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 Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 10:15 am
RPC Name: Demetrio Moretti
Level: 1
Main Style: None
Talent Name: Ranger Skill
Talent Description: It allows his training to be more real. It allows me to make custom skills to go with this.
Talent Weakness: N/A
How did the character get this talent?: He was trained as a Army Ranger at a young age.
Sample: (at least ten sentences)
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Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 11:15 am
DSW: You will be two levels faster than everyone else. Weakness should be 10 posts to start seeing the effects, instead of 20, and 20 posts instead of 30 to pass out. I've honestly never seen a fight go on for 30 posts. Make those changes and this is Approved.
satsui: Approved
antonio: Need more description and sample before I judge this.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 11:38 am
Antonio Inferni RPC Name: Demetrio Moretti Level: 1 Main Style: None Talent Name: Ranger Skill Talent Description: This talent allows all of Demetrio's past training to be placed down into skills. This allows him to be able to teach other people his past training, and allows the school access to them. It also allows his skills to be ranked. Talent Weakness: N/A How did the character get this talent?: He was trained as a Army Ranger at a young age. Sample: I have no clue how to make this into a sample.
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Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:58 pm
@ Antonio, I don't see why this would need to be a talent. If you make a custom skill based on being a ranger or survival in the wild I would think it would fall under general skills for the most part. Just apply ranks as seems appropriate and see if they get approved.
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Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 9:10 pm
wolf4life13 @ Antonio, I don't see why this would need to be a talent. If you make a custom skill based on being a ranger or survival in the wild I would think it would fall under general skills for the most part. Just apply ranks as seems appropriate and see if they get approved. My way of keeping to myself
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Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 9:17 pm
If you mean keeping your skills to yourself then I'd have to say denied because of this from the custom skill thread: Quote: All self-trained or created skills must be requested to the school in order to notify them of your activity. If the school approves then you may train for your skill within the rp. However, the school automatically has rights to your skill idea and can choose whether or not to print it and release it in the library for the general public, so be aware. Even in the talent you say it allows the school access to them. As such any that are deemed good general skills would be added to that list even with the talent. Really the biggest thing is that random people can't just decide to learn them, if that's what you want then just choose one that isn't chosen to be a general skill and make it a requirement for the others you come up with. That way if you come up with enough that someone decides to add all the interlinked skills for use it will be as a sub style instead of individual skills.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:30 am
RPC Name: Vincent Lee Brooks
Level: 1
Main Style:
Talent Description: Vincent has a thick metal plate braced to his skull as a medical implant it was used to keep Vincents brains in his head after a violent accident involving a violent woman. This plate is sturdy and reduces damage he takes to the head, face or chin by an extreme fraction.
Talent Weakness: Due to the event that caused the plate he was left with brain damage, which inflict slower reflexes.
How did the character get this talent?: He got caught peeping and was brutally beat by a famous woman boxer leaving his head split open and the doctors were forced to use this plate to keep his skull together.
Sample: Boom! Boom! Vincent moved backwards hands balled into a fist and held them close together in a boxers stance. He was under a heavy assault from his opponent which was a chain of kicks and punches which Vincent was lucky enough to block or avoid a majority of. He had to gain an opening in the non stop attack and land a solid punch or he would be to damaged to continue. His opponent laughed a bit before jumping back and sprinting forwards launching a quick storm of punches at Vincents shoulders and guts. This lead to a responds of curling his upper body to increase the area in which his arms could defend. A few minutes of punches finally stopped as Vincent kept his arms raised and enjoyed the seconds of relaxation. The damaged boxer thought a few moments and kept his arms in place to stop any unwanted attacks, he then had a thought and he lowered his fists so his gut was defended but left his head exposed. This was a very unusual stance for a boxer as it left a target pinned to his head and this invited the willing opposing force to unleash another barrage of kicks towards Vincents skull which was met with a painful clanging sound as vincent was kicked a few times in the forehead and the side of the head. This left the opponent with a sense of victory as he continued his assault in hopes it would end the fight. The attacks continued but Vincent stood strong but began to weaken but soon the opponent had gotten to close for to long the damaged fighter lowered his body crouching low to slip under his opponent and within this moment the boxer unleashed a powerful right uppercut to his opponents chin and would be a very effective tatic as this sent the boy off his feet and onto the floor meaning victory for Vincent.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:35 am
