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 Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:26 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:35 pm
Hey hold up, infared goggles? This is pretty much making the benefits of the Byakugan useless. Especailly as an academy student, these are kind of unfair. The chain thing is pretty cool though, despite it being more of a weapon than a technology.
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:51 pm
Gregar828 Hey hold up, infared goggles? This is pretty much making the benefits of the Byakugan useless. Especailly as an academy student, these are kind of unfair. The chain thing is pretty cool though, despite it being more of a weapon than a technology. I was under the impression that it was a grappling hook that could be used as Scorpions thing in dire situations. But I've thought about that but no it's not since he has bad peripheral vision, can't seen around him, can only see through things that are barely thick, and since they are like binoculars they can't see as far as a Byakugan. Plus the fact that raiton would fry their wiring, Byakugan completely outclasses it. I would rather have their 360 vision but with this all he can see is what's in front of him.
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 6:09 pm
What would cold climates do to it? Because I have no Raiton, nor could I ever have raiton with my character { I would take damage using them >.< }
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:40 pm
Well, anytjhing that lowers your body temp (Covered in cold water, a snowstorm, a lot of mud etc.) would make the infered useless. That and with the compound eyes it is totally impossible to see through peripherals. I think the byakugan just crushes these. They are just something I'm sure the guildies would enjoy. BUt I'll bump em up to genin.
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:52 pm
Panthers7
@ Beatriz: Interesting =^^= Well here's just a few nitpicks that I see and just want to clarify on...
-)How will the gloves affect a person that hasn't created the gloves. Say the gloves were given to another person, what would the affects be seeing as they are created from another person's chakra.
-)How will the gloves affect jutsu's that are B Rank and up?
-) Also as someone else had stated, how would the gloves fair with techniques that do require hands being engulfed in some form or fashion. Like Rasengan, which would possibly rip the gloves apart. How can the gloves fair against jutsu's such as that?
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@Six: I think Mistah was the one working with you first =^^= The gloves would affect the person that hasn't created it the same way it would affect the one who created it. The chakra changed the properties of the cloth to make it work. Just like lens are used to converge and diverge the light, to focus or expand it, the cloth would be the "lens" and the chakra would be the "light". It wouldn't reject another person's chakra. Concerning jutsus that are of B rank and up, they would be affected just like any jutsu would be. The ranks, from D to B, of the gloves exist just to limit the users and the gloves aswell. Otherwise, someone could go and try to use a B Ranked gloves abilities at their max. I just thought about it and I think I forgot to add it. While someone could just "give" a B Ranked glove to someone else, if that person isn't considered a B ranked shinobi (special jounin/jounin and above) he/she wouldn't be able to fully user the gloves. (The person would be limited to using the ability of increasing the size of the jutsus of their rank only.) The gloves would be able to be used with techniques that engulf the hands into any kind of chakra unless the hand of the user is harmed by that chakra. For example, using rasengan on the gloves, as it was mentioned before, would rip it to shreds because the rasengan isn't used around the hand, it doesn't even touch the user's skin. That's why using it on the gloves would be the same as attacking the gloves with rasengan. While using it with jutsus that require the hands to be engulfed in flames, water, mud, lightning, whatever, but that don't cause harm to the user's hands, wouldn't damage it. Anything else?
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:55 pm
I was more meaning to the goggles themselves, like some things if they get stuck in the fridge they won't work anymore.
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 9:27 am
Beatriz-chan Panthers7
@ Beatriz: Interesting =^^= Well here's just a few nitpicks that I see and just want to clarify on...
-)How will the gloves affect a person that hasn't created the gloves. Say the gloves were given to another person, what would the affects be seeing as they are created from another person's chakra.
-)How will the gloves affect jutsu's that are B Rank and up?
-) Also as someone else had stated, how would the gloves fair with techniques that do require hands being engulfed in some form or fashion. Like Rasengan, which would possibly rip the gloves apart. How can the gloves fair against jutsu's such as that?
