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Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:22 pm
『• Reduction of 3 for your genius ability is a bit much. Seeing how you'll also receive reductions from your ninjutsu class.
• Description for your Battle Strength and Shinobi Special 'Agility' is a bit much... Don't say that you're unmatched just say that you're faster than most
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Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:06 pm
So edit that and I'm set?
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Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:40 am
Should be, your genius ability could be like 2 posts maybe instead of 3 since youd get 1 or 2 posts from your class plus dojo/academy, so you would practically auto learn otherwise...
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Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:43 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 8:44 pm
Ryu Uchiha The eclipse
Age: 20 Birth date: April 22 Gender: Male Height: 5'10" Weight:175
Race: Human Nationality: Japanese Original Eye Color: Red

Nindo: Everything dies, why not help them? Behavior: Calm, killer Personality: Will kill anyone without a thought
Village: Moon Rank: Gennin Shinobi Profession: Killer Ninja Class: Bloodline Class
|│╟ Battle Info ╢│|
Bloodline / Clan: Sharingan Bloodline Stage: first tomoe
Chakra Element(s): Fire and Lightning Chakra Color: Red Chakra Pool: High
Shinobi Specials: • Assassinations •tracking • multiple weapon master
Battle Strengths: • Killing • Fighting • deceiving
Battle Weaknesses: • Being nice • honorable • fighting clean
Fears: • losing • not completing his personal mission
Completed Missions: D Rank: - C Rank: - B Rank: - A Rank: - S Rank: -
|│╟ Techniques ╢│|
Ninjutsu
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Katon: •
Raiton: •
Kekkei Genkai: •Katon
Genjutsu •
Taijutsu •
Bukijutsu •
|│╟ Inventory ╢│|
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Weight: Special Properties: Weapon Location:
Headband Location | Style | Color: Kunai Holster Location | Color:
Projectile Holster Location | Color: < Right Hip | Black> Scroll Holster Location | Color: < Lower Right Hip | Gray>
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 30 Makibishi: 30 Shuriken:30 Flash Bombs:10
|│╟ History ╢│|
Ryu Uchiha grew up in a village outside of the moon village with his parents. When he was young he began to show signs of anger, power greed, and potential. He unlocked his bloodlines power quickly and killed his parents and village. From that point he became on a hunt to acquire true power and immortality.
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Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 10:40 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:39 am
inzell > Rin
Age: 18 Birth date: June 3rd Gender: female Height: 5'4 Weight: 130
Race: Human Nationality: Caucasian Original Eye Color: Hazel Hair color: Bright red

Nindo: ... Behavior: Confident, not talkative, smart, nonchallant Personality: rests her hand on her chin, has a habit of listening in on other's conversations
Village: Leaf Rank: Gennin Shinobi Profession: Missions Ninja Class: Taijustu
|│╟ Battle Info ╢│|
Chakra Element(s): None Chakra Color: Mixture of Yellow/orange/pink Chakra Pool: low?
Shinobi Specials: • • •
Battle Strengths: •Unarmed combat •Dodging •above average strength Battle Weaknesses: • Dealing with long range weapon users • Defense/endurance isn't the greatest • Becomes impulsive about protecting her friends Fears: • Has a paranoia about losing any of her friends • Dark, damp, creepy places
Completed Missions: D Rank: - C Rank: - B Rank: - A Rank: - S Rank: -
|│╟ Techniques ╢│|
Ninjutsu • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Taijutsu • |│╟ Inventory ╢│|
Headband Location | Style | Color: Belt | Hip | Red Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh | Pocket Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left thigh | Black
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 10 Makibishi: Handful Shuriken: 10 Flash Bombs: 10
|│╟ History ╢│| Mother died giving birth, and was raised by her father who died when she was sixteen. Has always had an intrest in healing and herbs, as well as unarmed combat. Would honestly prefer to have some sort of herb shop in town and have a nice quiet life, but wouldn't be able to swallow the guilt of not being there for her friends when they're hurt.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:41 am
Does that look okay? And where is this "Custom Techniques and abilities" mentioned? Also, where do I find Taijutsu styles at?
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:49 am
Yori Brand Nazo  Age:16 Gender:Male Height:5'8 Weight:132
Original Eye Color: Blue Behavior: Warm, and understanding Personality: Very kind, unless provoked, then a darker side appears Nindo: "You live one life, enjoy it."
Village: Leaf Rank: Gennin Class: Ninjutsu
----------------------------------------- ╓ Battle Info ╖ Bloodline / Clan: Rinnengan Bloodline Stage: 1st
Chakra Color: Purple Chakra Pool: High Chakra Elements: All 5
Strong Points: • Mentally/ Physiologically stable • A calm strategic in every situation Weak Points: • Taijutsu • Seals Fears: • Clowns • Living a meaningless life.