I say denied on this one. I can see that working for the head or face but not chin, a plate that large would be called a new skull. There are main styles that cater to defense if that's what you want and just saying slower reflexes is vague and counter productive for boxing. I suggest looking over all the styles then making a talent.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:32 am
Katsuro Hitokage RPC Name: Vincent Lee Brooks Level: 1 Main Style: Talent Description: Vincent has a thick metal plate braced to his skull as a medical implant it was used to keep Vincents brains in his head after a violent accident involving a violent woman. This plate is sturdy and reduces damage he takes to the head or face by an extreme fraction. Talent Weakness: Due to the event that caused the plate he was left with brain damage, which now gives him constant headaches in and out of battle(obvious real condition) How did the character get this talent?: He got caught peeping and was brutally beat by a famous woman boxer leaving his head split open and the doctors were forced to use this plate to keep his skull together. Sample: Boom! Boom! Vincent moved backwards hands balled into a fist and held them close together in a boxers stance. He was under a heavy assault from his opponent which was a chain of kicks and punches which Vincent was lucky enough to block or avoid a majority of. He had to gain an opening in the non stop attack and land a solid punch or he would be to damaged to continue. His opponent laughed a bit before jumping back and sprinting forwards launching a quick storm of punches at Vincents shoulders and guts. This lead to a responds of curling his upper body to increase the area in which his arms could defend. A few minutes of punches finally stopped as Vincent kept his arms raised and enjoyed the seconds of relaxation. The damaged boxer thought a few moments and kept his arms in place to stop any unwanted attacks, he then had a thought and he lowered his fists so his gut was defended but left his head exposed. This was a very unusual stance for a boxer as it left a target pinned to his head and this invited the willing opposing force to unleash another barrage of kicks towards Vincents skull which was met with a painful clanging sound as vincent was kicked a few times in the forehead and the side of the head. This left the opponent with a sense of victory as he continued his assault in hopes it would end the fight. The attacks continued but Vincent stood strong but began to weaken but soon the opponent had gotten to close for to long the damaged fighter lowered his body crouching low to slip under his opponent and within this moment the boxer unleashed a powerful right uppercut to his opponents chin and would be a very effective tatic as this sent the boy off his feet and onto the floor meaning victory for Vincent. I looked at the styles and still sorta prefer boxing and having an armored head(metaphor lol) its just a really good combo, and I took out the chin part it covers the upper parts of his skull, and leaves him with constant headaches which is a small but realistic draw back.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:31 am
How about if we say this:
Vincent has a metal plate braced to his skull as a medical implant it was used to keep Vincents brains in his head after a violent accident involving a violent woman. This plate is sturdy and reduces damage he takes to the head or face by one rank.
Due to the event that caused the plate he was left with brain damage, which now gives him constant headaches in and out of battle resulting in an extra 10 ki being used for techniques B rank and up from the difficulty concentrating.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:36 am
Katsuro Hitokage RPC Name: Vincent Lee Brooks Level: 1 Main Style: Talent Description: Vincent has a metal plate braced to his skull as a medical implant it was used to keep Vincents brains in his head after a violent accident involving a violent woman. This plate is sturdy and reduces damage he takes to the head or face by one rank. Talent Weakness: Due to the event that caused the plate he was left with brain damage, which now gives him constant headaches in and out of battle resulting in an extra 10 ki being used for techniques B rank and up from the difficulty concentrating. How did the character get this talent?: He got caught peeping and was brutally beat by a famous woman boxer leaving his head split open and the doctors were forced to use this plate to keep his skull together. Sample: Boom! Boom! Vincent moved backwards hands balled into a fist and held them close together in a boxers stance. He was under a heavy assault from his opponent which was a chain of kicks and punches which Vincent was lucky enough to block or avoid a majority of. He had to gain an opening in the non stop attack and land a solid punch or he would be to damaged to continue. His opponent laughed a bit before jumping back and sprinting forwards