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 Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:12 am
At AmunRa: Great so far. I hope you continue writing. You may want to consider spell/grammar check, though, if you have it. Just tiny little things, like the comma on the outside of the quotation marks, nothing huge. Keep up the good work.
At Fred and George: Another great theory for the two of them. I am a pathetic little fourteen-year-old, so I didn't know what 'lycanthropy' was and was all confused... >>; I figured it out, though. Thank you google.
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 12:37 pm
Yeah I have difficulty with that because the punctuation between French and English is very similar yet so different (I.E. The placement of commas and the "suspense points" -->(. . . ) )
I have opened up a thread for my continuing fic. Please check the forum for "Quidditch Matters."
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:56 pm
Oh I've written a third chapter. Here's the link. (It's not bad, just in another thread 3nodding )
Click Me!
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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 12:44 am
Gred anf Forge, I started editing... halfway through the concert part 2.
I know... I'm gay.
Anyways:
"Well, why did so wait so bloody long?"
First 'so' should be 'you,' instead.
I'm done...
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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 12:46 am
The Fluff Gred anf Forge, I started editing... halfway through the concert part 2.
I know... I'm gay.
Anyways:
"Well, why did so wait so bloody long?"
First 'so' should be 'you,' instead.
I'm done...
When I proofread, everything slips through. gonk
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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 12:47 am
Gred and Forge The Fluff Gred anf Forge, I started editing... halfway through the concert part 2.
I know... I'm gay.
Anyways:
"Well, why did so wait so bloody long?"
First 'so' should be 'you,' instead.
I'm done...
When I proofread, everything slips through. gonk
It's no big deal, really. As long as it conprehensible, and it is...
Don't get your socks in a bunch.
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2005 11:20 am
i love to read fanfiction its awsome im not very go at writing it but i love to read them on fanfiction.net tell me if you read any good ones
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 10:43 am
I have only 2 stories for HP. One is supposedly really good, the other I haven't had a chance to do much with. if you want to check it out go to My Site.My user name is Dark-T-K. If you wanna read my fics though.
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 6:55 pm
Has anyone else heard of The Shoebox Project? If not it's awsome it's in the times of the Marauders, and so here's the link < clicky>
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Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 2:05 pm
me likey fan-,fics me likey fan-,fics
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 11:50 am
UH...if you all wanna read my fanfics go here http://www.fanfiction.net/u/765053/i'll tell you now...i'm not the best writer in the world...but i try pirate rofl rolleyes twisted exclaim
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 3:42 pm
darkangeloflight14 I do write fanfiction....so how do I do this? just post my story? Same questions! question
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 7:57 pm
This is a story my girlfriend wrote a while ago. She's not in this guild, so I'm posting it for her. Enjoy!
The Chronicles of Yule... or the Crazy Christmas Calamity (Part 1)
Disclaimer: No matter what I do to them, every person within these lines belongs to our resident genius, J.K. Rowling, and cannot be ruined by anything I write.
Draco Malfoy...
...or the Amazing Bouncing Ferret
"Hermione, who are you going to the ball with?"
I heard Ron Weasley's voice floating in front of me as I left the Great Hall. It was just before Christmas--cold drafts now ruled the halls of Hogwarts, and I shivered as I felt one on the back of my neck before I heard her answer.
"I'm not telling you, you'll just make fun of me."
My blood boiled, despite the freezing air. "You're joking, Weasley!" I yelled, getting the attention of Ron, Harry and Hermione. I eyed Hermione nastily. "You're not telling me someone's asked that to the ball? Not the long-molared Mudblood??
I'd wanted to ask her to the Yule Ball. I knew it would never happen, that I'd be laughed at by everyone. But as her brown eyes bore into mine, I felt a twinge of jealousy, and wished Crabbe and Goyle could be there to beat the twinge out of me. Someone had gotten to the most beautiful girl in Hogwarts before me.
Potter and Weasley glared like the greasy gits they are, but Hermione looked over my shoulder and waved to somebody I couldn't see. "Hello, Professor Moody!"
I felt the blood drain from my face, and I spun around wildly, expecting to see Moody behind me, wand raised and ready to transfigure me into an otter. I saw, however, that he was still at the staff table, far enough away not to have heard a word I'd just said. I didn't want that maniac anywhere near me.
Angry with myself, I glared back at Hermione. She only smirked. "Twitchy little ferret, aren't you, Malfoy?"
I looked fiercely at the retreating backs of Potter, Weasley and Hermione, and it took every ounce of pure blood in my body not to hex them into nothingness.
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 8:01 pm
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