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Gregar828
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 11:43 am


Thinker Sis
Hinote Tosatsu
Thinker Sis
This profile needs village approval before being completed.


All profiles go through here before being posted in village threads. There is no "Village approval". If the village you apply for is full you'll be told when you post for approval.

I've already deleted your post in the Konoha profiles, since it does need to be approved here first.


Fine, but how can I decide about the element? I want to make it the same as the country's name.


While I recommend that you pick your element based on what you want your shinobi to primarily do, the elements that correspond to villages, according to the manga, are as follows:

Fire = Konoha
Water = Kiri
Earth = Iwa (Please note that Iwa is a destroyed village, and is not available to anyone at the current time)
Lightning = Kumo
Wind = Suna
PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 1:12 pm


The "Chakra points" section denotes your total chakra points, and not your chakra modifier. Low chakra does not have a modifier, so a genin with low chakra has 25 chakra points.

The "chakra control" section is for specific chakra control bonuses, such as those brought on by a bloodline/clan, shinobi profession bonus, or shinobi type.

Please use our descriptions of the shinobi profession bonuses provided, rather than yours.

Please note that due to your "natural healer" benefit, you may have one additional ninjutsu column for Hiton (medical) techniques. For your RPC, Hiton is considered a primary element, just like Suiton.

I have been asked by hinote to stop allowing starting equipment. Therefore, I must ask that you erase your "supplies" section, and reduce your numbers of Kunai/Shuriken.

Gregar828
Vice Captain


Gregar828
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:44 am


Thinker Sis


I'm sorry for not quoting you, and I shall do so in the future, but to be frank, its your duty to see if the profile is ready, not mine to tell you.

If you have specific questions, please PM me, and I will be more than happy to assist you.

I'm sorry that you feel you've "spilled ink" writing out your equipment list, but a genin starting out with a doctor's bag full of equipment doesn't make much sense.

Please refrain from calling me, the guild, the profile thread, or whatever else you were referring to as troublesome. It is not appreciated in any language.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:35 am


Thinker Sis


Please refer to the Profile Guide for any confusion you've run into. We're currently changing how a lot of things work, so as you said, some of the other areas can get a bit confusing. The guide is currently the most up to date reference available and should cover any problems you've run into. If you're still confused after reading the guide, you can quote myself or Greg in that thread and we'll do our best to solve whatever issue you've run into.

(Obviously Greg's PM offer still stands, but if you check the guide first it'll be easier for everyone since you'll most likely have more knowledge on the matter to know where you need help.)

Hinote Tosatsu
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wolfbain001

PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:51 pm


User ImageKira Katonnami

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Character Name: Kira Katonnami
Nicknames: ---
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Silver
Eye Color: Grey
Height: 4' 11"
Body Type: Lean
Distinguishing Features: A black, tribal tattoo of a wing on her right shoulder
Background
Kira used to be a very nice girl. When she was born, her mother bestowed a prize and cherished family heirloom, a gold trinket on a plain necklace. Kira always went to the market to get bread, but she had to be done and back by sundown. One night she was running late, and it would be a night she would never forget. She was sprinting home as fast as she could (which was quite fast for someone of her age) when it all happened. When life as she knew it crumbled before her eyes. See, her dad owed a black market merchant a LOT of chash. He had been barely making it along and wanted to give his beautiful wife and beloved daughter the live they deserved. What he didn't get was the you generally have to pay back what you "borrow" there if no such thing as free "gifts" when it comes to the black market.

She was running home when the shouts came. Scrambling up on crates, she gazed in horror as men slaughtered her mother and father. The last memory Kira has is her mom looking at her with pleading eyes. She said something then, something that's eaten Kira alive since that day. She just couldn't make out what she said. For all she knew, it could have been something as a warning, or a simple "I love you", but Kira knew, and knows, that it was much more then that. That was all she saw before a colorful red and black mask blocked her way. Ducking down, she would hide in a crate as the men stormed out of the house.

Silent tears trickled over a horror stricken face. Once she was sure the men were gone, she instantly crawled out and ran blindly down the street. A small explosion and a lung full of smoke was all Kira needed to know that the men had set the house on fire, cleaning up their handy work. The officials labeled it as a incident. A simple fireplace flame gone wrong. But Kira knows better, sure, it was dark out, but the mask. She will NEVER forget the mask...


