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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:13 pm
@Kazuma: DENIED. I think I've looked at your profile before, so please change whatever I said to change before.
@Calypso: Give me a sec, I have to look back at yours. It doesnt show up as a recent post.
@raven.........or orchid, or whoever: Take off the summon until you actually get it.
@demonic: Until you are approved for Hyuuga, your chakra will be low.
I refuse to repeat myself AGAIN for shinobi special skills.
@Kendra: You didnt even change anything. Change EVERYTHING I told you to.
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:15 pm
My bad >.< put that down as a memo after she told me to look at summons lol but its fixed now
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:50 pm
CalypsoNakamura  Name Here -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Kikimaru Taru Nicknames: steel butterfly Age: 16 Birthdate: sept 20 Gender: female Village mist Race: white Rank: academy student, in her last year Shinobi Profession: striving to become an ANBU Ninja Type/Class: ninjutsu and taijutsu
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: none Current Bloodline Stage: none Chakra Color: silver with streaks of blue and red Chakra Level: low Chakra Element: mist
Battle Strength: making steel weapons Battle Weakness: controling her feelings, in which, she sucks xp
Fights Won: 3 Fights Lost: 1
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. can make anything steel using the moisture of the air 2. 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank: 0 A Rank: 0 B Rank: 0 C Rank: 2 D Rank: 5
Organizations: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: Boss Summoning: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location: around her neck Headband Style: mist Headband Color: dark blue Flack Jacket Style: none Flak Jacket Color: none
Weapon Class: anything she can make up, but mostly kunai and shuriken
Name of Weapon: kunai Weapon Range: idk lol Special Abilities: none Weapon Location: high thigh
Exploding Smoke Grenade=5 Makibishi= 0 Shuriken= unlimited Light Bombs= 12
Kunai Holster Location: shoulder Kunai Holster Color: black with red streaks Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: thigh Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: black with blue streaks Backpack Style: shoulder bag Backpack Color: black with red and blue streaks Summoning Scroll Holster Location: hip Summoning Scroll Holster Color: black
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╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu *Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) *Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique) *Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: positive Nindo: "Bad things are like winter, they will melt away when spring comes." Height: 5' Weight: 95 pounds Original Eye Color: left eye is red while her right eye is blue
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╫Background Information╫ she was raised in the mist village with her mother, step-dad, and step brother, Narubi. her mother went on a mission to the leaf village and disappeared without a trace. her dad grew distraught and began drinking, resulting in him beating Kikimaru because she looked so much like her mother. she stayed positive though, even after the brutle beatings. she raised Narubi and began her life in the academy. her life long dream is to find her mother and reunite her family back together.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nin and Taijutsu are not ninja classes. Go look at the ninja classes thread located in this subforum. Your shinobi special skill makes no sense. I wont repeat myself about what shinobi special skills are. As an academy student, you will have been in ZERO fights and gone on ZERO missions.
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:53 pm
Orchid Moon My bad >.< put that down as a memo after she told me to look at summons lol but its fixed now
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:37 am
Thank you gregar! hope everything went smoothly heart
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 2:30 am
align=center] Name Here ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫ full name;Tenspot_1: Nicknames:Ten,Galamon Age:14 <16> Birthdate:Nov. 20 Gender:male male Village Race: Rank: Shinobi Profession: Ninja Type/Class: (max of two different ninja types)
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Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Current Bloodline Stage: <1> Chakra Color: Chakra Level: High,
Battle Strength: Battle Weakness:
Fights Won: 0<5> Fights Lost: 0<0>
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. 2. 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank:0 A Rank:0 B Rank:0 C Rank:0 D Rank:0
Organizations: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫ Summoning Type: Boss Summoning: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location:Across neck Headband Style:long Headband Color:gld Flack Jacket Style:short Flak Jacket Color:gold
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon:Senbon Weapon Range:30Ft Special Abilities:none Weapon Location:left hip
Exploding Smoke Grenade=<4> Makibishi=5 Shuriken=20 Light Bombs=8
Kunai Holster Location:left hip Kunai Holster Color: grey Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: right back lower thigh Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: gold Backpack Style:Camp Sack Backpack Color:Gold Summoning Scroll Holster Location:Left Thigh Summoning Scroll Holster Color: Gold
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu *Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) *Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique) *Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫ Personality:Sarcastic Nindo: Height:6'2" Weight:125lbs Original Eye Color:Ocean Blue
