If you two are going to argue, do it here.
Okay, now shall address this:
Now, Kao, you are doing okay for a newbie, but it could be better. You miss out on a few important details like you last stated you were in the air. Cyrus' attack went towards you while you were airborne and you reacted just fine, but remember you are in the air. You would be push back really far until you reacted with a force of which to hold your ground on, which in this case would be the ceiling. With rping always keep in mind the things you look for when reading a story.
Location, placements, and characters. For the most part the design is pretty basic and lazily crafted. Its a large fortress with a maze at the entrance and a large center battle room of which is comprised of four walls and a high ceiling.
Here is the current set up:
In the back of the room you have Kelala: Jounin who is way out of your league in rank. On the ceiling is me, Out of everyone's league in this exam. Cyrus is moving around fighting Ed. Ed, who I guess is on the ceiling moving towards me in my "blind spot" if his last post was edited to be plausible. And you are in the air and wounded I might add.
too drunk to finish...will later
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