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 Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:41 pm
Yeah Sorry Akura xP Approved!
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Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:28 am
Lols, don't worry about it XD
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Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:39 am
Rpc Name:Kilanari Komihachi
Village:Leaf
Rank:AC
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Ranmaru
What you know about the clan/bl:I know that they can locate and track others by sensing their life force. I know that they can cancel the Byakugan .And that they can use details they see to predict their opponents next move.
Rp Sample:
After getting permission from the Hokage; Kilanari walked out of the village.As she was walking out, she activated her renmaru bloodline, to see if there was anyone hiding near. As far as she could tell there were one two. Ok i can handle two. She thought to herself as she walked out. Two snow genin came out of hiding and threw 3 kunai each at her in opposite directions on both sides. Noting their hand movements, she was able to dodge then before they made contact. Then she took out some kunai herself in both and threw it at them effectively stabbing then in the gut. After that, she ran, but she did not get far, three more genin jumped around her, surrounding her at all sides. She cursed under her breath, as she did some hand signs" Fukushi no Jutsu" She called out, because of her bloodline, the jutsu was stronger then normal, while they were preoccupied with trying to see clearly.Unfortunately, one of the genin had Sharingan, and used it to negate the jutstu and break free. Another one ,who didn't have a bloodline, just tried focusing on only one thing, instead of everything,and eventually broke free."The genin with Sharingan said"You attack from behind, while i attack head on."He said then used his bloodline to see if he could see her chakra color, once spotted he startd to run in that direction.While she was running, she started to pant, using that jutsu was taking a toll on her.She looked behind her and ssaw a silhouette figure catching up, wondering how the genin got out of her genjutsu so quickly, she reacted on the first thing that popped in her head. He must have sharingan or byakugan .So she looked in his direction, and successfully cancelled his Sharingan. Since he was using her chakra colors to keep track of her movements the minute his bloodline was canceled he shook his head, and continued running in the same direction.When it was apparent that he had lost her. He stopped and ran back to where he had started. she looked around, she did not sense anything, so she continued on her way, then suddenly a kunai came at her stabbing her in the back, almost paralyzing her. She cried out in pain, as she pulled the kunai out. As soon as she cried out, some more genin approached her. She smirked as she did some hand signs and called out ●Akumu Bun'ya (Nightmare Realm)" then thought about what to make them go through."hmm how about watching every one you ever cared about die, your family, friends,heck ill even throw in people you just met,and not being able to do a thing. "She said then made it happen to them. she could hear their screams of mercy as their families were being mascaraed and they couldn't do anything to stop, they could just watch . She shook her head, then followed up with the invisibility cloak technique,since she didn't have enough energy or chakra to use the hidden skill Then she slowly disappeared from sight and made her escape.
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Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:39 pm
Rpc Name: Nomiya Yasashii
Village: Sound
Rank: Undecided
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Crystal Element
What you know about the clan/bl: By the combination of raiton and doton, this clan is able to create a new element, crystals. Don’t ask me how it works, cause I really don’t know. They are apparently able to turn basically anything into a crystal, though most of the jutsu for the clan have specific requirements as to where the crystal comes from. The bloodline user’s eyes and chakra are always the same color, and the crystal they form is the same color as their chakra. The crystal is apparently very strong against ninjutsu, but can be broken by taijutsu of sufficient power.
I think that’s about it, this clan is pretty straight forward.
Rp Sample: Following is a rather large intro segment to my sample. I didn’t intend for it to go as long as it did, but it turned out that way on it’s own.
Drip. Drip. Drip. The incessant noise had followed him ever since he found his way into this blasted place. A mission to find some mythical artifact in an almost forgotten ruin? What was the Otokage thinking when she came up with this? He should be at home, tending to his bar, but no, here he was, crawling through an ancient tunnel, searching for something that probably didn’t exist. For all he knew, this was just some big ant hill! That idea was short lived though, as he tore aside yet another massive cobweb, only to find the end of his tunnel. Pulling himself out and standing up, he couldn’t help but whistle in appreciation. The place was massive! An underground temple, seemingly coated with gold at every turn. If a merchant found this place, he could be rich beyond his wildest dreams! Yet that wasn’t what Yasashii was here for.
