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 Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 8:45 pm
-X Duo Yiro X- -X Duo Yiro X- RPC Name: To Be Announced Bloodline/Clan Requested: Ato Sakura No Ki No (Art of the Cherry Tree)Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Because I've never actually 'dabbled' into the clan side of Naruto Rping, I just stayed original. This clan is one of the only clans that actually comes close to my character idea. This clan will mark the beginning of my clan related characters. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Ato Sakura No Ki No originated in the depths of the grass country, known only to a specific royal family in Japan. There are very few members in the family who are graced with the honor of learning the techniques of Ato Sakura No Ki No, making it a very rare sight. The wielders of this power are presented with a weapon at birth, signifying that they are the next heir, though they are aloud to forge a different weapon later. While deadly with the art of weaponry itself, the users of this power must have a sound mind, making them calm in battle, in order to stay in tuned with the art. There are two main abilities that grow in strength as you master the bloodline. These are Shield and Etch; Shield allows you to shield yourself from enemy jutsu, while Etch allows you to draw your clan insigma onto ninja tools, when activating these insigma, your ninja tools become a part of the jutsu itself. Mastering this jutsu requires alot of physical and mental training, which can tax the users body. It was late at night. I'll repost shortly. Editted I think I've managed to make myself unnoticeable... >.< It's not a problem, but my profile is stuck in limbo until this is done. Don't rush, by all means, but I would like an answer soon.
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:19 am
RPC Name: Lightning Shihouin Bloodline/Clan Requested: Shihouin Clan Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I plan to make my rpc the queen of speed demons and the best charming assassin aka female Robinhood. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Shihouin are well known for their speed and cunning ways in the shinobi world. They have a secret clan techniques that boost their speed(Flashstep, Shunko). Their main focus' is in Taijutsu and are not good in long range fights. Teaching others of their Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Lightning was sent out on a misson with her father to spy on a rouge camp just south of village.The two drifted down the forest path leaping to tree after tree. They had a formation set up so she could watch the left side and covered their back while traveling,her father had the front and right covered just fine. Lightning spotted one of their targets down below on her side and slide down to take him out. She landed softly on the ground next to the female rouge going for a leg sweep. The women didnt know what to expect as she fell hiting the dirt. With the person down now the girl stood on top her arms and smiled abit to herself." Flash Release: Speed punch." She said leaving three quick brutal jabs to the womens face. Lightning wiped of some of the blood off her face and looked up glareing at the other ninja now getting closer." Well this is the place few tents i was thinking their would be more guess not, Father if you are watching ill take these worms on my self." With this play tone she pissed two of the rouges off charging right at her.
Lightning watched as the two males seprated one moving to her left the other right. The one rouge going left aimed a kick to her hip while the other aimed a punch to her face. Taking a step back the girl allowed the two to hit each other then sweetly laughed seeing them crash into each other." Im the one you should hit boys get it right and not touch eachother now mkay." Lightning said still teasing them. It was her turn as she darted along beside them (Flash Release: Speed Step) with one leg up her other down in a form of muay thai kickboxing the girl shot one two combo of four kicks each at their neck. They fell shaking in pain. Her movement was getting hard for the last three so they stood back making handsighs.
She watched the rouges played their game of fighting from afar and sighed. Fighting wasnt her best thing but if they wanted to try this then she was going to allow them. The four finshed their last handsign. Rushing from their mouths came a large fire ball mixing with eachother making a larger one. Lightning took a step forward then closed her eyes geting ready to move again but quicker." Flash Release: Flash step. " She said moving with speed that looked liked she teleported missing the fire. Being right close to all them now she only had to use slow movements. All four pulled out of kunai and slashed at the girl. Lightning grinned dodging them one by one and upercuted each as they passed. She turned to heared a paper burning and turned to see the last rouge held a paper bomb out . Her Father flashed stepped with much faster speed than her grabbed lighting and flashed stepped away to a safe spot away from the blast zone." your playing around almost had you killed you need to take things more careful next time come we need to report." He said as the two headed back to the village a job half well done the spy work didnt work out but they took out the targets.
[I could write more if needed]
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:43 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Duo: It'll probably be best you send Cobra a pleasant reminder through pm seeing as how your app has still yet to be checked. Cobra is also going on vacation or someting this weekend so you'll best try to contract him before that.
Muffin: Um...Muffin? Its great that you want to make your rpc the queen of speed demons but I believe Jade already has that title claimed by her ultimate rpc ever - Jade Uchiha. But good luck! xp
Jokes aside, your info section looks cut off so you might want to finish that up. Rp sample wise, you're gonna have to find the time to reread through your sample muffin. There are several grammer mistakes with in your sample, making it a bit difficult to read. Clan wise, you missed out of several things about the clan like the chakra reserve and long range battle weakness. I suggest going over the clan and trying to incorporate what you can into it. Good luck.
