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Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2013 11:28 pm
TwiDawnLight I'd gladly change 'sand phase' to a one post cooldown. >.<; 1 MORE !!! xD
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Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2013 10:09 am
*smacks forehead with an APPROVED stamp*
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Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2013 11:24 am
Yaaaay !!!  but now I still have my quincy waiting for that last one.
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 6:56 am
✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: Kiyoki Takinaga ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣[/]
Name: Oleander Junsui Kagemiya Race: Shinigami Gender: Male Birth Date: May 11 Age: 678 but looks 21 Blood Type: O+
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Appearance:
Height: 5'6 Weight: 140 lbs Eye Color: Dark Blue/Black Hair Color: Black Tattoos or Scars: Anything Unusual: Oleander has to wear what he calls a M.A.S.K.I.N.G. on his face for 18 hours every day to help regulate his bodily functions or he will die. He has to do this because of expose to Zanpakto poisons from Yudoku-Shin. The device is shown in his picture whether it be the one in the actual post or my signature.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Kido:
~Hado~ 1. Shō (衝, Thrust) = low 4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) = low 31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire) = low 33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down) = low 58. Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky) = medium 63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon) = maximum 64. Sōren Sōkatsui (双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down) = maximum 88. Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) = maximum 90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) = maximum 91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) = maximum 93. Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm) = maximum
~Bakudo~ 1. Sai (塞, Restrain) = low 4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) = low 8. Seki (斥, Repulse) = low 9. Geki (撃, Strike) = low 30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam) = low 61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light) = medium 62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence) = medium 63. Sajo Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Locking Bondage Stripes) = maximum 81. Danku (斷空, Splitting Void) = maximum 99. Part 1 Kin (禁, Seal) = maximum 99. Part 2 Bankin (卍禁, Great Seal) = maximum
Chiyudo~: Open to people that are in Squad 4 or Pass the training with Captain of Squad 4 (This is a style of Kido only used for healing purposes)~ 2. Amatsubu (Rain Drop) = low 5. Antidote = low 20. Borotva (Razor) = low 34. Nuime Sutoringu = low 56. Kousei (Regen) = medium Shunpo Level: Oleander is a master at Shunpo and he takes pride on how fast he can move. This aspect of Oleander's being is in fact his deadliest and his best. Oleander is said to know all styles of Shunpo. Oleander trains on this daily and he teaches others as well. ~Dashing~ A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks. ~Furikkā (Flicker step)~ This technique was created by soldiers and officers after seeing how lieutenants and captains had a technique that allows them to move faster than the eye can follow, after studying Shunpo the soldiers and officers came up with this technique similar to Shunpo but different from it as well. Similar to Shunpo, a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high soldier ranking, must be able to possess Furikkā. Furthermore, not like Shunpo this technique is only for short-range but none the less it is a speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. For soldiers it is nearly mastered, yet not perfect. Therefore, a soldier can only move 1-3 feet with this step. For officers Furikkā is fully perfected and move 1-6 feet with this step. Once lieutenant rank they loose this ability and gain Shunpo. ~Senkaimon~ (穿界門, World Penetration Gate) is the dimensional gateway which Shinigami use to enter and leave Soul Society by unlocking it. When guided by a Jigokuchō, the Senkaimon takes the form of a waiting room entered through a sliding door. Humans can also use such a gate through the use of Reishihenkanki (霊子変換 機, Spirit Exchangers), which convert solid matter into spirit particles. ~Shunpo (Flash-Step)~ A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess Shunpo. Furthermore, it is a most fearsome mid-range/long-range speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. All in all, this ability can only be used by lieutenants and captains. For lieutenants it is nearly mastered, yet not perfected. Therefore, it is only of mid-range level 1. For captains Shunpo is of a level 2 maximum ability in which it is fully perfected for both mid-range and long-range. ~Air Walk~ Another skill, though not necessarily related, is the Soul Reaper ability to walk on air using spiritual energy. By collecting and solidifying spiritual particles beneath their feet, Soul Reapers can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. This particular ability can only be obtained from officer level. Furthermore, it cannot necessarily be used every so often, especially for officers. It is an ability that can only be temporarily used but cannot last for a very long period of time. However, for lieutenants, they can stay on air for quite a bit longer and for captains, it can be held for quite a long while considering the great amount of riatsu within a captain ranking individual. ~Senka (Flash Blossom)~ Although Shunpo is connected with this ability, this technique possess a unique name and style of its own. This technique is known as Senka (闪花, Flash Blossom), a flash step combined with a spin to quickly move behind the enemy, followed by a strike aimed to destroy the saketsu chain and the hakusui soul sleep with a combination of two quick thrusts. This technique is one of the two, that Youruichi developed mixing Shunpo to complete its ability. Furthermore, only certain individuals, of high ranking captain level can possess such an ability. ~Utsusemi~ This technique is one of the most difficult speed abilities of them all. Furthermore, this is also one of the two, that Youruichi developed as well. It is the 4 ways of the Shihou through Shunpo which is also known as "Utsusemi". It's ability is a speed known to be so fast that the user leaves an afterimage of him/herself. Its affect is most absolute, superb, and flawless if ever fully perfected. And to be more specific, Utsusemi's speed is so fast, that the enemy can practically feel and touch the physical body of the afterimage and not even know the very fact that it is nothing more but an afterimage. Its very image can easily deceive the eyes of the enemy. This technique is very rare, thus few captains are able to possess such a flawless ability. Furthermore it is most lethal when combining Senka after Utsusemi is executed. Hakuda: Prefers not to use this style in battle if he must be in some kind of combat. Zanpakuto Name: [Name: Yudoku-Shin] [Meaning: Poisonous Heart] Zanpakuto Appearance: The Sealed Zanpakto is pure purple with a lotus on the hilt. This Zanpakto is average length. ✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Shikai Incantation: Dance Elegantly and Deadly, Yudoku-Shin Shikai Appearance: The Zanpakto is same in appearence except Purple chain formed at the hilt of the sword that reaches 5ft and at the end of the chain is a lotus.