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Village: Konohagakure
Organization: ---
Rank: Genin
Titles: Street Rat (( Will be changed later ))
Headband Style/Color: Plain style, Dark Grey color
Headband Location: Right upper arm

Chakra Color: Black and purple
Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Points:
Chakra Elements: Katon, Doton
Extra Chakra Elements: --
Chakra Control:
-1 chakra point bonus for all ninjutsus
Learning Information:
-4 posts for learning jutsu

Tactical Ninja: : These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation.
(-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)

Speed Shinobi: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast.
(Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja)

Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: ---
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: ---

Bloodline/Clan Transplant: ---
Transplant Stage: ---


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Shinobi Profession: NInjutsu Specialist
Profession Base Benefit: Increased Chakra Pool: Ninjutsu specialists' heavy dependence on the ability to use jutsus, they train themselves to increase their chakra reserves. (the bonuses apply after the medium/high chakra level benefits have been calculated)

Genin: +7 chakra points

Chuunin: +14
Jounin: +21
Sannin/Kage: +28

Weakness: 2) Fewer Taijutsu Styles:
(The Ninjutsu Specialist can learn only 2 taijutsu/weapon styles, and can only learn up to 1 rank below their current rank for their secondary style, the primary style can be mastered up to their rank)

Rank Benefits

Genin
1) Improved Chakra Control:
(The Ninjutsu Specialist receives a -1 chakra point bonus for all ninjutsus, this bonus stacks with any other chakra control bonuses.)

Chuunin
2) Extra Element:
(The Ninjutsu specialist gains access to another element, but they can only learn Ninjutsu for this element)

Jounin
1) Access to Combination Jutsus:
(Can use combination jutsus by themselves at the regular chakra cost for the jutsus rank [normally requires at least one other particpant, or it will cost the chakra cost for both jutsus used for the combination]. The ability to use a combination jutsu by yourself has a three post cool-down. This ability does not give Ninjutsu Specialists the ability to use combination releases specific to bloodlines, it simply allows for the use of jutsus from the combination jutsu list)

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Ninjutsu

Universal
    E Rank
  • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)


  • D Rank



  • C Rank



  • B Rank




  • First Element: Katon
    E Rank



  • D Rank



  • C Rank



  • B Rank






Taijutsu

E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    ---
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Summoning Information
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    Summoning Type: ---

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Taijutsu/Weapon Styles
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    ---

    Stages Known: ---

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities: ---

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    Mission Information
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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed: 0

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: 0

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [0]



  • D-rank - [0]



  • C-rank - [0]



  • B-rank - [0]



  • A-rank - [0]



  • S-rank - [0]



  • Alternative Missions - [0]



  • Teaching Credits - [0]




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    Inventory
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    Backpack Type/Color: Two strap backpack
    Tool Pouch Location: left outer thigh
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: Right lower hip

    Gold: 500/color]


    Equipment

    Kunai: 5
    Shuriken: 20


    Supplies

    Item: Leather Under armor

    Custom Equipment

    ---

    Housing/Furniture

    No house: -
    None: #
  • PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:21 pm


    wolfbain001


    The title "Street Rat" would be more of a nickname than a title. A title is given to you by other shinobi, usually a superior, which can be anything from an identifier (Ex. White Fang) to a rank (Ex. Oinin Captain).

    Chakra level for a clan/bloodlineless shinobi is low.

    In POTS, genin start out with one element, unless otherwise stated by a clan/bloodline. The second element is active at chuunin, and the third at Jounin. Your Profession benefit, Extra element, is not active until Chuunin rank.

    Please be aware that the ninjutsu specialist profession is currently undergoing a major revamp, and when completed, will be very different from the one you have read. You may keep your current specs, but please be aware that they may need to be changed. If the new weaknesses/strengths are more to your liking than the current one you possess when the revamp is complete, you may change it for no penalty. However, please be aware that the removal of the Improved Chakra Control benefit has been finalized, so I suggest taking Signature Ninjutsu for now.

    Please be aware that your Chuunin and Jounin profession benefits are inactive until you reach the proper rank.

    As it is not a pre-registered item, I must ask that you submit leather armor as a custom technology. Just an overview of exactly what it does, it's benefits/weaknesses, that sort of thing. And, if it passes, I would like to ask permission to use a set for my own RPC.

    Gregar828
    Vice Captain


    Thinker Sis

    PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 12:04 am


    Shirakumo (しらくも) Kumo (クモ)
    User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

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    Character Name: Shirakumo Kumo [しらくも クモ]
    Nicknames: Kumo [クモ]
    Age:12
    Gender: Female
    Hair Color:White
    Eye Color:Pink (albino)
    Height:120 cm
    Body Type: Slim
    Distinguishing Features: She has been born with albinism so has white hair and pink eyes with pal skin. Her hair has larg curls.

