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 Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:58 pm
Amigo_amigo_amigo Dont kill characters we barely know them gonk I love all the characters. If a character dies will they still be metioned like in flashbacks? I dont want to see characters disapear. Two characters are gonna go, at least. There might be one more, but probably not. They'll still be "in" the story... But.. They're not.. "alive"... Per se... I ca't say much because I'll give it away, but it is pretty much gonna go how Insom told it. Aine: Aww. Thank you <3
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:43 pm
I wrote the first half already. Much epic.
Hopefully I'll get this thing pumped out tonight.
I'm eager to know what you guys [will] think of this.
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:03 pm
Where in Hawaii? What's the occasion?
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:18 pm
Big Island, mostly. Just a family vacation. It'll be our second time going.
Update is being posted right now. Should be up in about 2-3 minutes. =3
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:21 pm
Yea, I dont like whiny crybaby Q. :/
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:26 pm
Update is up, let me know what you think.
Pheonix gang was gonna be in there more, I swear, but the chapter got way too long. So I cut it off. Sorry.
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:37 pm
ARRRRRRRRRRRG! Cliffhanger!
I hate you!
T____T
Well, it definitely pulls the reader in, making them near crazy for the next chapter... ._.
Definitely a good one. ^_^
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:41 pm
:3
Thank you.
I hope the thing with Shoy wasn't expected.
But I will have great fun with it. Shoy is my favorite character. Well. Technically Opal is, but if I bring her into the story more often it wouldn't make sense. So since she can't always be around, Shoy's my favorite character in place of her~
I'm going to go to bed now.
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 4:20 pm
the s**t has hit the fan. o:
good chapter.
i can't wait to find out what happens next. x3
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:52 pm
I have some chapters to catch up on.
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Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 6:41 pm
That was really epic! eek Is there going to be more? or was that epic cliffhanger the end? crying Well, it's the weekend, so I finished that pic I keep bugging you about. Here it is! and feel free to save it and post it other places. (There's a slightly bigger one in my album if you want that one) 
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 1:19 am
*shakes fist*
LIVEEEEeeeEEE.
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:23 pm
I'm still in Hawaii, but here's a STEALTH UPDATE ARHARHARHAR.
Addicted or dedicated? You decide.
Other news is I'm sick, and have been sick the entire 3 days it took to write this (You're so lucky I have free internet in this particular hotel).
So here's the first chapter of the second book.
I'm having trouble with keeping up with so many characters in one spot. I think I bit off more than I can chew here, but the focus of characters has changed (thankfully).
Next chapter is probably going to be a flashback to make up for not really writing about the pheonix group (And to get away from the stupid room).
Have fun.
C&C as always appreciated.
Too long? Too short? I take no offense.
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:56 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:05 pm
Lots and lots of characters... o_o
And fighting... ish good. n_n
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