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:05 pm
RPC Name: Tsukiko Airi (my RP sample is from the view of another ninja, in relation to my character history that i'll put up later) Bloodline/Clan Requested: Wangetsu Lunar ClanWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I've for awhile been interested in making a medical ninja, but I don't particularly like how they are often support ninja. This clan has a very good list of offensive jutsu, and I like their medical jutsu post reduction, so these jutsu, along with the other offensive medical jutsu, I hope to make a very strong medical ninja. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: They harness the power of the moon, and are stronger in their jutsu during a full moon or during the night. They also have a few jutsus using the power of yin and yang. They have silver hair and chakra, and must be primarily suiton-element users and medical nin. They can see the life force of others. Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Illiya, and her squad mates, Jun and Hiro, ran through the forest at top speed. They had received reports that there was a religious zealot tricking villagers into letting him abuse their children in the hopes of finding a ‘pure vessel ‘ for his god to put his essence into, or some junk like that. Despite the fact that Jun was the squad captain, it was Illiya who was at the head of the pack. Using her special talents, she would be able to spot Ghetsis, the ***** whack job that was responsible for uncounted crimes in other Lands, as soon as he got within 25 yards by seeing his life force. Not only that, but she would notice the energies of a second if he had another small child with him. Soon , (the forest wasn’t that large and they had been given general directions by the non-converted villagers) she noticed two forms. She held up the back of her hand to signal that they would be stopping soon. Once they got to about 30 yards away, she stopped on a branch. She sat watching the forms for a few seconds. She noticed something familiar with the child. She could tell…that girl had moon chakra! That disgusting cretin had a Wangetsu child in his claws! She huffed and looked into the starry sky. Well, this is good. My power will be enhanced by the night, so I can give this guy all the justice he deserves. Then, I can heal him and give him s’more justice. She clenched her fists, getting excited for the fight. Jun, a Fuuton user, used some jutsu Illiya wasn’t familiar with (because as a member of the Wangetsu clan, she dealt primarily with medical and suiton justu) and blasted a hole in the wall of the small wooden building Ghetsis used as a chapel. Because she was the squad’s medic, as all Wangetsu clan members were, she hung back. Not only did this save her from getting her so she could help Jun or Hiro if they got hurt, but if she did come in after them Ghetsis would be thrown completely off balance. Jun used Fuuton jutsu and Hiro used Katon, so they were a pretty good team together and Illiya was confident they probably would need her. That was, until she saw Hiro get blasted back half the length of the cabin by some Raiton technique. Without a moment’s hesitation she was there, moving from her tree branch to the middle of the small wooden building about 10 yards away, leaving only a flash of moonlight in her wake (Moon Flicker Technique). She stared down at him, blood on his face and a hole in his abdomen. She saw small sparks fly randomly off his body (as in, at random places). She noticed Jun draw out his katana and Ghetsis bring forth a kunai. If he could do that much damage in seconds to Hiro, he could probably easily do the same to Jun if he caught him off-guard. She knew that if she didn’t back him up soon, things could get even worse. She brought chakra to her hands, now glowing silver like the moon, and placed them over Hiro’s body. Using her Lunar’s Healing Touch, Illiya poured some of her chakra into Hiro, hoping to temporarily stop any internal or external bleeding and help him breathe easier; he was wheezing and hacking non-stop. She wasn’t trying to bring him back to full health, the technique wasn’t strong enough for that and she didn’t have the time, but merely to heal the small injuries in hopes to give her enough time to hold off giving him a full treatment until after the fight. She tried her hardest but even with the night sky she noticed Hiro fading away. She didn’t want to look, but her unique eyes betrayed her; there was no more life left in him, no heart beats, no movement, nothing. She roared in anger. Hiro was one of her best friends. Maybe even the love of her life. That didn’t particularly matter now. She saw that Ghetsis (and Jun, for that matter) had stopped temporarily to look at the source of the noise. She saw him smirk, just the smallest curve of his lips, but she saw it. Normally, she wouldn’t bother with this technique, but she wanted to make him pay. She focused and used the Moon Gravity Trick. She felt the moon above her, blocked from view by the ceiling beams but still emanating its aura, and harnessed that power. She put the great force of the moon into her chakra and brought down all the heavy force of it onto Ghetsis’s legs. She was, for a terrible half-second, worried it had missed. But the look of terror on Ghetsis’ eyes when he realized he couldn’t dodge or run or move was enough to wipe away that worry. She was sure glad her clan was so adept at using medical ninjutsu and that the chakra it took for them to use it was a rank lower than it would normally take, because otherwise she wondered if she would have the energy left to use this final technique. Jun realized what she was doing and paused, staring at her not in judgement for what she was about to do, but in righteous agreement that he deserved it for killing Hiro. She pulled all the chakra she had left in her body into her core and, with great ecstasy, formed a handsign that released a great 360* wave of yin-yang chakra. Though she couldn’t see Hiro’s corpse behind her, she knew that all the cuts and burns on his body were gone. Any pain Ghetsis inflicted on Jun was gone. Ghetsis, on the other hand, was roasted. Parts of his body turned red, some black. But without a doubt, Ghetsis was dead. That charred body was the last thing Illiya saw before she her body crumpled and she passed out, tired not only from the massive jutsu she just performed but also from the jutsus she had previously done.
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Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 7:53 pm
Ok, I guess I can do that. I just did it once already, I don't want to seem like a pest.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 12:16 am
RPC Name: Nero Tsuyan
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Hyouton Clan
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I've been hoping for a character with the affinity to manipulate ice/snow, because it seems like it would be something really fun to RP. My character enjoys to, in larger fights for the most part, play tactical support, so the power of cold, ice, and snow, with shinobi on your side who are able to deal with it, is a powerful weapon.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: I know a lot. They harness the power of ice for the most part, to manipulate and shape it into other things. The ice made by the Hyouton clan is almost as hard as crystal, and is almost unbreakable.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
They were outnumbered, 3 to 5. It didn't look good, as far as sheer firepower went, but they were underestimating one thing, a very important thing: This was the middle of the Tundra...in December. It was about as favorable a fighting condition for the Hyouton as there ever could be.
