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 Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:42 pm
Rpc Name: Kensei Kaguya
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Shikotsumyaku
What you know about the clan/bl: Well its simple, you can use your bones as weapons. With each rank up you increase its power. For weak wounds, it takes one post to heal for more intense it takes two to three full posts. There main weakness comes from Genjutsu's.
Rp Sample: Kensei signed as he stood within the mid level grass field as he stared at his long time rival, who was the same age as him. The two stood there eying each other as if they where having a staring contest. The two slowly took a step forward then in a sudden blur both disappeared, Kensei appear only a few steps from where his opponent appeared, both swung one of their hands out, the opposite man swung out a few shuriken, while Kensei swung out a few sharp tip bone fragments that flew out and stopped the shuriken that where in mid air.
The two stood their again eying each other. The other man pulled out a Katana from his cloak and smirked as he held it out, Kensei moved his head to the left a bit as his bone from his shoulder began to grow out, he looked at the bone out of the corner of his eye as he gripped it with his one hand and pulled it out. Kensei held the bone like blade within his hand and he jumped forward as he took the bone like sword and swung it up and then quickly down onto the other man who held his sword up blocking the attack with both hands on the sword to keep the sword from hitting him. Kensei grinned as he took his free hand and held his palm out as a sharp pointed bone grew out of his hand, the bone was roughly seven to nine inches long. He thrusted the bone forward and into the chest of the other man, who stumbled back and fell to his knees huffing for some air as he dropped to the ground on one knee as he gripped the wounded as he looked at Kensei. Kensei grinned as he held the pointed bladed bone at his opponent as the other man grinned in return.
The other man chuckled as he did some hand signs. Kensei's vision went black as he began to look around, it took him a few minutes till he realized he was trapped in a Genjutus. The other man walked towards Kensei with a grin as he pulled out a kunai as he grinned as he got closer and held up the kunai and swung it down onto the shoulder of Kensei, the blade went in only half way before he couldnt move it any far. Thats when he felt a sharp pain in his stomach, he looked down to see the bone like sword in his stomach. He looked up at Kensei to see he had gained his vision back and held a grin. The man fell to the ground as Kensei pulled the Kunai out of his shoulder allowing it to heal almost right away. Kensei grinned as he began to walk away.
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Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 7:26 pm
I'll keep editing this post as I go along, check here every now and then to see if I have gotten to you.
Feral: I didn't see anything wrong with your application (:
Soren: Denied: You didn't show much of the clan, please do so!
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 10:37 pm
Rpc Name: Nomiya Yasashii
Village: Sound
Rank: Jounin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Crystal Element
What you know about the clan/bl: By the combination of raiton and doton, this clan is able to create a new element, crystals. Don’t ask me how it works, cause I really don’t know. They are apparently able to turn basically anything into a crystal, though most of the jutsu for the clan have specific requirements as to where the crystal comes from. The bloodline user’s eyes and chakra are always the same color, and the crystal they form is the same color as their chakra. The crystal is apparently very strong against ninjutsu, but can be broken by taijutsu of sufficient power.
I think that’s about it, this clan is pretty straight forward.
Rp Sample: Following is a rather large intro segment to my sample. I didn’t intend for it to go as long as it did, but it turned out that way on it’s own.
Drip. Drip. Drip. The incessant noise had followed him ever since he found his way into this blasted place. A mission to find some mythical artifact in an almost forgotten ruin? What was the Otokage thinking when she came up with this? He should be at home, tending to his bar, but no, here he was, crawling through an ancient tunnel, searching for something that probably didn’t exist. For all he knew, this was just some big ant hill! That idea was short lived though, as he tore aside yet another massive cobweb, only to find the end of his tunnel. Pulling himself out and standing up, he couldn’t help but whistle in appreciation. The place was massive! An underground temple, seemingly coated with gold at every turn. If a merchant found this place, he could be rich beyond his wildest dreams! Yet that wasn’t what Yasashii was here for.
Picking a random direction, the young man stalked off down a corridor, it was near the middle of the big room, so he figured it was likely the right direction. After a few minutes of walking, he found himself standing on a balcony, overlooking yet another massive room. But this one was… Different. This one had what looked to be an army camp in it, complete with men moving about on the ground. Quickly ducking behind a pillar, he took a closer look. Yes, there was in fact an entire army down there. How they got in was anyone’s guess, but from the looks of it, they had to be after the same thing he was. Why the hell else would they be in this place? Oh yeah, the gold. And then things turned sour. While Yasashii was busy looking at the camp below, a patrolling guard came up behind him, and quite handily knocked him over the head, putting him out instantly.
