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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:36 am
Username: Hinote Tosatsu
RPC Name: Shikaku
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A
Profession: Assassin
Ninja Types: Support, Speed
Talent Description: Shikaku has a much higher than normal affinity for the Henge jutsu, being able to perfectly mimic any target after studying them for a short while. Furthermore, his affinity for the jutsu allows him to utilize advanced versions of the technique that are not normally possible, such as a solid transformation, or altering his chakra color to match that of the target. These advanced versions must still be created applied for and learned as custom jutsu.
For Shikaku, it is possible to learn a new form in much the same way as other ninja learn new jutsu, dedicating several posts to learning and perfecting the form. (This takes the same number of posts as learning a D ranked jutsu.) The more posts spent studying the target, the better he is able to mimic them. One post is enough to learn the form, but beyond that any further learning is determined by the actions of the target themselves. If they display a lot of their mannerisms, he will learn a lot. If they do nothing, he will learn nothing, except perhaps that they do very little.
Talent Sacrifice: Shikaku has no elemental affinity, and is unable to learn jutsu of that type as a result. Learning jutsu outside of his specialty (That being Henge) is nearly impossible. He can only learn two new jutsu per rank outside of Henge variations, and it takes one rank higher's post count to do so. This means that at genin he can learn two jutsu, and at chuunin he can learn two more. These can be from any rank, so long as they are at or below his own. He cannot learn from higher ranks. The jutsu he can learn can be from any universal/non-elemental category. Universal Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Sealing, or Medical.
Taijutsu is mostly unaffected by this talent, though he can only learn one style.
How it happened: As an academy student, Shikaku always excelled in the stealth based lessons, even doing so well that the teachers taught him an extra jutsu normally left out of the basic lessons. That being the cloak of invisibility. However, in other areas, he was a complete failure. He was not very strong, and even the weakest child in his class easily beat him up. He learned, eventually, to be fast, as children, often being cruel, loved to chase him and pick on him. In ninjutsu, he completely failed. Being ostracized by the children his own age, he learned to watch, instead of participating, something which only drove his grades in stealth higher as he grew more skilled at reading details. Eventually, desiring to be welcome in his age group, he tried transforming himself into other children, and grew more skilled in pretending to be them, which again, pushed his grades higher. Eventually, due to his grades in stealth he was just barely able to pass the academy despite almost all of his other scores being abysmal. The only area he would be allowed to practice in would be spying, and perhaps, assassination, if he increased his fighting skills.I know you've already seen this in PM, but you never did say whether it'd be approvable. (That wasn't the topic I suppose.) And the thread makes it more official anyways.
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:57 am
I suppose this is acceptable, though I still think that is one heavy sacrifice. Approved.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 10:02 am
Gregar828 I suppose this is acceptable, though I still think that is one heavy sacrifice. Approved. I did have one thing I was considering adding actually, since you think it's a bit too heavy. The newer henge that Hikaro has designed will run out after five posts, making you recast it. Perhaps I could have the talent extend that duration, and let it be refreshed instead of recast, by draining chakra every X posts? Edit in red. Username: Hinote Tosatsu
RPC Name: Shikaku
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A
Profession: Assassin
Ninja Types: Support, Speed
Talent Description: Shikaku has a much higher than normal affinity for the Henge jutsu, being able to perfectly mimic any target after studying them for a short while. Furthermore, his affinity for the jutsu allows him to utilize advanced versions of the technique that are not normally possible, such as a solid transformation, or altering his chakra color to match that of the target. These advanced versions must still be created applied for and learned as custom jutsu.
For Shikaku, it is possible to learn a new form in much the same way as other ninja learn new jutsu, dedicating several posts to learning and perfecting the form. (This takes the same number of posts as learning a D ranked jutsu.) The more posts spent studying the target, the better he is able to mimic them. One post is enough to learn the form, but beyond that any further learning is determined by the actions of the target themselves. If they display a lot of their mannerisms, he will learn a lot. If they do nothing, he will learn nothing, except perhaps that they do very little.
When using Henge, instead of the normal duration, Shikaku is able to make the jutsu last for up to ten posts, double the normal length, and furthermore, by paying the full cost of the jutsu again, he is able to reset it without having it dismiss and need to be replaced as normal. This essentially allows for a perpetual henge so long as he has chakra to sustain it.