launching a quick storm of punches at Vincents shoulders and guts. This lead to a responds of curling his upper body to increase the area in which his arms could defend. A few minutes of punches finally stopped as Vincent kept his arms raised and enjoyed the seconds of relaxation. The damaged boxer thought a few moments and kept his arms in place to stop any unwanted attacks, he then had a thought and he lowered his fists so his gut was defended but left his head exposed. This was a very unusual stance for a boxer as it left a target pinned to his head and this invited the willing opposing force to unleash another barrage of kicks towards Vincents skull which was met with a painful clanging sound as vincent was kicked a few times in the forehead and the side of the head. This left the opponent with a sense of victory as he continued his assault in hopes it would end the fight. The attacks continued but Vincent stood strong but began to weaken but soon the opponent had gotten to close for to long the damaged fighter lowered his body crouching low to slip under his opponent and within this moment the boxer unleashed a powerful right uppercut to his opponents chin and would be a very effective tatic as this sent the boy off his feet and onto the floor meaning victory for Vincent. hmm, awesome adds a bit more character and personality..... I'm cool with this mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:36 am
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:35 pm
RPC Name: Kit Joukai Heyaza
Level: 1
Main Style: Hell's grasp
Talent Description: By inticing the fight of flight response Kit is able to not only pump adrenaline at increased paces. This talent allows him to gain greater strength, speed, and defensive capabilities for the duration of time that the fight or flight response is activated. Upon attaining level three Kit is able to further increase this ability to his nerves. Which would allow him even great speed and strength then from the fight or flight response.
Fight or flight -
Strength+2
Speed+2
Defense+2
Nerve control-
Strength+3
Speed+3
Defense -2
Talent Weakness: Due to the fight or flight response pumping an extreme amount of adrenaline if used for an excessive amount of time Kit's heart would explode of he would suffer cardiac arrest.
Limit -
level 1 - 3 posts
level 2 - 4 posts
level 3 - 6 posts
level 4 - 6 posts
level 5 - 6 posts
level 6 - 8 posts (max)
In the nerve ending portion unlocked at level 3 The adrenaline would no longer be a problem due to his nerves reacting so quickly. But due to his nerve being to productive and active Kit is more suseptible to sense based attacks. Loud noises, flashes of light, stuff like that. This could cause enough sense of delay in his movements for his opponent to land an attack.
Limit of posts in this version would be unlimited due to no harm to the body itself, but if Kit's sense are messed with while his nerves are exposed as such. He will immediatly shut down from this and be unable to attack for the next post.
How did the character get this talent?: Being in the marine's for the United States of America Kit had excessive combat training and overtime managed to trigger his fight or flight response. (The nerve ending version he will develop at a latter date if approved.)
Sample: As Kit closed his eyes he felt his heart racing. Memories from all the mission he did as a marine were flooding back to him. Every incident, every explosion, every kill. All at once. Opening his eyes Kit could feel his heart pounding inside his chest. The blood flowing through his veins so violently that his arms were boarder line shaking. His opponent seemed to have gotten slower as well. Taking a feint to the left Kit felt he had all the time in the world to dodge as he did and jump to the right upward. Spinning his torso Kit let a violent kick with his left leg fly. A perfectly executed in air round house kick. (chuck norris style!!!) As the kick connected with Kit's opponent he saw as his enemies face buckled under the force making his opponent preform a backflip. As his opponent landed on their stomach Kit lift his right leg above his waist and let a hellasshish axe kick fall directly on the spine. Hearing the bones crack Kit took a deep breath as his heart began to down back to it's original pace. Beads of sweat coverd his forehead and neck, But all the while Kit hadn't felt that until just now. Taking another breath Kit cluched his chest. The side effects of activating his fight or flight response were kicking in. Increasing the heart rate was dangerous to the body, even for the short amount of time he had it activated. It was a last resort move hed rather not use.
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:53 pm
RPC Name: Loki
Level: 1
Main Style: N/A
Talent Description: Due to his years of fighting he can learn techniques at an above average rate. The more fights he is in the faster he can learn.
1-20 fights = - 3 posts
20-40 = - 5 posts
40-60 = - 7 posts
60-80 = - 9 posts
80-100 = 13 posts
100-120 = 17 posts
How did the character get this talent?: Years of training and experience in battle has allowed him to dissect techniques and learn them much faster than normal.
Sample: I don't think I can have one. o-o
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:07 pm
bisquix: Denied. This is a "Fighter's" academy, everyone here has years of battle experience. lol No shortcuts.
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