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 Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2013 10:30 pm
Done, anyone who judges be blunt and I'll get on changing anything out of order. (I spent the last 5 hours finishing the profile while drinking Jagermeister for the last 6 hours so I expect some type of errors xDD)
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Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2013 10:31 pm
New profile ready for judgement smile
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Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2013 11:45 pm
Sasori00923 New profile ready for judgement smile I'm super on the fence about him being able to kill Kenpachi. I personally do not take a liking to the idea- unless that is embellished upon. confused Killing Kenpachi is a feat that is not so easily accomplished by just anyone- and while I can certainly see that your character is capable I just want to know how it is he exactly managed to pull that off. I don't mean to sound critical or rude but I just feel that's a major gap that needs to be filled in. sweatdrop Otherwise I don't see another problem with it really whee
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Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2013 11:53 pm
Raine Shiba Sasori00923 New profile ready for judgement smile I'm super on the fence about him being able to kill Kenpachi. I personally do not take a liking to the idea- unless that is embellished upon. confused Killing Kenpachi is a feat that is not so easily accomplished by just anyone- and while I can certainly see that your character is capable I just want to know how it is he exactly managed to pull that off. I don't mean to sound critical or rude but I just feel that's a major gap that needs to be filled in. sweatdrop Otherwise I don't see another problem with it really whee No problem, I just did this as a provisional, the details I will fill in shortly, I'm just a bit alcohol impaired ATM since Jagermeister is so darn good xDD. Other than the details about his history is there anything that needs changing?
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Sun Aug 04, 2013 10:34 am
Raine I think he meant he killed one of the previous Kenpachi's not Zaraki... Though if you'd be so kind as to clarify, Sasori? XD
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Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 11:11 am
Yes I did mean another Kenpachi and not Zaraki, I mean my guy is good but Zaraki is GAWD XDD. Anyway, I edited his history so you guys can go over it once more and check it out. Tell me if you find anything wrong.
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Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:24 pm
 ✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: SteelSouledAlchmist ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Fujiko Satake
Race: Shinigami
Gender: Male
Birth Date: April 26th
Age:145
Blood Type: AB+
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Appearance: Fujiko stood tall, broad-shouldered and confident. His charcoal hair, of medium length, naturally waived back save one long white bang that carelessly fluttered in front of his face. His sleeveless Shihakusho allowed to show for his well toned arms, and he occasionally wears a wide straw Kasa on his head to block the sun from his face. his facial expression usually shows an "at peace" state of mind, as if in life he had died an honorable death. His overall figure was slim but muscularly toned, and his torso displayed tattoos of traditional Japanese art with a large Kanji on his back for the clan he served in life. his duel zanpakuto were separated by waste, with the long sabi showing the true length of his blades.
Height: 6' 0"
Weight: 185
Eye Color: Light blue
Hair Color: black w/ single white bang
Tattoos or Scars: Full torso piece related to the Satake clan as well as traditional Japanese art.
Anything Unusual: Gigantic Appetite
✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Kido: Fujiko has mastered the art of Hado spells, which are used for offensive measures. He is unable to perform other kido spells though.
Shunpo Level: Moderate
Hakuda: Fujiko could hold his own hand to hand, but has a much better chance of success with his zanpakuto.
Zanpakuto Name: Meiyo no Heishi (soldiers of honor)
Zanpakuto Appearance: twin tinted Nodachi; neither of which have tsuba guards. The hilts and saya are both smooth rosewood and appear to blend together when the sword is stayed.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Shikai Incantation: Rise for the Shogun!
Shikai Appearance: the blades form to a dual sided Nodachi, except the blades are thicker with clearly defined serrated edges. its also able to be pulled apart into duel Nodachi connected by a chain, hidden within the hilt of the blade.
Shikai Abilities:
Kaminari no ikari (thunderous rage): spinning the long blade rapidly, the weapon starts to spark, and once the moves name is called and the blade thrust forward, it shoots a large, accurate bold of black energy the enemy.
