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The Time Vortex

8,250 Points

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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 5:49 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Ushi-oni - Monster
Looking For: Crit on everything, please
Quest Link: Katsuo Hiromasa

Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2012 9:43 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Horseman
Looking For: Over all crit/help
Quest Link: Hua Bao Yu

Bronze Coffee

Stubborn Senshi

13,275 Points

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Kitomyx

Questionable Loiterer

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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2012 1:21 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Dryad - Monster
Looking For: Crit on everything, please...?
Quest Link: Catreena Bough

Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 12:08 am

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Siren - Monster
Looking For: Crit on anything and everything!
Quest Link: Fayelee Aviar

Vella Raptor

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Sheyenne Thunderstorm

Bashful Wolf

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Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2012 8:41 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Werewolf- Monster
Looking For: Crit on everything.
Quest Link: Here

Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:06 am

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Grim Reaper - Reaper
Looking For: Crit on everything, please.
Quest Link: Tress J. Gervene

Kitomyx

Questionable Loiterer

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Cheekiebirdiee

Mysterious Kitten

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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2012 4:44 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Frost Demon
Looking For: General crit please ou o b
Quest Link: Here

Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:20 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Leviathan - Monster
Looking For: Overall Crit
Quest Link: Inna

Sirene Naiads

Romantic Senshi

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~Kiana_Nala~

Romantic Raider

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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 8:09 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Astomi - Monster
Looking For: ALL THE CRITS
Quest Link: Ornella
Did overhaul on her. She's now renamed and look for crits on next page.

Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 11:30 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Strix - Demon
Looking For: Critique EVERYTHING. I'd love to get questions about him to help me flesh him out more! What else can I add to his personality? What would be good to know about him?
Quest Link: Sinclair

Vethrfolnir

Timid Cat

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CheshireKttty

Magical Cat

13,600 Points

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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:16 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Kitsune - Demon
Looking For: Pretty much everything and anything XD Cause you know... why not? (but seriously, I'm always interested in improving my characters)
Quest Link: LINK

Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 9:17 am

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Lapin Angelique - Demon
Looking For: Crit on everything, please! biggrin
Quest Link: Rosalia

Melodine Cantus

Melodious Star

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phantompanther13

Dangerous Flame

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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:15 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Demon
Looking For:
I have some questions about his lighter posted at the end there, if a staff member could help me out with the best way to handle that. I'd be willing to drop it for this shop, but I'd rather he keep it even as just a prop, same with the smoking habit, but that is something he can pick up later in life or something.
Could you all make sure he is good for the shop cannon? I did some research through other demons, but if there is something I misunderstood please let me know.
If there is anything else, let me know. 3nodding
Quest Link: here