Shikai Abilities:
Shikai One {Bodily Kiss} The weapon itself is covered in a waxy like substance. This poison acts like the venom of a spider bite; when an opponent is stabbed by Yudoku-Shin, it severs the brain signals controlling the neural impulses for movement in the limbs of the victim. However, unlike regular paralysis, the pain receptors and nerve endings are unaffected by the weapon, so the victim can still feel pain, even in a paralyzed limb. ~This takes a total of 2 post to circulate and take effect. Once in effect it is frozen for five whole post then it recovers in 2 post.
Shikai 2: {Kiss of Pressure} This poison is based off of Yudoku-Shin's spiritual pressure. This poison eats away at the rachi and spiritual energy of all of those who enter Yudoku-Shin's spiritual pressure besides Oleander. However this pressure only reaches 10 ft around Yudoku-Shin's holder. Those who are effected will feel an uneasy or queasy feeling. ~If one enters this pressure the poison eats away at a 2% a post. However when on exits the pressure they regain a half life of what is taken, so after the first exit one would only regain 1% back. However what makes this ability tricky the percantage is doubled everytime per-re entry. Meaning if someone enters the pressure again they will loose 4% and regain two and this process continues until the end of Shikai. However if one manages to be to be in the swords length, striking distance, or grabs or is pierced by the sword the poison is not in effect
{Kiss of Blood} This ability allows Yudoku-Shin to produce microscopic mist from the handle that is absorbed by Oleander's skin through his pores and inflitrates his blood stream that contanminates his whole body within three post after activation of his Shikai. However the poison does not hurt Oleander because Oleander is aware of all Yudoku-Shin's poisons and has filled his body with vaccines that allows him to host the poisons but not be effected by them. If Oleander manages to infect another target with his blood the poison will start to take effect. ~Once the poison flows into the blood stream, it will take 1 post to circulate throughout the body and then it begins to take effect. This poison cuts off the Nero-Sensors themselves and cuts off all five senses temporarily. After 2 post from circulation post one would loose the sense of smell. Following by taste, touch, sight, and hearing with 2 post bewteen each loss. One will surcumb to total isolation for one post then regains all senses in the same fashion and order as the lost them. {2 post order}
{Morphing Poison} This allows Yudoku-Shin to infuse her rachi based poison with Oleander's energy or rachi based attacks. The only two known attacks are the Shield and the actual Crescent Wave attack. These moves eat away at rachi based attacks they come into contact with. Meaning they will completely eat away weak attacks and only minimize the damage from strong or massive attacks.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Bankai Name: [Yūdoku u~ebu][Poisonous Web] Bankai Appearance: The appearance is the same but now reaitsu leaks from the sword in a eerie form. Bankai Abilities:
Poisonous Web- The sword is plunged into the ground where Oleander is standing. Then one main slim but very sharp string is formed from the hilt of the sword towards the sky. Then off the main string 5 branch off, then 5 would branch off those and continues to form a ginormous web with the radius of .5 of a mile. Each string is coated with a special poison that works like that Bodily Kiss. However this branch is more perfected and even more deadly. Instead of paralyzing a limb, it lulls it "Kills" it. If one is cut by the web the poison would run corse. It will take one post to get affected and it last 10 post and takes 4 to "revive." Also if the same limb has been cut 3 times the limb is "dead" and wont recover until the Zanpakto is sealed. However due to this, Oleander chooses to remain "Immobile" and refuses to move because the poison will effect him as well. ~How this works is once Bankai is in effect, one will roll 1 six sided die if their RPC chooses to move. If one rolls 5-6 they will be cut by the web but if they roll a 1-3 they will be able to move successfully without being cut. Thus this Bankai will be based on chance and not any other variable.