The snow was falling down hard...incredibly hard. It was falling fast, and with big pieces, accumulating quickly, this was greatly to their advantage. Nodding to his teammate, they quickly began. The opponents were better fighters close up, and had powerful jutsus, but in the dead center of a blizzard, where they could hardly see at this point, now that the snow had picked up, they could do nothing but defend themselves against whatever Nero could offer.
Nodding a final time, the handseals began. It took only moments for Nero to finish the necessary handseals needed, before the ground began to shake. Hyourou no Jutsu! He said, feeling the ice come up. It was almost over...however; as the ice began to come up, but they must have felt it, as just a moment later, a flurry of kunai flew towards him. He closed his eyes and braced for impact, hoping his pilar of ice would get up in time to defend him against the attack.
It didn't. It wasn't up nearly in time. He had just enough time to hear his teammate shout "Tsubame Fubuki!" As he opened an eye to see the reassuring flock of swallows diving down across his path, a few intercepting some of the kunai and falling to piles of snow on the ground, the rest however, were on the move, honing in on the opposing squad of ninja. Just as the ice prison started to kick in.
A second later, the screams of three of them could be heard, as the ice made an enormous grinding noise as it erupted from the ground, trapping them each 10 feet in the air, preventing their escape, and the swallows honed in. The swallows of the inexperienced clan member hit, but many missed, falling to the ground below. They inflicted some damage, but that was the last jutsu he was able to use before he lost consciousness. It had been a long day, with constant battles and little rest. It was a B-rank mission, turned A-rank when enemy ninjas attacked.
It was up to Nero now. He had chakra left for one, maybe two jutsu's at maximum, so calling up the last of his great reserves, he put his hands together, and began making signs for his final attack. He had to do this, it had to be big, and it had to end the fight here. "Itsukaku Hakuegei!" He shouted, as the air went silent. A few seconds past, before a low rumbling could be heard.
The ground began to suddenly tremble and shake, the opponents flailing, desperately trying to escape the ice prison to get away from whatever jutsu was coming...but they couldn't. It was too late, the battle was over with the last Jutsu Nero had used. The horn was the first thing to break through the surface, followed by the head, then the enormous body of the great horned whale. It came crashing down, with enough force to cause Nero, and his one, chakra drained teammate, to fall to the ground from the shaking of the earth.
It was so powerful, that the ice beneath the feet of the enemies began to crack as it hit. The waves could be heard smashing up against the ice they were standing on, as the whale continued straight through, pushing the enemies through the ice with it, and vanishing from sight.
The jutsu was done, and Nero, completely drained, dropped to a knee from exhaustion. It was almost completely silent, as Nero knelt there, as he listened to the last anguished cries of the screaming enemies, fade into nothing, as they were drowned in the waters, deep below the surface of the ice.
((I know it seems long...but truthfully, the paragraphs are sort of short...heh...))
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 6:59 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Karnitis: The info section is alright. As to your Rp sample, please mark off what's in thoughts by either putting it in <> or italizing them. Secondly, I like how you incorporated some traits of the Wangatsu clan into your sample but you need to expand out on the techniques more. Just saying their name doesn't give our a clear description of the technique and prevents us from seeing if you can properly rping the abilities in this clan. Some other key traits such as silver hair or how the females have green eyes could also be mentioned as well. You mentions the silver chakra so that's good. Overall, it was a good sample, just lacked some key details. Give it another shot and either edit this one or repost. Let Jade or me know once you're done and we'll review it again.
SK Loda: Hey, so we're gonna need a bit more for you info section. Its good that you know a lot but we need to know that you know about 'our' bloodline and how it works. For example, you need to keep in mind that Hyouton users a limited to what elements and what their ice is susceptable to. Another thing to take note of is the fact that this bloodline is still underconstruction and may be hit with some minor changes. Though your info section lacked, you made up for it in your rp sample so, Approved. Just be sure to take in the notes I've mentioned above.
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:43 pm
Approved. I'll let you know if the bloodline is edited or more jutsu are added.
