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Bakudo 1-20 completion


Kido Number: 3
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Disruptor Pulse
Kido Chant: Cast aside the bounties of the sea and see only rage.
Appearance: The Kido takes the form of a small orb in the colour of the user's reiatsu. This orb pulses periodically releasing a small quantity of reiatsu from itself which cannot be detected with ordinary senses.
Effects When the Kido is cast it creates a small orb of light the colour of the user's reiatsu. This orb pulses periodically releasing a small quantity of reiatsu into the surrounding area which can be easily detected. This pulse can be programmed by the user to pulse in a half hour long pattern but if unchanged simply pulses once every three minutes. The Kido lasts for twenty four hours unless it is destroyed.
Flavour Text: This Kido was created by the Third Division. In the current times it is used for distraction but when used by the Third Division they used it outside an enemy base to trick them into thinking they had forces with them large enough to crush it. In reality there were only two Squad 3 members and it was not until they had successfully dismantled the enemy that they found out.
Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 5
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Thorned Hainawa
Kido Chant: Lustful serpent of the east. Heed the call and devour.
Appearance: This Kido looks identical to Hainawa except for two small changes. First and foremost the Hainawa cast is red in colour rather than yellow. Second once the Kido has successfully wrapped itself around an enemy tiny thorns emerge which are too small to be visible.
Effects Thorned Hainawa interacts exactly like a usual Hainawa apart from its' thorns. This changes the Hainawa as the thorns cause harm to an enemy who attempts to move while being held by them. Although the pain is not great it will slow attempts to escape. As it holds no serious attack power however it is not considered a Hado.
Flavour Text: (Who used the Kido? When and what for? Any interesting stories about it here.)
Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 6
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Magnagrip
Kido Chant: Ten thousand invisible hands, bind the unbinded and unbine the binded.
Appearance: This Kido appears at a small blast of electrical energy being channelled into the weapon of the Shinigami before becoming entirely invisible.
Effects Once cast is causes an electrical magnetic charge to exist in the selected weapon of the user for a short period of time. This causes the weapon to magnetically attract any other metal weapon it comes into contact with. This is supposed to be used for a disarming technique in which the user secretly casts the Kido and then uses it in a sudden clash of swords to rip the sword out of the enemy's hands unexpectedly.
Flavour Text: (Who used the Kido? When and what for? Any interesting stories about it here.)
Credited to: Pad Chief



Kido Number: 10
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Speed Barrier
Kido Chant: Staring in fascination, watch closely and count the clouds.
Appearance: The speed barriers manifests as a barrier of blue reiyoku charged wind in front of the caster. This barrier follows the caster but always remains in the same position in relation to the caster by where it was originally cast.
Effects This Kido creates a barrier which slows down momentum directed through it. This is done by the application of a wind powered with extra reiyoku. This Kido cannot interrupt a Shunpo or Sonido but it is useful as it can lower the force of momentum based attacks or be used to weaken surprise attacks. Only one can be cast at a time and it follows the caster always taking the same position as where it was originally cast from in relation to the caster. More than stopping blows it softens them.
Flavour Text: (Who used the Kido? When and what for? Any interesting stories about it here.)
Credited to: Pad Chief

Kido Number: 11
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Interrupter Signal
Kido Chant: A horn blows, at the centre of all, undo yourself.
Appearance: The Kido has little physical appearance save for the fact that the caster must remain in a position in which they hold one hand to the air.
Effects This Kido lets out a blast of reiyoku which disrupts the flow of any other type of spiritual energy in the area. What this means is that in can easily cause difficult techniques or precise techniques to backfire and will usually somewhat weaken reiyoku based attacks. Of course in trade off the user will become very open for attack.
Flavour Text: (Who used the Kido? When and what for? Any interesting stories about it here.)
Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 12
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Sword of Midnight
Kido Chant: Flames flash and then vanish. Your reign ends. The world begins anew.
Appearance: The Kido takes the appearance of a thick black fog surrounding everyone in the vicinity's Zanpakto. This fog also slowly trails off the sword of whoever it clashes with onto other Zanpakto.
Effects It submerges the weapon of the wielder and those surrounding in a twenty metre radius in a thick impenetrable fog that can only be dispersed with heavy bursts of reiatsu, for example switching to Shikai form, it can be used either to confuse an opponent or to switch the playing field to one that better suits Shinigami with the skills required for fighting in the dark.
Flavour Text: (Who used the Kido? When and what for? Any interesting stories about it here.)
Credited to: Pad Chief