Picking a random direction, the young man stalked off down a corridor, it was near the middle of the big room, so he figured it was likely the right direction. After a few minutes of walking, he found himself standing on a balcony, overlooking yet another massive room. But this one was… Different. This one had what looked to be an army camp in it, complete with men moving about on the ground. Quickly ducking behind a pillar, he took a closer look. Yes, there was in fact an entire army down there. How they got in was anyone’s guess, but from the looks of it, they had to be after the same thing he was. Why the hell else would they be in this place? Oh yeah, the gold. And then things turned sour. While Yasashii was busy looking at the camp below, a patrolling guard came up behind him, and quite handily knocked him over the head, putting him out instantly.
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“-nd anything on him. No weapons or gear, just a canteen.” Yasashii awoke to the sound of someone talking nearby, and the sound of leather being hit against something. Most likely his canteen, if he could go by their words. “Then what is he doing here?!” A rough voice cut in, causing him to flinch slightly from the volume, his head still hurting from being knocked out. This would not be going into his report when he got home. A quick survey of his body revealed that he was tied down to a chair, ropes around his legs and waist to keep him from getting up, and his wrists bound together in his lap. How very convenient. Before he could do anything to remedy his situation however, he heard the rustling of fabric, and a large man entered the tent.
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Actual Sample Below.
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“Who are you, and why are you here?” The man wasted no time in barking out his question, stepping forward and standing over Yasashii in what was apparently meant to be an intimidating pose. “I was on a picnic and found a tunnel.” He mumbled back, keeping up an appearance of being groggy from just waking up. No need to let the man know what he was doing. He didn’t look like a ninja, but he had an army behind him. What was he doing you ask? Very carefully, very slowly, he was beginning to move his hands through seals. To anyone looking on, he would appear to be simply flexing his hands within the bonds, a normal enough act.
“That’s too bad for you then. We’ve found something very special here, and letting anyone get out knowing about us just can’t be done. It’s sad, but you’re going to have to disappear.” The man’s rambling kept going on for quite a while after that, but Yasashii had given up on listening, focusing instead on his jutsu. Just as the man seemed to have stopped talking, and probably given up all the various secrets of his evil plan, he was done. The man turned and was apparently getting ready to call for guards to remove him, but he moved faster. With the seals completed, he whispered one word, “Blade.”, started the jutsu, and a silver film began to crawl up his right arm from the wrist to the elbow, extending out suddenly, into a razor blade running up his arm. The ropes on his wrists and arms were shredded in an instant by the formation of the blade, and the right front leg of the chair followed an instant later as Yasashii lurched to his feet. To deal with the remaining parts of the chair still connected to his right leg, he swung his entire body around, sending his left leg, chair and all, directly into the by now rather stunned man’s face. The man crashed to the floor unconscious instantly, covered in debris from the chair.
Not that that did Yasa much good however, because already he could hear people outside coming closer, to find out what the noise was about. It would be beyond bad if he was caught in the tent, so he dashed outside, his arm mounted blade conveniently slashing through the door guard as he passed, only to find himself in the direct center of the camp. With an entire army surrounding him. “Well, crap.”
Luckily, the soldiers were still a good distance away, and just as stunned as he was himself, giving him time to run through another set of hand seals. “Spikes!” He called out once the seals were completed, slamming his hands onto the ground in front of him. Several feet forward, long silver spikes of crystal began erupting from the ground one at a time, each further away than the last, plowing straight into the center of the enemy force and impaling several unlucky souls, while other managed to avoid the piercing gems. By this time, the soldiers to Yasashii’s sides had gathered their wits and begun to charge, albeit very slowly to the ninja’s trained senses. The young man charged forward himself, directly into the small forest of crystal spikes and leapt into the air, running through yet another series of hand signs, even as he began to spin in midair. “Legs!” The one word jutsu call rang out once more, as the same crystalline silver began to form upon his legs, wrapping the limbs entirely in the shining stone. With his legs encased in the strong crystal, he continued his aerial spin, throwing his legs outwards in a wide propeller like kick, smashing straight through the tops of the spikes he had formed earlier and creating a rain of shattered crystal pieces, which flew out into the oncoming attackers. It was more a hindrance than anything to most, while some found themselves hit with larger chunks of the broken pieces, doing rather serious damage. One even found himself impaled by the entire top of one spike, which held most of it’s form during the collapse.
Yasashii, using the rain of crystal as his cover, and they crystal on his legs having shattered along with the spikes, darted off as quickly as he could, putting as much distance between himself and the by now very angry army as he could.