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 11:02 pm
RPC Name: Naomi Nakashima Bloodline/Clan Requested: HyoutonWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: It is one of the few Bloodlines/Clans that I would like to use and I plan on using the Hyouton bloodline ninjutsu along with genjutsu. My RPC will be made to use a genjutsu and ninjutsu combo, using the similarity between the genjutsu based on ice and the real ice to confuse the enemy even more and possibly grant my victory of course when I fight. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: This bloodline allows the user to perform jutsu creating ice using a water source in the surroundings. Though it may seem normal, the ice from the Hyouton bloodline is more resistant to heat than normal ice is, being melted by the flames from tailed beasts and amaterasu only. The first appearance of an user of the bloodline was when Haku appeared in the anime. People of this bloodline are also able to perform jutsu using one single hand instead of both for the handsigns. I can't say that this is truth in any other guild or in the manga/anime, but at least in this guild it is truth, those with the Hyouton bloodline have only two elements (aside from the ice), Fuuton and Suiton. Please supply a Brief RP Sample: (Sorry for the length of the RP Sample, I got a bit too inspired with the background story e.e . The most important paragraphs are the three paragraphs at the end of the post.) Winter morning, within the walls of Kirigakure no Sato. "Onii-chan!" the loud voice of a little girl could be heard, calling out for her brother. The sun had just showed its bright but the girl was outside looking for her brother as if she didn't care how loud her voice was. The girl was seven years old and had been looking for her brother for two days already. The villagers were annoyed by her and if they could they would kick her out of the village out of cruelty. Yet, they found a way to make her leave the village on her own. She was told her brother had left the village and gone somewhere near the border of the country. The girl would not be allowed to leave the village on her own but the same person who told her about her brother, told her when the guards would be on a small break between the shifts. Already outside, the girl continued to walk through the misty scenery that surrounded the village. She had never stepped out of the village and knew nothing about the outside world, except the stories she was told. The girl walked without knowing where she should go to, other than that she had to find the border of the country, where her brother could be found. Hours had passed, and the lost girl noticed that the temperature was getting colder. She took more steps through the mist and little by little something came into her sight range, something that was really amazing. The amazing thing was a huge wall of ice, thick and tall, surrounding a large area. 'Why is there an ice wall like this here? Is this...a country named Ice Country?' the girl wondered, yet her innocent guess was completely wrong. She found a path surrounded by the ice walls and without giving much thought to the danger it could be, she followed that path. She walked for a few minutes until she heard people at the other side of that "ice tunnel". It made her curious and so she started running instead of walking. The voice was one that she knew of, the voice of her brother. And that made her anxious since she had been looking for her brother for a long time. Arriving at the exit of the ice tunnel, in a kind of large dome created by the ice, the girl couldn't help but be surprised by the scene. "Onii-chan!" she said outloud as her brother was fighting someone she didn't know. "Naomi?!" her brother said in surprise, having his attention taken by the girl but he then quickly got focused on the fight again. "I am busy right now. Please stay by the tunnel!" he said with a tone that didn't leave her opportunity to talk back. The girl's brother was a very skilled shinobi as that one enemy was the last one out of a group of bandits. Naomi, the little girl, continued to watch the fight from afar, and noticed as the two men fought. She hadn't notice before, but part of the floor in the dome, was water while the other half was covered by snow. The bandit was also a shinobi and performed handsigns for one of his jutsu, but he was unfortunate with his elemental affinity. When the enemy was done with his handsigns, a dragon rose from the water surface and was launched towards Naomi's brother. Yet, the girl's brother had also prepared a jutsu. He performed handsigns with one single hand and by the time the water dragon was formed, an tiger like figures was formed from the ice surface behind Naomi's brother and moved towards the dragon made of water. "Haryuu Mouko."The enemy's specialty was not ninjutsu and for that purpose he looked for help and managed to obtain a cursemark that enhanced suiton jutsu, but he was reckless and after several usages in the past it and in his current situation, he was unable to activate it and his suiton jutsu was weakened, meanwhile the Hyouton user was an elemental master, being Ice his specialty. The two jutsu clashed with equal strength, yet the Hyouton technique had something that made it perfect for the match. The ice jutsu froze the water dragon, completely, giving Naomi's brother more ice to use. "Fool." he said and prepared himself for another technique. "Hyourou no Jutsu." he said and, after he had performed the handsigns, touched the floor. Within a few moments, ice pillars rose from the floor beneath the enemy who was exhaust. It was a long fight that started long before Naomi arrived there. Unable to run, the enemy found himself trapped within the ice prison and couldn't do anything other than surrender. If he continued to fight he would be killed like his comrades were. "Onii-chan!" the girl called for the winner once more and walked in the dome again. Now that the fight was over there was no reason left for her to hide. "Are you okay? I was..." Naomi began speaking again, she was worried about her brother being missing for several days but he stopped her without thinking twice. "Don't worry now, I'm going back home." he said, calming the little girl and taking her back to the village. The bandit was left there, unable to escape and later shinobi from the mist village would take him from there, along with the corpses of his comrades.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:51 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Karnitis: Approved! Have fun!
Beatriz: Welcome to TUP Bea and as for your app, Approved. Happy rping!
