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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 12:56 pm
[Demonic Instinct] ~ Having heightened senses while being in their vanilla state isn't referenced anywhere in the bloodline, and that wouldn't effect one's speed in anyway. [Keen Vision] ~ Same deal above, it's not mentioned anywhere in the bloodline that they enhanced abilities while untransformed. *I'm not saying you can't get these bonuses, it's just that the reasons don't make sense. Approved, but keep in mind that once you've decided on the personal attribute, it'll require crew approval and won't take immediate effect depending on the circumstances.
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 2:45 pm
No problem. I have actually figured out what I'd like to use as a personal:
[Everlasting Energy] Kaito inheriting many traits by the Senju and Uzumaki clan, one of those traits would be an increased chakra pool. His chakra is one rank higher than his normal rank, though it will never surpass the limit of S-Ranked Shinobi.
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 3:24 pm
I don't think I can allow that, because you already have a bonus to your chakra plus the reduction to clan techniques.
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 3:36 pm
Ro Mayvine I don't think I can allow that, because you already have a bonus to your chakra plus the reduction to clan techniques. Well, it's been approved for Had0u who has reductions to clan techniques and to all of his Ninjutsu. So I figured it was alright. Unless, approving his was a mistake?
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 5:24 pm
Kai Takahashi Dun Ro Mayvine I don't think I can allow that, because you already have a bonus to your chakra plus the reduction to clan techniques. Well, it's been approved for Had0u who has reductions to clan techniques and to all of his Ninjutsu. So I figured it was alright. Unless, approving his was a mistake? To be honest, I don't think I was looking at profiles too closely that day, but there is a difference between chakra reductions and chakra bonuses. And a genin with 48 chakra is too much.
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 8:16 pm
Ro Mayvine Kai Takahashi Dun Ro Mayvine I don't think I can allow that, because you already have a bonus to your chakra plus the reduction to clan techniques. Well, it's been approved for Had0u who has reductions to clan techniques and to all of his Ninjutsu. So I figured it was alright. Unless, approving his was a mistake? To be honest, I don't think I was looking at profiles too closely that day, but there is a difference between chakra reductions and chakra bonuses. And a genin with 48 chakra is too much. So, I'm guessing it's a no, and that those without chakra bonus are allowed to use this personal? 40 would be just as bad as 48, only about a one to two difference in being able to use another technique or whatever. If so, I'll just have to think of another one.
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 9:31 pm
I redid both PA's. I just ran out of idea when I made the first ones lol.
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 3:17 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 3:58 am
▌MAIN INFORMATION ▌
☐ Name: Ai Hanaya ☐ Nickname/Famous Name:
☐ Age: 14 ☐ Birthdate: 5/30
☐ Gender: Female ☐ Sexuality: . . . ☐ Ethnicity: Japanese
☐ Height: 5' 3" ☐ Weight: 115 lbs.
☐ Personality: At first glance, Ai perfectly fits the model of a weak and proper girl, one that should be protected and kept in the back. It's not necessarily an act or facade either. Ai is naturally calm and soft-spoken. Although, she's not afraid of speaking and knows how to have her share of fun. She also lacks the usual chiseled and toned body (sexy, perhaps, but nothing close to helpless) of her kunoichi peers, giving her a soft figure instead. She's generally kind-hearted and struggles against being anything but a nice person. Some say she is too peaceful.
However, at the same time, Ai fully understands what a kunoichi is expected to do. While she cannot force herself to act like a cold-hearted murderer, she at least tries her best to not lose mentally against her peers. She can plan kills and ambushes just as well as the next person and has no qualms with seeing deaths occur. The only problem is that she simply isn't comfortable with direct combat regardless of how hard she's tried to reason to herself that it's perfectly fine. Fighting someone face-to-face, feeling her own motions cut and rip. It all just worries Ai to the point she can't concentrate.