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“-nd anything on him. No weapons or gear, just a canteen.” Yasashii awoke to the sound of someone talking nearby, and the sound of leather being hit against something. Most likely his canteen, if he could go by their words. “Then what is he doing here?!” A rough voice cut in, causing him to flinch slightly from the volume, his head still hurting from being knocked out. This would not be going into his report when he got home. A quick survey of his body revealed that he was tied down to a chair, ropes around his legs and waist to keep him from getting up, and his wrists bound together in his lap. How very convenient. Before he could do anything to remedy his situation however, he heard the rustling of fabric, and a large man entered the tent.
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Actual Sample Below.
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“Who are you, and why are you here?” The man wasted no time in barking out his question, stepping forward and standing over Yasashii in what was apparently meant to be an intimidating pose. “I was on a picnic and found a tunnel.” He mumbled back, keeping up an appearance of being groggy from just waking up. No need to let the man know what he was doing. He didn’t look like a ninja, but he had an army behind him. What was he doing you ask? Very carefully, very slowly, he was beginning to move his hands through seals. To anyone looking on, he would appear to be simply flexing his hands within the bonds, a normal enough act.
“That’s too bad for you then. We’ve found something very special here, and letting anyone get out knowing about us just can’t be done. It’s sad, but you’re going to have to disappear.” The man’s rambling kept going on for quite a while after that, but Yasashii had given up on listening, focusing instead on his jutsu. Just as the man seemed to have stopped talking, and probably given up all the various secrets of his evil plan, he was done. The man turned and was apparently getting ready to call for guards to remove him, but he moved faster. With the seals completed, he whispered one word, “Blade.”, started the jutsu, and a silver film began to crawl up his right arm from the wrist to the elbow, extending out suddenly, into a razor blade running up his arm. The ropes on his wrists and arms were shredded in an instant by the formation of the blade, and the right front leg of the chair followed an instant later as Yasashii lurched to his feet. To deal with the remaining parts of the chair still connected to his right leg, he swung his entire body around, sending his left leg, chair and all, directly into the by now rather stunned man’s face. The man crashed to the floor unconscious instantly, covered in debris from the chair.
Not that that did Yasa much good however, because already he could hear people outside coming closer, to find out what the noise was about. It would be beyond bad if he was caught in the tent, so he dashed outside, his arm mounted blade conveniently slashing through the door guard as he passed, only to find himself in the direct center of the camp. With an entire army surrounding him. “Well, crap.”
Luckily, the soldiers were still a good distance away, and just as stunned as he was himself, giving him time to run through another set of hand seals. “Spikes!” He called out once the seals were completed, slamming his hands onto the ground in front of him. Several feet forward, long silver spikes of crystal began erupting from the ground one at a time, each further away than the last, plowing straight into the center of the enemy force and impaling several unlucky souls, while other managed to avoid the piercing gems. By this time, the soldiers to Yasashii’s sides had gathered their wits and begun to charge, albeit very slowly to the ninja’s trained senses. The young man charged forward himself, directly into the small forest of crystal spikes and leapt into the air, running through yet another series of hand signs, even as he began to spin in midair. “Legs!” The one word jutsu call rang out once more, as the same crystalline silver began to form upon his legs, wrapping the limbs entirely in the shining stone. With his legs encased in the strong crystal, he continued his aerial spin, throwing his legs outwards in a wide propeller like kick, smashing straight through the tops of the spikes he had formed earlier and creating a rain of shattered crystal pieces, which flew out into the oncoming attackers. It was more a hindrance than anything to most, while some found themselves hit with larger chunks of the broken pieces, doing rather serious damage. One even found himself impaled by the entire top of one spike, which held most of it’s form during the collapse.
Yasashii, using the rain of crystal as his cover, and they crystal on his legs having shattered along with the spikes, darted off as quickly as he could, putting as much distance between himself and the by now very angry army as he could.
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Additional Sample Below
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Running up the wall, and conveniently back onto the balcony where he had first entered the large chamber from, Yasashii believed himself to have escaped. He was going to need to report back to the Otokage and get some backup for this, cause there was no way he was taking down an army alone. “Where do you think you’re going?” The voice came out of nowhere, just as did the fist, knocking Yasa to the balcony floor. A large man stepped out from behind a pillar, his equally large fist pulling back in towards his body. Pushing himself to his feet, Yasashii let out a low growl. He hadn’t expected ninja in here, much less a massive one like this guy. His crystal blade had shattered from hitting the ground, leaving him with no weapons, and a massive enemy to bring down. Quickly running through a set of seals, he slammed his hands down on the balcony, and watched as something happened. Between him and the large man, who had backed off several feet when Yasa finished his seals, the stone of the walkway began to crackle and change color, turning silver and shiny. And then it began to rise, slowly at first, and then faster as a massive snake shaped being ripped itself free from the floor, and charged towards the large man. “Dragon.” Yasa spoke, grinning at the sight no doubt this would best the large man first shot.