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 10:57 am
RPC Name: Shihouin Laram, Laram Shihouin Bloodline/Clan Requested: Shihouin ClanWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Speed has always been, in my opinion, the most important factor in any battle. I love the idea of the Shihouin clan, and all of its' techniques. I wish to create a new kenjutsu style that relies on the Shihouin's flash step ability. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Shihouin clan are known to be extremely fast in the shinobi world. They utilize two taijutsu techniques called flash release and shunko release. They are very adept hand-to-hand fighters, however have difficulties with long-range battles. Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Setting: A training room about seven meters wide and long. Laram smiled at his opponent, and waved his hand at her. It was his way to taunt his sister before they trained, and it always worked to his advantage. She disappeared in front of Laram's eyes and reappeared behind him. " Flash step huh? You're still to slow baby sister, I saw your movements the whole time, and you took far too many steps. Besides, I can do you one better." Laram focused, and concentrated his chakra. In truth, he was a little scared. This was going to be the first time he tried the Shunko release technique his father taught him. His words still echoed in Laram's mind. You're probably one of the few members of the Shihouin clan that can truly utilize this technique fully. The amount of chakra you possess is key to this. Never forget that. Laram promised himself that he never would. He could feel the air around him begin to crackle with energy as he poured his chakra into his body. Bits and pieces of static electricity began to jump off of him and dissipate into the air. Once he was satisfied that he initiated the technique properly, Laram began to move. In his excitement at achieving the shunko release, Laram forgot about the great cost it took to maintain it. He began recklessly using flash step to jump around the room, showing off. " You see, I told you I could do one better. Let's go." Laram had stopped long enough to speak, but now he was back to showing off. Smirking, Laram began to shoot concentrated amounts of chakra at his sister, laughing at her as she flung herself onto the floor to dodge. Once, twice, three times he fired the white lightening, and all three times his sister was able to barely get out of the way. " You see, I w..." Laram's breath caught in his chest. He felt as if someone had taken a sledgehammer to his head, and he couldn't move his body. Only now did he remember the rest of what his father said to him. The shunko release requires vast amounts of chakra to sustain. Be careful in using this technique, my son. Never squander your time or chakra while in this form. He dropped to his knees, too exhausted to remain standing. " Wha..." It was now Laram's sister's time to smirk. She smugly walked over and stood in front of Laram, whose breathing had become quite sporadic. She reared back her arm and hammered into Laram's nose three times in the blink of an eye. He careened backward, unable to fend off her blows. " Uhh." His sister then took a stance, that Laram feared deep in his mind. She brought her right leg backward, presenting her left side to Laram. She lifted her leg into the air and laughed. " That's enough Kyla. This sparring match is over. Go to your rooms." Laram's father was standing in the doorway with his arms folded across his chest. Kyla, one more time, smirked at her younger brother before lowering her leg. " Yes father, as you wish." She then left, complying with her father's wishes. Once he watched her leave, Laram's father lowered his arms and knelt down beside his son; who had collapsed onto the ground. Taking out a rag, Laram's father wiped his son's bleeding nose before speaking. " What am I going to do with you? You need to learn not to show off so much, especially to one who has superior skills. I guess this lesson couldn't be avoided. Once you've regained your strength, you must spend ten hours training your shunko release. After that, clean the house." With that, Laram's father left their training room; leaving his son sprawled out on the floor, too exhausted to move. Techniques and jutsus used:Flash release: Flash Step Complex :: Rank C The user is able to perform flash steps at a consistent level. They are faster than the eye can see at times and even dojutsu have a hard time catching their movements. They take less steps and use less chakra to perform their steps. The speed at which they move is incredible. This takes [8] post to learn, no learning reductions. • Cost [5] Chakra per step. • Must use random number generator between 1-5. User must get a 1 or 3 not to be tracked. Flash Release: Speed punch Simple :: Rank D The user releases fast and quick punches that seem to be blur to the human eye. Opponents 1 rank above the user can see this as regular punches. If the opponent is 1 rank below, it will be hard for them to dodge. Those who possess dojutsu can easily read this. Shunko Release: Chakra Shot Complex :: Rank D The user must have a [Shunko] skill active. The user fires a small stream of white lightning chakra. After impact, the chakra explodes, leaving minor burns. The range of this attack is limited to 10 meters. • Requires a [Shunko] ability to be active to use this technique.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 2:30 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Fr3ak: Alright, I like it! Approved!
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 8:30 am
You can call me Laram, by the way. It's much easier than j3susfr3ak1991.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:32 am
RPC Name: Alexander Van Dere Bloodline/Clan Requested:Motarasu HanaWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Well, when I was making my character, I wanted him to be very odd. Since this is my first character, he had to make a mark. That's why I wanted to make a guy in Sand, who is very flirty and be pretty at the same time. To back up the pretty, I think flowers would be a good thing because he is only supposed to be there to look good more than fighting really (due to his past). What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Um, hm... well... They used to be an honored clan of the Leaf village, since they had the ability to make flowers and all that. However, they weren't able to make wood come out but rather the vegetation and the flower on those trees. Having said that, they are a weaker version of the wood bloodline yet hold their grounds using it to make plants and flowers grow. Thinking this, I think they can make fruits and vegetable grow as well seeing as how they are considered plants too in my opinion. The bloodline has a natural charm to them that makes them more trustworthy to others. Something like how a beautiful dove holds a twig of olives I guess, that kinda peaceful stuff. Having said that, they are also gullible and have their trust set on most people, making them easily manipulable. However, this isn't in all cases if they use that to their advantage I think. The reason being is because even if the bloodline is labeling the people in it "stupid", they can still redeem themselves and use that to their advantage, no? Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Alexander, known as Alex by his sister, was walking to a dry rock in the middle of the desert. Thinking how much time he has been in this wasteland and the equally dry village he was sold to because of his mother and siblings, he had no idea just why this had to happen to them. His father, being a very tired man and used by many back when they were a family, Alex just hated him a lot. He used to love his father, back when he was a child. Now, he's filled with more poison within than a bubbling sweet soda that he used to have every time that man was brought up. Moreover, just the sight of his smile made him want to puke chunks and leave them be for the flowers to consume them, though that's the last thing he would do since he loved flower all too much. Lying himself on that rock and using it as a pillow, Alex just didn't know what to do. Should he really become a ninja much like how his sister wants them to be? He was making enough money selling small cacti and rare flowers by day and selling himself to ugly men by night but to his only family, this was nothing but an embarrassment really. He had to face it. He can't sell himself anymore even if it would give them more money to live with. Even if his sister doesn't need to work like these people break their backs each day. All she needed to do was wait in their small room and help him get ready for the next "job". She wanted to become a ninja, she said one night. That small kid whom he picked up while he was running away from the evil place he was sold to. He was lucky that time and by luck, he was not only able to get away but find the child whom looked so much like his sister. It was a miracle that he, whom lost hope and almost his trust to suddenly find a light magenta purple haired girl that looked too much like his youngest sister, Anastasia. She mentioned the times when he was able to make his flowers into live images of himself to help him work while she spied on him a few times. She even realized just how he helps poor love struck females by giving them a bottle of gas that could help infatuate their crush for a day and also grow exotic flowers that can't even grow in the hell flats known as The village hidden in the Sand. Hell, his knowledge on herbs were not normal for someone whom never went to school at all. Hearing how these were brought to light, Alex decided to try out one of the skills his sister was talking about. Taking out a few seeds from his bag, he used his chakra on his hand and made the seeds grow into ivy vines. My using his jutsu to twist and tie these thin vines, he made a long durable whip out of them. Using more of his chakra to coat the item, the long weapon was now not only durable but the leaves of the plant were now sticking out of each corner other than the handle to help make the thorns. Getting off the rock, Alex then looked at it carefully before he brought his whip back with his arm. With all his strength but with a graceful pose, the guy snapped his whip and made the upper part of the whip hit the rock. Creating a huge dent as if a small bomb exploded on the rock, Alex tried it again and again until his twentieth try cut the stone in half. His sister was right that he had such an ability but man, who would of though that it would be this hard? His arm ached as he let go of his weapon. It hurt too much holding it when he draw back but to use it on the same spot for twenty tries was too much for some street vendor. Holding his arm tightly, he took out three blue colored seeds from another bag and used his chakra to make it come alive. Afterwards, he crushed the small flowers as well as the odd berries they made and put it on his upper arm where he felt the strain. Wrapping it around it so the juices will be drained into his skin, he sighed and let the stuff do its magic. That's does it. He was going to be a ninja alongside with his sister. He was not going to let that girl just do what she wants without him to protecting her from the bad end of the stick. Walking over the broken rock, Alex headed his way back to the village. It was bad enough he walked away from home during dinner time when she told him the news but to not return and let her assume he abandoned her was something he won't allow. He wanted to just crawl and die in a ditch than abandon his sister like how he did with his own family. It was to protect them that time but this time, he wouldn't let that let in the way. He will be with his sister and he will keep her safe while he hunts for the man he will truly love. That in itself, was his promise. ((I'm going to write another sample. Sorry for the lateness, had a lot of stuff to do.)) Three large rugged men, whom were ugly as hell, were walking towards a caravan in the desert. Wearing old armor taken from fallen shinobi, the fat disgusting thugs took a swig of water before throwing the flasks on the ground near the sand dunes. These men were nothing but regular sand bandits yet the way they kept taking on stray groups for the spoils have made them a tricky bunch to exterminate. Though they were bloated and slow, they were able to make up for what they don't have with their brute strength as well as their strategic minds. Their target this time, the small caravan of a traveling noble, had around a total of six people. One was the noble himself and the rest seemed to be his attendants. Watching the group making a fire, the leader then signaled the two to keep quiet in their hiding spots. From what they were able to see, the one dressed in royalty while covering his face came out of the roofed cart and sat by the fire the servants made. The strong scent of perfume was dancing around him with a therapeutic effect as the three men took a sniff. From the way they were close to the noble, the smell had a strong effect that made them somehow attracted to him. While still in that daze, the leader haven't realized that their target was already up from his spot and have already walked towards his direction. Right when his shadow cast face was near them did he realize that his group was spotted. Falling backwards from the shock, the three men couldn't help but stutter at the man they were supposed to rob yet the feeling of attraction still lingered around them. With a small grin that was shown from the light of the moon, the noble took off his hood from his head. Without that hood on his head, the long violet hair that spilled out of the cloth bucket burst out like millions of petals while his ivory like skin reflected from the moon. "Ah, gentlemen, I see you have lost your way. May I be of some service?" A calming seductive tone came from the man's mouth, holding the three bandits' hearts with a claw like grip as their faces redden like all the blood in the heart was squeezed into their faces. They wanted to escape, with all their might, they wanted to run. However, the alluring feeling they got from this man's presence prevented them and their hearts from the pull of his grip. "How... how did you know...." One of the two helpers managed to ask while he couldn't help but feel obsessive of this man. The violet haired man only grinned heavenly as he crouched down and dusted the sand beneath his feet. It was then they realized that the whole area was covered in vines! Long stalks and vines that were buried in the sand that were able to sense the attackers. It was as if he was waiting for them to come to them and planted the sensor trap for them. Frightened were the men yet the pulling sensation of their hearts kept obsessing over this man. No matter how hard they tried(?), the beauty of the man as well as the scent of sweet flowers prevented them from running. Putting his hand onto one of the vines, the violet haired man inserted his chakra within and created a single purple rose in front of them. Picking it off the plant and taking a sniff, the soft tender seductive voice rang within their ears. "Please forgive me yet this is but my mission." He said and with a set of jutsu seals, he charged his purple colored chakra into the flower and put the item directly in front of the leader's left eye. Before he was able to work his jutsu, he put his free hand to the man's face and gave him a hot warming kiss that signified his doom. Pulling back, he then pressed a trigger in the rose as it suddenly opened wider, shooting thin needles out of the center. There were three thin yet long needles within this rose and all of them entwined together as they shot sharply