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I can add more to this, most likely with him running into the elites of this mysterious army, who would be ninjas, in order to show a few of the other aspects of the crystals a bit more clearly. But this has been sitting here for quite awhile, and I wanted to see if it would do as is.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:47 pm
(( really Hinote, your gonna take my chance to be clan head!... Well... if you are chunnin +... I got a new teacher! If not, new competition! ))
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Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 1:29 pm
Martin Spiralwave Rpc Name: Tenno Village: Iwagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Aburame Clan What you know about the clan/bl: The Aburame clan is a clan known for their use of insects as weapons. The insects live in symbiosis within the body of the shinobi. At birth, members of this clan are offered to a special breed of insects called kikaichū as a nest, residing just under their host's skin. The insects can leave and enter through various pores. They feed on chakra as a food source, making them quite deadly. The relationship between the shinobi and the insects is mutually beneficial. The host grants the bugs shelter and allows them to feed off their chakra, their body becoming a living hive of tens of thousands of these bugs, and in return the bugs do the user's bidding, allowing the shinobi to perform ninjutsu-like techniques without the use of hand seals or chakra conversion. A female bug can be left on a target, which then can be tracked by smell by the male bug, or scout bugs can be sent out and return to tell the host information about the area. For this reason, Aburame clan members are experts in espionage; they can communicate with the bugs, and the bugs specialize in stealth because they make no noise or motion during combat. It has also been shown that they possess the ability to control other bugs and insects such as worms Rp Sample: The skulls of two puppets levitated some eight meters in the air, obscured and protected by a faintly buzzing cloud of a dark substance. From the mouths of these skulls were a series of chakra strings that manipulated the bodies of four individual puppets each. The puppeteer himself was sensibly out of sight but the three escaping convicts were far more concerned with the eight puppets that set upon them only eight miles from the prison. At first, when one ninja launched a stream of intense flames from his lips, the convicts believed most of the puppets had gone up in flames but they were surprised when three of the puppets strode through the flames, unaffected, while the other five encased themselves in a rapidly vibrating layer of some shadowy substance. Whatever the substance was, it filled the area with faintly detectable buzzing. Tenno Aburame skillfully manipulated the three strigs attached to his hands, utilizing the two pupeteer artifacts to double the aount of puppets he could control at one time. At the same time he was using one of his dozens of evolved kikaichu to relay mental commands to each squadron of the insects kept in every single one of hi modified puppets. With their porous outer material specially designed to subtly secrete poisons and the kikaichu, Tenno was able to use his Clan techniques in conjunction with Kugetsu in order to immobilize his opponents. His skill with creating Human-Chakra Puppets came in handy at these times, allowing him to use the corpses of former Aburame and utilize their special bugs in conjunction with his own. Intent on quickly finishing the battle Tenno attaced a full set of chakra strings to the levitating skulls and relayed orders to his squadrons of kikaichu. As the flames roared arund the three Aburame Puppets, Tenno began weaving his arms in wide arcs before thrusting the limbs forward. The fourth Aburame Puppet joined the three just outside the ring of fire and took its place behind them. It formed a brief series of handseals and fell to its knees while the other three released the bugs from the multiple hives inserted into their bodies. "Secret Technique: Black Plague Nest," The leading Puppet flew towards the thre convicts, supported by invisible strings of chakra. One arm pointed at the nearest convict a dark purple bugs burst from the puppets palms, completely wrapping around the victim. As they landed o nexposed flesh the kikaichu burrowed into the convicts skin while h thrashed in pain. The poisonous barbs on their body would rupture blood vessels until the bugs converged around his vital organs, chewing through tissue and flesh to create a temporary nest in the body. The rear most Aburame was jerked upwards one of the convicts, a former Taijutsu Speciliast, closd the gap between the two of them in record speed. Now in the midst of two puppets the taijutsu speaclist ducked as two feet lengths of steel sprung from a hidden sheath in the puppets arms and arced towards his body. "Insect Pillar," ordered Tenno from his perch within a tree one hundred meters away from the battle. Thick poles of insects swarmed from the puppets sleeves, crashing against each other and spraying the insects in a wide arc that landed on the convicts body and began t consume his chakra. Spinning on a toe the convicts dislodged most of the bugs but by this time the two Puppets fired explosive canisters at his body. The nerve agent took quick effect and the convict was one