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 Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 1:47 pm
Ok i edited again ;D
Hope this time is all good.
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Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:24 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:06 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:19 pm
Vexin Kinsen 
With black hair instead of blue
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Vexin Kinsen
Nicknames: Vex
Age: 13
Birthdate: 12/25
Gender: male
Village Konohagakure
Race: white
Rank: academy student
Shinobi Profession: train become the best he can be
Ninja Type/Class: Taijutsu Specialist, Speed Ninja
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: none
Current Bloodline Stage: none
Chakra Color: black
Chakra Level: low
Chakra Element: lightning
Battle Strength: close range taijutsu
Battle Weakness: Genjutsu, sake
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. none
2.
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: none
Boss Summoning: none
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: waist
Headband Style: leaf
Headband Color: white
Flack Jacket Style: n/a
Flak Jacket Color: n/a
Weapon Class: blunt
Name of Weapon: nunchucks (2)
Weapon Range: close
Special Abilities: none(yet lol)
Weapon Location: back of each caff
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 2
Makibishi= none
Shuriken= 20
Light Bombs= 2
Kunai Holster Location: none
Kunai Holster Color: none
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: upper thigh (10 on each side)
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: green
Backpack Style: none
Backpack Color: none
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: none
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: none
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: loves to train and test his abilities
Nindo: hard work will lead to greatness
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 135lbs
Original Eye Color: black
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╫Background Information╫
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- When Vexin was born there was complications, the umbilical was wraped around his neck 3 times. But after labor for 32 hours and surgery he was born. A bouncing baby boy 21” and 12lbs 15ozs jet black hair and emerald eyes. His mother looked at him and said speaking to her husband with a smile, “well there is no hiding it now he’s the mail mans baby.” Her husband laughed at her with astonishment how can she be so jolly after giving birth with so bad of complications. Vexin grew with a strong body. He was the king of his neighborhood not just because he was stronger than anyone, but because he was also very kind. He cared for nature as well as animals and people. Everyone liked not just because he was so kind he was caring and fun. He would play pranks occasionally but he fixed everything he did. When he was 10 he mistakenly took a drink of his father’s sake, man that was one mistake he will never do again. He was sick for a week, but after that he began to train so much. His parents’ only chance to see him was to look in his room at night to see him half on his bed fully dressed passed out. Vexin wanted to become a ninja from the time he was able to hold a kunai. At 13 he got the chance, once he was accepted to the ninja academy.
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Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:27 pm
@Razor: I dont see the changes. Please repost it
@Vexin: You need to add shinobi special skills, the bonuses given by ninja types and/or bloodlines or clans
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Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:06 pm
Changed village,Got rid of the taijutsu,and redid background info
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Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:09 pm
Yes, but I asked you to repost it. Besides, if iit's the one thats 3 pages back (Which still has more mistakes than those listed) It needs to be redone in our profile skeleton which can be found on the first page of this thread.
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Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 4:49 pm
where do i apply for shinobi special skills
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Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 5:31 pm
Vexin Kinsen
With black hair instead of blue
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Vexin Kinsen
Nicknames: Vex
Age: 13
Birthdate: 12/25
Gender: male
Village Konohagakure
Race: white
Rank: academy student
Shinobi Profession: train become the best he can be
Ninja Type/Class: Taijutsu Specialist, Speed Ninja(Can do 2 jutsu per post. Move, dodge, and attack as if they were one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: none
Current Bloodline Stage: none
Chakra Color: black
Chakra Level: low
Chakra Element: lightning
Battle Strength: close range taijutsu
Battle Weakness: Genjutsu, sake
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. -2 posts to learn Taijutsu (Taijutsu Specialist)
2. Can do 2 jutsu per post. Move, dodge, and attack as if they were one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja (Speed Ninja)
3. Physical power stronger (Taijutsu Specialist)
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: none
Boss Summoning: none
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: waist
Headband Style: leaf
Headband Color: white
Flack Jacket Style: n/a
Flak Jacket Color: n/a
Weapon Class: blunt
Name of Weapon: nunchucks (2)
Weapon Range: close
Special Abilities: none(yet lol)
Weapon Location: back of each caff
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 2
Makibishi= none
Shuriken= 20
Light Bombs= 2
Kunai Holster Location: none
Kunai Holster Color: none
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: upper thigh (10 on each side)
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: green
Backpack Style: none
Backpack Color: none
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: none
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: none
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Character Description╫
Personality: loves to train and test his abilities
Nindo: hard work will lead to greatness
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 135lbs
Original Eye Color: black
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Background Information╫
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- When Vexin was born there was complications, the umbilical was wraped around his neck 3 times. But after labor for 32 hours and surgery he was born. A bouncing baby boy 21” and 12lbs 15ozs jet black hair and emerald eyes. His mother looked at him and said speaking to her husband with a smile, “well there is no hiding it now he’s the mail mans baby.” Her husband laughed at her with astonishment how can she be so jolly after giving birth with so bad of complications. Vexin grew with a strong body. He was the king of his neighborhood not just because he was stronger than anyone, but because he was also very kind. He cared for nature as well as animals and people. Everyone liked not just because he was so kind he was caring and fun. He would play pranks occasionally but he fixed everything he did. When he was 10 he mistakenly took a drink of his father’s sake, man that was one mistake he will never do again. He was sick for a week, but after that he began to train so much. His parents’ only chance to see him was to look in his room at night to see him half on his bed fully dressed passed out. Vexin wanted to become a ninja from the time he was able to hold a kunai. At 13 he got the chance, once he was accepted to the ninja academy.