    BackgroundBio thread


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    Village: Konohagakure
    Organization: nothing yet
    Rank: Genin
    Titles: non yet
    Headband Style/Color:Dark pink - Casual
    Headband Location:On her forehead

    Chakra Color: Greenish blue
    Chakra Level: Low
    Chakra Points: 25
    Chakra Elements: water, medic
    Extra Chakra Elements: No
    Chakra Control: Defensive Jutsu are 1 rank stronger, Offensive Jutsu cost 2x base chakra cost
    Learning Information:
    1. (Medical Shinobi recieve a -1 post learning bonus when learning medical jutsus, but recieve a +1 learning post penalty for all other types of

    techniques. )
    2. (tactical: -3 posts for learning jutsu)


    : (Defensive Jutsu are 1 rank stronger, Offensive Jutsu cost 2x base chakra cost)

    : (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)

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    Shinobi Profession:Medical Shinobi

    Profession Base Benefit:Natural Healer: Gains medical as a bonus starting "element"

    Weakness:
    Fewer Weapon/Taijutsu Styles

    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    Poisoner
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    Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank
    • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)


    • D Rank



    • First Element:
      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank
  • Bunshin no Jutsu


  • D Rank



  • First Element:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    (Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank

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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed:

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank mp in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]



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    Backpack Type/Color: Dark pink Backpack
    Tool Pouch Location:hanging from her belt on left side
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location:hanging from her belt on right side

    Gold: 500
  • PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 8:06 am


    Thinker Sis


    Despite the fact that your RPC has not completed any missions, I must ask that you re-enter your mission information column.

    Gregar828
    Vice Captain


    Thinker Sis

    PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 8:53 am


    Gregar828


    Added.
    Thanks for quoting!
    PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 9:35 am


    Thinker Sis


    User Image

    Gregar828
    Vice Captain


    Thinker Sis

    PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 10:33 am


    Gregar828


    User Image


    tnx
    PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 3:46 pm


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    Character Name: Han Tsunami
    Nicknames: The Amazing Striker
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Hair Color: Blue
    Eye Color: Blue
    Height: 5"10
    Body Type: Athletic some what mainly skinny.
    Distinguishing Features: Han is always seen with a red band around his eyes (has holes where his eyes are). Also has red boxing gloves on.

    Background
    Han grew up without his mom. His mom had gone missing somehow after he was born. Growing up with only his dad he was raised with many stories of his fathers past. Hans dad was an amazing war veteran. One day after hearing about one of his dads war stories, Han decided he wanted to be like his dad. His dad didn't want his son becoming like him, so he had a reasonable solution. Han's dad bought Hand a red band, cut out two eye holes, and gave it to Han. he told Han that now, he could be a super hero, just like him. After growing up people started to call him "The amazing Striker." even though Han wasn't always a very smart kid.


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    Village: Konohagakure
    Organization: Free
    Rank: Genin
    Titles: The Amazing Striker
    Headband Style/Color: dark blue headband
    Headband Location: in his pocket

    Chakra Color: Blue
    Chakra Level: Normal
    Chakra Points: 25
    Chakra Elements: Lightning
    Extra Chakra Elements: None
    Chakra Control: 0
    Learning Information: -1 post learning bonus when learning taijutsu,but receive a +1 post penalty for learning weapon techniques and styles and a +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsu.

    : Combo

    : Speed

    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/A
    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/A

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: None
    Transplant Stage: None


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    Taijutsu
    Profession Base Benefit: Increased Number of Taijutsu Styles

    Weakness: 1) Less Elements
    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    Warrior's Rush
    Chuunin


    Jounin


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    N/A

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    Skill Information
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    Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank
    • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)


    • D Rank



    • First Element: Lightning
      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank
  • Bunshin no Jutsu


  • D Rank



  • First Element: (Name of Element.)
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    (Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Creating Custom

    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities:

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    Mission Information
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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed:

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank mp in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Inventory
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    Backpack Type/Color: two strap Red backpack
    Tool Pouch Location: Right side of hip
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: left side of hip

    Gold:500


    Equipment

    Kunai: # 5
    Shuriken: # 25


    Supplies - Water canteen

    Item:

    Custom Equipment - Boxing gloves

    {Paste customs here.}

    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: (Link to thread.)
    {Object in above house.}: #

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