There are 2 other Bankai abilities but because of the high concentration of poison, Oleander chooses not to reveal nor perform them. ✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Personality: Oleander is very nice and very quiet. Oleander can process and adapt to any situation very quickly. He is very observant and very hard working. Oleander does not view politics normally because he tries to fight for everyone equally Personal Likes: Tea, Sweets, Sours, and Reading Personal Dislikes: People, Cruel Remarks, and Disrespect History: Oleander was born in the early times of what would be known as Tokyo, Japan. Oleander was born into the Kagemiya family. Oleander was born to Hirashumi and Naraku along with his 3 older sisters Arumi, Momo, and Izoi. Oleander was a unique child who had different ideas or choices than other boys. He never wanted to play sports as a young child nor did he ever want to do the “traditional male offerings” that his father tried to push down his throat. Ideally it was because the way of Oleander's father attitude towards his own son that drove Hirashumi and Naraku apart. After the divorce was finally decreed, Hirashumi was granted custody of Momo, Izoi, and Oleander while Arumi was now by the age of 18 so she chose to live on her own from that point and Oleander never saw her again.
As a young child Oleander was very found of his sisters Izoi and Momo and coveted what they had. When the middle school years came around Oleander blossomed even more into his “unique” ways of life but now other kids started to notice his weirdness and started to pick on him. When Oleander would return home from school and told his sisters what happened, they would just tell him that he would need to be himself and that is all that mattered. Oleander took this advice to heart and the next day he wore fingernail polish to school Of course he was picked on but what happened after school is what would be the worst even to occur in Oleander's life.
When Oleander began to walk home from school to meet his sisters a group of high school boys rattled Oleander up by pushing him and shoving him in different directions. Of course with all of this physicality and force that was put on Oleander, he began to cry which in turn made the high school kids push and shove harder. At last Oleander was shoved but before another kid could get a hold of him, the force that Oleander was shoved on forced him into a busy street where he was hit by a car at the mere age of twelve thus ending his short human life.
Once Oleander was sent into the Soul Society, he was adopted by the Kagemiya Clan. The Kagemiya's treated Oleander like he was a scared jewel and it was because of all of this love and nurturing that Oleander evolved more into himself and thus causing his true potential to awaken.
At the Soul age of 200, Oleander began his training to become a Soul Reaper. Roka showed vast skills in the art of Shunpo, Kido, and his ways with poison and healing. Oleander always knew how to make everyone happy and knew what to say when it was the appropriate time to say it. Oleander eventually was seen as a “prodigy” It wasn’t until the age of 212 years of Soul Age that Oleander first made contact with Yudoku-Shin.
When first contact was made with his Zanpakto, OleanderRoka dislike her views of life and politics. However through time he would learn to love her and that he was like her in many ways and soon he accepted her and her power. After doing so Oleander was sent to the Academy to become an official Soul Reaper at the age of 215 years of living in the Soul World.
Oleander graduated the Academy at the top of his class due to his keen intelligence and his speed abilities. These two traits are what made him even more renound as a “prodigy” Oleander was admitted into the Soul Society as Squad’s 12 Fourth Seat. Oleander took pride in such an accomplishment, however little did he know that Squad 12 would change his life forever. Oleander was now 217
Oleander was admitted under a deranged captain who’s only goal in life was to create the ultimate Soul Reaper. However his research did get shut down by the 13 Court Guard Squads due to his inhumane ways of research and testing but this did not stop Oleander's Captain. Soon Oleander's Captain ordered Oleander to steal some ingredients from Squad Four and then used this said information to blackmail him, so he could use Oleander as a test subject; due to all of the test Oleander was out of commission for a total of 200 years.
However even after his full recovery from surgery at the age of 417 years of Soul Age, Oleander decided it was not the best time to return to the Soul Society. Oleander then decided to return home.
Oleander returned home for about 50 years before rejoining the 13 Court Guard Squads. During this time of absence Oleander helped the Clan leader with policies and became his advisor and not before long the Clan Head. Oleander also during this time grew stronger and trained even harder as well as doing some soul searching. After coming to peace with everything that surrounded him and becoming Clan Head, Oleander returned to the Soul Society.
When he returned to the Soul Society, Oleander was offered a placement in Squad 12 again but to Oleander's benefit a High Ranking Council Member of Central 46 saw his name and request that Oleander should take the Lt. Exam or either a Captain’s Exam. Oleander chose the latter because he was confident his abilities as a Soul Reaper. Oleander then proceeded to pass his examination and due to his connections in Central 46 and his personality, Oleander choose to become Captain of Squad 4. Oleander trained harder and even hard and unlocked special moves in his Bankai that would eventually cause him to fall greatly ill with some unknown illness. Oleander treated his illness and was noted for his healing skills as well as his poison based skills.
For knowing both tricks of the trade Oleander was retook his position as Captain of Squad 4. After working as Squad 4 Captain for some time, Oleander's illness came back and he had to step down as Captain. After quite a long time of absence and creating his "M.A.S.K.I.N.G" that covers his face that cured his sickness and prevents any poisons from entering his immune systems that are based from his zanpakto, Oleander returned back to the Soul Society and became Squad 4 Captain once again.