Kido Number: 13
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Burst Flash
Kido Chant: Stream and glass sing of your downfall. Look upon it and be consumed.
Appearance: This Kido emits itself as a massive burst of light in the colour of the users reiatsu emitting from any part of their body they decide to cast it from.
Effects This Kido emits a light so blinding that it will cause anyone who looks at it to go blind temporarily unless they have eye protection or close their eyes. As it only requires a single burst of Reiyoku it is extremely easy to cast.
Flavour Text: (Who used the Kido? When and what for? Any interesting stories about it here.)
Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 14
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Tracker Shot
Kido Chant: A flight of crows watches. Each step lies in folly.
Appearance: The Kido appears as an orange beam of energy shot from the practitioner's finger. This orange beam disguises an orange splodge of reiyoku which attaches itself to the first surface it hits and then becomes invisible.
Effects The Kido generates a small quantity of Reiyoku which can be easily detected but is difficult to remove entirely. This Reiyoku can be fired at a target so that it can be easily tracked over long distances as it will hold the same Reiatsu signals as the caster.
Flavour Text: (Who used the Kido? When and what for? Any interesting stories about it here.)
Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 15
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Blaster Net
Kido Chant: Crawl slowly along sea and sky. Look discontently at those below and smile arrogantly.
Appearance: This Kido manifests as a greenish yellow net extending around just large enough to capture three persons at a time. It hums with a slightly damaging current of Reiyoku.
Effects This Bakudo is made with the express purpose of throwing people to the floor forcefully. It involves a large folded net being thrown at a person then accelerating at high speed in a sudden burst and exploding open after which provided the target has stood still they will find themselves in a net. This net gives slightly shocks when those in it attempt to move but is for the most part harmless.
Flavour Text: (Who used the Kido? When and what for? Any interesting stories about it here.)
Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 16
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Buster Net
Kido Chant: Crippling, fall down and look upon the ground in fury.
Appearance: This Kido initially takes the form of a small dark blue orb which can be placed underground. When it receives adequate pressure to activate a large dark blue net jumps from the ground engulfing the one who stepped on it.
Effects This Kido at first creates a dark blue sphere of Reiyoku which can be hidden underground. When adequate pressure (for example walking over it) is applied to the sphere it will jump out from the ground and erupt into a dark blue net that will engulf an enemy trapping them.
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Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 17
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Sanick Tracker
Kido Chant: Over green, over emerald, over fungi. Tell me mine location oh expedient one.
Appearance: This Kido causes a blue and green shot of flame to be fired into the air. This blue and green flame them immediately disperses and collapses upon itself before once again descending to the ground in the form of an electric blue lump of physical reiyoku.
Effects This Kido causes a blue and green flash of flame to fly into the air. This flare immediately upon reaching maximum height analyses the surroundings generating a temporary set of images of the general area from that height. It then stores this in its' core and falls down to the ground where it must be eaten by the Shinigami who cast it or any other. Once this is done the Shinigami will over the next half hour gain knowledge of the area from a higher view allowing them to better plan.
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Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 18
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Accelerator Plane
Kido Chant: By the crashing waves and the silence of the wind I command the deliverance of mine enemies unto me.
Appearance: The Kido appears as a yellow strip across about three meters of ground. As soon as someone finishes running across it the Kido shatters and disappears.
Effects Once cast a yellow strip of light appears along the ground running for around three meters. Running, walking or falling across this strip will accelerate whoever walks over it first's movement by about three times allowing them to reach previously impossible speeds for a short time. It takes some time to get used to as it causes the runner to move at speeds otherwise impossible.
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Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 19
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Ooze Gun
Kido Chant: In all things moderation. The sun, the wind, the moon all frown upon the Earth.
Appearance: This Kido manifests as a small construct on the arm of the caster at first enveloping the arm in an orange light with three prongs extending from it to the hand. This causes the user to become capable of firing shots of an orange slimey substance that sticks to solid surfaces.
Effects Once the construct on the arm is activated the Kido can be cast. The Kido can be cast a maximum of eight times once the construct is completed before it has to be cast again. Each shot with the Kido that hits will cause it to tear the object that it hits from the ground before dragging it along to hit the nearest solid object and causing it to stick there. Physical resistance against this Kido is useless and it must be dispelled using a burst of reiatsu rather than a physical effort unless the person doing so is extremely strong compared to their opponent.
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Credited to: Pad Chief


Kido Number: 20
Kido Class: Bakudo
Kido Name: Moisture Aura
Kido Chant: Fall upon your face and climb fruitlessly. The pigs stand high above you.
Appearance: The Kido is completely undetectable apart from a moist feeling in the air.
Effects The Kido causes the exerted Reiatsu of the caster to manifest as water vapour. This allows them to quickly make surfaces moist and so they can make soil into mud very easily. This can make fighters who sneak or rely heavily on grip fail at key moments and slip in mud or adverse weather conditions.
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Credited to: Pad Chief

Looks great. But Kei. Just a quick word with you if you don't mind. I need your opinion.

