Custom Talents

[Hinote Tosatsu]

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Username:
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
RPC Name:
Raphael Saki

RPC Rank:
D
Bloodline/Clan/Demon:
N/a

Profession:
Sealing Master
Ninja Types:
Speed Shinobi
Tactical Ninja

Talent Description:
Raphael is treated as having the Sealing Hand Benefit on one condition, He has to use an open palmed strike that is part of a taijutsu style. Until Jounin rank, he is unable to use this without soaking his hands in ink, or blood.

Raphael is also able to use Fuuinjutsu as a passive ability, meaning drawing and activating a seal do not take his action for the post. This does not work if both are done in the same post.

All Fuuinjutsu costs 3 chakra less than it would normally to activate to a minimum of 1. This does not stack with any other benefit.
Talent Sacrifice:
Raphael is unable to take a Jounin rank benefit.

Raphael has to expend an extra point of chakra for every technique that is not Fuuinjutsu related.

Raphael is incapable of utilizing Genjutsu. Raphael may be exceedingly intelligent, but his optical nerves aren't connected to his chakra system. This is due to his gate of rest being deficient. This also makes him unable to learn the eight Gates.

How it happened:
Raphael is one of a very few select shinobi who is exceptionally gifted in the arts of Sealing. He is believed to have a bloodline that gives him this ability, although he'd be the first known member. He is actually just exceptionally gifted and didn't like to write out large seals, so Raphael just spent four years learning how to mark an object with nothing other than his hands, a technique he learned of while reading and by inquiring to the upper shinobi in his village.

But this one I shall explain for you.

First benefit grants a jounin rank benefit. That is something that will not be allowed in any situation. Furthermore, the only type of person who could achieve the method you stated, would be an ink bloodline member. The method that allows jounin shinobi to perform that feat is actually possibly easier than the method you would need to use it your way.

The third benefit, reduces the cost of seals. The cost of seals cannot be altered by any benefit, because they have a required minimum capable of activating them. Think of it like a computer program. It won't run if the computer will not give it sufficient resources and power.

First sacrifice, you lose a jounin rank benefit. I suppose that'd be a good method to keep you from taking ANOTHER jounin benefit, but this talent grants you one at genin, so the weakness is actually meaningless.

And the third weakness is actually rather confusing. What does his optic nerve have to do with genjutsu?

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If you want the only remaining benefit of this talent, my recommendation is to simply take combo user as one of your types.  

[Hinote Tosatsu]

TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

Username:
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
RPC Name:
Raphael Saki

RPC Rank:
D
Bloodline/Clan/Demon:
N/a

Profession:
Sealing Master
Ninja Types:
Speed Shinobi
Tactical Ninja

Talent Description:
Raphael is capable of learning Nara clan jutsu as if he were two ranks higher. ( Aka, he can learn Nara clan technqiues two ranks above himself without penalty. )

Raphael is capable of moving rapidly and maintaining any Nara clan techniques that would otherwise keep him immobile as long as his feet retain contact with his shadow. This nullifies the abilities of the Imitation technique and merely keeps the target immobilized. Once this is engaged, the Target is only immobilized for two posts.
Talent Sacrifice:
Rapahel is incapable of using any jutsu other than Nara clan techniques. Seals do not count, although he is incapable of Space/Time jutsu.

Raphael is limited to one taijutsu style and one weapon style.
How it happened:
Raphael is one of the most gifted Nara clan members to ever be born. His raw ability rivals that of even the clan head, although his current level of mastery is very sub par. He is expected to be the next Clan head, even though he is from a branch of the family that used the clan techniques as a leisure activity.

Quote:

Okay, I think I've got it this time. If the two post limit on the after he moves portion is too much time, then I can reduce it to one post. Or If that isn't allowed, I'd like to have the ability to use another Nara clan technique while maintaining the previous technique.

Alright, first off, I would like to draw your attention to something for a moment. Notice, that almost all of the talents so far approved, have only had one actual benefit, and in most cases, multiple sacrifices to attain it. Attempting to gain multiple unrelated benefits will continue to cause your talent to be denied, no matter whether the sacrifice would normally be sufficient or not. Talents are meant to give one opportunity to increase the ability of your RPC, while losing power in another area. ONE. For any others, you would be better advised to carefully consider your other RPC creation options, such as types, profession, rank benefits, and bloodline.

Now, with that said, this talent would still have to be denied if it only had one of the benefits.

"Raphael is capable of learning Nara clan jutsu as if he were two ranks higher. ( Aka, he can learn Nara clan technqiues two ranks above himself without penalty. )"

This creates a genin with the capability of learning all accessible B rank jutsu. Regardless of the difficulty of doing so added by the currency system, that is far too much for a genin to be allowed. Talents that increase your rank as related to learning in this way will always be denied.

"Raphael is capable of moving rapidly and maintaining any Nara clan techniques that would otherwise keep him immobile as long as his feet retain contact with his shadow. This nullifies the abilities of the Imitation technique and merely keeps the target immobilized. Once this is engaged, the Target is only immobilized for two posts. "

This one removes a bloodline weakness. That is something that is not allowed in talents, and also the reason bloodline is a section of the application. I can't help but notice by the way, that you are applying for a Nara talent, yet your bloodline slot is empty?

Please give talents that have been previously approved and denied a read over before you apply again, to see what has been deemed acceptable, and what has not.