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 Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:45 pm
If we could be perfect one last night here's the chorus to a song I'm writing about a man haunted by the ghost of his dead lover, who he killed by hanging her in the closet
Get out of my house
And get out of my room
Quit ******** with my mind
The sense of my impending doom
I'm gonna call an excorcist
Or should I call the church?
Why don't you ******** LEAVE ME ALONE?
and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:50 pm
Holy s**t, what was that???? It was so... wow. But it was really good!
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 2:18 pm
If we could be perfect one last night Thanks! But what do you mean, it was wow? like, freaky? and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 2:20 pm
No, it was a little freaky, but it was wow because it was very unexpected, powerful, and stuff like that. Very amazing!
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 5:53 pm
If we could be perfect one last night eek Really? It was that good? and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 6:03 pm
No, it sucked.
Are you kidding? That was seriously amazing, you should send that in to someone and get the money! Or you should form a band just to use that song! =)
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:35 pm
If we could be perfect one last night Thanks. I already have a band, so I think I'm gonna use that song. and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:53 pm
AWESOME!!! Instrument or singing? =)
I wish I had the coordination to play an instrument or a voice to sing professionally. But, I write instead! =)
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 8:40 pm
If we could be perfect one last nightSinging. I am actually one of the few females who can actually scream in songs like a male. I perfected that by listening to Gerard and watching videos of how he does it. It's kinda scary. So, what do you think i should title that song? and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:59 am
THE GHOST OF YOU!!!!
No i'm kidding, but I don;t know. I'm not very good with titles. But it's gotta be something powerful and outrageous.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:42 pm
OMG, thats good. =]
I think you should title it....
Get Out? no... not good enough. (Never)Call Me Later? I like that one. Sounds funny. I don't know, its your song, you should pick the title. But its good. I'd listen to it.
I'm in a semi-ish band...ish. I can't do s**t with an instrument, and I have an okay voice, so I'm the singer. Still trying to work on my scream. xp Our band still needs a drummer... but I've been working on songs...that I find unsatisfactory, so I won't mention any unless I get a good one.
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:01 am
I like the (Never) Call me Later one. It was catchy! =) It reminds me of The (After)Life of the Party by Fall Out boy.
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:03 pm
*gasp* I <3 that song. I <3 FOB. and MCR. and other bands. =D
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 7:26 am
I love the Carpal Tunnel of Love and Bang the Doldrums and Fame < Infamy, actually, I love em all!
And there isn't one MCR song I hate! I even love their covers and demos! =)
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 9:40 am
All of MCR's songs are wonderful.... They're the only band that I have heard every song of. Demos, covers, and all.
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