Family Line: Kagemiya Friends/Acquaintances: N/A Rivals/Enemies: N/A Love Interest: N/A {Homosexual, Uke}
Affiliation: Soul Society, Gotei 13 Court Guard Squad, & Seireitei Squad: 4 Rank: Captain
~✣✚✣~ Rp Sample: If the moon could talk, what would you think it could say? As the moon began to rise through the velvet scarf, also known as the night sky, it shined like the most luminous pearl anyone could fathom but its beauty was just a masquerade as it revealed the setting of the so called stage down below. The stage was covered in bodies that left a smell of hatred, revenge, & fear. In the middle of this mangled soup stood a lone figure hidden behind a jester’s mask and a dark ominous cloak. Although the figure was in total disguise its eyes shone even brighter than the moons everlasting glow. The figure was breathing slowly as it did so its breath slipped out of the mask like a snake. The figure slowly looked at the moon as its voice began to laugh a playful laugh like that of a child who is enjoying some kind of cruel game. As the voice echoed one could presume that by the sound of this unnatural figure was indeed a voice of a feminine male. His voice echoed throughout the stage, no his stage that he himself had created. His hand slowly moved from his side up towards his mask that covered his face where his wretched smile slithered abroad his entire being. He slowly removed his mask to reveal a young boys face with an evil mans smile. His dark purple eyes shone like that of the moons and he felt like he couldn’t have lived better. Before the figure could do anything after this action he realized he was surrounded in a flash by the Soul Reapers of the 13 Court Guard Squads. The boy’s eyes did not hesitate but look around him and as he did so his smile just grew more intensely until it was at the extent to make someone feel nervous or feel fear itself. Out of the Soul Reapers there was one wearing a Haori showing her dominance and order over the others and she proved it as she stepped forward and spoke with the most demanding tone that figure has heard in a long time. “Jester from the Court of Miracles, you are herby under arrest and you will be put straight to death for your crimes against the 13 Court Guard Squads and the Balance of this world.” The so called Jester slowly turned his attention to the captain as he spoke in a cool and collective tone. “Do you think if the moon could talk would it reveal my secret.” The captain from the Court Guards eyes winded in fear as the moon shined on the Jester’s face and revealing his true appearance towards her. She couldn’t help but stumble her words together as she began to patronize in fear of who stood before her. “I-I-I-It can’t be...Captain...” Unfortunately before the Captain could finish her sentence, she was cut off by a scream of agony and pain. Echoes of screams that occurred that night were said to reach the Soul Society itself and they even caused the very base to tremor in fear. The next day bodies of all kinds were recovered whether it was the body of regular Shinigami’s or whether it was the Captain’s body but the Jester’s body was never found. What hurt the soul society the most was that two captains disappeared that night and never heard of again whether they where killed or not the Court Guard Squads can only prove one of these bodies dead while the other remains a complete mystery. Oh if the moon could talk it would reveal so many secrets to all of the wondering ears who are waiting to hear, but the one secret it would keep to itself if it could talk; was the secret of how the Master of Games stained the moon itself with blood and how he this unknown “Jester” would let nothing reveal his true identity and maybe this is why the moon will never talk and only watch as the stage is set up again & again. OOC: I am sooo sorry but I did not notice the whole do not post a sub forum ubtil this mourning. Please forgive me. I would be glad to delete it. Also is there anything I can do to help the clean up process. I would love to help.
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 11:28 am
» For Bodily kiss, I think 5 posts are too much, considering a 1 to 1 battle. I'd say maybe 1-3 posts instead. » For Kiss of Pressure, right after you reenter, 4% of damage occurs immediately, but does it go back to 2% after the reentry? » Kiss of blood, I believe the senses, of sight and hearing, should not be lost together. Instead, maybe one or the other as they are the two most important senses someone can have after all. I also believe you should move this to become a Bankai Ability instead of a Shikai Ability. » I also think morphing poison should be mainly a defensive ability.
The Bankai Ability Poisonous Web, has a really unique touch to it which I really like xD I'm just confused on the prhase 'takes 4 to revive' Does it refer to being cured? I think you should reveal the other abilities of the Bankai for the judges. Cause they have to verify if the other 2 abilities are not Over Powered and such.
Just some feedback. ><;
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 11:58 am
A - I'd say if you ever want access to other bankai abilities to get them approved ahead of time. You can't activate any ability later if it hasn't been approved ahead of time. Still reading but that was my first observation.
B - The history conflicts with the history of the current 12th squad captain. : ( So ah, I can't approve or disapprove since that's my character.