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@Six: I think Mistah was the one working with you first =^^= The gloves would affect the person that hasn't created it the same way it would affect the one who created it. The chakra changed the properties of the cloth to make it work. Just like lens are used to converge and diverge the light, to focus or expand it, the cloth would be the "lens" and the chakra would be the "light". It wouldn't reject another person's chakra. Concerning jutsus that are of B rank and up, they would be affected just like any jutsu would be. The ranks, from D to B, of the gloves exist just to limit the users and the gloves aswell. Otherwise, someone could go and try to use a B Ranked gloves abilities at their max. I just thought about it and I think I forgot to add it. While someone could just "give" a B Ranked glove to someone else, if that person isn't considered a B ranked shinobi (special jounin/jounin and above) he/she wouldn't be able to fully user the gloves. (The person would be limited to using the ability of increasing the size of the jutsus of their rank only.) The gloves would be able to be used with techniques that engulf the hands into any kind of chakra unless the hand of the user is harmed by that chakra. For example, using rasengan on the gloves, as it was mentioned before, would rip it to shreds because the rasengan isn't used around the hand, it doesn't even touch the user's skin. That's why using it on the gloves would be the same as attacking the gloves with rasengan. While using it with jutsus that require the hands to be engulfed in flames, water, mud, lightning, whatever, but that don't cause harm to the user's hands, wouldn't damage it. Anything else? Alright that seems fine. Just put the points that your clarified, like in the second section, into the technology description and it's approved
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 4:43 pm
Beatriz-chan Username: Beatriz-chan RPC Name: Haruka Tsukai Rank: Genin Technology Name: Chakra Focusing Gloves Technology Power Rank: From D to B rank Description: Being owner of a great chakra control, Haruka was able to follow the instructions of her mother's letter and carefully infuse chakra into the cloth of the gloves she had. The chakra changed the properties of the cloth, allowing the chakra to be easily focused and/or manipulated on any point of the gloves, or even the whole gloves if needed. Jutsus that require the direct manifestation of chakra to be manipulated* can be performed focusing the chakra on a single point to increase the effectiveness. Chiyute no jutsu for example, that requires the focus of chakra on the hand of the medical shinobi, could be focused on a smaller point, a finger for example, to increase the healing pace. Also, instead of focusing on just a small point, the range of the jutsu could be increased, without reducing the effectiveness of the jutsu, with the use of an extra amount of chakra.** Size Increasing details:D Rank - 2 Inches for 1 CP - Limit 4 Inches, costing 2 CP C Rank - 2 Inches for 1 CP - Limit 5 Inches, costing 3 CP B Rank - 2 Inches for 1 CP - Limit 6 Inches, costing 3 CP Creation and Ranking up details:In order to create these gloves, the shinobi MUST have Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline. Otherwise, the shinobi will need to have Chakra Control as type, being able to create the gloves when the shinobi is 1 rank above of the desired glove.(B Rank gloves can't be created if the shinobi doesn't have the required bloodline.) The creation of the gloves requires the chakra amount that would be spent when using a jutsu of the desired rank (Without the decrease bonus given by bloodline/shinobi type), plus 4. Note: If the shinobi doesn't have the required bloodline or chakra control type, that shinobi CAN'T create the gloves of any rank. The shinobi can't create gloves of rank higher than his/her rank either. In order to rank the gloves up, the shinobi using it must post training his/her chakra control. The number of posts changes depending on the shinobi. With Mind's Eye of Kagura + Chakra Control: 3 posts, spending 2 CP each post With just the Bloodline: 4 posts spending 2 CP each post Without Mind's Eye of the Kagura + Chakra Control: 3 posts spending 3 CP each post With any other bloodline/demon but without Chakra Control: 4 posts spending 4 CP each post Note²:The number of posts and the chakra spent each post ISN'T affected by anything else, just the Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline and the Chakra Control shinobi type. Also, the gloves won't rank up if they are 1 Rank above the user already. *The element of the chakra used by the technique doesn't matter, as long as it has to be manipulated and controled by the user it can be affected.
**Rasengan and its variations won't increase their size with the extra chakra used (At least not because of these gloves)
Weakness: Fire, bladed and/or pointy weapons Picture: The gloves may change from person to person...but these would be Haruka's  Note³: (For those with doubts) The gloves work with the chakra, just like lens do with the light, converging and diverging light. Allowing the users that manipulate the chakra on it, to focus or extend the length of jutsus that they affect. It doesn't reject another person's chakra. Also, the gloves will affect jutsus of any rank, but only if the jutsus use the manipulation of chakra on the hands of the user. That chakra has to be manipulated directly on the hand and it may even engulf it. But if it isn't in contact with the hands of the user, it won't be affected. As an example, rasengan isn't affected by the gloves because it is used a bit distant from the palm of the user. The gloves of a higher rank than the user's, won't allow him/her to use them as if they were of that rank. The gloves will work according to the user's rank, obeying the limit. A genin, for example, can't use the ability of B ranked gloves to extend a jutsu by 6 inches, the genin will be able to extend it by 4 inches at most. I didn't put it in the description but I put it as a 3rd note for those who still have doubts. I'll be posting it in my customs now. Thanks. (If it isn't okay just tell me I'll change again.)
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 6:04 pm
Username: Panthers7
RPC Name: Zin Naga
Rank: Chuunin
Technology Name: Shindan (Divine Elixir)
Technology Power Rank: Chuunin-Sannin
Description: Zin Naga, like his father, had gotten a little interested in the ways of immortality. To be able to live forever and retrain eternal vitality is something that arguably everyone wants. And, upon looking into the archives of his father's work, Zin found a potent ingredient to change the balance of nature and bring what he desires life to be within his hands.