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Background Information╫ I have no family other than my brother whoo is lost i have been abandoned by my parents
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:23 am
Kubiwa Kaguya  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫ Full Name: Kubiwa Kaguya Nicknames: The white dog Age: 17 Birthdate: July 15 Gender: Male Village Sunagakure Race: White Rank: Academy Student Shinobi Profession: Escort and protection services Ninja Type/Class: Speed/Taijutsu Specialist
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Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Kaguya Current Bloodline Stage: Genin Level One Chakra Color: Light, almost white, blue Chakra Level: Medium Chakra Element: Wind
Battle Strength: Direct physical combat Battle Weakness: Genjutsu and drug related abilities
Fights Won: 0 Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. 2. 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
Organizations: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫ Summoning Type: N/A Boss Summoning: N/A ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: Around the neck Headband Style: Like a collar Headband Color: Black Flak Jacket Style: N/A Flak Jacket Color: N.A
Weapon Class: N/A
Name of Weapon: N/A Weapon Range: N/A Special Abilities: N/A Weapon Location: N/A
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 0 Makibishi= 0 Shuriken= 0 Light Bombs= 0
Kunai Holster Location: Left leg Kunai Holster Color: Black Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: N/A Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: N/A Backpack Style: Backpack Backpack Color: Black Summoning Scroll Holster Location: N/A Summoning Scroll Holster Color: N/A
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu *Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) *Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique) *Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫ Personality: When not in missions he is docile, meek, quiet and relatively shy. During missions he is, above all else, obedient and will follow orders to the letter, but prefers to be told in detail first. Nindo: “I refuse to be a stray any longer.” Height: 15’4” Weight: 105lbs Original Eye Color: Blue
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As a child, Kubiwa was an unwanted child; his mother had been assaulted by a criminal on the run. He took her hostage and by the time she was rescued, she was already carrying Kubiwa in her womb. When he was born, her mother immediately threw him away, leaving him to die in the wilderness, a fate she thought he deserved for being the b*****d son of a criminal. However, Kumiwa was rescued by an elderly couple and raised as a child, he was happy, and considered them his true parents. But all that changed when they were made aware of his identity as a Kaguya. The couple’s only son was brutally murdered by a Kaguya when he was but a mere child, horror struck their hearts as they realized that they had been taking care of a monster. They chased him out of their household and swore that they would kill him if he ever came back; Kubiwa became mad with grief because of this. He wandered in the village, alone and unloved, that was not to say no one ever dared to adopt him, but when ever any one attempted to do so, he would run away for fear of being chased out again. In his mind, he was a monster, and this lie haunted him throughout the majority of his life as a child. However, they came a time when even he began to seek the warmth and comfort of a family, and so, when a young couple offered to take him in, he nodded his head with a uneasy smile. He was scared that they would drive him away, but he was glad to find he was wrong, though their time together was short, he felt true love and happiness within their embrace. But fate would not have it, and during the night, their house was attacked by bandits, and his adoptive parents were taken away from him, secretly, he followed them into their hideout, but he knew he couldn’t do anything alone. Kubiwa fled to the streets and begged people for help, but all were to afraid to do anything, he once again felt himself slowly slipping away into grief. But just then, a man agreed to help him, and so he took him to where the bandits had taken his parents and watched in shock and awe as the man revealed himself to be a Kaguya, a fellow clan member of Kubiwa. The man made swift work of the bandits, slaughtering them all and rescued Kubiwa’s adoptive parents. From that day on, Kubiwa swore to put his powers to good use for his village, he felt he had found his purpose, like a dog that had just found its new master, and he enjoyed the warm emotion that came with it.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:46 am
Gregar828 CalypsoNakamura  Name Here -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Kikimaru Taru Nicknames: steel butterfly Age: 16 Birthdate: sept 20 Gender: female Village mist Race: white Rank: academy student, in her last year Shinobi Profession: striving to become an ANBU Ninja Type/Class: tactical and stealth
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: the Taru bloodline limit Current Bloodline Stage: still learning of it's power Chakra Color: silver with streaks of blue and red Chakra Level: low Chakra Element: mist
Battle Strength: making steel weapons on the fly Battle Weakness: controling her feelings, in which, she sucks xp
Fights Won: Fights Lost:
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. can make weapons using the moisture of the air, but her weapons are heavily affected by water type jutsus 2. 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank: 0 A Rank: 0 B Rank: 0 C Rank: 0 D Rank: 0
Organizations: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: Boss Summoning: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location: around her neck Headband Style: mist Headband Color: dark blue Flack Jacket Style: none Flak Jacket Color: none
