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 Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 8:28 pm
No problem, now go read mine XD
A suggestion though. Dont center your story. I center everything (we all know this) , but on stories it just looks bad.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 8:34 pm
Seaphron No problem, now go read mine XD
A suggestion though. Dont center your story. I center everything (we all know this) , but on stories it just looks bad. First of all, Shameless self promotion is my forte, and Second I was going to just put it in normal text now, sorry if it bugged you... oh and... READ MY STORY, A HEROIC DESCENT NOW IN THE TOPIC YOU ARE IN
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 8:35 pm
Sauvie Seaphron No problem, now go read mine XD
A suggestion though. Dont center your story. I center everything (we all know this) , but on stories it just looks bad. First of all, Shameless self promotion is my forte, and Second I was going to just put it in normal text now, sorry if it bugged you... oh and... READ MY STORY, A HEROIC DESCENT NOW IN THE TOPIC YOU ARE INIt's all good.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 8:39 pm
Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron No problem, now go read mine XD
A suggestion though. Dont center your story. I center everything (we all know this) , but on stories it just looks bad. First of all, Shameless self promotion is my forte, and Second I was going to just put it in normal text now, sorry if it bugged you... oh and... READ MY STORY, A HEROIC DESCENT NOW IN THE TOPIC YOU ARE INIt's all good. yeah, sorry about that sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:42 pm
I do love this story. I'm surprised that you can write this well, and even though the spelling isn't the best, it's a great story. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:02 pm
Great story.
All have good personalities.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:49 am
Thanks Fish, I know I am not that great of a speller, but I am trying to improve. I am actually kind of amazed you like the story I guess that I am doing something right in it. To be honest I thought I would put this out there and after a week or so it would be shun and essentially die, but I am getting into it and I have ideas for quite a few chapters into the future.
Thanks LF, I tend to get people a bit annoyed by having the fist chapters of my stories be full of set-ups and character development. But now I am adding what I think is a fair enough amount of both plot and development. And why not, you have been asking "am I in it?" since you heard of the story, so to clarify you are in this story.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:02 pm
Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron No problem, now go read mine XD
A suggestion though. Dont center your story. I center everything (we all know this) , but on stories it just looks bad. First of all, Shameless self promotion is my forte, and Second I was going to just put it in normal text now, sorry if it bugged you... oh and... READ MY STORY, A HEROIC DESCENT NOW IN THE TOPIC YOU ARE INIt's all good. yeah, sorry about that sweatdrop No worries so when can we expect chapter four?
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:05 pm
Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron No problem, now go read mine XD
A suggestion though. Dont center your story. I center everything (we all know this) , but on stories it just looks bad. First of all, Shameless self promotion is my forte, and Second I was going to just put it in normal text now, sorry if it bugged you... oh and... READ MY STORY, A HEROIC DESCENT NOW IN THE TOPIC YOU ARE INIt's all good. yeah, sorry about that sweatdrop No worries so when can we expect chapter four? well it was supposed to be out today or tomorrow but lets just say due to a bowling ball to head related injury maybe tuesday. I have had a migrane since yesterday morning, most likely tonight though (mon)
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:08 pm
Bowling ball to the head? I am suprised you aren't in the hospital, I shall wait!
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:13 pm
Seaphron Bowling ball to the head? I am suprised you aren't in the hospital, I shall wait! it wasnt the most impacting blow, it just gave me a splitting headache...thanks to my cousin damn Downed
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:31 pm
I am in need of people who will be evil I have 4 people and I need 2-4 more so if you wanna be evil a PM would be appreciatednevermind I got em'
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 4:44 am
I'm quite sure this has already been adressed but...*dances around* Fish has got a girlfriend! Fish has got a girlfriend! Fish has got a girlfriend! domokun
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 4:45 am
Sherriff of Nowhere I'm quite sure this has already been adressed but...*dances around* Fish has got a girlfriend! Fish has got a girlfriend! Fish has got a girlfriend! domokun glad you like that, so do you like the 4 chapters? sorry sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:08 pm
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