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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:58 pm
Mmm... Well~
1. I fixed your image so it shows 2. You can't be of the Genjutsu and Medical classes 3. Your chakra pool is dictated by your class and rank. That information is in the chakra system thread in the beginner forum 4. You don't start with any jutsu aside the starter 6 and anything that you may have obtained after getting your bloodline accepted
I...think aside that, you're good ^ ^;;
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:57 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:38 pm
Tsubaki Ryuu Dragon
Age: 12 Birth date: 10/8 Gender: Female Height: 5ft Weight: 100
Race: Human Nationality: Japan Original Eye Color: Gray

Nindo: Protect those weaker than you and fight for your friends, not for the sake of fighting. Behavior: Calm and caring Personality: Tsubaki is very kind and caring. She stays calm and level-headed.
Village: Snow Rank: Gennin Shinobi Profession: Medic Trainee Ninja Class: Ninjutsu Class
|│╟ Battle Info ╢│|
Chakra Element(s): Water and Lightning Chakra Color: Orange Chakra Pool: Gen-High
Shinobi Specials: • • •
Battle Strengths: • Long range • Ninjutsu • Speed •Stealth
Battle Weaknesses: •Close Range • If cornered, almost completely defenseless • Suffering heavy attacks Fears: •Fire •Lots of blood
Completed Missions: D Rank: - 0 C Rank: - 0 B Rank: - 0 A Rank: - 0 S Rank: - 0
|│╟ Techniques ╢│|
Ninjutsu • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Suiton: • Raiton: •
|│╟ Inventory ╢│|
Headband Location | Style | Color: neck| Knot | pink Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh | black Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left Hip | black Scroll Holster Location | Color: Lower Back| Black
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 10 Makibishi: 5 Shuriken: 30 Flash Bombs: 10
|│╟ History ╢│| Tsubaki has had a troubled past. She grew up as a very happy child until her parents went missing unexpectedly. Tsubaki was torn when they were gone, but she continued her life, training as an academy student. One day Tsubaki’s parents suddenly reappeared, but they weren’t the same. They had been tortured for information and were now insane. They would constantly attack Tsubaki, but she didn’t say anything because she was just happy to have her parents back. Later on in her life the people who tortured Tsubaki’s parents came to the village to kill them. Tsubaki’s parents were kill right in front of her which made her scared of blood. When she got older she promised to her parents’ graves that she would become a medic ninja so no one would die in front of her again. Tsubaki continued on with academy training and put even more effort into it and quickly became a genin.
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:55 pm
@Iceestar- Profession would be Medical Trainee (: Other than that I see no issues with it. You might get touched on because of your class. But I doubt it :3
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:06 pm
Ok thanks! I'll change it, but what do you mean by touched?
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:08 pm
Someone might comment on it. Thats all ^^
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:12 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:20 pm
if you want to be a medic trainee you have to have medic as your class... medics have medical as their class. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:25 pm
Yeah, but I can't start off as a medical class so I chose Ninjutsu so once I meet the requierments to be in the medical class I can switch to it.
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:41 pm
oh I see.. right my bad.. I'm sorry! sweatdrop thats fine.
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:42 pm
It's alright. You don't need to apologize! ^ ^
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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:37 pm
kayavient_thundergod Kay Avient
Age: 15 Birth date:5/11 Gender: male Height: 6'11 Weight: 175lb
Race: formerly a vampyre Nationality: african/russian Original Eye Color: blank
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Nindo: Your body is a shrine? Hmm... mine is a canvas... 2.)I am the blue yonder where the sky meets the sea and eye meets eye and world meets boy and became a man to serve the world to, save the day the night and the girl too Behavior: Calm, understaninding but in the same sense painfully honeset, takes his fears on head first. Refuses to accept them. Personality:He calls things as he sees them and continues on his marry way
Village:sand Rank: genin Shinobi Profession:killing, protecting, ;ighting things on fire... Nija Class: bukijutsu
|│╟ Battle Info ╢│|
Bloodline / Clan: puppet petrifacation Bloodline Stage:1
Chakra Element(s): katon:suiton Chakra Color: red Chakra Pool: low
Shinobi Specials: •learns puppet jutsu one post faster •learns buki techniques faster •can learn taijutsu one post faster
Battle Strengths: •Fighting close range •Fighting at mid range • Battle Weaknesses: •long range fighting •being caught off guard • Fears: •starting a flame he can't put out (deep emotional stress related reasons) though it doesn't stop him from burning things •Drowing (Same as above) though he likes to swim
Completed Missions: D Rank: - C Rank: - B Rank: - A Rank: - S Rank: -
|│╟ Techniques ╢│|
Ninjutsu • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Suiton: • Raiton: •
Kekkei Genkai: Kunai cannon (Hand) Shuriken cannon (Hand) Senbon cannon (Mouth)
Genjutsu • Taijutsu • Bukijutsu •
|│╟ Inventory ╢│|
dual wakizishi, nodachi, finger blades Weapon Type: short sword, long sword, claws Weapon Range: short sword length, longer than sword length, arms length Weapon Weight:5lb, 14 pounds, nearly weightless Special Properties: Very light but stronger than typical steel, see before, fit over his fingers like nails, can slice through thick metal Weapon Location: They come from his wrists, nodachi comes from his leg.