Talent Sacrifice: Shikaku has no elemental affinity, and is unable to learn jutsu of that type as a result. Learning jutsu outside of his specialty (That being Henge) is nearly impossible. He can only learn two new jutsu per rank outside of Henge variations, and it takes one rank higher's post count to do so. This means that at genin he can learn two jutsu, and at chuunin he can learn two more. These can be from any rank, so long as they are at or below his own. He cannot learn from higher ranks. The jutsu he can learn can be from any universal/non-elemental category. Universal Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Sealing, or Medical.
Taijutsu is mostly unaffected by this talent, though he can only learn one style.
How it happened: As an academy student, Shikaku always excelled in the stealth based lessons, even doing so well that the teachers taught him an extra jutsu normally left out of the basic lessons. That being the cloak of invisibility. However, in other areas, he was a complete failure. He was not very strong, and even the weakest child in his class easily beat him up. He learned, eventually, to be fast, as children, often being cruel, loved to chase him and pick on him. In ninjutsu, he completely failed. Being ostracized by the children his own age, he learned to watch, instead of participating, something which only drove his grades in stealth higher as he grew more skilled at reading details. Eventually, desiring to be welcome in his age group, he tried transforming himself into other children, and grew more skilled in pretending to be them, which again, pushed his grades higher. Eventually, due to his grades in stealth he was just barely able to pass the academy despite almost all of his other scores being abysmal. The only area he would be allowed to practice in would be spying, and perhaps, assassination, if he increased his fighting skills.
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 10:48 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:34 pm
Would you be able to check over my custom, Luo?
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:25 pm
Username: Lance Fulgurant
RPC Name: Kane Nanashi
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User
Talent Description:
Kane is capable of performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower without using hand-seals or speaking a word, but he must still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and other techniques as normal.
Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles)
How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 8:35 pm
To what extend does this talent go to? Can he perform all Hyouton with his mind? Does he need to do some sort of motion for certain jutsu?
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 8:52 pm
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:11 pm
Lance Fulgurant Username: Lance Fulgurant
RPC Name: Kane Nanashi
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User
Talent Description:
Kane is capable of performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower without using hand-seals or speaking a word, but he must still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and other techniques as normal.
Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles)
How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words. Make it without seals OR without incantation, and it's approved. Both gets a bit overpowered. (Possibly both for jutsu two or more ranks below, but with a slight chakra cost increase.)
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:18 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Lance Fulgurant Username: Lance Fulgurant
RPC Name: Kane Nanashi
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User
Talent Description:
Kane is capable of performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower without using hand-seals or speaking a word, but he must still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and other techniques as normal.
Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles)
How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words. Make it without seals OR without incantation, and it's approved. Both gets a bit overpowered. (Possibly both for jutsu two or more ranks below, but with a slight chakra cost increase.) Do you mean word it so that he can choose one or the other, but he can't do both at the same time, or do you mean just pick one for all the time?
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:21 pm
Lance Fulgurant Hinote Tosatsu Lance Fulgurant Username: Lance Fulgurant
RPC Name: Kane Nanashi
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User
Talent Description:
Kane is capable of performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower without using hand-seals or speaking a word, but he must still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and other techniques as normal.
Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles)
How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words. Make it without seals OR without incantation, and it's approved. Both gets a bit overpowered. (Possibly both for jutsu two or more ranks below, but with a slight chakra cost increase.) Do you mean word it so that he can choose one or the other, but he can't do both at the same time, or do you mean just pick one for all the time? One or the other. Makes for a fun choice. (Especially combined with combo user, since you could do seals for one and an incantation for another, and seriously throw people off when both come out.)
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:31 pm
Lance Fulgurant Username: Lance Fulgurant
RPC Name: Kane Nanashi
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User
Talent Description:
When performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower, Kane may choose to perform the technique without hand-seals, or without the incantation, but he must still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and other techniques as normal. When near large quantities of snow/ice, Kaizen may perform techniques below his rank using neither hand-seals nor incantations, but receives no chakra point bonuses, and receives only +1 rank in power to his techniques as opposed to his usual +2
Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles)
How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words. I edited it to kind of tie in with the Elemental control type, do you think that would work?
