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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:25 am


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Alright, I'll just pull up one from something else and let you reply to it. Let me know if you wanted something more combat oriented.


Xavier stood, waiting for his opponent's move. He had his hand on his sword, that was on his back. Ready to attack should the need arise. He was ready to let RB do it's job. Although if the man decided to stay at a rank Xavier wasn't sure the UV rounds in the chimaera would do the trick. "It's your move, what's it going to be." Xavier said, irritated he was even put in this situation in the first place.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:16 am


RPC Name: Rivkah Lancaster

Rpc Rank: Trainee

Type of Pet/Summon: Undead Kitten
Summon/Pet Rank: D

Summon Speed/Strength: 7/1

Summon Skills:
Run away: This skill allows for a burst of double speed to escape from a bad situation at a command word from Rivkah

Rp Sample: Rivkah was pressed down against a fallen tree trunk, facing the most evil being she had yet to meet. Valr sat, mewling, when Rivkah screamed “Terais” at which point the small kitten turned and fled, leaving the scene at extreme speeds.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 10:45 am


Acknowledged that DG is the regulator here, but I would like to offer some feedback in regards to Orleans' dragon summon. I feel that, as it stands now the dragon offers a very high amount of versatility and is very, very powerful. I'd like to recommend that two or three of the summons ranks be removed at every other interval. SSS, S, B, and D would be ideal ranks to keep, while removing the others would allow for a better balance and a more gradual rise in power.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 1:44 pm


DGwar
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This is a really complex summon. Does this mean that in E form he can only use whatever is part of the E form,and in D form he can only use whatever is part of the D form? ETC?


Satsui-No-Hadou21395


I see almost nothing wrong with this aside from an E rank summon being on par with a regular person for the most part. If you can give me a really good sample I'll be able to judge it better. If it helps I can even give you a post to respond to if you want to make it more realistic.

He can only use things from the form he is on and below, Ex if he's on C-form, he can use the things below it too. With the exception of flight at SS-rank.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:16 pm


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RPC Name: Vulcan Fullbuster

Rpc Rank: Student (Keep in mind that my character is a Crow. And this will be the animal bound to him.)

Type of Pet/Summon: Dragon. (This is the creature I am bonded to.)

Summon/Pet Rank: Maximus' rank changes as Vulcan's does. It will go up ranks and gain new abilities and such as it goes along.


Summon Skills:
Size shift: Energy consumption depends on size addition subtraction, and can only shift to sizes his rank or below. Only skills of the size for the rank he is and below can be used. Meaning he can be at the A-rank size, and use the B-rank skills.
The sizes for each rank,
E-rank
Height: One foot (when on all fours and neck arched/down lower) 3 foot six inches when on his hind legs, (And neck arched)
Speed/strength: 10/3
Weight: 54 lbs (Due to the build of his body, and the weight of scales. despite its seemingly lack of strength at the lower ranks.)
Wingspan: 6 feet
Basic Description: In this form he is mainly speed reliant, and looks more like a young dragon. He has large wings, a bladed tail, and short horns. Capable of breathing flames with E-rank strength. This is a passive skill.

D-rank
Height: Two feet tall. (On all fours.) Four foot six inches when standing (Neck still arched, and on hind legs)
Speed/Strength: 9/5
Weight: 75 lbs
Wingspan: 8 feet
Basic Description: In this form he has taken a leap forward in growth, doubling in size, and gaining a strength matching that of a basic humans while maintaining a decent speed. In this form his horns are larger, and his tails have grown also. The bladed spike on the end of his tail is now the size of a dagger rather than a small knife, and it is sharper. Spikes begin to emerge along his spine. Capable of breathing D-rank flames these flames are passive.

C-rank
Height: 4 foot (On all fours) 7 foot 6 inches (when standing on hind legs, and neck arched)
Speed/strength: 7/7
Weight 123 lbs
Wingspan: 12 feet
Basic Description: At this rank he is able to carry one person. But only one. And it slows his speed by one. But that's not all he gains, at this point he is in the 'Teenage' stage of his growth. His spikes are larger, his flames stronger. His tails blade is now the size of a short sword (Now c-rank and passive, though this is as far as the passive firebreathing skills reach the rest will cost energy).

B-rank
Height: 8 feet (On all fours) 12 feet 11 inches (When standing on his hind legs)
Speed/Strength: 5/10
Weight: 556 lbs
Wingspan: 24 feet
Basic Description: His size has doubled, he is even stronger than before, and his scales are getting even more durable. His tails blade is now a fairly wide blade and as long as a long sword. It is now developing a curve to it.

A-rank
Height: 16 feet (On all fours) 25 feet (standing on his hind legs)
Speed/Strength: 4/14
Weight: 1125 lbs
Wingspan: around 42 feet
Basic Description: Once again his size has doubled. His scales harder, but they also weigh more slowing him down. But that matters not for his size and strength can make up for the lack of speed. The tail blade is about the size of a large curved great sword, He is a very menacing beast at this point.

