the child can make far more mature decisions and can actually be taken seriously. Aside from that and the other changes I approve.
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