the ground with seconds. Aware the third vonvict had left his sight Tenno recalled all of his puppets to the tree he was perched in. As the landed on adjacent tree branches the Aburame Clan Head dispelled most of his Aburame puppets after they recalled their kikaichu. He sent the remaining Aburame to locate the convict while he kept two normal puppets near his body for additional protection. Just as he sent the Aburame Puppet away he watched an arc of blue chakra crashed into its back and tore a gaping hole into its body. Tenno retracted the chakra strings from the damaged puppet and used his special kikaichu to bring the bugs encased in the puppets body to his side. "At first ittook me a while to find you but this handy Byakugan madde it easier kekeke," The strained voice came from behind his body, forcing Tenno to leap onto a higher branch and tug his two puppets with him. The third vonvict wore headgear when he escaped but Tenno could clearly see it had been taen off. Now a series of wires and metal implants around his left eye led to a device at the back of his neck. The left eye side of his face was absolutely covere in veins that funneled startling amounts of chakra into the transplanted Byakugan eye. Tenno could already tell that if he countinued using his puppets it would be much harder to win the battle, especially since the ninja before him was in his mid-twenties and thus an entire decade younger than him. He detatched the chakra strings and dispelled his puppets in large plumes of smoke. "I was ordered to bring a single convict alive and kill the other two but if nessecary i am able to exert lethal force," Tenno spread his legs on the tree branch and crouched as the convict slid into the classic Juken stance. Unbeknownst to the convict, multiple kikaichu were converging on th area. Tey arrived in small indetectable units instead of visible squadrons. Tenno's personal favorite insects eased their way over his skin, completely invisible due to their microscopic size. He allowed another faovrite type of kikaichu to leave his body in multiple squadrons that hung in the air around him like a cloud. The convict launched a large pulse of chakra towards Tenno but he simply tooka step backwards and landed on a branch below. He leapt forward to grasp another branch and swung onto an entirely different tree as a series of chakra blasts blew through the banches. The stoic Aburame easily navigated the forest until he reached the forest floor where a heavy thud alerted him to the convicts arrival. As a beam of chakra erupted from the convicts palms Tenno allowed the kikaichu squadrons to converge on the beam. For a single second they were carried along with the beam towards their master but they swiftly dispeersed after consuming the available chakra. Tenno enjoyed the surprise on the convicts face before extended both arms as another barrage of chakra were launched in his direction. "Secret Technique: Hungry Insect Wall," His kikaichu formed a tall black sheet of defence against the chakra lblasts, glowing with blue energy as they consumed the convicts chakra. Tenno manipulated the bugs in a wall around the convict then formed a dome tht quickly constricted to cover the ninja in a thick layer of chakra-consuming Kikaichu. "Crushing Insect Dome Pillar," The dome flexed into a tall pillar that propelled the convict into the air before flowing over aroud his body and spiraling downwards in a long trail of insects. The entire time his chakra was being consumed by the insects. Once he judging them time to be right Tenno sent four squadrons of bugs from his sleeve to intercept the convict encased i nthe descending pillar of insects. The four squadrons pinned the ninja to a tree but where asted away as he suddenly released arrows of chakra from his body. Of course Tenno knew this would happen and manipulated the pre-planted bugs outside of the attack range to spiral into large fists that slammed the ninja back into another tree. "Master Technique: Poisonous Nano-Bug Spiral," Originally the nano-bugs were unable to surive away from skin and were incapable of flight but after a few years cultivatig and evolving the insects they were capable of crossing brief istances at high speeds. Two spiraling lengths of insects rose from Tenno's clothing and landed on the convicts body. Afterwards Tenno watched as they began eating away his flesh and tissue at accelerated levels. Within ten minutes loose and tatttered clothing clung to the well picked skeleton of the vonvict. His left eye was preserved in a jar for future study and the apparatus that allowed him to utilize the doujutsu was kept in the pouch slung over his shoulder. Uninterested in salvaging his destroyed puppet the Aburame Clan Head performed a single handsea as he left he forest. Befre he was able to take more than ten leaps a single pillar of fire tore past the tree tops, erasing the puppets remain and leaving a large scroc mrk on the ground.
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:54 pm
Username: Hark How The Angels Sing
Rpc Name: Alkaid Icolo
Rank: Academy
Village: Konohagakure
Bloodline Applied For: Tendril Threading
What You Know: Well the user can make their body like a ragdoll by covering themselves with tendrils and even use tendrils as weapons or repair wounds. They can store multiple hearts within themselves. The hearts have the elemental affinity of the person it was taken out of and gives the user of this Bloodline that elemental affinity.