For that reason, she prefers to fight from a distance. The farther, the better. Sniping, the farthest form of combat she can think of, is obviously the most suited for her. ☐ Family: Kirianna Aburame [half-sister], Himeko Hanaya [mother], Chikari Hanaya [father] [deceased]
☐ Theme Song: Escape Through the Snow ☐ Nindo: "I wish for peace, but I will still fight in what ways I can." ☐ Background: Ai's family wasn't the worst per se… but they weren't very wholesome either. Her parents started hopeful, entering Soragakure as a newly married couple in the hopes of achieving the past fame of the Hanaya clan. By the time Ai was born, though, the hope was lost. By the time she was a toddler, her parents had just completely spiraled down. If it wasn't so depressing, the speed at which they lost hope could be considered impressive. Her mother was the first to fall. She would rant about every disappointment, placing unrealistic goals on everything. She, more than anyone, wanted prodigies in her family. She wanted the family to regain the past glory of the Hanaya clan, the clan she belonged to before marrying her husbad. The father sought peace from his overemotional wife in drinking, essentially becoming useless to the family. He went missing about a year before Ai's graduation to genin rank, assumed to have drunk himself to death.
His mark on Ai's life didn't end there, though. At about the same time he started his drinking, he also carried multiple affairs, another result of the issues he had against his wife. One early affair resulted in the birth of the child Kirianna of the Aburame clan, giving Ai a half-sister two years her junior. The two knew of each other, but being raised by different families, never had the chance to be too close. In Ai's case, at least, her mother almost always made some mention of beating Kirianna despite the fact that the two were in separate grades. Ai quickly learned to take little heed of such words, as she learned to do with much of what her mother said.
Her mother, meanwhile, vented by trying to sludge all her ill-planned hopes on Ai. Even her name held high standards. Ai, meaning love. It was the expectation that she would be loved by everyone, as the Hanaya of the past were. Of course, something like that is far too idealistic to be true naturally, so by default, it actually was the expectation that the child such a name is given to would get everyone to love her.
With this rigorous, support-less life, the gentle Ai soon learned to endure. No matter how hard she tried, Ai could only ever be average in her academy tests and exams. Her mother's constant attempts to teach her the tricks and techniques of the Hanaya clan also ended up futile. She couldn't help it. She clearly displayed no talent for the usual combat expected of shinobi because she couldn't bring herself to perform the usual combat in the first place. Her failings simply tore her mother apart to the point that she couldn't see the other talents her daughter had and try to help her find an alternate way to excel. Of course, in the end, her mother vented even this on her daughter. She never got physical, but everything else seemed to be fair game. It only took a few years in the academy for even peaceful Ai to stop trying to please her mother. The entrance of Kirianna into the academy the year Ai stopped probably had something to do with it as it had instigated a whole new flood of lectures and demands. She couldn't bring herself to compete as harshly with Kirianna as her mother wished her to. She definitely couldn't bring herself to hate her half-sister as much as her mother seemed to. Ai was grateful for the mental endurance her mother's unrealistic expectations had fostered in her, but she no longer felt anything to her mother, of whom she only remembered as a distant task manager. After that point, Ai only continued to listen because it was the proper and right thing to do.
Most of her classmates, in fact, got more affection from Ai than her mother did. They, at least, didn't force anything on her. In fact, the stress and verbal abuse Ai's mother lauded upon her made Ai that much more dedicated to the village. She didn't need family figures, per se, but she still needed to belong to some unit. With no other relatives nearby, the village as a whole became that unit. That isn't to say that Ai was very buddy-buddy to everyone. She didn't need family figures, so that made the individual villagers nothing special. Rather, the best way to probably put it is that Ai gave the loyalties one would give to their family, often separate from the loyalties given to the village/country/nation/etc., completely to her village. In her often almost-fanatic speeches, the mother had impressed upon Ai the importance of all sorts of loyalty from her youngest days, which simply strengthened Ai's later loyalties to her village. All in all, to Ai, the very concept of the village (just the idea, even) is a safe haven to her. In a world full of lies and lacking sympathy, the village is the one thing she can trust in; specifically, the one thing she chose to trust even while understanding all the faults of such a way of seeing things. It is what Ai, being only human, bases her judgement off of so that she wouldn't go crazy with indecision. It doesn't matter if the village simply uses her, even if that means sacrificing her, she will always trust the village.
Of course, her naturally gracious disposition had her continue acting (without really acting) like a proper daughter to her mother until the very last day. She didn't try anything necessarily harmful. Still hasn't, and her mother is still alive. Albeit, she no longer plays much of a role in Ai's life, Ai having moved out into her own apartment almost immediately upon graduating to genin rank. Upon Chuunin rank, Ai's mother will die of natural causes, probably stress-related. As for the half-sister, Kirianna, Ai never paid much attention to her and vice versa. The two lived in different parts of town and attended different grades. Beyond the passing glimpse and rare comment about how similar they looked to each other, there was never any other chance for interaction. Never any need for it either.