within his eye. Reaching not only to his retinas and the optic nerve, the needle also was shoved right into his brain, creating a leak within. Using his chakra once more, the violet haired man then retracted the senbon back in the flower in such a quick yet forceful manner that the brain and eye couldn't help be doodled along the way. Seeing their boss being put out like that, the two couldn't help but feel chills down their spines. However, their resistance were sapped beyond their will. Seeing their once called target getting closer to them, the blood covered rose still held in his hand as it dripped the red liquid onto the sand like paint, all the two men could do was stare lustfully at the seduction in a form of a noble. Another set of hand seals were performed as the seductive male siren brought the two deeper within his mount of rocks. Putting his hands onto the hidden vines again, the plant started to bloom millions of those very blossoms as he then deflowered every petals from each flower. Manipulating the petals to float in mid air, he transformed them into razor blades in the same shape as their original form. All of these blossoms surrounding the men like bees to a honey stealing bear, the blades were frozen in place as the noble walked in front of these two ugly filthy bandits. Putting his long thin fingers to one of the men's chin, he gave them an alluring glare before he gave him the kiss of death. He did the same to the other man and all the two could think was how much they wanted to piece the man with their own lustful swords. The pain of such emotions mixed with that very beautiful kiss that sealed their fate only made them feel even more frustrated. It just made them want to tear out their beating hearts from their chest with every step the man walked backwards and away from them. When he was far away enough, he wagged his long finger gracefully and with that... The razor blades danced all around the two, cutting them in ribbons and cutting their organs to shreds. By the time this beautiful man had his fun, the three bodies that were the victim of the storm of blades (and yes, even the leader's limp body), were nothing but threads of flesh over a pile of meat stuck bones. The blades, that have reverted back to the dark colored flower petals, now have blanketed the whole area as if to grieve the deaths of the bandits. Like how despite the cruel death they went by, the noble's heart could only cry for them and the fate that he placed them once they sealed it. Closing his eyes, he couldn't help but touch his lips with his fingers. The warm kiss of those whom lust for him, even if it was because of his pheromone that he created out of his flowers, still linger with a heat that only can be from those who longed for him. To thank them for giving him suck a kiss, the violet haired man put half of his leftover chakra into the plant once more to create a huge venus fly trap out of it. Making the beast devour the sand, blood and what was left of the body and digesting it, the male then used his chakra to seal its form and bury it within the sand as if the place was never a battleground of blood and carnage. Closing his eyes as if to pray to the dead fools, he then slowly made it back to the caravan. "Ah Alexander, I see you have been patrolling. However, do you think it's really necessary to wear my robes while standing guard? I do love my clothes to be worn only by me." An old man in his night robes came out of the cart carriage by the time the young man reached the fire. Giving a respective bow to the elder, the male known as Alexander took off the robes and reached for his tattered desert cloak and shirt. The clothes he felt the most comfortable in. "Sir, the late night must not be wasted on such trivial thoughts. Why not let myself warm you up before we reach our destination..?" He asked as he gave the real noble a case of pearl colored powder. The strong scent acted much like a sleeping drug when he blew a small bit in the man's nostrils. Leaving the noble elder within the transportation, he then went back to the fire. Giving another jolt of chakra energy to the sensor plant underneath him, he kept guarding the noble without a wink of sleep. This was his job until he reached the palace. As someone who was only but a mere medic and of the Flower bloodline, he wasn't much of a fighter. Because of that, he wondered why he wasn't paired up with his sister, whom was the one who did most of the melee combat in their missions. Nonetheless, he perished that thought and rubbed his eyes of his drowsiness. He needed to wake up for another three hours to finish his mission. After he reaches the palace, he planned to take a break within an inn before he treads back to the Sand village. The only hope he had was that his sister wouldn't be in any risky mission while he was gone. Even if she was far stronger than he is, he was still her elder brother. He couldn't help but feel that way about his sister's safety and each second he kept thinking of her the more his worries repelled his sleep. With a deep sigh, the violet haired man known as Alexander added more wood he created earlier within the fire and watched the crimson flames engulf them. With his little sister in mind, he grinned with a genuine smile and stared at the night sky and all its wonders. Only a day more before he reaches his destination, he had to suck it up! Only when he's finished will he see his sister's welcoming arms as well... as their small home where they lived all their times together. ((I'm planning to make the sensor plant thing in customs. Is that all right))
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:53 am
RPC Name: Maqui Hajime
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Ranmaru's Eyes
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Maqui is the son of one the most powerful illusionist in Kirigakure. Taking after his mother, Maqui is training to be a master genjutsu specialist to surpass his mother and has attained his grandmother's eyes in order to do so. The Ranmaru Eyes will further enchance Maqui's genjutsu abilities to be able to fool even the sharingan and the byakugan.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Ranmaru Eyes have the power to fool even the byakugan and sharingan with genjutsus. They have the ability to detect not only chakra but life force as well, indicating wether someone is of perfect health or on the verge of death. They control red chakra particles that can not only manifest into a barrier or clones, but can be used to attack opponents. Their genjutsu can be used through walls and they themselves can see chakra through walls. While the user has the eyes activated they themselves are immune to other's genjutsu. Similar to the sharingan, they can predict an opponent's movements, however if they are not fast enough their bodies can't react accordingly.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
"Yuj, my Phantoms are in position," Maqui whispered to his brother as the two were crouching down beneath a windowsill. The two of them were full fledge shinobis, their first official mission on their own was to capture two rogue ninjas from the Hidden Mist Village. Their job was to capture them alive, although dead would sufficed as well. To leave the mist village is to live a life of running, because the demons of the Mist are not forgiving to deserters. Yuj and Maqui, twin brothers, had managed to track down the two to an abandoned shack in the backlands of Water Country. The pair had laid numerous traps to alert the prescense of trespassers, but neither twins were foreign to them. Maqui's cunning and Yuj's skills as an assassin got them through. As Maqui looked over at Yuj, his brother couldn't help notice that Maqui had activated his bloodline, the one he had gotten from their grandmother on their father's side. Giant blood red eyes now looked upon Yuj as they kept their silence.