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 11:59 am
AcesOfSpadezz » For Bodily kiss, I think 5 posts are too much, considering a 1 to 1 battle. I'd say maybe 1-3 posts instead. » For Kiss of Pressure, right after you reenter, 4% of damage occurs immediately, but does it go back to 2% after the reentry? » Kiss of blood, I believe the senses, of sight and hearing, should not be lost together. Instead, maybe one or the other as they are the two most important senses someone can have after all. I also believe you should move this to become a Bankai Ability instead of a Shikai Ability. » I also think morphing poison should be mainly a defensive ability. The Bankai Ability Poisonous Web, has a really unique touch to it which I really like xD I'm just confused on the prhase 'takes 4 to revive' Does it refer to being cured? I think you should reveal the other abilities of the Bankai for the judges. Cause they have to verify if the other 2 abilities are not Over Powered and such. Just some feedback. ><; Bodily Kiss- In actuality, the other guild told me to raise it to 5 because I orginally had 3 but the mods told me to raise it, if I wish to survive in battle. Bodily pressure, what you say is correct. One gains half life if they exit. Meaning 2 will be lost, one will be gained back, if re-enter occurs it goes up to 4 and two will be gained back. Then 8 and then regain 4 etc.... Kiss of blood- The point of this whole attack is the loss of senses, temporarily. The whole point of the zanpakto's ability is to create poisons that effect the senses and physical attributes. Thus this attack follows the ability law accourdingly. Morphing Poison is a defensive tatic. There are various forms in shape in which he can perform. Bonkai Revive=cure. However since it stated one will "kill", naturally the cure would be named after the polar opposite literary terms. Oleander only reveals one Bankai because he will only use one Bankai ability ever. If one were to read his detailed bio, it would reveal that Oleander does not perform these abilities because of the extreme extent the poisons cause. Thus why he wears the M.A.S.K.I.N.G. or he will die. Thank you for your personal view and I will take them into consideration. ^.^
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 12:21 pm
Somber Ash A - I'd say if you ever want access to other bankai abilities to get them approved ahead of time. You can't activate any ability later if it hasn't been approved ahead of time. Still reading but that was my first observation. B - The history conflicts with the history of the current 12th squad captain. : ( So ah, I can't approve or disapprove since that's my character. O.o. How does this conflict? Please let me know, So I may change it. I do not wish to cause friction. Changing the bio numbers is a minor detail ^.^
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 12:25 pm
Before I get into the nitty gritty of this profile- there's a conflict between Oleander's history and that of the Squad 12 Captain, Nyhil. Until that conflict is resolved, whether a change on your part or by a discussion with his player, Somber Ash, I can't give anything further.
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 12:25 pm
Kiyoki Takinaga Somber Ash A - I'd say if you ever want access to other bankai abilities to get them approved ahead of time. You can't activate any ability later if it hasn't been approved ahead of time. Still reading but that was my first observation. B - The history conflicts with the history of the current 12th squad captain. : ( So ah, I can't approve or disapprove since that's my character. O.o. How do this conflict? Please let me know, So I may change it. I do not wish to cause friction. Changing the bio numbers is a minor detail ^.^ Well in Nyhil's history he recently (last year or so) killed Mayuri and took over the squadron. I don't think much of your history conflicts other than the having been offered the position. Though I only did a quick scan. I don't wanna discourage you since I like your PC, they and Nyhil honestly could get along given how similar their powers are. XD
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 12:34 pm
Somber Ash Kiyoki Takinaga Somber Ash A - I'd say if you ever want access to other bankai abilities to get them approved ahead of time. You can't activate any ability later if it hasn't been approved ahead of time. Still reading but that was my first observation. B - The history conflicts with the history of the current 12th squad captain. : ( So ah, I can't approve or disapprove since that's my character. O.o. How do this conflict? Please let me know, So I may change it. I do not wish to cause friction. Changing the bio numbers is a minor detail ^.^ Well in Nyhil's history he recently (last year or so) killed Mayuri and took over the squadron. I don't think much of your history conflicts other than the having been offered the position. Though I only did a quick scan. I don't wanna discourage you since I like your PC, they and Nyhil honestly could get along given how similar their powers are. XD Ok changed, I deleted all Squad 12 info except the begining. We can assume the nameless Captain was Mayuri.
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 12:42 pm
Kiyoki Takinaga Somber Ash Kiyoki Takinaga Somber Ash A - I'd say if you ever want access to other bankai abilities to get them approved ahead of time. You can't activate any ability later if it hasn't been approved ahead of time. Still reading but that was my first observation. B - The history conflicts with the history of the current 12th squad captain. : ( So ah, I can't approve or disapprove since that's my character. O.o. How do this conflict? Please let me know, So I may change it. I do not wish to cause friction. Changing the bio numbers is a minor detail ^.^ Well in Nyhil's history he recently (last year or so) killed Mayuri and took over the squadron. I don't think much of your history conflicts other than the having been offered the position. Though I only did a quick scan. I don't wanna discourage you since I like your PC, they and Nyhil honestly could get along given how similar their powers are. XD Ok changed, I deleted all Squad 12 info except the begining. We can assume the nameless Captain was Mayuri. Yeah that works, re-reading it fits in way better. Particularly as it seems both were wronged in the same general way. Oleander might actually remember Nyhil from before his imprisonment - if only barely. Thanks. With that, looks fine to me. None of the powers really bug me. As I'm told it's fine: I approve. You still need two others. XD
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 1:23 pm
Hm... -nod- I really like the direction you've taken him in. And with that I gladly approve. One more and you'll be ready to play.
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Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:05 pm
✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: Sasori00923 ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Yagari Shizuka Race: Shinigami Gender: Male Birth Date: August 12 Age: ??? Appears in his mid 20's Blood Type: ???
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣
 Appearance:He is very tall and muscularly lean and he is seen smoking a cigarette most of the time. Yagari's clothing is like that of a Bartender in the World of the Living and consists of a white shirt with a black vest, black pants, black dress shoes, and a black bow.