Special Abilities: • Tensai-teki- Learns ninjutsu 1 posts faster • Wins out against mirrored jutsu Attribute: • Athletic- Speed is one level faster
----------------------------------------- ╓ Shinobi Info ╖ Headband Location | Color In his pocket | Black
Shuriken: 15 Senbon: 0 Kunai: 5 Smoke Bombs: 3 Spike Traps: 5
Completed Missions: D Rank: - C Rank: - B Rank: - A Rank: - S Rank: -
----------------------------------------- ╓ Special Info ╖ Weapon Type: Kusarigama Weapon Range: 1in- 7ft Weapon Weight: 3lbs Weapon Properties: Weightless/Tough
Summoning Type: • Pacts: •
----------------------------------------- ╓ Technique Info ╖ Ninjutsu • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Katon: • Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Suiton: • Mizukaisou Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Reflection Clone Technique)
Doton: • Kajuu No Doro (Mud Weights) • Dochuu Eigyo - Underground Fish Projection Fuuton: • Fuuton: Tei Hakusha (Wind Release: Air Riding)
Raiton: • Raiton: Raikou Shunshin (Lightning Release: Lightning Instantaneous)
Bloodline Techniques • Six Paths
Custom Techniques •
----------------------------------------- ╓ History ╖
Yori was always a step above every other student, and had often been called a prodigy. His dad was never in his life, only his mom, apparently dad ditched him. But aside from that he had no problems, his chakra control was great. He had high chakra for his rank, and everyone loved him. The first event of him using the Rinnegan was at a young age. During a village pillage, he was ambushed, and was pumping out 2 elements as a Academy student. Then at a certain point, Yori was nearly killed, if which he used a third element, and killed a Chunin fighter. During this subconscious act he was promoted to a Gennin. But even as a Genin, he was sent on dangerous missions above his level. But due to him being a advance ighter he was often watched. A village elder learned of him being a Rinnengan user, being scared he decided a easy alternate. The elder called Yori, and his friend Takashi, and sent them on a Jounin leveled mission, obviously a suicide mission. They were caught in a hard fought battle, in that battle Takashi died. Yori was pushed into both a physically and emotionally distressful moment. This unlocked his Rinnegan to the fullest of capabilities. The enemies, seeing this fled, they heard stories of the Rinnengan, and they didn't have enough confidence to face an actual user. In Yori's utter frustration, he revived Takashi, as a human puppet.
For years Yori trained to control the Rinnengan, and finally he can control all 5 elements, as well as having powers to make puppets at will.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:51 am
Yeah, it looks fairly well done. =)
And, the Taijutsu Styles and stuff are all located in the List of Jutsu subforum...
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Slinky, right off that bat, I'd avoid that attribute you gave him
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:17 am
((Yori's link body)) Takashi Tai  Age: 15 Birthdate: Gender: Male Height: 5'8 Weight: 121
Original Eye Color: Blue Behavior: N/A Personality: N/A Nindo: N/A
Village: Leaf Rank: Gennin Class: Taijutsu
----------------------------------------- ╓ Battle Info ╖ Bloodline / Clan: Chakra Mouths Bloodline Stage: 1st Chakra Color: Aqua Blue Chakra Pool: Low Chakra Elements: Earth, Fire
Strong Points: • No pain • Close Combat Weak Points: • Genjutsu • Elemental fights
Special Abilities: • Feels no pain • Strength is increased by 1 rank Attribute: • Speed is increased by one rank
----------------------------------------- ╓ Shinobi Info ╖ Headband Location | Color Neck | Black
Shuriken: 5 Senbon: 0 Kunai: 10 Smoke Bombs: 1 Spike Traps: 0
Completed Missions: D Rank: - C Rank: - B Rank: - A Rank: - S Rank: -
----------------------------------------- ╓ Special Info ╖ Weapon Type: Gauntlets Weapon Range: As far as his fist reach Weapon Weight: 0lbs Weapon Properties: Weightless, and easy to move in
Summoning Type: • Pacts: •
----------------------------------------- ╓ Technique Info ╖ Ninjutsu • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Katon: •
Suiton: •
Doton: •
Fuuton: •
Raiton: •
Bloodline Techniques • Exploding Clay • C2 Doragon - Exploding Clay | C2 Dragon • C4 Karura - Exploding Clay | C4 Garuda • Kyuukyoyu Geijutsu - Exploding Clay | Ultimate Art • Kibaku Nendo - Kyuukyoyu Geijutsu - CO | Exploding Clay - Ultimate Art - CO Custom Techniques •
Taijutsu •
----------------------------------------- ╓ History ╖
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:29 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:31 am
Yar... Accepted... But this isn't where you post Rinnegan bodies > . <
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:20 pm
Lunari Okazi Kazi,Moon Goddess  Age:18 Birthdate:Feb 24,1992 Gender:female Height:5'5 Weight:110
Original Eye Color: hazel Behavior:calm and analytical Personality:understanding,but strict Nindo: "help others and you help yourself,hurt others and you will die by my sword"
Village: Moon Rank:Genin Class:Genjutsu
----------------------------------------- ╓ Battle Info ╖ Bloodline / Clan:Desert Torment Bloodline Stage: 1
Chakra Color: ruby red with silver streaks Chakra Pool: Medium Chakra Elements: Fire,earth
Strong Points: • Genjutsu • Close combay Weak Points: • taijutsu • far combat Fears: • being helpless • failing
Special Abilities: • flexible • elemental control Attribute: • stealthy
----------------------------------------- ╓ Shinobi Info ╖ Headband Location | Color vertically on head/silver
Backpack Style | Color medium sized one strap/shoulder
Shuriken:20 Senbon:10 Kunai:15 Smoke Bombs:9 Spike Traps:25
Completed Missions: D Rank: -0 C Rank: -0 B Rank: -0 A Rank: -0 S Rank: -0
----------------------------------------- ╓ Special Info ╖
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Weight: Weapon Properties: Special Properties:
Summoning Type: • Pacts: •
----------------------------------------- ╓ Technique Info ╖ Ninjutsu
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Katon: •
Suiton: •
Doton: •
Bloodline Techniques •Sabaku no jutsu •Fire Style: Dry Heat •Sabaku Shuriken •Daisan no Me (Third Eye) Custom Techniques •
----------------------------------------- ╓ History ╖
Lunarai or Luna got her name from when she was born,She was born on a full moon.Ever since then, she felt different like she had more power than any one her age.She was second in class.The rest you will just have to ask her yourself,now won't you?
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