Weapon Class: anything she can make up, but mostly kunai and shuriken
Name of Weapon: kunai Weapon Range: idk lol Special Abilities: none Weapon Location: high thigh
Exploding Smoke Grenade=5 Makibishi= 0 Shuriken= unlimited Light Bombs= 12
Kunai Holster Location: shoulder Kunai Holster Color: black with red streaks Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: thigh Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: black with blue streaks Backpack Style: shoulder bag Backpack Color: black with red and blue streaks Summoning Scroll Holster Location: hip Summoning Scroll Holster Color: black
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╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu *Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) *Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique) *Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: positive Nindo: "Bad things are like winter, they will melt away when spring comes." Height: 5' Weight: 95 pounds Original Eye Color: left eye is red while her right eye is blue
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╫Background Information╫ she was raised in the mist village with her mother, step-dad, and step brother, Narubi. her mother went on a mission to the leaf village and disappeared without a trace. her dad grew distraught and began drinking, resulting in him beating Kikimaru because she looked so much like her mother. she stayed positive though, even after the brutle beatings. she raised Narubi and began her life in the academy. her life long dream is to find her mother and reunite her family back together.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nin and Taijutsu are not ninja classes. Go look at the ninja classes thread located in this subforum. Your shinobi special skill makes no sense. I wont repeat myself about what shinobi special skills are. As an academy student, you will have been in ZERO fights and gone on ZERO missions. how's that? I also sent in an application for the Taru Clan
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 10:48 am
@ten: I can tell that you have not read the thread that says "Read this before you do anything." Go read it, and It will tell you may of the things wrong with this profile.
@Dante: Sand is closed. Please choose mist, rock, or cloud (I suggest rock since the Tsuchikage is a Kaguya)
For shinobi special skills, add the bonuses given by Kaguya, speed, and taijutsu specialist
You have a lot of sections that still say N/A
@Calypso: We are not accepting custom bloodlines at this time.
You cannot have unlimited shuriken
You need to add the bonuses given by tactical and stealth to your shinobi special skills
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 11:03 am
Jinsoku Fuzen  -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Main Information╫ Full Name: Jinsoku Fuzen Nicknames: Swift Age: 16 Birthdate: August 8 Gender: Male Village Cloud Village Race: Black Rank: Academy Student Shinobi Profession: Thief Ninja Type/Class: Speed Ninja, Weapon Specialist -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Pending.... Current Bloodline Stage: N/A Chakra Color: Black Chakra Level: Low Chakra Element: Lightning
Battle Strength: Weapon Abilities Battle Weakness: Genjutsu
Fights Won: 0 Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. Chakra Control (-2 posts for training, -1 Rank off Jutsu chakra cost, only for jutsu up to one rank higher than your current rank, Kage level jutsus never recieve a decrease in jutsu rank for the purposes of chakra cost) 2. Weapon Specialist (-2 posts to learn weapon styles, best weapon users) 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
Organizations:
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Summoning infomation╫ Summoning Type: none Boss Summoning: none -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫Headband Location:Hanging around neck Headband Style: Looks more like a scarf Headband Color: Black Flack Jacket Style: Long, Trenchcoat like Flack Jacket Color: Black
Weapon Class: Snake Sword
Name of Weapon: Tenma Souzoubetsu Weapon Range: long range/mid range Special Abilities: The sword can break apart and extend Weapon Location: On my back
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 0 Makibishi= 0 Shuriken= 0 Light Bombs= 0
Kunai Holster Location: Left Side Waist Kunai Holster Color: Black Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Right Side Waist Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color:black Backpack Style: Over the shoulder Backpack Color: black Summoning Scroll Holster Location: none Summoning Scroll Holster Color: none
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Technique List╫Starting jutsu *Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) *Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique) *Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Character Description╫ Personality: He loves to fight. Nindo: "Eat, drink, and be merry my friends, for tomorrow is not always promised and neither is today." Height: 5'9 Weight: 180 Original Eye Color: Black
