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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 9:58 pm
there isn't.....otherwise i would of used like half of them if there was any... [ya ya]
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:00 pm
HetaliaRULZ: I only saw you use one technique from this bloodline, and it wasn't even the technique's signature move (The Imitation beast technique)
...please include more examples of how you would use the bloodline and try to use more techniques to show you know how to use everything properly.
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:03 pm
little mintchan there isn't.....otherwise i would of used like half of them if there was any... [ya ya] that will be changing soon. Please wait for Gregar to redo the bloodline and then re-apply with the jutsu I provided him.
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:06 pm
k if it's the justu from VR's suigestu bloodline then i can just fix it now
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:12 pm
little mintchan k if it's the justu from VR's suigestu bloodline then i can just fix it now It tis. You may use it as a BAse. (its also TUPs)
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:14 pm
Would it be wrong of me to make an application for that clan just because someone else is having trouble with it?
I was actually thinking of using it for my second RPC anyways, cause it'd be a useful one in Sound.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:15 pm
Angelus: Normally, i would ask that you show more jutsu usage beyond just ONE jutsu, but with the Irezumi clan, all of it is going to look the same really. jsut make sure you track your tattoo costs properly when RPing and I don't foresee any issues.
...so APPROVED!
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:16 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Would it be wrong of me to make an application for that clan just because someone else is having trouble with it? I was actually thinking of using it for my second RPC anyways, cause it'd be a useful one in Sound. No. You can make an application for any clan you like. (Trust me, I have the same urge to do so myself all the time)
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:18 pm
Changes have been made to the Suigetsu Kekkei Genkai, and not just in new jutsus. Also cobra, I changed the last jutsu to requiring an actial water source, rather than taking water from the ground.
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:49 pm
Orchid Moon Rpc Name: Kirina Irezumi Village: Iwagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Irezumi Clan What you know about the clan/bl: (Everything since I made it) Irezumi Clan is a clan of tattooist who traveled the 5 great nations, once the first war broke out they developed a way to infuse their Chakra into the ink allowing them to use tattoo jutsus. Tattoo jutsus require no chakra to use but use charges. Cant be auto ranked. You get to self teach your clan jutsus. ect ect ect.. Rp Sample: Kirina let out a long sigh as she hid behind a large tree, she had recently stumbled upon a squad of enemy ninja and was currently out numbered. Sure she was Iwa's Saanin but she was not stupid and didn't ever like to underestimate people. "Hmm there's four.. one has to be a Jounin.. the others could be Gennin or anything higher..Dam.." Kirina who was bad at Ninjutsu and Genjutsu but good at Taijutsu had a ace up her sleeve when it came to fighting, her clan jutsus were both secrete and unknown to most of the world. Suddenly with out warning a large amount of shuriken landed around her and hit the tree behind her and with that she instantly ran off through the forest with the squad of ninja behind her. "Ah.. this is annoying.. I don't think ill kill them.. just scare them off or knock them out.. I really need to get back to my student.." While she continued to run and without giving second thought she quickly ran through a set out hand signs and spoke softly, "Tattoo Style: Dragon Power". After doing so the Dragon tattoo on her stomach came to life and crawled its way off of her before enlarging to twice the size of her. The dragon then went behind her and quickly merged with her once. With that she slid to a stop and turned around and headed straight back towards the squad who suddenly stopped because of the strange jutsu and that Kirina had suddenly changed course. "Go away or your dead!" She yelled as she neared the squad which then separated in 3 directions leaving 1 person to stay there and take on Kirina. "Your funeral.." Because of the effects that were given by her tattoo jutsu she was able to close in on the enemy much faster then how fast she was running before. " Tattoo Style: Hidden Tattoo Weapon!" She said as she formed a few hand signs before grabbing a handle that suddenly came out of her shoulder, once she had hold of the handle she pulled out a long katana. Just before Kirina was able to get within range of the lone ninja, it quickly jumped high into the air in attempt to get out of the way. Seeing this, Kirina quickly put her right foot in front of her at a slight angle to stabilize her while she now slid past where the ninja use to be. As she was sliding she quickly took aim up at the ninja before launching her katana at him, her aim was made off so that the katana would just graze him. "Dam.. Since I'm running out of charges.. lets finish this.." She said softly as she slid to a stop, almost immediately she ran through a set of hand seals before holding out both her palms in different directions. "Tattoo Style: Palm Hands!" Instantly the tattoos on the palms of her hand began to swirl before quickly forming into four hands that shot out from each palm, and with a quick glance in each of the Ninja's direction each of the tattoo hands which now had extremely long arms shot off in the direction of the enemy ninja. Since there were 8 arms and 4 enemy ninja, 2 arms went after each ninja except for one that went to grab the katana that Kirina threw. Due to the increased speed and strength given to her from the dragon tattoo the arms were stronger then normal, the first arm shot through a tree and instantly latched onto the back