Maqui, using his bloodline, manipulated his chakra to release red chakra particles, forming several phantom clones that now surrounded the shack in case their plan goes awry. Should the trespassers attempt to escape, hopefully the phantoms would be able to slow them down even if its a little bit. The shack looked run down, abandoned for years and mold grew out of every orrifice. This allowed Maqui and Yuj to listen in on their conversation, and Maqui could see exactly where they were at since he was able to see chakra and life force even through walls. "Alright Yuj...wait for the signal," Maqui whispered to him as Yuj nodded. Upon taking leave of his brother, Yuj silently headed towards the front door, crouching down next to it in order to break through and capture the two rogues. One of the phantoms now crouched alongside of Maqui and he laid to watch the two who were now two rooms down.
The phantom next to Maqui tapped on the window, lightly, as if to make the sound of a bird pressing its beak against it. Obviously this got the attention of one of the rogues, as they chose to check what the noise was. Upon seeing the rogue come closer and closer to the window, Maqui popped upwards, now standing against the window as his blood red eyes peered through them. Smiling, Maqui flashed through a succession of three seals, the rogue surprised that he didn't have time to look away. Suddenly, dozens of chains exploded from the ground around the rogue, bursting through the old floorboard and wrapping themselves around the rogue. His partner heard the screams, running into the room as his eyes widening in fear. The rogue was flailing violently around the room, screaming bloody murder about his skin melting off his bone, however his partner saw nothing...nothing but the smiling demon standing at the windowsill. Maqui's genjutsu was able to be performed despite the glass and walls separating him from his target, so long as the target saw the seals he had performed.
Fortunately for Maqui, Yuj also heard the screams, and that was his signal. Opening the door silently, Yuj had slithered in, using his skills as an assassin to remain both undetected and unheard. Upon crouching upon the frame of the door, Yuj pounced upon the unsuspecting rogue who's sole attention was upon his partner and Maqui. Bringing his right hand down, he struck a downward chop with so much force that it knocked the rogue out in a single hit. Meanwhile Yuj dropped down and performed a sweep kick to knock the genjutsu induced rogue onto the ground. Upon hitting the ground, the genjutsu broke, Maqui leaping upwards and breaking through the window as he landed safely inside while Yuj held a kunai to the rogue's throat to prevent him from escape. "I love it when a plan comes together bro," exclaimed Yuj as Maqui began to tie up the two rogues.
Maqui dispelled his phantoms, since they were no longer needed and gathered the information that they had in turn gathered. Several animals had made their homes around the shack, one of the phantoms had witnessed a squirrel scrounging for food upon the forest grounds. As he tied and bound the two rogues, Yuj couldn't help but notice that his brother was still smiling at their accomplished mission. He could sense that his brother was rather upset with the fact that they had to be taken in alive rather than dead. Afterall, Maqui took after his mother...they say that he is the second coming of the Smiling Demon of the Mist.
(I'm sorry for the rushed post, I was pressed for time and I wanted to get this done today. I hope that it is at least satisfactory)
Reddo Ichimei Kyouyou Bakemon (Red Life Force Phantom) - A technique where the person creates Red Chakra Particles using the Reddo Itten Ekusutenshon Giryou jutsu, and makes phantom-like clones. These red phantom clones emanate life-force and chakra, hide the user's chakra and fool the Byakugan/Sharingan/Rinnegan. These clones have all of the abilities of a shadow clone (Such as transfering information between clones and the user) and two solid hits will destroy the clone.
Rank - C
Hyoukai Nikutai no Jutsu (Melting Flesh Skill)
Description: Upon watching the user form the necessary hand seals, the victim will see many chains suddenly surround and bind him to the ground, upright. Slowly, he will feel the flesh on his bones melt and drip to the floor, all over, on his limbs and torso and face. There is a great deal of illusionary pain involved, of course… Even after the effects are over, the victim feels compelled to pat himself, just to make sure he isn’t really melting.
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