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I thought it was unfair too but I wasn't gonna dispute it. xD
But I thought of it like.... A bloodline is something you could have at random no matter where you lived and stuff, but then a clan would be like the akimichi clan, where its not a bloodline, they just use a specified jutsu unique to them. xD
So yeah...

Nah keep it a set number. it's completely fine as is. I will state that pretty much everything in the Chakra System subforum should just be wiped. a good 70% only applies to PoTS and not here.

"Come back!" Jadoru shouted to the retreating sillouette, but the man didn't stop. He never stopped. Jadoru wasn't positive that it was a man, but the figure looked masculine from the back. And no matter how much he ran or how fast he was, Jad was never able to catch up with him. Although there was something different about this dream. Instead of a blank exspance of nothingness, this time he appeared to be surrounded by large, spindly white objects.

As he noticed the white mystery objects, he suddenly ran int one. He stumbled, the mystery man forgotten as he investigated what was in front of him. If he didn't know any better he'd think it was a bone. In fact,that exactly what it was. A bone. In fact, he was - indeed - standing inside of an entire forest composed of bones!

Jadoru awoke with a start, feeling as if he had discovered something important. Something involving his dream, but the memory was quickly fading. Jadoru sighed and shrugged it off, headig outside. As he left his home, Jad looked towards the nearby forest. Forest...this gave way to a faded memory of his dream. Bones. An entire forest composed of spindly, sharp bones.

Just as quickly as the image ppeared in his mind, it faded away. Jadoru shook his head to clear it as he headed to the library where he had found the information on the Shikutsomyaku bloodline of the Haguya Clan. HIS bloodline and clan. As far as he'd research about them, they specialized solely on Bone Jutsu and bone manipulation. But Jadoru hadn't been able to use any of the Jutsu that he'd read about.

As he took a shortcut through the woods, Jadoru noticed that someone seemed to be following him. He turned to encounter the surpising addition to his near daily routine. He figured that the mystery perso was just curious about what he was doing, so it really surprised him when he was nearly hit by a kunai knife. "What the hell?"

Stopping and turning, Jadoru confronted the enemy in front of him, waiting for him to make his move. And he did, pulling out a ninja sword - ninjato - and taking a swing for the quick kill. Jadoru pulled his head back as a ninjato was swung toward his exposed neck. He slipped, though, and ended up sprawled on his back, staring at his attacker as he held the blade, plunging it toward his exposed chest with deadly intent. Seems like this is the end...Just never thought it would happen like this...Looks like I'll see you sooner than I thought Mom... Jad closed his eyes in expectation for the death blow.

...

But it never came. Jad opened his eyes slowly and instead of seeing a sword sticking out of his body, a spider-web of bones potruded from his chest, stopping the blades' fatal drop by mere inches. As he quickly spun away from his assailant, the blade was taken with him, the blade breaking and both peices spinning off into the underbrush of the forest. He experimentally touched the bone, and it felt as hard as the sword it had stopped and snapped, but it also felt natural to him. As natural as breathing. The area around the protruding bones seemed unharmed, if a little strange to look at. He realized, n a flash, that this must be what the scrolls had described as the first stage, Manipulation. With a smirk on his face, Jad turned towards his opponent as the bones slowly slid back into nonexistence, a rippling sensation coursing along his skin.
Jadoru noted that another bone had grown out of his shoulder that hadn't melded back into his skin. He stared at it in wonder and he gave it an experimental tug. It gave way easily, coming out as a razor-sharp bone blade the length of a standard Ninja's sword. He held it, astounded at it's ightweight yet durable composition as he pointed the newly formed blade at his next victim. "This...is going to be interesting." He said a second before going after his opponent.

701 words.
Will accept position as Chunin or Genin in any village.

Hmm...lots of cookies? Well...although that does sound appealing, unfortunately I do not havethe time nor the creative attention span to come up with the required number of words. Besdes, Chunin would be good enough for me since that would make me the head of the Shikotsumyaku bloodline and therefore master of all the abilities.
Or at least...I think that's all that's required to be the head of a bloodline. Or wold it be more than that?

I dunno Nerd, it's a good sample, but I wouldn't run out and scream KAGE for it. It's plenty good for chuunin, possibly jounin even though. He needs to pick what village he's applying for though, before a final decision can be made.

holy crap, its hinote. i feel like i'm seeing a ghost eek

well, his sample did have a few mistakes and junk, but i gotta say it was pretty good. above average, if you ask me. idk. if you disagree, fine. but i think he'd be fine as a kage.

Ace: well, depending on what hinote says, if you do become Tsuchikage, then you choose to learn every jutsu of a specific element and 30 other jutsus. however, if you are gonna be a jounin or chuunin, then the number will change.

http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=19893541

go to this link and look up auto rank section. all the info should be there.

also, the stats info is located here

]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=19945851

Well, if he's going for a kage position, he'll need two main things. One, the approval of the vice captains. Two, a new sample, oriented mainly on the rank/position desired.

Quite honestly, this sample feels more like a bloodline sample to me. An auto rank sample should generally show how you would act in the given position.

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And what's that crack about ghosts?! I'm here, just not posting much!

And I'm back for practice. So has it been decided if I need another RP sample that would be Kage-oriented or will I just be accepted as a Chunin or Jounin, cause I'd be fine with either choice.