Seaphron
~Xiloscent~
oh yeah seaphron was one of my readers but I think he left. oh well, he can read what he misses.
Yes yes I am, and yes I have.
It was quite good. Your story seems to be picking up, I especially liked this chapter. Nice work.
Only thing is you might want to write 50 out as fifty. It is common to write all numbers up to one hundred out.
yeah, I usually forget that. I only catch what MS Word catches. XD.
yeah most of my stories have below par intro's and starting points, but as I pick up speed towards the inevitable climax and/or mystery it gets almost as good as Spielberg.
blaugh ....thinking about it, has me in a rant, so I shall type it.
Xilo's Rant
thinking about my younger child hood, just living life the right way took awhile, i'd occasionally do something right. then as I got older, that aspect of my life got better, but now looking at it getting a job is as much a pain in the a** as my life was back then. and I have a feeling that the work world will be the same too, and college and everything else that will be apart of my daily life for long periods of time... hell maybe this is how life is supposed to be, maybe thats how I make it or the world is making it for me. but one thing is for sure, my life is starting to suck again, I just hope I can get it to pick up soon. well thats the end of my rant, if you read it, you didn't need to but maybe it will help someone in some way...after all... KNOWLEDGE IS POWER!
wel i'll go right chapter 8 now.
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