Ronin no ikari (wrath of the ronin): This move greatly increases the users shunpo level for the moment of attack. it involves separating the zanpakuto and angling the blades forward in an X shape. at blinding speed, Fujiko charges forward and swipes the blades back.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Bankai Name: Fumeiyo no samayō heishi
Bankai Appearance: The duel-sided blad is now divided back into two individual blades, which have darkened and are emitting a black steam. it also casts a shadow over Fujiko, whos blue eyes are now the only clearly. the recognizable trait. the swords are now at least 5 1/2 feet, but appear weightless in Fujikos hands.
Bankai Abilities: Kage de homu (home in the shadows) This technique allows for stealth. The dark-colored energy emitted from his zanpakuto allows for him to sink into shadows and travel through them.
Orokamono no bijon (Vision of the fool) This trap partially resembles a two way mirrior. Fujiko thows his blades on both sides of his opponent, far wide of his/her position. When light hits the dark blades and casts shadows, the zanpakuto uses and manipulates the shadows into a prison impenetrable from the inside, yet accessible from the outside. Within the prison is total darkness, while multiple voices ring throughout the void. on the outside Fujiko can see his enemy perfectly and execute attacks from outside the barrier. This power can only be used during the day, as well as by using all of the spiritual energy that he has. It is a last resort technique that can render him unconscious after performing and if performed wrong, once weakened, he is left very vulnerable to attack.
Senshi no shoten (a warriors focus) This technique severely increases Fujikos hakudo ability, but drains his energy quickly. used almost only as a last resort his zanpakuto disintegrates into dark energy that covers his arms and legs. Fueled by his greatly heightened spirit pressure, this technique allows his strikes to do damage equal to that of a normal shinigami and their zanpakuto. Fujiko can also strike at lightning quick speeds in this state.
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Personality: Unlike what his weapons and abilities denote, Fujiko is a very passive person. The first to tend to the wronged and the first to draw on the wrong, his honorable and protective nature speak wonders about a soul with a heart beating within. with all of his heart he aspires to be better than the day before. In life, honor and compassion were among the traits he, to this day, exemplifies. Women, for the most part, are those of whom he shows a special kind of protective nature towards. Growing up he was always taught to defend the helpless and smite the wrong-doing, but it hasn't kept him from remaining positive in his outlook towards people, whether they be alive or in the soul society.
Personal Likes: Most of all Fujiko loves to eat, and although never gaining a pound, gorges himself until tired. He is a conversationalist, as well as music lover. This combination is difficult for others, because you don't know if he could be listening to you or his music.
Personal Dislikes: Being a good, kind-hearted soul, he despises only one thing....evil. Being dead, he has allowed himself to shake off things that bothered him in life. For example, alive he was deathly afraid of the sound of thunder, but after death, there seemed to be no logical reason to fear that which couldn't harm him. his dislikes include only a few things such as men or women who would kill for no good reason, people bent on bringing desttruction for personal gain, and horror movies....he hates horror movies.
History: In life Fujiko served as top guard to the Satake clan in Edo era Japan. His job was his life, for his life was devoted to his job. from early age he was trained that honor and integrity were better traits for a warrior than arrogance or stubbornness. One night an alarm was sounded at the clans compound that the head of the Satake family was murdered in his sleep. Upon news of this he denounced his title as samurai and went rogue in order to find the men who committed a crime, of which he believed to be his fault.
The journey he embarked on took him five years. These five years proved strange as he began seeing people he knew to be dead. creatures that would be seen in nightmares couldn't be harmed by his blade so all he could do was escape from them, but on Fujiko's 20th birthday, he was able to cash in on his wish. He had found the group of hired blades that brutally slaughtered the man he had called a mentor and slaughtered them all, save for the leader, for whom he felt the need to engage in a fair fight. The battle was long but ended with both opponents driving their swords into one anothers' hearts. After dying an honorable death, he moved on to a world that was oddly familiar; the Soul Society.
All Fujiko knew was the way of the sword, so even in death he trained and allowed himself to further himself in the ways of combat. Over the course of 50 years in the Rukongai, he seemed to have found a new home...a place of prosperity. seeing those more talented get accepted into the Spiritual Arts Academy drove him in a new goal to protect the innocent so they needn't share his old masters fate. 75 grueling years after dying, and three entrance exams later, he was accepted into the Academy. He was scored at the top of his class in Zanjutsu, as well as placing fifth in class at hoho. Although he lacked advanced knowledge in hakido and kido, he was willing to take the extra time to learn them. He was eventually placed in the ranks as a third seat of squad seven, eventually working his way to lieutenant.