The man scoffed, he was thrown off at first by the large thing’s arrival, but he was strong, this dragon was made for ramming, and he was a man that would not be rammed. Thus, he took the dragon head on, slamming into it just as it slammed into him, and then, in a show of Herculean strength, latched on and smashed it into the wall beside him, shattering the dragon completely. As the pieces of shattered dragon fell to the ground, Yasashii stared in some level of shock. Just how strong must this guy be to destroy his dragon that easily? As the man began to pace slowly towards him, crunching over the shards of silver crystal, Yasashii started yet another set of seals, smiling this time. “Prison!” he called out, slamming his hands down on the floor as the shards gathered together, along with more that formed underground, and shot upwards around the man in a tight circle, closing at the top where they crisscrossed past each other, leaving him trapped in a cage of crystal, that was too tight for him to simply break free. “Now just stay there will you?” He smiled, walking over to the man and patting him on the head, ignoring the cries of rage as he turned and ran off down a nearby corridor.
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Ahhh… I got bored again… How is it now?
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 6:01 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:34 am
Rpc Name: Kiyoshi Hyuga
Village: Cloud
Rank: Academy
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Byakugan
What you know about the clan/bl: Everything *shot*…I mean I have 6 years experience with it, I mean I could go on and on about the chakra points, the gentle fist style, the stupid little 1 degree at the back of the byakugan that they can’t see out of, but that would be boring. I mean I can’t live without it, if you deny me I will cry DX
Rp Sample: Kiyoshi walked down a quiet road heading out of the village. It was a cold winter night, the moon was full and was the only light that guided him. As he walked a shadowy figure rested in the corner of his eye as he walked, but every time he turned they vanished. He then activated his Byakugan as he walked, and the corner of his eye could now be seen clear as day as the figure crept closer to him. Kiyoshi waited till he was within range and swung his body around facing his attacker. His eyes focused solely on his target as he slide his foot back making a stance, then lowered his left arm in front of him while rising his right arm behind him. A force seemed to spread out from Kiyoshi, this was his trigram, his area of fighting.
The shadow dashed at him posed to kill, but this within his range, the fight was already over. Kiyoshi’s right arm shot out striking the opponent in the shoulder, then another strike hitting his leg. Kiyoshi delivered blow after blow, each one precise and accurate. To the untrained eye it would seem like he was just hitting the man, but Kiyoshi’s Byakugan let him see the world differently. It let him see the chakra points of his attacker, which he hit with each blow. On his 64th strike he knocked his opponent to the ground, while it may look like there was no damage. Under the surface his chakra points have been sealed and his organs damaged. Kiyoshi turned and walked away, he found it pointless to continue. The man would be out till morning and then Kiyoshi would be long gone.
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 7:32 pm
Rpc Name: Toru [Hatake]
Village: Hidden village in the Mist
Rank: Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hatake
What you know about the clan/bl: Hatake is a clan that is known to keep their word. They put their whole life on their nindo, and without it they would not be able to function properly during missions. They are known for their white chakra and hair and for their speedy like qualities and skills. But their speed has a down fall, the high speeds cannot be tracked with their eyes. The Hatake bloodline allows the Hatake clan to use their chakra to end the length and the power of weapons and weapon based ninjutsu.
Rp Sample: Toru Hatake ran out into the open air. The crisp warm summer breeze waved in the sun light. The sun hit Toru’s hair at the right angle and it caused it to shin in the sun. The silver dazzled the area around him. The shin caused Toru to tense as he dropped low to the ground and ran out behind the tree that was off to the side. He was training and having himself shin out would not be the best option. His training entailed him to locate and to destroy the target at hand. This was common for his squad as it was their common practice. Toru looked over his shoulder and on the side of the tree, and took in a deep breath. He counted in his head as prepared himself for the all out sprint.