Rp Sample
Alkaid had recently become a Chuunin and was on an assassination mission. She was to go out and kill a group of bandits led by an ex-Leaf Shinobi. The shinobi was probably near the same rank and wouldn't be too much of a hassle to fight. Alkaid was now nearing the camp. As usual, Alkaid jumps into the air above the camp and drops down in the center without thinking. A good seven bandits stood around looking at her. "What the ********> one of them muttered. Alkaid smirked and looked at him. "Haha!! You must not know me?! I am the Fiery Beauty of the Leaf! I am Alkaid Icolo! And I am also your worst nightmare!" A bandit immediately punched her in the face, knocking her down into the dirt. "Shut the ******** up! I don't who you are, but you're about to die!" Alkaid quickly got back up. "Wanna try that again, punk?" The bandit quickly threw another punch at her, but his hand hit Alkaid's face and stopped. Alkaid didn't move an inch. Quickly, the man pulled back. <********!! I broke my knuckles!" The man's fingers completely snapped. But how? A closer look at Alkaid will show that her body had turned almost black and was crawling with tendrils. It then began to revert back to normal as the tendrils seeped back into her body through opening across her skin. "Dumbass! I can make my body as hard as stone! That won't do anything to me! NOW DIE!"
Alkaid lunged out and unsheathed one of her twin swords and sliced through the man's throat, lopping off his head. She turned to all of the other bandits and laughed. "So who wants to try to fight me!?" she yelled out at them. Three of the remaining six bandits charged her, each carrying a simple blade. The first lunged straight at her, the second jumped up and attacked from above, while the last one came around the side and attempted to cleave her torso. Every attempt failed. Alkaid's body hardened with the tendrils and every blade broke upon contact with her skin. Suddenly, tentacles shot out from her body and grabbed the bandits. "What the ********!? What is this!?" one of them screamed as the tentacles wrapped all three of them up. The three that were watching ran off to find their leader elsewhere as this happened.
"Looks like this is gonna get interesting!" Alkaid yelled as her tendrils crushed the bodies of the bandits. The rest of them showed up with another man that wore a fur overcoat, black tank top, jeans, and a headband. His hair was a golden blonde and was spiked. On his back was a katana and he had some ninja tolls with him as well. He was obviously prepared. "Looks like you've taken out most of my men already. I'll have to teach you a lesson." The man suddenly lashed out and drew the katana, slicing at her throat. It stopped dead on her throat as her skin became hardened. Alkaid's eyes glared with sadistic tendencies as her mouth opened tendrils crawled out and wrapped around the man's arm. "Damn! What is this stuff!" he screamed as he then managed to cut Alkaid. Her arm was bleeding badly, but that would barely do anything to her. "Looks like I got myself a little scratch. I'll just have to fix that right up." she said as she then sent tendrils through the wound and sewed it up. Alkaid then quickly closed in on the man, hitting him in the stomach with a vicious kick. She then quickly tied him up with tendrils. Alkaid approached him and held up her hand. "I'll be taking that heart of your nows." she said cheerfully and she plunged her arm into his chest, ripping out the beating blob of bloody muscle tissue. "It's mine now!" This would be the first heart that she had collected for her powers. She opened up a hole in her chest and tendrils grabbed the heart and pulled it inside of her.
Alkaid turned to look at the other bandits. "Looks like your boss had the Earth Element. This will be fun to use!" she said as she performed a few handsigns. "Earth Style: Earth Spear Jutsu!" Alkaid used a new jutsu from her new heart to send a spear through the stomach of one of the bandits. Quickly, the last two ran away. Alkaid hurried after them. All you could hear soon after was two blood-curdling screams.
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 1:12 pm
I'm reading these over right now. Akura, please don't post here if it has nothing to do with your own post, just so we don't clutter. I'll edit this as I go, so check this every now and then to see if you're on it.
Allegra: Denied. You pretty much only used the name of the jutsu, and a two word description. Try to show the effects of the ones you used. You didn't show any drawbacks fer the second tech as well. Try and use as much of the genjutsu as you can, such as how would one get out of the genjutsu, or what you can to do the sharingan and what not.
Hinote: Denied. I'd like you to show a bit more of how the Crystals can be conquered. Also, more use of the crystalization.
Martin: Apprived. You literally just copied pieces of the description, and copied them, no time to paraphrase?