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Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:01 pm
Full Name:Hecmot Hyuga
Nicknames biggrin usthawk
Age:17
Birthdate:3-16-1993
Gender:Male
Village:Cloud
Race:African American
Rank:Academy Student
Shinobi Profession:Warrior,Messenger
Ninja Type/Class: Taijutsu specialist,Speed ninja
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon:Hyuga
Current Bloodline Stage:1
Chakra Color:Sea green
Chakra Level:Medium
Chakra Element:Wind
Battle Strength:Up close,Melee
Battle Weakness: Long range battles.
Fights Won:0
Fights Lost:0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1.
2.
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:None
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Summoning infomation
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location:Forhead
Headband Style:Normal
Headband Color:Green
Flack Jacket Style:None
Flak Jacket Color:
Weapon Class:Sword
Name of Weapon biggrin uststorm
Weapon Range:3 inches
Special Abilities:none
Weapon Location:On left hip in sheath
Exploding Smoke Grenade=0
Makibishi= 0
Shuriken=0
Light Bombs=0
Kunai Holster Location:Left arm
Kunai Holster Color:Sea green
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location:Left thigh
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color:Light Blue
Backpack Style:Bag with sling
Backpack Color:Blue with green flames along the bottom
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:none
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu:
Genjutsu:
Taijutsu:
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality:Smug,Honorable,And at time gentle
Nindo:Your nothing if you cant defend those you care about
Height:6'1
Weight:172
Original Eye Color:brown
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Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:23 pm
I didnt get any feedback the second time i posted my character, but i wish to post another form of my second oc (sora's sister)
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:00 am
Mary Bell
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╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Mary Bell
Nicknames: Bloody Mary (This has become her name)
Age: 16
Birthdate: October 31st
Gender: Female
Village Leaf
Race: White
Rank: Academy student
Shinobi Profession: Assassin
Ninja Type: Speed, Support
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: N/A
Clan: N/A
Current Bloodline Stage: N/A
Chakra Color: Blood red
Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Element: Water
Battle Strength: Close combat
Battle Weakness: Long range combat
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. Can do 2 jutsu per post.
2. Move, dodge, and attack as if they were one rank higher
3. -2 posts to learn jutsu
4. Can do jutsu with few to no hand signs
-Completed Missions-
S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Organizations:
N/A
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: N/A
Boss Summoning: N/A
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location: Left Leg
Headband Style: Necklace
Headband Color: Black
Flack Jacket Style: N/A
Flak Jacket Color: N/A
Weapon Class: Scythe
Name of Weapon: Hell Mary
Weapon Range: 8 Feet
Special Abilities: N/A
Weapon Location: Back
Exploding Smoke Grenade 12
Makibishi= 20
Shuriken= 10
Light Bombs= 12
Bomb Tags= 10
Kunai Holster Location: Left leg
Kunai Holster Color: Right leg
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Left leg
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Right leg
Backpack Style: N/A
Backpack Color: N/A
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: Back
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: Black
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Technique List╫
•Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
•Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
•Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
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Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Taijutsu
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: Voracious, Indifferent, Bloodthirsty
Nindo: You are all my food!
Height: 5'8
Weight: 202 lbs
Original Eye Color: Grey - Black/Red
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╫Background Information╫
She started as a shy and sheltered girl, but as her family travled from location to location she was exposed to the harsh realties of the world. Her family, cathing the eye of a foreign ninja village was targeted for assassination after selling weapons illegaly in their market place. Mary, who was out picking the local fauna in the forest returned home to find her family dead. Heart broken, she snapped and fled into the wild. Starving, and lost she came upon a young girl picking flowers like she used to do. Going upon instincts she killed her, smashing her head with a rock before dragging her away and devouring her flesh. Having feasted uponhuman flesh, she has now decided she will live as a monster and devour people. However as people started to disapear from the local village, ninja were sent to investigate. However when found, she put up a pathetic fight against the Anbu assigned to subdue her and was captured alive and escourted to the village to be tamed and used as a weapon.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 5:11 pm
Akazawa Sayomi 
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Sayomi Akazawa
Nicknames: none
Age: 16
Birthdate: 5/14
Gender: Female
Village Iwagakure
Race: caucasian/native american
Rank: Academy Student
Shinobi Profession: Assassin
Ninja Type/Class: Support Ninja, Assassin
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: None
Current Bloodline Stage: none
Chakra Color: Teal
Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Element: Lightning
Battle Strength:
1. Few to no handsigns
2. Can do jutsu while hidden
Battle Weakness:
1.Wind Element
2. Long ranged attacks
3. Counterattacking
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. -2 posts to learn jutsu, can do them with few to no hand signs (Support)
2. Disabling jutsu's don't miss on Chunnin and lower ninjas, ninjas of Jounin and lower will take longer to notice jutsu that is being used by the ninja (Assassin)
3. Know a wide range of Jutsu's (Support)
-Completed Missions-
S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Organizations:
None
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: No summon
Boss Summoning: n/a
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: Around the neck
Headband Style: Like one that would go across your forehead, except on the neck.