Toru turned and began to sprint down in the open field striving across the field would be easy for him since his clans speed is the fastest of them all. To his right he could hear the cling and clang as shuriken and kunai were launched at him at both sides of his body. Toru pulled out his basic katana from his back and raised it to one side to block and dodge the incoming ninja weapons. As he raised it high in the air, white chakra streaked in its movement leaving a small white light trail. Once he was able to deal with the incoming weapons on his right, his speed and dexterity helped him dodge the rest of the weapons flying at him. Toru took in a breath to calm himself down and wiped the small sweat that was forming on his brow. Most ninjas would think this training as crazy and would frown at the thought of fighting, but the whole time Toru continued on through the fight; he was smiling. It was his nindo to always smile even though the world could end in turmoil, for it could be his smile that could end the tears of the fallen. As he dodged another wave of ninja weapons, the target began to come into sight in front of him.
It seemed simple enough for him to strike at the target and he could do it simply. So taking his blade into a fighter’s position in front of his body, Toru began to lace his chakra into the blade. As he did so the blade began to glow with a white hue. Raising the blade above his head, Toru struck down on the target. Even though he was 1.5 meters away from the target, and the weapon was less than 1 meters long, Toru used his chakra to extend the reach of the small blade. As the extended blade came closer and closer to the target, the target began to shift and dodged the incoming attack. The smile on Toru’s face faltered as he looked around in wonder of the impossible thing that happened before him. He looked up and down left and right as he tried to find out how it was possible. Then he saw it, the target was on a moving mechanism. Luckily since the sun was high in the sky the small strings glowed and refracted the light making the strings visible.
Taking out a couple of his shuriken, Toru aimed at the targets strings. He first regained his smile, for he knew without it he would most likely miss the target. Raising his hands high, Toru released the shuriken sending them flying towards the strings. In a fraction of a second, the strings snapped sending the target falling into the ground. Toru’s smile brightened as he was going to be the first to complete this training. Toru quickly raised his hands and started to string handseals together. While he did this, Toru began to apply the chakra and caused it to move with his hands. At the final handseal, Toru thrust his hand into the ground. A spark began to form on his hand and in time it became a large electrifying ball that screamed into the air. “Lightning!” Toru called this out as he charged forward. Just like the rest of the ninjutsu that the Hatake clan uses, it glowed with a white light, while normally it would be yellow. Toru raised his palm that produced the Lightning Blade and came closer to the target. He once again raised his hand and tried to hit the target with the blade, the time he was just as far as the first time he tried to strike, so using his clans ability to extend ones jutsu. Now his lightning blade was 1.5 times the length of the normal Lightning blade. Now Toru knew he would hit the target, so he slashed down ready to split the target in two. Just as he almost hit the target, Toru was all of the sudden thrown to the side. His ninjutsu canceled and Toru was sent spinning into the field. As Toru looked up he saw his Sensei looking down at him with his arms crossed. His teacher was shaking his head when he finally spoke, “Toru….you were open again....” He continued to shake his head when he produced a smile. This smile was created because as he looked at Toru, Toru still kept his smile and was laughing.
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 7:42 pm
@Bloody: Dude, go for mist. Aside from the fact that leaf is closed, you'll be with your clan head!
But as for your sample, you dont NEED a White Light Chakra Sabre, White Chakra Manipulation applies to all weapons.
You cant extend a 1 meter weapon an extra 4 meters. Be realistic.
You failed to address the fact that a Hatake is naturally faster than other Shinobi.
Chidori, while being created by Kakashi, is not considered a Hatake Jutsu. You can leave it in there, just pointing that out.
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 7:54 pm
lol i fixed it yeah some of that stuff i know isnt apart of it but i needed something relateable and the first thing i thought of was when Kakashi was young and he almost got killed because of the tunnel vision and chidori
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:18 pm
Rpc Name: Gaijin
Village: (Still picking)
Rank: Academy Student (What Else)
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Wind Sage
What you know about the clan/bl: Well their main element is Wind and any jutsus equal to their rank an under don't need hand signs and you don't need to say the name. S-Ranked still need hand signs They can not have a third element. Any wind jutsus that are below the rank of the clan member is null.
Rp Sample: Gaijin walked up to the building he was wearing his Assassin outfit. He smiled as he placed his hood up and walked forward. He then activated the jutsu Wind reading. This jutus allowed him to fill vibrations in the air. He felt a kunai flying at him from the left he pulled out his Kunai and brought it up to block the kunai. He had a wide smirk on his face as the kunai was force back in the direction of the place it came from it was the jutsu Falling winds. Gaijin turned to the area the kunai came from and he vanished and appeared next to his attack. Though he did not use any movement jutsu he was using Jet Flight. The affect of it pushed the ninja away from him about ten feet. He smiled as the ninja was lifted into the air and dropped hurting the ninja really bad. Gaijin walked up to the ninja and smiled evilly as the ninja stood up. A mini tornado started to form around his wrist and his forearm. He moved his hand forward to the ninjas gut. The Jutsu was called Tornado Fist it did as much damage as the Rasengan and also sent the ninja flying into the wall killing him. Gaijin walked up to the ninjas body and picked up the scroll on the ninjas belt and walked away.