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:37 pm
I mean the clan is pretty straightforward and simple. They harbor jundreds of thousands of chakara-eating insects. Not much else to say xp
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:40 pm
Hmmm... Crystallization meaning the formation of the crystals? I'll go ahead and work on the second half of the sample then. Expect it in a few days most likely. I don't exactly go quick on those for some reason...
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:47 pm
Rpc Name: Robin
Village: Mist
Rank: Saanin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara
What you know about the clan/bl: It gives Nara clan members the ability to manipulate shadows. The main ability of this clan is the shadow imitation jutsu, a jutsu in which uses the user's shadow in order to bind another by touching their shadow. The shadow can only extend via the surface area, but can use object's shadows to extend itself further. Chakra is used for every post this jutsu is held, and if held on for too long, chakra is depleted and the opponent is let free.
Rp Sample:
As Luo entered his office, he found himself rubbing on his temple with his fore fingers, stopping before the window that overlooked his entire village. The secretary following behind him closely had just given him dire news...an enemy shinobi had managed to infiltrate the Mist Village and steal precious scrolls from the Kiri Archives. How they got in, Luo has no idea...believing it to be an inside job. "Lord Mizukage, have you even been listening to a word I've said? What is the next course of action?" the secretary exclaimed as she waited for the Mizukage's response. Folding his arms across his chest, Luo turned back to her. The secretary took a step back, surprised to see the grim expression on his face as she was held in suspense. "Send Robin..." Luo stated grimly as he turned back around and sat on his desk, taking a deep sigh. He had to send his best hunter out, otherwise the scrolls could fall into the wrong hands.
A lone shinobi dashed through the forests of Fire Country, she wore a black cloack that shielded her entire body, a single white mask donned on her face. The sun was flaring in the sky above, and the hunter was finally closing in on her prey. Her superiors suspected foul play from the Leaf Village, and it seems the information was correct. According to passerbys that she had run into during her travels, they had indeed spotted a single shinobi from Water Country traveling this way. The hunter stood atop of a branch, looking down upon a creek as a single man was filling up his canteen. He wore a leaf headband, and a rather large pack...but most importantly, he was by himself. To be able to sneak into a village undetected, a large group would have been to noticable. Robin etched closer to him, being a hunter it was rather easy to get near him without uttering a sound.
Just when the man turned around, Robin performed a single seal, her shadow suddenly jumping forward as it latched unto his. Shadow imitation completed. Robin lifted her right hand, and so did the ninja, who at this point was suprised to have been trapped by a Nara Clan member. The Nara clan was originally a clan in the Leaf Village, but to this day, Robin has no recollection of ever living there. All she's ever known was darkness, shadows, death and pain. Robin reached behind her, not grabbing anything in particular, but the shinobi did. Robin forced the shinobi to put down the pack and began ruffling through it, seeing if this was the man she was looking for. Sure enough, she found several scrolls with the Mist insignia on it. Looking back at him from behind her mask, Robin's shadow began lurching up his legs.
She had kept the shadow imitation for too long, but she had just enough time to finish him. The man began shrieking as the shadows continued moving upwards, grabbing at his entire body, applying immense pressure on it. The shadows finally reached his neck, taking the shape of hands as they began choking him, stopping his shrieks as he gasped for air. It was a very painful and slow death...suffocation. The shadows returned to her, while the body simply fell limp on the ground. Gathering the body, as well as all of the shinobi's belongings, Robin turned and began heading back home.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:01 pm
Rpc Name: Ginshiro Kaguya
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Shikotsumyaku
What you know about the clan/bloodline: People with Shikosumyaku can manipulates their bones by infusing their calcium with chakra. They control their Osteoblasts and Osteoclasts to create new bones or alter already existing bones and can alter the density of their bones to be harder than steel.