I was thinking about Chiyudo and came to the conclusion that 99 sounded excessive. I was thinking about cutting them down by half to 50 but I wanted your opinion on the matter as you've been one of our foremost contributors to the Chiyudo area.

Continuity is a non issue here since we're practically going down the route of filler arc anyway.

Yeah. I started realising it would be a virtually impossible task for Chiyudo. Whereas I've been able to create loads of Hado (and we'll soon have tons of Bakudo too) I couldn't see a way that more than 50 Chiyudo would be necessary.

I'm gonna leave this all up in the air for today but tomorrow I'm going to cut the list in half and restructure the whole thing.

Okay. Thanks. Obviously I'll have to reset the numbers and shift some stuff around but I think 50 healing techniques will be plentiful.

I like the first one but please give it a number yourself first and then we'll talk about shifting it. 95-98 zone does sound about right though so you're on the right tracks.

The only thing I'd possibly mention is that I dislike using 'Posts' as a unit of time. I'd say give it an actual time frame and use rules of common sense. Obviously it's not 2 hours long but it could be 30 seconds. In which case 2 posts might not always suffice during a battle as movements are typically extremely fast and with Shunpo and the like they can get faster. You can still put a note that 2 posts on average is the intention though.

As for the second one. Let me see. One problem I see immediately is that there is no true escape clause. Can I roll out the way of it while it's being cast? The only real escape is by breaking it presumably from the inside by which point you're already primed for a good beating. Try to set an escape period or a secondary escape method.

Second although I'm pretty sure I know what you mean in the description it says.

"denying any form of movement outside of it "

That can be interpreted as preventing movement to all things in existence outside the sphere. I know full well that's not what you mean but make sure that's crystal clear.

Additionally you might wish to add the name of an attack which could break it for reference. That's optional though.

The final one is pretty much fine. As always though I want you to give it a number first. Also you could describe the properties of the wall maybe? Perhaps it is designed to separate spiritual particles. You've said special properties but not explained them however I won't hold you to this.

Okay then. That's good. Looks fine.

I'll add them all in now. By the by have you considered looking at the zone up to 20 and 21-40.

Ah. That's good. We really need to fill up that section and I'm starting to exhaust my idea pool for that area. Can't tell everyone they've got 40 Kido and then only give them three quarters eh?

Kido Number: 22
Kido Class: Hado
Kido Name: Roc Barrier
Kido Chant: "Jolt. Shock. Tumble. Roar. Shield of forgotten Lore."
Appearance: The caster's body suddenly becomes strongly electrically charged, but the Caster is not harmed in any way.
Effects Anything that conducts electricity that comes into contact with the Caster, or if a bridge of conductive material is formed to another object, the object will get electrocuted (this means that even the Caster's Zanpakuto, if connected to the Caster at the time, can transfer the electricity to an object). The electrocution is painful, but does not do much damage at all. It is only intended to rapidly squeeze muscles in the victim's body, and to viciously tingle their nerves, so that focus becomes hard to maintain during the electrocution.
Flavour Text: Create by an eccentric Squad 3 soldier.
Credited to: PupSage


Kido Number: 23
Kido Class: Hado
Kido Name: Phoenix Barrier
Kido Chant: "Burn. Break. Scorching Ray. Shield of forgotten Days."
Appearance: The caster's body bursts into flames, however the caster is not harmed.
Effects The flames are conventional flames, and will burn anything close enough to the caster. Anything that has direct contact with the caster could be cooked alive, anything within close proximity could be burned badly, and anything far enough away not to get burned will certainly feel a sharp rise in temperature.
Note: This spell can also be used simply to increase the temperature in the area, or use massive amounts of oxygen suddenly.
Flavour Text: Create by an eccentric Squad 3 soldier.
Credited to: PupSage