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When Jinsoku was a young boy he and his family lived in a village that was just on the outskirts of the fire country. His family was a family of theives that were slowly but surely gaining fame and notoriety. The Swift Feet Fuzens were a family that always got what they wanted and even the fastest of ninja would somehow be unable to catch them. All seemed to go well for these outlaw thieves but like a criminal stories this one did not end well. One day the Fuzen clan aimed to rob the hokage. They figured that since they have never been caught, now would be a good as time as any to find out exactly what they were capable of. They set the plan up perfectly, they would sneak in, steal the blueprints to the village and sell it to any village that would pay the highest price. This was going to be the last job for the Fuzen clan, simply because they believed that after getting paid for the job they would never have to work again. Jinsoku was only nine years old at the time and he, along with his twin brother Kajime, had to stay at home since the operation was deemed to much for them to handle. So laying in their nap sacks Jinsoku and Kajime waited for there family to return. Hours passed by and still none of their family members had returned. It was already way passed the expected time for the mission to have been completed and Jinsoku and Kajime started to believe that they would never see their family again. Just a couple minute after dawn they heard a soft knock on the door. Instantly the twins ran to the door and opened it, what they seen was a sight that they would never forget. Their mother had been beaten, cut and stabbed all over. Kunais were stuck all over her once beautiful body and she was on the verge of death. The Anbu black ops had intervened and massacre the whole clan and their mother used the last of her strength to come home to see her two sons. "Avenge us" were her last words as her blood soaked body fell ontop of the two boys. After that night things were never the same. The twin ventured out seeking shealter and a new way to get stronger. They stole for food, water, and money and lived in boxes for quite some time until they were found and brought in by a mysterious clan in the Cloud Village that took them in and shelter them. They were now both sixteen years old and had one goal in mind. Become Anbu ninjas for the Cloud Village and avenge their families death. ((Applying for the Anigan later so if accepted I'll add this to my bio)) The clan had weird eye powers and many exotic and predator animals running around their base. Jinsoku and Kajime instantly became amazed by these people's ablities and asked for training so that they could use the technique. After a special blood ritual they were able to start learning the technique. Armed with this special power they would not let anything stop them from achieving their goal.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:54 pm
FLASH OF FIRE  -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Main Information╫ Full Name:NEKO Nicknames:FLASH OF FIRE Age:13 Birthdate:MAY 4TH Gender:MALE Village:mist Race:JAPAN Rank:academy student Shinobi Profession:ASSISAN Ninja Type/Class:Weapon Specialist,Medic -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline:NONE Clan:NONE Current Bloodline Stage:none yet Chakra Color:BLACK Chakra Level:low Chakra Element:WATER
Battle Strength:WEAPONS Battle Weakness:he gets angry very fast.
Fights Won:0 Fights Lost:0
Shinobi Special Skills: 1.[class](-2 posts to learn weapon styles, best weapon users) 2.[class](medical jutsu rank increse by 1, -2 posts learning medical jutsu) 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
Organizations:
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Summoning infomation╫ Summoning Type: Boss Summoning: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫Headband Location:THE RIGHT LEG Headband Style:SLANTED Headband Color:RED Flack Jacket Style:NONE Flak Jacket Color:NONE
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon: Weapon Range: Special Abilities: Weapon Location:
Exploding Smoke Grenade=2 Makibishi=3 Shuriken=10 Light Bombs=4
Kunai Holster Location:IN SHIRT Kunai Holster Color:WHITE Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location:LEFT LEG Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color:BLACK Backpack Style:NONE Backpack Color:NONE Summoning Scroll Holster Location:NONE Summoning Scroll Holster Color:NONE
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Technique List╫Starting jutsu *Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) *Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique) *Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Character Description╫ Personality:he is always hyper and likes to start fights with hes random people he acts like a child.
neko has a thing that hes always trying to be number one and show people that he is
the main thing that niko hates is people that think he is weak.
neko does not show hes soft side he has a very shy side to him but he likes to mean so no can see hes side hes a very nive person when it comes to girl he shows the most respect because he is shy around them. Nindo:"i dont care,dont look down on me!!!" Height:5,3 Weight:90 Original Eye Color:black
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neko is the only child of hes family hes mother died when she gave birth to him hes father raised him know hes father is died when he was 10 he started to live and under a ninja in the village he grew up and wanted to be like him but soon inuff neko had moved away from him because he was scared of the ninja because one day he showed neko what hes gona be like when he grows up but now neko has hes own place and he is 13 yrs old and he is following hes blood line and he is searching for ninja that has been a father to him. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:16 pm
@Sofa: Please add the shinobi special skills for offensive and short range
If your weapon has a special skill, it needs to be submitted as a custom weapon
@Kendra: If you have no bloodline, your chakra level is low
Please add the shinobi special skills.
Pin Point is not a ninjutsu. You start out with no jutsu other than the basic 3.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:56 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:00 pm
..............(slams head against keyboard)
I've typed out what shinobi special skills are before, I'm not doing it again. Dont know what they are? Read my previous posts.
Ok everyone, seriously, WHATS SO HARD TO UNDERSTAND ABOUT SHINOBI SPECIAL SKILLS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:12 pm
ok man idk how about now if not then im erase it and its gona stay blank for now
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