Rp Sample: Gin raced through the forest of Otogakure chasing a shinobi who stole several important scrolls. As Gin started to catch up to the thief, several shuriken flew at him. Gin managed to dodge most of the shuriken a few managed to slightly make a few light cuts on his arm and face. As he stopped in a clearing he was surrounded by the thief and several other shinobi. ”It’s sad that you need help from other to fight me….” Ginshiro said with an emotionless look on his face, his wounds starting to heal. ”Shut up, you’re the one who’s dead so shut up and die!” the thief said as he pointed at Ginshiro as the 4 other shinobi charged at him. A small smile spread on Ginshiro’s face as the enemy shinobi closed in. ” Dance of the Pines!” Gin yelled as several long bone spikes protruded from all over his body knocking the shinobi back from him. ”it will take a lot more than that to kill me…” Ginshiro said as the bones receded back into his body. ”Second Dance, Dance of the Camellia...” he said as a bone sword made from his humerus protruded from his hand. ”I really don’t have time for weaklings like you, so I’m going to finish this quickly.” Ginshiro said, charging towards the thief. ”Weaklings? I’ll make you regret those words!” the thief said as he made a handsign and exhaled a large cloud of mist the covered the field. Ginshiro stopped in his tracks as he looked around. ”Trying to cut off my vision, what a cowardly tactic…” Ginshiro said with distaste, he hated when his enemy tried to hide from him and not face him head on. Suddenly a cut appeared on Gin’s cheek, but he didn’t see anything coming at him. “Where did that come from?!” he said looking around as shadows in the mist appeared around him. ”Reinforcements?” he said again as bones formed in his finger tips and then launched them at one of the shadows. As the bullets made contact the shadow disappeared and the reappeared again as more cuts appeared on his body. As the wounds started to heal Ginshiro stopped and thought, how did reinforcements get her so fast? Why did the target he hit get back up? He came to one simple conclusion. ”Genjutsu….” he said lightly. ”That’s Right!” the thief’s voice echoed in the mist. ”And the only way you’re getting out is by dying.” the thief said again as deeper cuts appeared on Gin’s body. ”That’s not going to happen… All I need to do is kill you and this Genjutsu mist will be dispelled.” Gin said as his wounds continued to heal. ”Hahahahaha, Like you will ever find me!” the thief said with a laugh. ”Then I’ll just kill everything around me then….” Ginshiro said, making a handsign as he concentrated. ”We won’t give you a chance!” he said as hundreds of shuriken appeared in the air around Gin and launched at him. Ginshiro didn’t move as the shuriken made contact with Gin but only made t skin deep before bouncing off him. ”What?! How did you do that.” the thief said. ”I can manipulate and create my bones and skeletal structure… So I created a membrane of bone under my skin.” Gin said with a smile. ”Now allow me to show you the Final dance of the Kaguya clan.” Gin said as he placed his hands on the ground. ”Dance of the Early Bracken.” Gin yelled as large bone spike formed and shoot up out of the ground around him. The spikes sprung up from the ground like newly bloomed trees, multiplying and branching out like a forest of bone. The trees of bone continued to spread outward with great speed as the thief released the Genjutsu. ”Run you idiots!” he yelled to his men ahs he turned and ran. His men turned to run but it was too late as the shinobi were skewered, the bone spikes perforated the shinobi like pin cushions. As the thief ran for his life, the bone spikes hot on his trail they started to slow down and then stop. The thief stopped, catching his breath as he looked at the thousands of bones that sprung from the ground. ”Damn Kaguya brat…” he said trying to catch his breath. ”I dislike the word brat…” Ginshiro’s voice said behind him. The thief instinctively grabs a kunai from his holster and swung it behind him hitting Gin it the chest. But in a puff of smoke it he was replaced with a log. ”A Substitution?!” the thief said looking around for Gin. ”dance of the Steel Wire Flower..” Gin’s voice said above the thief. As the thief looked up to where Ginshiro’s voice had come from he saw him, fused into one of the bone spikes pulling out his spine like it was a sword. Before the thief could react Ginshiro swung his spine sword at the thief, wrapping around him and puncturing his skin with its spikes. The thief screamed as the spike of Gin’s spine hit him as he was immobilized by the sword. ”Damn you, you b*****d!” the thief screamed as Ginshiro stepped out of the bone spike. ”This is what you get for stealing from Otogakure…. Now the finishing blow, First dance, Dance of the Willows” Gin said as a bone lance protruded from his hand. Gin pulled on the spine sword, pulling the thief towards him and into his bone lance stabbing him through the heart. After killing the thief Ginshiro searched the thief and found the scrolls that he had stolen from Otogakure. With his mission complete he returned to the village, leaving nothing but a trail of death and bones behind him.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 4:47 pm
Rpc Name: Kai Funkazan
Village: Konoha
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Pin Point
What you know about the clan/bl: They are a mercenary clan that was abolished 70 years ago. Its members were masters of weapons, and were better than other shinobi in anything to do with them. The users of the bloodline also threw faster and were more accurate. But the most powerful ability they had was to be able to place their seal on a weapon, allowing them to control it with their mind. They could even use elemental seals. The down fall is that the user has to look at and touch the weapon for five seconds in which they lose track of their surroundings.