of the neck of one of the enemy ninja while another went around the tree quickly a few times resulting in the ninja not only getting held onto by the back of the neck but now the ninja's arms were trapped by the extremely long arm that wrapped around the ninja and the tree. "One down.." As she spoke the other arms chased after the other ninja but soon were out to far and came back to Kirina, the two arms the managed to get one of the ninja quickly broke apart the tree before pulling the ninja to Kirina. "Well.. that didn't work out perfectly as planned but I did get a hostage.." She then took a deep breath before ending the Dragon jutsu that she used earlier since it was draining her tattoo charges the longer she keep it going. Even though Kirina's palms had 4 arms coming out of them she was still able to preform hand seals which she quickly did in hopes to get the next jutsu off before the enemy came back to get their squad member. "Tattoo Style: Dragon Flight!" Once again the Dragon tattoo on her stomach came to life and quickly crawled its way off of her before enlarging to twice the size of her except this time the dragon stayed in front of her instead of merging with her again. The moment she was done with the jutsu she jumped up onto the dragons back before yelling out into the forest. "I DO NOT WANT TO HURT ANY OF YOU, PLEASE LEAVE ME ALONE!" With that said the dragon began to flat its wings and slowly fly up 10 yards into the air. Once she did the rest of the enemy squad soon appeared below, once they did Kirina ended the Palm tattoo jutsu causing the captured ninja to fall down to its squad. Without giving the enemy squad time to react, the dragon quickly took off through the sky. er i can put alot alot alot more if you want.. but im sure i know about the clan... >.>
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 3:49 am
Cobra_X Six Paths: Although you somewhat understand what this bloodline is about, from the way you've displayed the use, you haven't really lived up to the actual bloodline...
1. I believed that it was ruled that your character (though essentially 2 in 1) could not have two characters with different styles or shinobi traits. So saying one was a Taijutsu Specialist and the other a offensive ninjutsu, goes agaisnt that ruling.
2. You didn't show ANYTHING except for the two being apart. A large part of this is the fact that with two bodies in one, Ukon was able to cover Sakon's blind spots and the two of them together could perform three handed punches or three legged kicks. I didn't see ANY of that.
3. I didn't see any reference to the second body being weaker then the first or moving slower which is a key weakness of separating the bodies. Yeah I wrote before asking about the type differences. Hmm, I guess that I see now what I missed. Would I be able to reapply?
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:27 am
Six_Paths_God12 Cobra_X Six Paths: Although you somewhat understand what this bloodline is about, from the way you've displayed the use, you haven't really lived up to the actual bloodline...
1. I believed that it was ruled that your character (though essentially 2 in 1) could not have two characters with different styles or shinobi traits. So saying one was a Taijutsu Specialist and the other a offensive ninjutsu, goes agaisnt that ruling.
2. You didn't show ANYTHING except for the two being apart. A large part of this is the fact that with two bodies in one, Ukon was able to cover Sakon's blind spots and the two of them together could perform three handed punches or three legged kicks. I didn't see ANY of that.
3. I didn't see any reference to the second body being weaker then the first or moving slower which is a key weakness of separating the bodies. Yeah I wrote before asking about the type differences. Hmm, I guess that I see now what I missed. Would I be able to reapply? Yes, feel free.
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:28 am
Allegra Kori no Tamashi Rpc Name: Kilanari Komihachi Village: Leaf Rank: AC Bloodline or Clan applied for: Aburame What you know about the clan/bl:I know that at birth the aburame clan is given a clan of special bugs that go right under their nose.The host provide protection for the bugs by leading then hide in their skin,and food by letting them eat their shakra and in return, the bugs do the host bidding. Rp Sample:After getting permission for the Hokage.She went to visit one of her brother's allied villages, Mist.So while she was walking,she accidently bumped in a bandit,who decided to prey on who he thought was a young helpless little girl.So He ran and tried to attach her.She quickly dodged and to stop him from bothering her called out "Mushi Dama - Insect Sphere". Then she disperced her bugs and watched as they created a sphere around the bandit and fed on him like they were starved,then after they had finished eating burried their way back into her skin."pathetic fool, made me waste my time"She said as she continued walking. Little did she know or care to know that three more bandits have hidden themselves some where near her.So when one started to charge at her,she didn't even look but called out" Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu - Insect Clone Technique"She said as she sighed. I'm sorry but these bandits don't know when to stop,but at least you get to eat. She told her bugs then disperced them and watches as they cloned themselves, ate the bandit,decloned themselves and went back in her like they were tired of eating dirty bandit chakra. She laughed at how quickly they had done it. Then the second bandit tried to be sneaky and attack from behind but he fell and landed right behind her,she didn't feel like attacking at him,so she just walked away.
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:08 am
Gregar828 Changes have been made to the Suigetsu Kekkei Genkai, and not just in new jutsus. Also cobra, I changed the last jutsu to requiring an actial water source, rather than taking water from the ground. ok i was gonna do it before i went to bed but computer freaked out on me so let me add like one techinque this morning and i'll add more after school
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