Height: 6'3
Weight: 220
Eye Color: Light Golden, Light Amber
Hair Color: Blonde
Tattoos or Scars: None
Anything Unusual: Outfit
Equipment:*Metallic Leather Gloves - As a gift from an acquaintance in the 12th Division the gloves Yagari wears are crafted to be extremely durable and with a special layer of metal which encompasses the entirety of his wrist and from his knuckles to almost the tip of his fingers. This metallic alloy is of the same consistency of a zanpakuto but with the mobility of leather and as such allows Yagari to block direct blows from a zanpakuto with his hands to better suit his style of combat and it also increases the power of his punches. (Just Imagine these completely black)*Metallic Leather Shoes - These boots are made by the same person who made Yagari's gloves and hold the same properties, the distinct difference between the shoes and gloves is that the shoes house hidden knives on ther tip. The knives are about 6 inches long and serve to add a deadly element to Yagari's kicks. *Throwing Knives - For some reason after a mission in the World of the living many years ago Yagari became obsessed with throwing knives, after testing them some time he added them to his arsenal and now carries at least 20 of these, they are all held in a holster which wraps around his whole waist like a belt. His proficiency with them is as good as any champ and he can use them to fight when he finds that the opponent is to weak for him to draw his own zapakuto. [CLICK HERE] ✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Kido: Yagari Isn't exactly the most resourceful conveyor of Kido, what little spells he does use he can use masterfully. He can preform up to 30 in Hado and Bakudo.
Shunpo Level: Yagari is an extremely capable user of flash steps and the techniques associated with it. He has been noted to be one of the fastest shinigami in recent years, his speed is enough to outmaneuver most regular Captain class opponents with ease. He is skilled enough to use Senka and Utsusemi almost flawlessly.
Hakuda: He has been cited as one of the unrequited masters of hand to hand combat. Yagari spent numerous years training to achieve a mastery level in the art of hand to hand fighting by creating his own unique style. His style combines lightning fast hand strikes and kicks, grappling moves and deadly strikes with bladed and pointed weapons as an extension of his own body which make his style very unpredictable. Aside from this he has also mastered techniques such as;
Ikkotsu (一 骨, "Single Bone")
Tesshō (鉄 掌, "Iron Palm")
Sōkotsu (双 骨, "Double Bone")
Kazaguruma (風 車, "Windmill")
Sandobaggu Bīto (サンドバッグ・ビート, "Sandbag Beat")
Tsukiyubi (撞 指, Thrust Fingers)
Zanjutsu: His Zanjutsu is as expected from a former Captain of the 11th Division. During his time as a Captain he was hailed as one of the best within the Gotei. Yagari constantly forced himself to fight with his unreleased zanpakuto and learn as much blade schools as possible and as such he is a very formidable opponent who uses dual weaponry.
Zanpakuto Name: Tsukigami 月 神 (Moon God)
Zanpakuto Appearance: Tsukigami's sealed state takes the form of two Ninjato blades which are sheathed together in opposite directions and worn upright on his back.[CLICK HERE]
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Shikai Incantation: Otoroe 衰 え (Wane)
Shikai Appearance: As opposed to growing in size like in most releases Yagari's blades shrink down. In it's shikai state Tsukigami takes the form of 2 Knuckle Knives, the handle on them is a burning skull and the blade itself is a large slotted blade with flame designs. In this state Yagari utilizes a mixture of hand to hand with his zanpakuto which can deflect direct attacks or strip away blades with it's hooked notch.[CLICK HERE]
Shikai Abilities:
*Tsukigami no seishin 月 神 の 精 神 (Moon God's Spirit) [Passive Ability] - As soon as the shikai is entered Yagari receives a 20% boost in all physical attributes in exchange for his ability to perform kido of any kind.
*Mikadzuki 三 日 月 (Crescent Moon) - This attack fires a crescent shaped wave of silver energy from the blade, the attack can cause moderate to severe bodily and burn damage. The power of this technique is comparable to an Adjuchas level Hollow's Cero. This attack being a wave of explosive energy rather than slicing makes it ideal for use in close quarters and Yagari's style of fighting and zapkuto are the best way of utilizing it to the fullest extent by mixing it in with his hakuda moves, by utilizing it this way a hit is almost insured. Yagari takes damage from the explosion equaling roughly 1/4 of it's power when used this way, if not it's fired as a regular mid to long range attack..
*Tsuki no hansha 月 の 反 射 (Reflection of the Moon) - By focusing reiatsu into his blades they emits a bright silver color, when a spiritual based attack or a kido spell is fired towards Yagari he may 'punch' said attack to deflect it in the direction he hits it. Yagari may only deflect an attack weaker than his own output of reaitsu meaning than while in shikai he may only deflect up level 50 spells and energy based attacks of comparable strength.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Bankai Name: Tsukigami no shinpan 月 神 の 審 判 (Judgement of the Moon God)
Bankai Incantation: Kurayami ni mawasu 暗 闇 に 回 す (Turn to Darkness)
Bankai Appearance: When Yagari activates his bankai he releases the entirety of his reiatsu without care for those in the near vicinity. Given the sheer amount of energy he possesses the sheer brunt of releasing his reiatsu is enough to completely paralyze, or even kill lesser beings while rendering considerably weaker spiritually aware beings into a state of extreme duress and uneasiness. His appearance itself does not change his blade however takes a drastic change. The blades turn into a pair of gauntlets that run up to his shoulder, they are fully black with silver accents and rugged edges. The gloves of said gauntlets are clawed and have short spikes on the knuckles while containing the actual blade on the elbows. The gauntlets are flexible like leather but since they are in effect his zanpakuto he can block strikes with them or any part of them.[Fore-arm to shoulder portion][Gloves] (Now imagine a fusion of the latter 2 with the specifications I pointed out.)