Headband Location | Style | Color: around his neck loosely tied and black Kunai Holster Location | Color: Also located in his wrist (left) Projectile Holster Location | Color: Rigth wrist Scroll Holster Location | Color: Lower thigh
Exploding Smoke Grenade:10 Makibishi: 20 Shuriken: 20 Flash Bombs:5
|│╟ History ╢│| His parents were very skilled puppet masters, and successful ninjas as well. He learned to be like them, but when he told them of his dreams, they instantly had an idea. WHy not turn their sun into a monstrosity? After three days the surgery was complete, and Kay had become a living puppet. During a training excercise, his flamethrower went off, causing his house to catch on fire. He got out with his moter, who ran to get some water from the lake nearby their home. She tripped and fell into the water, bumping her head on a rock and drowing. When she never returned, Kay justed his water jets to stave off the flames. He was too late... his father was dead... and he was alone since then...
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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:48 pm
@Kayavient- 1. There is no Sand. Please check the forums for an alternate. 2. If you applied for the bloodline and got it, then ignore this one (^,~) BUT. If you haven't, please apply for it first.
I don't see any issues other than those. Someone else may come and critique but I have no issues other than that (:
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:19 am
Kushina Taraki Black Rose
Age: 14 Birth date: March 3rd Gender: Female Height: 5 feet 4 inches Weight: 115 lbs
Race: Human Nationality: Japanese Original Eye Color: Soft Black

Nindo: “The only time you run out of chances is when you stop taking them.” Behavior: Quiet, Calm, Shy Personality: Very well mannered although she is shy.
Village: Moon Rank: Gennin Shinobi Profession: Ninjutsu Ninja Class: Ninjutsu Class
|│╟ Battle Info ╢│|
Chakra Element(s): Raiton, Katon Chakra Color: Brandeis Blue Chakra Pool: Gen - High
Battle Strengths: •Stealth •Agility •Ninjutsu Battle Weaknesses: •Genjutsu •Precision Fears: •Hospitals •Blood
Completed Missions: D Rank: - C Rank: - B Rank: - A Rank: - S Rank: -
|│╟ Techniques ╢│|
Ninjutsu • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Katon: • • • •
Raiton: • • • •
|│╟ Inventory ╢│|
Headband Location | Style | Color: Waist | Belt | Black> Kunai Holster Location | Color: Left Thigh | Black Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right Hip | Black Scroll Holster Location | Color: Lower Right Hip | Black
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 2 Makibishi: 5 Shuriken: 9 Flash Bombs: 2
|│╟ History ╢│| Kushina was born into a loving family. Her mother and father were always around to spend time with her or give her things she wanted. At a younger age she was the bubbliest person alive, but once she had acknowledged the shinobi of her village she took a turn in personalities. She had gone from bubbly to quiet and calm, hardly showing emotions anymore. While in the academy, she hardly had a friend, they all thought of her as being weird and such for not wanting to play with them afterward, seeing how she had a one track mind on training. But no matter what happened she had passed and became a genin, soon setting a goal for herself to learn her elements and perfect them as best as she could.
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:31 am
Hahaha love your nindo ^^
Approved.
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