Headband Color: Maroon
Flack Jacket Style: Normal
Flak Jacket Color: Black
Weapon Class: Tachi
Name of Weapon: Takeshi
Weapon Range: Close Range
Special Abilities: None
Weapon Location: Strapped horizontally on the waist
Exploding Smoke Grenade=6
Makibishi= 10
Shuriken= 10
Light Bombs=4
Kunai Holster Location: Right thigh
Kunai Holster Color: Black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Left thigh
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: maroon
Backpack Style: plain
Backpack Color: maroon
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: none
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: none
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫
Personality: Likes to draw and write, good sense of right/wrong, adventurous, feels a need to prove herself. Very studious, hates to admit shes wrong. Would rather be with people than be alone, but doesnt mind being alone anyway.
Nindo: "Quitters never achieve thier goals."
Height: 5 foot 6
Weight: 120 lbs
Original Eye Color: Forest green
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Background Information╫
Sayomi grew up as an only child, and was orphaned when she was 10. Since then, she has lived alone, even though many people have offered her to live with them. Ever since she was little, she had loved to draw, and write.
Other kids made fun of her for being so boring, so she decided to prove them wrong. She climbed a lone tree that was above a bunch of sharp rocks while the kids cheered and shouted at her. She ended up getting hurt real badly, but the kids left her alone after that. She had broken 2 bones in her arm and her leg. She had lots of scratches, some deep and some shallow. She was proud though, that she had proved herself.
After that, she decided she wanted to be a ninja. She had fallen in love with the way they fought, and thier amazing techniques. That desire became stronger after her parents died, and she finally got in after many years.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:13 pm
Tsume Inuzuka 
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Tsume Inuzuka
Nicknames: Tsume
Age: 15
Birthdate: March 29th
Gender: Male
Village Konahagakure
Race: White
Rank: AS
Shinobi Profession: Shinobi, Missions for his Village.
Ninja Type/Class: 2 Man Team:
Combo User:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Inuzaku
Current Bloodline Stage: 1
Chakra Color: Brown
Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Element: Earth
Battle Strength: Great Strength, Speed, Defense, and Reflexes. Smelling and Hearing enhanced.
Battle Weakness: Hot Headed (rushes in) Enhanced smelling can cause him pain when it wouldn’t to people with normal sense of smell. Same with Ears (hearing)
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. 2 Man Team:
(+2 ranks on attacks, 2x the damage from attacks, physically stronger then normal ninja)
2. Combo User:
(Can use 4 jutsu or taijutsu in a post, Chakra use VERY quickly)
(Inuzuka clan abilities)
1. increased hearing
2.increased sense of smell
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: Upper Right Arm
Headband Style: Traditional
Headband Color: Blue
Flack Jacket Style: Traditional
Flak Jacket Color: Black
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon: Kuroi (Dog)
Weapon Range:
Special Abilities: Can use for battle and jutsu’s
Weapon Location: Always around him.
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 3
Makibishi= 4
Shuriken= 5
Light Bombs= 2
Kunai Holster Location: Upper Right Leg
Kunai Holster Color: Black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Back Right on Waist
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Blue
Backpack Style: Traditional
Backpack Color: Green
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: n/a
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: n/a
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫
Personality: Care free and loving. Easy to make friends with but in battle becomes a very serious killer. Likes to have walks with his dog Kuroi and spend lots of time with him.
Nindo: “Never give up and always give your all! Never leave any friend behind!”
Height: 5 7” (Five-Feet Seven-Inches)
Weight: 120lbs
Original Eye Color: Blue
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Background Information╫
Tsume grew up very close to his clan. He always trained to become a better shinobi, always trying to better his skills with his dog and friend, Kuroi. He never wanted to go far into being a Shinobi, But one day he realized that he wanted to become the strongest jounin that he could be come. No matter what he always looks out for his friends and will do whatever it takes to protect them. So far his best friend is his puppy Kuroi who he loves and will always cherish. He wants to become stronger among his clan and wants them to revere him as the strongest in the clan. That gets him into a lot of trouble with the other children with his clan, but he always keeps his head held high and wont let anyone get in the way of his dream. He’s always training vigorously everyday, constantly pushing his body to new heights.
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