Bankai Abilities:
*Tsukigami no shoji 月 神 の 所 持 (Possession of the Moon God) [Passive Ability] - As soon as his Bankai is entered Yagari receives a 50% increase in all physical attributes as opposed to the 20% gained in Shikai in exchange for the ability to use any kind of kido.
*Mangetsu 満 月 (Full Moon) - An outline of reiatsu forms in the hand until a solid clump of energy is seen on the hands then by 'punching' the air or a person the energy is fired forward. The attack explodes at contact rather than slicing and has power comparable to an unreleased Espada's Cero. Yagari tends to use this technique in quick succession by throwing the first punch as an uppercut and when the opponent is sent upwards Yagari uses flash step to appear in the air and punch him downwards in a devastating 1-2 punch combo. This technique has a 3 post cool down.
*Mangetsu no han'ei 満 月 の 反 映 (Reflection of the Full Moon) - Like it's Shikai counterpart this technique works by focusing reiatsu into his blades, when this is done they emit a bright silver color, when a spiritual based attack or a kido spell is fired towards Yagari he may 'punch' said attack to deflect it in the direction he hits it. While in Bankai Yagari may deflect attacks comparable to strength to a spell in the 90's range, this is done by absorbing half of the attack's damage and using it to re-fire it towards an opponent. Half is absorbed, the other half is either deflected elsewhere or sent back at the opponent to effectively send their own attack back at them. This attack has a 2 post cool down.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Physical Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Intelligence: Yagari isn't so much intelligent as he is cunning, he isn't what you would recall as the brightest light bulb in the store when it comes to most subjects. His brain seems to function in accordance to his interests only which lay in fighting. Along Yagari's intellectual shortcomings is also his lack of memory for things outside of his immediate interests. He has been shown, known and proven to have an absolutely horrible memory for most things but when it comes to battle strategy and battles he is able to recall them to near exact details with particular ease. Yagarii has never been one to be in tune with the emotions of others and is often viewed as an extremely apathetic person. In reality he is just a clueless fool, his cluelessness borders on the remarkably stupid side most of the time causing some general comical relief to others and serving as a trigger to his horrible temper.
Athletic Skill: Yagari is an extremely athletic person, his training and way of life made him a rather well versed person in combat and his own style of fighting has helped attribute to his skills.
Strength: A true monster when it comes to raw physical strength Yagari draws his power from his natural fortitude and extensive training. The raw power he possess has the ability to level large buildings with ease or send people flying back a good distance with particular ease. When using Hakuda techniques, he can deliver potentially life threatening attacks to his opponent and with a blade adding to his strength, he is highly unpredictable and lethal in his own right. His large size and muscle tone can be misleading to his strength and is often a point of focus between opponents and sparring partners and is enhanced even further in shikai and bankai.
Reiatsu: Saisei holds an extremely large amount of reiatsu, so much so that this rather than pure skill was the main reason he was admitted into the Shin'ō Academy rather than any other attribute he possessed. The sheer brunt of releasing his reiatsu is enough to completely paralyze, or even kill lesser beings while rendering considerably weaker spiritually aware beings into a state of extreme duress and uneasiness; His reiatsu is said to be almost twice the regular Captain class although he keeps it suppressed most of the time unless in a dire fight to the level of a Lieutenant.
Speed: Yagari is an extremely fast person, be it with flash steps or with the actual body speed; I.E. striking, dodging, etc. His style of fighting depends on speed and by training numerous years he has achieved the optimal amount for his style.
Agility: Look to speed
Stamina: Since Yagari has such a large amount of Reiatsu in his body his spiritual stamina has always been in excellent condition. His physical stamina on the other hand is the result of training and combat experience for years and it has made him extremely durable in terms of energy. Thanks to this Yagari can fight for large periods of time on end without having to worry about conserving energy, he holds enough power now to be able to dispose of much of his opponents without having to exert himself to the limit and as such he hasn't seen true fatigue in quite some time.
Durability: Yagari can certainty take a beating, and then some. He has been seen taking heavy damage while still being able to launch an attack of his own and go on to win a fight. Like most monsters with unusually high Reiatsu Yagari's body is coated by a layer of energy that stops considerably weak attacks. As a result of this Yagari's fighting style leaves little room for concern regarding his well being. Although he shrugs off most injuries and continues to fight with reckless abandon he is sensible enough to know when to avoid or block an attack. He isn't exactly the hospital type and so he tends to avoid going to the 4th Squad Barracks whenever he gets into a scuffle, he instead opts for the ole' sleep and eat method which seems to work well for him but if the situation calls for it he swallows his pride and goes get treated.