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:47 pm
Lance Fulgurant Lance Fulgurant Username: Lance Fulgurant
RPC Name: Kane Nanashi
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User
Talent Description:
When performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower, Kane may choose to perform the technique without hand-seals, or without the incantation, but he must still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and other techniques as normal. When near large quantities of snow/ice, Kaizen may perform techniques below his rank using neither hand-seals nor incantations, but receives no chakra point bonuses, and receives only +1 rank in power to his techniques as opposed to his usual +2
Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles)
How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words. I edited it to kind of tie in with the Elemental control type, do you think that would work? Interesting method. I'm not sure about the power increase though. Using the type bonus to enhance the skill is definitely a good method, but I feel as if it should sacrifice the power increase of the type in the process. (Not for jutsu used normally, just the magical mind controlled jutsu.) I just feel as if you're getting a very nice bonus for very little sacrifice using the weak bodied weakness. Admittedly it's not as extreme a bonus as others to warrant a stronger weakness though... Eh, you know what? Edit: In fact, now that I think about it, the +1 is your base elemental bonus anyways, and doesn't even need to be mentioned. It could be better worded that you just don't get the extreme environment rank bonus.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:57 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Lance Fulgurant Lance Fulgurant Username: Lance Fulgurant
RPC Name: Kane Nanashi
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User
Talent Description:
When performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower, Kane may choose to perform the technique without hand-seals, or without the incantation, but he still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and non-Hyoton techniques as normal. When near large quantities of snow/ice, Kaizen may perform techniques below his rank using neither hand-seals nor incantations, but does not receive the extreme environment bonus from elemental control, and receives no chakra control bonuses.
Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles)
How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words. I edited it to kind of tie in with the Elemental control type, do you think that would work? Interesting method. I'm not sure about the power increase though. Using the type bonus to enhance the skill is definitely a good method, but I feel as if it should sacrifice the power increase of the type in the process. (Not for jutsu used normally, just the magical mind controlled jutsu.) I just feel as if you're getting a very nice bonus for very little sacrifice using the weak bodied weakness. Admittedly it's not as extreme a bonus as others to warrant a stronger weakness though... Eh, you know what? Edit: In fact, now that I think about it, the +1 is your base elemental bonus anyways, and doesn't even need to be mentioned. It could be better worded that you just don't get the extreme environment rank bonus. Alrighty, I'll re-word that, and yeah I would have said no to the +1, but I figured if he gets that all the time anyway it would be fine, thank you much biggrin Final Version: Username: Lance Fulgurant RPC Name: Kane Nanashi RPC Rank: Genin Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User Talent Description: When performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower, Kane may choose to perform the technique without hand-seals, or without the incantation, but he must still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and other techniques as normal. When near large quantities of snow/ice, Kane may perform techniques below his rank using neither hand-seals nor incantations, but does not receive the extreme environment bonus from elemental control, and receives no chakra control bonuses. Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles) How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 10:04 pm
Lance Fulgurant Username: Lance Fulgurant RPC Name: Kane Nanashi RPC Rank: Genin Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyoton Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist Ninja Types: Elemental Control(Hyoton), Combo User Talent Description: When performing Hyoton techniques of his rank or lower, Kane may choose to perform the technique without hand-seals, or without the incantation, but he must still must perform hyoton techniques of higher rank and other techniques as normal. When near large quantities of snow/ice, Kane may perform techniques below his rank using neither hand-seals nor incantations, but does not receive the extreme environment bonus from elemental control, and receives no chakra control bonuses. Talent Sacrifice: Kane is treated as having the Weak-Bodied profession weakness in addition to his chosen profession weakness(fewer weapon/taijutsu styles) How it happened: While still in the academy, Kane was bullied by most of the larger, stronger students because of his quietness, perceiving his soft-spoken nature for weakness. One day, as two students brutally beat him while a third held his arms behind his back, Kane felt a power welling up inside of himself and a sudden frigid blast of air sent his attackers flying. Since then, Kane has learned to perform all Hyoton techniques without the use for seals or words. Try, "When in an extreme environment Kane is able to use Hyoton jutsu with neither seals nor incantation, but does not receive any power or chakra bonuses when using jutsu this way." Or some variation thereof in your own words. Makes a tiny bit more sense than to say you don't receive the environmental bonus when it's just a tweak on the bonus. Still approved.
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