The actual liquid is rather simple. If one creates it correctly they will gain a doubled life, time will slow down for them as well as rejuvenation to their body;which in turn is heightening their powers. Though of course, nature ensures that one doesn't destroy its balance as being humans... imperfection is always around the corner. For if one ingredient is not cooked or distributed correctly, they may create the lesser of the double life Elixir. Better known as 'Jinye' or Golden Liquor. Which is practically the watered down version of the savored Elixir that everyone wishes to obtain.
Rules and Notes towards obtaining 'Eternal' Youth
-) The person can only use this Elixir ONCE. Any more times, you SHALL DIE.
-) In order for you to even create the Elixir, you must enter EVERY VILLAGE (Not the areas surrounding the village) and retain vegetation from each place. More specifically, the main flower of that region.
-) Upon drinking this, if you are able to obtain Shidan or Jinye, you are not immortal. Your life is simply doubled as well as you gaining true rejuvenation:
*Shidan: You gain 20+ chakra points to your Max. Chakra Pool. Also, of course, you will age two-times slower than most.
*Jinye: You will gain 15+ Chakra Points to your Max. Chakra Pool. Also, of course, you will age a little slower than most.
* Konton no Shidan: This is the worse of the two. If it is not created correctly, you will get Koton no Shidan Elixer; similar to the other two, 'Konton no Shidan' looks exactly the same as it's brethren. Although, unlike the benefits they give, this Elixir takes life away. For, after drinking it, your age is immediately doubled as well as a reduction of -10 Chakra Points. Unfortunately, that is not all! Koton no Shidan, after consumption will continuously make your life slip by at an accelerated rate! For every year that is past ( through times skips and etc.) your character will have lived it twice. Or rather, one year will be equivalent to two years for your character.
-) The most important rules is... That if your character has not spoken to Zin about this, you will not know a thing about making it completely. Gathering the flowers in only a precursor to the full thing. So please... try not to pretend you know how to make it... I would hate to visit you. evil
Weakness: Your probably wondering what how will the people figure out if they have done it correctly... Well it will be shown by chance of course!!! Upon meeting the first requirement of retrieving the materials, the user will utilize the ever favored Random Number System. (1-3) Upon which these results will indicate what Elixir they produced. They will have to do a preemptive post with the Random number system first in which will give what they receive:
#1: Koton no Shidan ( The Reverse Elixir)
#2: Shidan Elixir (Perfect Divine Elixir)
#3: Jinye ( Golden Liquid)
Picture: 
Special Note: Due to the temptation of the Random Number Generator, you MUST inform a crew member in which they will do the random generator for you. This way, it will be official and there will be no confusion to what has occurred.
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:02 pm
@Panthers:this seems way too powerful even for the rank you put it for,not to mention that the weakness does seem to fit. if you are basically making it so that they can create they own fountain of youth elixir.Also technology is supposed to be used more than once. So sorry but DENIED
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 11:13 pm
(( Well I agree and disagree. Maybe through personal means technology for people can be utilized once, but with this particular Elixir I think it's fair and rather well off that a person uses it only once. I don't want people to be abusing it.
-)Another reason why this can't really be over powered is one, you have to get the information from Zin. Now... how many people will actually know that my character possesses the knowledge to create this? That is one major point that makes it rather hard for anyone to gain access to creating this Elixir.
-) Lastly, the worst aspect of this Elixir is that the outcome is purely random. You have a one-in-three chance to gain the ability that you desire. Not huge odds but it's risky enough odds that will shy people away from wanting to risk it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:22 am
Hmm, true so in that case, APPROVED
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 2:15 pm
Wait not so fast.
I don't like the random generation of numbers idea. people could just quickly delete their posts before anyone sees until they get the outcome they desire.
Now with this the actually effects of the elixir, how does this effect the person's RP? Are they stronger after drinking it or do they just get the +10 points.
Also I know this may be a weakness to other people's RPCs but since your RPC knows about the drink, then he can start working on making it right off the bat. And why would he let anyone else know about it anyway? If he did then everyone would try to get the elixir. The traveling to villages thing looks good on paper but it's fairly easy. I mean honestly, just about every village will let in anyone who just ask nicely.
The only real weakness I see with this is that you can drink it once. Everything else is easy to get around.
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:39 pm
I concur. I like the random number generation because mostly only people I trust with the Elixir will even be able to get that chance. So not everyone and their great-grandmother shall obtain this.
The affects are stated in the application. For those that obtain Shindan, they receive the a long life ( in which during a time-skip of a year they will most likely be the same age) in addition to the chakra increase.
Same with Jinye except it has a reduced affect. And Koton no Shidan actually is the worst of the affects. Which is stated in the application of what it does.
And for reasons known to me and a select few, there is a reason to why i would allow this drink to be distributed to those I deem responsible enough to handle it. And actually it harder than you think to enter villages. Remember how LONG it took for your character to even be admitted into the village? Not to mention people like to have NPC look outs for ninja they think are... suspicious and will halt them coming in. So... I would disagree on the village entry part. That is actually pretty difficult depending.
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