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 Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:49 pm
"Again, At least it's Me on top of You." He winked.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:50 pm
Burning stopped laughing and, knowing it would do nothing, flicked a burst of fire at Menace's face.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:50 pm
BurningGundam02 "PFTAHAHAHAHA!!! Do you realize how that sounded?"Burning began to laugh uncontrollably. '...Now with my disgustingly filthy mind, you'd think I would have noticed that. First Menace says something rather dodgy, and then I do!'
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:52 pm
BurningGundam02 Burning stopped laughing and, knowing it would do nothing, flicked a burst of fire at Menace's face. With a glance It was reversed back toward Burning as Drkfire. He cackled.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:54 pm
Burning ate the flame and exhaled smoke.
"Now THAT'S a spicy meatball."
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:56 pm
[ Elf shuddered slightly at the smoke ]
H-has this made me lose my appetite again?
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:58 pm
0.o
"I don't know Elf. Has it?"
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:58 pm
Elfsneef [ Elf shuddered slightly at the smoke ] H-has this made me lose my appetite again?'I guess that depends on whether you have an appetite for spicy food or not,' I remarked.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:00 pm
TakingOverMe... Elfsneef [ Elf shuddered slightly at the smoke ] H-has this made me lose my appetite again?'I guess that depends on whether you have an appetite for spicy food or not,' I remarked. He poked her gently. "Entertain me!" ((Why do you use First-person when third-person perspective is Used more widely?))
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:01 pm
No.. not.. spicy. B-but this kind of food that Burning just ate has an effect on me..
.. like the 'exxtrrrh' punch.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:04 pm
[G Corp] Menace TakingOverMe... Elfsneef [ Elf shuddered slightly at the smoke ] H-has this made me lose my appetite again?'I guess that depends on whether you have an appetite for spicy food or not,' I remarked. He poked her gently. "Entertain me!" ((Why do you use First-person when third-person perspective is Used more widely?))'Whatever happened to "please"?' I asked.
(I write like this because normally, when I do writing, it's in third person. So changing to first person is just a change for me, lol xD)
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:06 pm
[ She removed her glasses, and electricity began to come out of her eyes ]
Accckkk!
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:07 pm
TakingOverMe... [G Corp] Menace TakingOverMe... Elfsneef [ Elf shuddered slightly at the smoke ] H-has this made me lose my appetite again?'I guess that depends on whether you have an appetite for spicy food or not,' I remarked. He poked her gently. "Entertain me!" ((Why do you use First-person when third-person perspective is Used more widely?))'Whatever happened to "please"?' I asked.
(I write like this because normally, when I do writing, it's in third person. So changing to first person is just a change for me, lol xD) "Who was On top?" Menace rebuked.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:09 pm
"Ok... I usually like being sat on but this is ridiculous..."
Burning turns into blue flames and moves to a different location before turning back into himself.
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