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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:08 pm
And I finished the first page. This story is rather sad. But poetic.
And I know what you're saying about the cat. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 10:00 pm
YAY I FINISHED!!!
BIG!!! AWESOME!!! COMMENT!!!
Congrats Takkun. You did very well. ^^ But you know that.
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:34 pm
No critisism.. No, the flow through the entire project was off.. Nothing?
Okay then.
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 8:08 pm
If there was I can't remember. ^^ Lovely lovely.
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:55 pm
I just read the first 55, i like it so far. there were a few that seemed different or didn't seem to fit just right.
Also the fact that some of the themes had poems in the authors notes kind of confused me. Are they the basis of what you wrote in that section or what
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:46 am
So, I've read them all. And I haven't decided exactly how I feel. I liked them, immensely, but it sort of felt like I only understood them as a whole when I was half-awake. Like, they connected way better when I wasn't trying to understand them consciously. And I like that, a lot.
I also liked how you didn't stick to one form of writing. That you switched it up a lot. I'll think of some criticism after I read through it a second time.
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 1:26 pm
Most anything in the author's comments were either basis or inspiration. depending on if it is my work or someone elses.
I wrote most of them when I was half awake. or half asleep. I tend to enjoy that flow better.. I don't care to think about what I read. If I have to think to connect it... I never get it.
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:04 pm
English major, so it's been ingrained into me that everything has meaning, etc etc etc. Unless it's a dumb, beach book, I see patterns everywhere. It's almost horrifying.
But the flow worked well, in that weird way. It was interesting. I wanted to know a ton more. My fictional characters have a way of... making themselves known to me. In immense, unnecessary details. Ah well.
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