Family Line: Satake
Friends/Acquaintances: Sajin Komamura
Rivals/Enemies: None
Love Interest: to be determined
Affiliation: Shinigami
Squad: 7
Rank: Lieutenant
~✣✚✣~
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Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:32 pm
if there are any details that need filling, please tell me so that i can correct the original draft.
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Posted: Sat Sep 07, 2013 6:54 am
SteelSouledAlchemist if there are any details that need filling, please tell me so that i can correct the original draft. I really like the character concept- but I feel like there's not enough personal detail to really digest and appreciate sweatdrop It's mostly in the personality. I'd like to know more about him. What are his morals? Does he have any morals? How does he behave and does he have any particular mannerisms/habits that one could consider unusual? In his personal dislikes- Is the only thing he dislikes evil? Are there no common daily things that he tends to avoid? (Ex. My character loathes peas.) While it is a minute detail, it allows for depth in the story because then your character can react to it if that same disliked stimuli is presented to him. I loved the history- it's unique~! I only seem to have an issue with the personality section. I'd like more development 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Sep 07, 2013 1:39 pm
Raine Shiba SteelSouledAlchemist if there are any details that need filling, please tell me so that i can correct the original draft. I really like the character concept- but I feel like there's not enough personal detail to really digest and appreciate sweatdrop It's mostly in the personality. I'd like to know more about him. What are his morals? Does he have any morals? How does he behave and does he have any particular mannerisms/habits that one could consider unusual? In his personal dislikes- Is the only thing he dislikes evil? Are there no common daily things that he tends to avoid? (Ex. My character loathes peas.) While it is a minute detail, it allows for depth in the story because then your character can react to it if that same disliked stimuli is presented to him. I loved the history- it's unique~! I only seem to have an issue with the personality section. I'd like more development 3nodding thank you for your suggestions. All of the things you have addressed have been edited and are ready for review
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Posted: Sat Sep 07, 2013 4:14 pm
SteelSouledAlchemist Raine Shiba SteelSouledAlchemist if there are any details that need filling, please tell me so that i can correct the original draft. I really like the character concept- but I feel like there's not enough personal detail to really digest and appreciate sweatdrop It's mostly in the personality. I'd like to know more about him. What are his morals? Does he have any morals? How does he behave and does he have any particular mannerisms/habits that one could consider unusual? In his personal dislikes- Is the only thing he dislikes evil? Are there no common daily things that he tends to avoid? (Ex. My character loathes peas.) While it is a minute detail, it allows for depth in the story because then your character can react to it if that same disliked stimuli is presented to him. I loved the history- it's unique~! I only seem to have an issue with the personality section. I'd like more development 3nodding thank you for your suggestions. All of the things you have addressed have been edited and are ready for review Awesome - you have my approval~!
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Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2013 1:32 pm
Quote: ✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username:HokiiBoshii. ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Hikiko Morimoto.
Race: Japanese.
Gender: Female.
Birth Date: March 3rd.
Age: 220 (Appears to be 20)
Blood Type: A+
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Appearance: 
Height: 5’6”
Weight: 150 lbs.
Eye Color: Pink.
Hair Color: Pink.
Tattoos or Scars: Not Applicable.
Anything Unusual: If she’s not in uniform she’s almost always in the outfit in the picture above.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Kido:
Sai
Seki
Kyokko
Shakkaho
Shunpo Level: Practitioner.
Hakuda: Expert.
Zanpakuto Name: 『Zetsubou Memori』 Despair Memory
Zanpakuto Appearance: A circular blade, wide enough for her to stand in the middle of it and use it as a mock hula-hoop.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Shikai Incantation: 『Sink into Despair!』
Shikai Appearance: A dark mist will surrounds the blade.