S-rank
Height: 32 feet. (Nearly 50 feet tall when on his hind quarters.)
Speed/Strength: 4/18
Weight: 2250 lbs
Wingspan: Nearly 84 feet.
Basic Description: At this point, the pact between him and Vulcan is becoming clear. As he exceeds the size of even the largest natural dragons. His strength goes nearly unmatched, yet he loses no more speed. His scales are rather durable, and his tail is now twice the size of any great sword. He is quite possibly at this point the most formidable dragon in all of Rykros. But it doesn't stop here.

SS-rank
Height: 64 feet. (nearly 100 feet when standing on his hind legs.)
Speed/Strength: 1/20
Weight: 10,000 lbs. (This is an estimate. His true weight in this form is unmeasured.)
Wingspan: 168 feet.
Basic Description: At this stage he loses the ability to fly, he weighs far too much due to the muscle and scales he has built up, but that doesn't mean he can't cause unnaturally powerful gusts of wind with his powerful wings. Or use them to jump higher than most. His tail blade? You can just assume you don't want to get hit by this massive blade. When he breaths fire it would clearly cover most of the land before him. This is a truly monstrous form, imagine what it would be like for this beast to roar at you. twisted

SSS-rank
Height: 5 foot eleven inches.
Speed/Strength: 11/11
Weight: 256 lbs
Wingspan: 12 feet.
Basic Description: In this form he takes the form of a humanoid, with wings and a tail. But don't be mislead, his strength is greater than that of any draconian and his speed in this form makes him nearly unmatchable in air combat. He is incapable of any fire breath attacks in this form. His skin is as durable as steel. And his claws, and talons (which appear, and disappear passively) can tear a hole in titanium with ease.
Note: This form can be used passively outside of combat. But in battle it costs 200 energy each post.
(Size does play a role in the skills below, and he is limited to those skills in the rank of the size he has taken and the ones below that.)

E-rank: Flight
Description: Maximus simply takes flight, and can maintain it as long as he likes.
C-rank: Tail thrust
Description: Maximus lashes out with his blade tail at speeds that double his normal moving speed. This allows for deflection of things and jabbing enemies that are nearby.
B-rank: Pyro stream
Description: Maximus releases a jet of flame from his mouth that reaches varying lengths (depending on his size at the time) in a blast the size of his mouth. Materials below the rank of this skill will easily be melted away.

A-rank: Flame claws
Maximus slashes with his claws and flames erupt from them and arch out in the direction he slashes. They can burn through materials this rank and below with ease. -Ten posts must pass before this skill can be used again.
E-SS-rank: Roar of Maximus.
Description: Maximus's normal roar may be terrifying, he

SSS-rank: Kamekaze dive
Description: Maximus flies straight up in the air as high as he can manage, and covers himself in flame (This doesn't harm him) then he flips in the air and plummets toward the ground the flames turn white as they burn at extreme temperatures and he crashes down onto the area, causing a 120 foot blast in all directions, anything within this area under this strength will be turned to ash. Except for Maximus of course. But Vulcan ((My rpc)) couldn't be anywhere near otherwise he too would be killed.


Has his own energy pool. Because this will be Vulcan's one and only summon/pet. Ever. Because he is bound to it.
Rp Sample:
I don't really think this should be required for this... I described fairly well, or so I think? :/

I can, and will change a lot of things

Edited a tad bit.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:03 pm


DGwar
Satsui-No-Hadou21395


Alright, I'll just pull up one from something else and let you reply to it. Let me know if you wanted something more combat oriented.


Xavier stood, waiting for his opponent's move. He had his hand on his sword, that was on his back. Ready to attack should the need arise. He was ready to let RB do it's job. Although if the man decided to stay at a rank Xavier wasn't sure the UV rounds in the chimaera would do the trick. "It's your move, what's it going to be." Xavier said, irritated he was even put in this situation in the first place.


As Rachel was standing there, her left side was cut, her right cheek beaten, and her left eye was cut diagonally down, she seemed that was still able to fight but was now fighting with one eye closed. Someone was watching from the distance, someone who could not allow Rachel to die or even to be hurt by someone such as Xavier, this someone was closer to Rachel than anyone else that she ever knew in her whole life and it was time for him to step up for his little sister. As Xavier was fighting Rachel, he would've soon seen a black-haired teenage male enter in from the right and stand in front of Rachel, she stared at him yet stayed silent, speaking to herself now, "why...why did you come here Ciel?!" The male held out his left hand and formed Rachel's weapon, the Bloody Vector as his left hand, morphing the hand into the arrow tip of the weapon, as she watched him defend her from behind, Ciel got into a defensive stance with the blade and charged with silent cold eyes, glaring at his opponent with killer intent.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:59 pm


FullbusterOrleans


It would be easier if you submitted him as an E rank only and just resubmitted him each rank-up.