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:26 pm
I will edit this post as I go along. Check here every now and then to see if I have gotten to you yet. Misa repost please
Hinote:
BB: I normally dislike tiny rp samples, but you seem to get the deal, so....
Bloody: I'll let Greg finish up with you since he started it.
Omega: Wind Sage needs to be looked at. This pretty much means if you reach an S-rank, you can't be touched by anything other than an S-rank tech....'tu mush!'
Again, I dislike little RP samples, but you seem to have a good understanding of the clan. So....
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:01 pm
awww ok can you look over my profile i didnt know how much a medium level chakra profile would get....
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:10 pm
No sorry I can't look over your profile, but I can tell you that this question would go better in the questions and answers forum for future.
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 11:48 am
Allegra Kori no Tamashi Rpc Name:Kilanari Komihachi Village:Leaf Rank:AC Bloodline or Clan applied for:Ranmaru What you know about the clan/bl:I know that they can locate and track others by sensing their life force. I know that they can cancel the Byakugan .And that they can use details they see to predict their opponents next move. Rp Sample: After getting permission from the Hokage; Kilanari walked out of the village.As she was walking out, she activated her renmaru bloodline, to see if there was anyone hiding near. As far as she could tell there were one two. Ok i can handle two. She thought to herself as she walked out. Two snow genin came out of hiding and threw 3 kunai each at her in opposite directions on both sides. Noting their hand movements, she was able to dodge then before they made contact. Then she took out some kunai herself in both and threw it at them effectively stabbing then in the gut. After that, she ran, but she did not get far, three more genin jumped around her, surrounding her at all sides. She cursed under her breath, as she did some hand signs" Fukushi no Jutsu" She called out, because of her bloodline, the jutsu was stronger then normal, while they were preoccupied with trying to see clearly.Unfortunately, one of the genin had Sharingan, and used it to negate the jutstu and break free. Another one ,who didn't have a bloodline, just tried focusing on only one thing, instead of everything,and eventually broke free."The genin with Sharingan said"You attack from behind, while i attack head on."He said then used his bloodline to see if he could see her chakra color, once spotted he startd to run in that direction.While she was running, she started to pant, using that jutsu was taking a toll on her.She looked behind her and ssaw a silhouette figure catching up, wondering how the genin got out of her genjutsu so quickly, she reacted on the first thing that popped in her head. He must have sharingan or byakugan .So she looked in his direction, and successfully cancelled his Sharingan. Since he was using her chakra colors to keep track of her movements the minute his bloodline was canceled he shook his head, and continued running in the same direction.When it was apparent that he had lost her. He stopped and ran back to where he had started. she looked around, she did not sense anything, so she continued on her way, then suddenly a kunai came at her stabbing her in the back, almost paralyzing her. She cried out in pain, as she pulled the kunai out. As soon as she cried out, some more genin approached her. She smirked as she did some hand signs and called out ●Akumu Bun'ya (Nightmare Realm)" then thought about what to make them go through."hmm how about watching every one you ever cared about die, your family, friends,heck ill even throw in people you just met,and not being able to do a thing. "She said then made it happen to them. she could hear their screams of mercy as their families were being mascaraed and they couldn't do anything to stop, they could just watch . She shook her head, then followed up with the invisibility cloak technique,since she didn't have enough energy or chakra to use the hidden skill Then she slowly disappeared from sight and made her escape.
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 5:30 pm
@Toru: The Hatake speed is not what gives them tunnel vision. The only example of this was when Kakashi used Raikiri, and that was the jutsu itself that did that. If you are relating everything you know about the clan to Kakashi, dont. We are not naruto, we are merely based off Naruto. Some things that apply in Naruto do not apply here, and vice versa.
The White Light Chakra Sabre is only given to the clan head.
You failed to describe or use the fact that white chakra manipulation does not only apply to weapons, but weapon based ninjutsu.
Again, too long of an extension with the White chakra manipulation. The ABSOLUTE most that it can go is 1.5 times the original length of the blade/weapon (meaning, a 12 inch weapon can be extended to 18 inches)
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 8:32 pm
okay i understand i think i got it this time.....
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