Shikai Abilities: The mist that surrounds it is a very common mild person that’s easily cured, it causes slight sight impairment.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Bankai Name: 『Zetsubou Riron』Despair Theory
Bankai Appearance: The overall color of the blade has darkened to a dark purple, and the edges have started to glow a purple.
Bankai Abilities: When the sword cuts into opponents the edges will insert a more deadly poison into the system. The poison causes delayed movements and slight hallucinations.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Personality: Hikiko is quite easy to get along with and fun loving out of battle. As soon as she’s in a fight she becomes very sadistic.
Personal Likes: Cute things, bright colors, candies, cats, fighting, and drinking.
Personal Dislikes: Bugs, long boring discussions, and meetings.
History: Hikiko had always wanted to become a strong Shinigami. She’d love fighting when she was younger, she always loved picking fights with the neighborhood ruffians. It wasn’t a surprise to her mother when Hikiko came home, wounds embellishing her face, that she wanted to join Shinōreijutsuin. At first, she tried not starting as many fights as her usual when she was starting out, but as time went on. She became more restless, especially since a majority of her classes were boring lectures.
After challenging some of the upperclassmen she figured out that she wasn’t near their league and was beaten quite easily. As she glared at the retreating backs of the ones who had beaten her, she vowed that she’d become stronger, way stronger than everyone at this stupid school. She was doing a great job about getting stronger too, her teachers were seeing a dramatic improvement in her studies, as well as combative skill too.
It was time to prove herself in front of a small group of higher-up, the head captain, and some other captains. She felt a little nervous about this test, but gave herself some confidence and showed the judges what she was made of.
Family Line:
Unknown Father: Deceased.
Mari Morimoto: Deceased.
Friends/Acquaintances: None.
Rivals/Enemies: None.
Love Interest: To Be Determined.
Affiliation: Seireitei
Squad: 11
Rank: Captain.
~✣✚✣~ I hope this is alright! If I need to change anything or add anything please let me know!!!
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Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2013 12:05 am
✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: Siras Cortage ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Siras Cortage
Race: Shinigami
Gender: Male
Birth Date: 7/7
Age: 300
Blood Type: A+
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Appearance:
Height: 6'
Weight: 170lbs
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Tattoos or Scars: Siras has a black handprint on his chest over his heart with a three stenciled into it.
Anything Unusual:
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Kido:
Hado: Up to Seventy
Bakudo: Up to Sixty
Shunpo Level: Siras has come close to mastering shunpo, and is able to keep up with the majority of combatants.
Hakuda: Siras is very good at hand to hand combat, able to hold his own against most combatants, at least for a short time.
Zanpakuto Name: Shinko Kasai
Zanpakuto Appearance: Siras' zanpakuto takes the form of an ordinary katana, but when unsheathed gives off a black mist of spirit energy.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Shikai Incantation: Deify!
Shikai Appearance:  Shikai Abilities:
Kuroi Kiri- Kuroi Kiri is an evolution of the black mist that naturally comes from his zanpakuto. It disperses into the air and is breathed in by his allies and opponents. Until he reverts back to zanpakuto, anyone that has breathed in these particles will be affected to varying degrees. At this stage, he can only sense their presence, making him a very hard man to hide from. Other than that, this power is completely nonlethal.
Shinko Ushinatta- The black mist in the air solidifies on whatever it is touching at the time, sapping the spirit energy of the afflicted and weighing them down. (NOTE: The breathed in mist does not affect, only what is touching them.)
Kokuyoseki Kori- Mist coalesces in his palm into a black shard, which he can fire at a high velocity to his target, and will explode when he clenches his fist, sending more mist in the direction of his target.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Bankai Name: Kyuyoku Shinko Kasai
Bankai Appearance: 
Bankai Abilities:
In addition to keeping his shikai abilities, he only gains one ability from his bankai.
Kokuyōseki Owari- This is the ultimate form of Siras' mist, where all of his mist solidifies within the people that have breathed it in, forming hard crystals within their heart and lungs.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Personality: Siras appears at first glance to be a very exuberant man, quite unaffected by most of the chaos of the world around him. He tends to have a smart remark for every occasion, and is no stranger to a fight. Though, once you get past his demeanor, you can find a very loyal friend who will fight by your side to the gates of hell and back.