Endurance: When it comes to physical endurance Yagari is at the higher end of the charts, his reiatsu, training and bloody lifestyle have conditioned him with the passing of years to the point where his body no longer registers pain on a regular level and allows him to keep fighting despite most injuries.
Flexibility: Look to athletic skills.✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Personality: Yagari has a very short temper and can get angry very easily. Whenever someone is near him and says or does something that irritates him, he would throw something at them or simply hit them and knock them out. Yagari will strike down any who dare stand in his path with sheer power, he is a rather vindictive and cruel man with harsh methods when it comes to his enemies and will not hesitate to utterly destroy anyone who would dare threaten him, however, Yagari never beat up women and whenever he is annoyed by their constant talking, he just calmly walks away. He is a sarcastic, ill mannered, tactless a**; Nevertheless, Yagari loves his younger sister Yukumi and was even concerned about her well being when she insisted on joining the 13 Court Guard Squads and when it comes to Yukumi he tends to be overprotective and a bit overbearing.
Personal Likes: Drinking, Smoking, Fighting, general vices.
Personal Dislikes: Prudes, Kill-joys, formal 'work'.
History: Yagari had been born in the North Rukon and was abandoned shortly afterwards. He grew up alone and locked in a constant struggle for survival like most souls in the Northern Districts, Yagari carved a path of blood through everywhere he passed until reaching the districts closest to the Seiretei; Here he was found and taken in by a kind man, a tailor. While in his care Yagari was complacent, they're shop was frequented by shinigami and as such business was good, after some time however thieves and other low lifes started targeting the shop for it's constant income. One night after many failed requests to the shinigami to protect the store Yagari armed himself with a simple Katana and as a thief came to rob the store at night he went after him, having lost his temper Yagari lashed out and killed the thief. Passing nearby were some shinigami who as soon as they felt his reiatsu flocked to the area, they saw as Yagari decimated him and proceeded to encourage him in coming to the Academy. Thinking about the first fatherly figure he had he agreed to go, once there he was quickly taken note of. His abnormally high reiatsu and strength got him the notice of several high ranking officials. He finished the academy in only 4 years and went on to join the expeditionary unit to Hueco Mundo, during his time here he gained invaluable experience and strength.
Upon coming back to Soul Society he was placed in Squad 2 for some time, here his reputation preceded him among it's members. His temper was something he couldn't exactly control, it gave him many problems, drinking was also a huge problem for him. In his years in Soul Society he was put in jail numerous times only to be latter released, his gravest offense was killing a fellow shinigami; The latter was under the influence of a hollow and although he only defended himself he was sent to the Nest of Maggots, in here he honed his skills even further with the fact that he had to fight other inmates, he served a sentence for the better part of a Century before being released once more. Once out he paid a visit to his 'father', since his departure he had taken in other children and had one of his own, a young girl named Yukumi. She was a precious child and was one of the the things that kept him on the positive side of things for years, after some time he was called back on by the Gotei. He spent years as a Lt. for the 11th Squad, after some time spent in the squad he began having friction with the Captain Blableblibloblu (Yes It's a hypothetical Name, I just don't have any particular name in mind); Yagari didn't like his methods, he was a power hungry bully and when he gave the chance to Yagari, he challenged him. Yagari had confidence in his abilities and as he began fighting it seemed even, after a short while the whole squad had flocked to see the fight between the Captain and Yagari the Lieutenant of the Division. This is when Yagari stopped his ruse; Releasing his blade's Bankai Yagari simply proceeded to pummel the Captain into submission, as the fight wined down the Captain urged Yagari to reconsider, he argued that he had much to give still. Yagari refused and as the Captain launched a last ditch attack Yagari spun to the side and using the unique angle of his elbow blade succeeded in decapitating him. The other squad members were in awe at the sight, Yagari simply sealed his zanpakuto and sat on the stairs of the barracks, his victory in front of the other members of the squad meant he had at least 200 witnesses and by law this made Yagari the new Kenpachi. In his new position he spent many years, he gained a reputation for being a cold blooded killer; Many were disgusted by such a man while the ones who got to know him better admired a man with such tenacity. After a few centuries of being the Kenpachi Yagari fed up with the rigors of being a Captain decided to leave. Since this was considered treason and desertion he was sent to jail once more, here he spent a minor amount of time since a major conflict broke out and his abilities were needed; After helping to resolve the situation he was released and allowed to lead his life as he saw fit. Now Yagari is without a squad, waiting to see what they will do with him now.
Family Line: Yukumi Shizuka (Sister)
Friends/Acquaintances: Just ask
Rivals/Enemies: Just ask
Love Interest: None for now
Affiliation: Gotei 13?
Squad: Up for suggestion
Rank: Unknown as of yet
~✣✚✣~
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Posted: Fri Aug 02, 2013 2:12 pm
I approve of Kagemiya-san~. ^^ Seeing how the new Shizuka profile isn't exactly finished, I'll wait 'til it's done to look over it.
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