Satsui-No-Hadou21395


So basically Ciel is your weapon?


satans-plaything


Run away should be turned into a skill, and you wont be able to tame int until you rank up.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:17 pm


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RPC Name:
Noctis
Rpc Rank:
Master
Type of Pet/Summon: (Cat, dragon ect)
Guardian: Lazen The New Moon Guardian
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Summon/Pet Rank: (Put in a rank. If it's a pet that just lets people know what it's gonna take to kill it.)
S Rank
Summon Speed/Strength: (Generally good to keep in mind balance for these.)
9/11
Summon Skills: (If used for battle. If it's a pet then leave this blank)
Crescent Form
Passive
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Lazen hides his true size and form from all but Noctis himself. In this form he is one foot tall and his body is smaller than he would want. He travels this way intil called into battle.
Normal Form
Passive
His normal form(Shown in pic) is about 7 feet and about 3 across. This where he fights and protects. He only changes to this if commanded
New Moon Guardian
Passive
When fighting in dark areas or at night time his skills go up with one rank. Why you ask? By taking the dark energies around him he can use it to boost his strikes and attacks.
Horned Crescent
E-S Rank
By putting energy into his horn, he slashes upward with it or stabs at enemy with great force. With energy it can rip a man into two peices. Though this is a close range skills and only good at it.
Hooked Crescent
C Rank
Lazen puts his power into his fists and build them up making them hard. When the energy is harden he sends a blitz of hooks and crosses with his fists. Each feeling like getting hit by a wall.(His stength is added into this so that's why it feels like a wall) last for five posts
New Moon Step
C Rank
By using his energies in his body and the dark moons on his body he emits an aura allows to him dash a short distance in great speeds, during this dashing he mostly like won't attack due to the burred images and may miss. 10-15ft distance
Half-Moon Spikes
B Rank
The dark energies in his body slowly goes to his fore arms and are made into little spikes around his forearm. Once done, he extends his arm outwards, the spikes go out and go straight at the target. They can only go in one direction once used.
Half-Moon Slasher
B Rank
Energies his body move to his forearms and his tail, the forearms forming armed blades that stick out 2ft from them, and his tail sharpened by the energies. Lasting 5 posts (3 post cooldown)
Full Moon Cannon
A Rank
This skill requires time to use, he press both hands together at the front of his chest and slowly moves his energies to the razor like teeth in his chest. As this energy builds up the mouth opens up to reveal a large orb on energy in it. Once the charging is done the energy blast out of it in a rather large blast radius. This takes 3 posts to charge and (Cooldown 5 posts)
Seal of The New Moon
S Rank
Lazen's speical skill that he has made by himself for years, now after years of practice and using this skill it can now be done. Lazen plants both feet on the ground and crosses his arms. He transfers a great amount of energy Ito the ground. The energy slowly begins to carve out symbols around him but are unseen intil Lazen uses it. Once a person is inside this circle seal Lazen when unleash causing the energy to explode upward, everything in the circle being damaged in it besides Lazen himself. Somethings are completely destroyed.(12 post cooldown, takes post to make and can be used post after, radius 20ft)
Rp Sample:
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:40 pm


DGwar
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It would be easier if you submitted him as an E rank only and just resubmitted him each rank-up.


Satsui-No-Hadou21395


So basically Ciel is your weapon?


satans-plaything


Run away should be turned into a skill, and you wont be able to tame int until you rank up.

DG I'm done but can you help get some cooldowns and get this thing okayed?
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:46 pm


DGwar
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It would be easier if you submitted him as an E rank only and just resubmitted him each rank-up.


Satsui-No-Hadou21395


So basically Ciel is your weapon?


satans-plaything


Run away should be turned into a skill, and you wont be able to tame int until you rank up.

Yes Ciel is bloody vector but has manifested and taken a human-like form

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:07 am


xXx-Wulf-xXx


Your summon needs a rank first off. A lot of attacks need a post limit for the energy attacks.

Horned Crescent for example, Hooked Crescent.
New Moon step needs a distance limit or something.
Half-moon slasher should have at least a 3 post cooldown.
Cannon should maybe be a 5 post cooldown.
Seal should probably take one full post to make the symbols and he should have to wait until the next post to use it. I want a radius of the attack.
Probably a 5-10 post cooldown.


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Alright, so long as he simply can make slashes and stuff and can't use any abilities it's approved.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:28 pm


DGwar
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It would be easier if you submitted him as an E rank only and just resubmitted him each rank-up.


Satsui-No-Hadou21395


So basically Ciel is your weapon?


satans-plaything


Run away should be turned into a skill, and you wont be able to tame int until you rank up.

Ehh... I was hoping to get this done all at once. But if it must be done I can do it that way.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:06 pm


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Alright, well, it would be easier on you, and me and you did it in parts.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:17 pm


DGwar
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Alright, well, it would be easier on you, and me and you did it in parts.

Would I still be able to maintain the shifting of his size for these forms?

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