Personal Likes:
-Birds
-The Music of a Guitar
-Being pushed to his limits
Personal Dislikes:
-Bullies
-Vultures
-Chibi Caricatures of himself.
History: Siras was born into area 36 of the Rukongai, and was gifted with unnaturally high spirit energy. Nobody in his family was a shinigami, and the shinigami peacekeepers were naturally shocked when they found a child with spirit energy that nearly equaled them. Upon his discovery, he was ushered off to the Shinigami Academy as soon as he came of age. To be torn away from his family at such a young age, Siras couldn't stand it. He was young and brash, and did not yet understand why they were taking him away. Not just to teach him his powers, but to keep the townspeople safe from hollows.
In the Seireitei, Siras studied for many years, honing his skills in Kenjutsu, Haduka, Kido, and Shunpo. He excelled in his studies, because they were the only times he felt focused, many other times, he felt unattentive and nearly lazy. This lethargy raised the ire of many of his teachers, who regularly found him having snuck off to sleep in a tree. Eventually, even his lessons bored him, he wanted something else. A real enemy to fight. In the dead of night, Siras snuck out with the skills he had learned, into the outskirts of the seireitei. He wanted to test his might against a hollow.
In the dark forest, he waited, letting his spirit energy run rampant in effort to draw a hollow to him. Sooner rather than later, his wish came true. A masked beast crashed through the underbrush, charging forward to him. Siras shot to his feet, bisecting the creature with a simple quick slash. Though, that was not the end of it. His spirit energy didn't just attract one hollow, it attracted easily a dozen. More rushed from the forest to attack him, and no matter how many he cut down, there were still more, glancing hits and getting closer to trapping him.
Siras, though talented, could never stand up to an assault like this. He collapsed, waiting for the blow that would devour his soul. Then, everything faded away. The hollows slowed down. All sound dissappeared. All that remained was a black sillouette, and asked, "Why do you choose to fight?" Siras did not have an answer to this question, and it walked closer, "Do you fight to prove your strength? Do you fight out of boredom?" It appeared to shake its head, "You fight for your own reasons, but you cannot attain your goals." It extended a shadow covered hand and Siras reluctantly took it, "Trust in me and I will make you a god." Seeing few other options, Siras readily accepted. He felt strength pour into him, a power far beyond anything he had ever felt. His blade changed into a cruciform sword, and he slew every hollow that came that night.
The next morning, he willingly returned a changed man. He walked up to the leader of the academy's office and placed his sheathed zanpakuto on the desk. The wounded and worn man explained he had learned all he could, and requested permission for early release into the Thirteen Court Guard Squads. The leader scoffed at the request and asked why. With a smirk, Siras picked up his blade, "Deify, Shinko Kasai!" His blade turned into shikai in front of the man. With few words spoken, he was transferred that day into Division three, fourth seat.
Over the next several decades, he worked his way up to Lieutennant through battle, surviving, and proving his power. He had eyes to become a Captain, and his Captain was well aware of that. One day, he came to Siras with a proposition. He was getting old, too old for all the battles. Rather than die on the blade of a shinigami thirsty for power, he made a challenge to Siras. He wanted Siras to kill him, and leave the Division in capable hands.
The next day, the two strongest members of Division Three did battle in the middle of the barracks. Their spirit energy in full release, the Captain had his bankai, but Siras had only his shikai. As far as anyone knew, he never achieved bankai. Though, he was waiting for the right time. Finally, when the Captain's lungs were full of Black Mist, he released his bankai. Using his final technique, black crystals coated the inside of the Captain's body. As the Captain fell, he allowed his bankai to dissappate, and sheathed his sword. He was now the Captain of Division Three
Family Line: Cortage
Friends/Acquaintances: (N/A)
Rivals/Enemies: The Kurosaki Line
Love Interest: (N/A)
Affiliation: Gotei 13
Squad: Three
Rank: Captain
~✣✚✣~
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Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2013 6:39 am
You both have my approval~!
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Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2013 10:41 am
Raine Shiba You both have my approval~! So now all I need two more approvals right?
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