Rp Sample:
Kai sighed. This mission was getting monotonous. He had to travel all the way to some random town in the fire country, and it turns out the guy he had to take out was this poser swordsman? The man was yelling some taunts at him, and he was zoning out. They were in a musty alleyway, and there was little light for them to fight in. But it didn’t bother Kai too much, who was wearing a hooded cloak with extra-long sleeves, to encase his bloodline. Then, he was snapped back to reality as a loud war cry and the sound of rapid footsteps broke the silence. The man had screamed, and was beginning a vertical slash with a highland claymore. Kai took a step back, and fluently unsheathed a simple katana from hiding in his sleeve and parried the blow, using a side kick to land a solid blow in the man’s side, pushing him back. The two began to fight, and while the man was a decent swordsman, he was no match for this shinobi, especially one of the pin point bloodline. The boy became a whirling dervish of blade and cloak, his blade partially hidden by the darkness of the alleyway. With each step forward that Kai took, his attack intensified. The other man’s face turned red in frustration that he was not gaining any ground.
To try and even out the playing field again, the man took a large leap backwards, to try and gain some distance. As this happened, Kai took the chance to try and win this fight. With a flick of his other arm, two kunai flew out. They were abnormally fast, with a huge amount of power behind it. The two kunai were dead on accurate, a sign of his pin point bloodline. The first on hit the foe’s clothing, causing him to go flying back into the wall, which was not far away due to the fight being in an alley, and the pinning him to the wall. At the same time, the second one hit his hand, causing the claymore to fly out, and the man to clutch his hand in pain. As he began to pull the kunai out if his hand, Kai took the claymore and got to work. For the shinobi, everything went black as he looked at the weapon, then an odd seal was placed on it. Kai smirked as he stepped forward, the claymore floating next to him. The man was up, the kunai removed. His face went pale as Kai approached him. “W-what are you?” The blade flew at the man, its own user, and all that was heard was horrified screaming from the battle scene.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:51 pm
As I go along and read these, I'll update this post alright? Check here now and again to see if I got to you.
{This is like my tentacle nightmare coming to life x.x'}
Harky: Approved Denied
-Can you show me what you know about it a bit more.
~RP SAMPLE OVERVIEW~
- You didn't really show me how you can use hearts that you've earned...and that makes up alot of the BL. Nor the whole sewing things up. Please try and use more of the stuff available to you.
Robin: Approved! Good sample =)
Sinner: Denied
-There's a bit more specifics than they can just manipulate their bones. How so?
~RP SAMPLE REVIEW~
-You never once showed any weaknesses. Try and expand it a bit, going into detail with the techniques you used
Mondude: Denied
Could you use more of the bloodline itself? I only saw two things, which was the accuracy and the speed.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:08 pm
Rpc Name: Dr. Rachel Richtofen
Village: Konaha
Rank: Academy Sutdent
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mind's Eye of the Kagura
What you know about the clan/bl: Well this bloodline allows you to sense were people are and you can suppress your own chakra to were you are hard to find. The person body has a weird heal factor that when someone bits into there body they get healed.
Rp Sample:
Rachel walked in to the hospital and see her friends standing around talking. As she want up to talk to them a injured ninja walked in to the lobby of the hospital. He had a scratch on his left arm along with a hair line fraction on his right arm. Rachel smiled as she walked up to the ninja and pulled up her sleeve and had the injured ninja bit her arm. She winced in pain as he dug deeper in to her. She smiled as he finally let go. "Feel better" she asked. He then nodded and walked out of the hospital. A ANBU then came by and dropped a note on the counter by Rachel. She picked it up and read it. She turned to the Hospital "Get ready for a Rush there is a is an attack at the gates and it is bad." She said as he turned to the door and ran out to head to the gates and look at the damage. She smiled as then suppressed her chakra in case there was enemys near the area. She walked up to the gates which were broken down. "well they may be gone" but she did don't let the chakra run wild in case back up came in. She looked around as she walked up to the nearest nearest konaha ninja. "What is wrong" she asked as she looked at him from head to toe the only thing she could see was the cuts. "It that all" she as as she held out her arm for the ninja to bit it. She looked around as she began to sense enemy ninjas coming in. She looked around and seen a ninjas radio set. She pick up the radio "Enemys coming in at the Main gates Again" she said as she grabbed a ninja that looked the most hurt and she took him to the hospital to be healed.
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