Perhaps because of this complete isolation, Ai was picked as the Kyuubi host among all the other potential candidates. She suited the role, too, having shown nothing but loyalty for her village and a calm demeanor that seemed ideal for the taming of a wild demon. Perhaps her stability also led to Ai being asked upfront to take in the demon, rather than the abduction that Kirianna suffered. Who knows? Probably only the upper ranks of Soragakure that had a say in the distribution of the demons. ▌ NI NJA INFORMATION ▌ ☐ Village: Soragakure ☐ Rank: Genin
☐ Fame/Infamy: 0 ☐ Ryo: 0
☐ Class: Sensor [Perception Passive] - Path: [Short-Range Sensor] ☐ Demon: Kyuubi [Approval] ☐ Summoning(s): n/a
☐ Element(s): Wind [Fuuton] ☐ Chakra Points: 20
☐ Passives: - [Perception Passive] 1/2 Rank in Perception. - [Short-Range Sensor] Users with this class are able to detect chakra signatures within one thread of their current position, as well as much more accurate chakra detection, up to elements and bloodines. To put this into perspective, this sensor ninja can sense everything within the subforum they're currently in, and ninja must be at least two ranks higher than them in order to hide from them. *Note: The ninja in question must have sensed the bloodline at least once before in order to accurately pinpoint it as a bloodline, meaning that metagaming bloodline chakra signatures is impossible. - Negative Emotion Sense - Increased Healing
☐ Personal Attributes: - [Steady Aim] Ai can see both farther and clearer than the normal human. [1/2 Rank to Accuracy] - [Needed Speed] Sensors have increased perception, but it's not put to full use without speed to match, and Ai isn't one to let any advantage she has go to waste. [1/2 Rank to Speed] - [Preferred Combat] Direct physical combat tends to make Ai queasy as she can't stomach the sensation of feeling her attacks rip through someone's body. As a result, when she needs to land a solid blow and doesn't have the chance to use ranged weapons, she'll prefer to attack with ninjutsu. [1/2 Rank to Ninjutsu]
☐ Strengths: - Perceptive - Cunning - Sniper ☐ Weaknesses: - Direct combat - Close combat - Bad positioning ☐ Fears: - Being unable to lie - Losing Control - Death
☐ Missions: - D: - C: - B: - A: - S:
☐ Special Items: - Items - Gained - In RP [link to all]
☐ Weapons: • Crossbow x1 • Bow x1 • Wire x1 [10 yards] • Bolts x10 • Arrows x10 • Kunai x10 • Senbon x12 • Makibishi x12 ▌JU TSU INFORMATION ▌ ☐ Demon Techniques: Kyuubi - - -
☐ Ninjutsu: Universal | Fuuton Rank: E - Transformation Technique - Magic Cloak of Invisibility - Rope Untying - Unlocking - - - - Rank: D - Tree/Wall/Water Walking - - - - Rank: C - Release - - - - - - - Rank: B - - - - - Rank: A - - - - - - - - - Rank: S - - - - - - -
☐ Genjutsu: Rank: E - - Rank: D - - Rank: C - Rank: B - - Rank: A - - - - - - Rank: S -
☐ Fuuinjutsu: Rank: E - - Rank: D - - Rank: C - Rank: B - - Rank: A - - - - - - Rank: S -
☐ Bukijutsu: ??? Rank: D - - Rank: C - - - - - Rank: B - - Rank: A - - ▌CUSTOM INFORMATION ▌ ☐ Weapon Name: namehere ☐ Length: ☐ Ability:
☐ Technique Name: namehere ☐ Element: ☐ Type: ☐ Description:
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 9:04 am
Of course, I know the difference between them, but it seems to me that it's still fair for others to have this technique without a chakra bonus, even though that ruins the purpose of special clans ever having one in the first place. Anyways, I have changed my personal.
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 10:19 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 11:41 am
[Illusive Target] Gonna say 2 for 1 deals are a no go, so you'll need to think of something else.
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 3:56 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 01, 2013 3:58 pm
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