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 Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 4:11 pm
Fenrir Graveheart satsui: Denied. You get way too much for unsatisfactory weaknesses. Also we're trying to make the talent system more realistically based, as in your character's talent should be set in realistic limits and reflect their background and upbringing. For example, a swordsman may be born blind but has developed a supernatural sense of hearing in its place, giving him the strength that his hearing is so keen but the weakness is, of course, that he's blind. This reflects who the character is as a person and gives them a unique characteristic that gives them more depth and thus more grounds for creativity, which is the purpose of this system. If you want heightened fire power, then get to a high enough level where you can make a custom set of gauntlets or something. okay I understand, would 360 degree vision fall under the line of no? how about having a great knowledge of anatomy?knowing how to break and fix certain bones.
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 4:23 pm
Satsui-No-Hadou21395 Fenrir Graveheart satsui: Denied. You get way too much for unsatisfactory weaknesses. Also we're trying to make the talent system more realistically based, as in your character's talent should be set in realistic limits and reflect their background and upbringing. For example, a swordsman may be born blind but has developed a supernatural sense of hearing in its place, giving him the strength that his hearing is so keen but the weakness is, of course, that he's blind. This reflects who the character is as a person and gives them a unique characteristic that gives them more depth and thus more grounds for creativity, which is the purpose of this system. If you want heightened fire power, then get to a high enough level where you can make a custom set of gauntlets or something. okay I understand, would 360 degree vision fall under the line of no? how about having a great knowledge of anatomy?knowing how to break and fix certain bones. The first one is a no. The second, maybe but I was actually thinking of adding the ability to dislocate and reattach your own limb joints to the General Skills list (like they do in the movies to break out of handcuffs or whatever) so I'm not sure if thats along the lines of what you're talking about but if it is then you might be better off waiting until a better idea comes to mind. Otherwise I'd say go for it. You can have great knowledge of human anatomy if you want, it comes hand in hand with the Dim Mak sub-style as well.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 4:28 pm
Fenrir Graveheart Satsui-No-Hadou21395 Fenrir Graveheart satsui: Denied. You get way too much for unsatisfactory weaknesses. Also we're trying to make the talent system more realistically based, as in your character's talent should be set in realistic limits and reflect their background and upbringing. For example, a swordsman may be born blind but has developed a supernatural sense of hearing in its place, giving him the strength that his hearing is so keen but the weakness is, of course, that he's blind. This reflects who the character is as a person and gives them a unique characteristic that gives them more depth and thus more grounds for creativity, which is the purpose of this system. If you want heightened fire power, then get to a high enough level where you can make a custom set of gauntlets or something. okay I understand, would 360 degree vision fall under the line of no? how about having a great knowledge of anatomy?knowing how to break and fix certain bones. The first one is a no. The second, maybe but I was actually thinking of adding the ability to dislocate and reattach your own limb joints to the General Skills list (like they do in the movies to break out of handcuffs or whatever) so I'm not sure if thats along the lines of what you're talking about but if it is then you might be better off waiting until a better idea comes to mind. Otherwise I'd say go for it. You can have great knowledge of human anatomy if you want, it comes hand in hand with the Dim Mak sub-style as well. I'll wait on talents before going into it full throttle.
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:55 pm
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:37 am
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:16 pm
RPC Name: Darion Nystorm
Level:1
Main Style: Absolute Zero
Talent Description:
Learning skills and styles faster by two posts and raising his ki up 100 points more
Talent Weakness: Should it have one?
How did the character get this talent?: By being smart and studying others train method enough to make his own
Sample:
Does this really need one? Just want to run this through Fenri so i don't waste my time.
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:23 pm
darion: Denied. booooooooo!
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:34 pm
RPC Name:Kappa Tetsuou
Level:1
Main Style:Hell's Grasp
See No Evil
Talent Description:Within battle, if Kappa is blinded in any way possible, his hearing and smell senses heighten, allowing himself to hear the opponent's movements and smell the opponent's direction of attack and their position better than other students. Same level and lower are heard and smelled by the See No Evil talent, it doesn't work on higher levels
Talent Weakness:
-Only works if hes blinded, nothing else, it doesn't work if they're blurred a bit or even if hes stunned or dizzy and recieves short sight loss.
How did the character get this talent?:Kappa was taught at a young age by his family to survive and fight without his eyes and use his other senses to defend himself if his sight was ever taken from him
Sample:
Kappa clutched his eyes in pain as a new opponent had appeared, one who had control of the main style that involved blood and used it well to blind Kappa during their fight. Kappa grasped his face and looked around, he couldn't see, everything was a serious red, he could only see the outlines of some things and could barely make anything out. His new opponent ran around him and launched serious punches to Kappa's midsection but that didn't mean that he wasn't waiting for him, the opponent's attacks were blocked and dodged and for some reason, he didn't know why. Kappa sniffed and turned to face his opponent with his red eyes staring into his opponent's sould, he struck his opponent in the chin and caused him to stumble back yet he soon regained his balance and got ready to strike once again. He ran around Kappa and decided to strike him in the side with an elbow rush, Kappa's ear twitched a little as he heard his opponent come in from the side with a strike. Kappa sidestepped and tripped his opponent up, causing him to fall over and grunt in pain, along with recieving a stomp to the chest. Kappa grinned with satisfaction, his talent really helped him out in this battle.
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:34 pm
Fenrir Graveheart darion: Denied. booooooooo! WTF WHY? It only lowers it by two posts. What its the Ki boosts? then remove that then >P
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:36 pm
Darion72 Fenrir Graveheart darion: Denied. booooooooo! WTF WHY? It only lowers it by two posts. What its the Ki boosts? then remove that then >P The whole thing dude. The whole thing is just...bad. lol No sample. No real reason why he should have it. Unoriginal. Everything man.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:38 pm
Fenrir Graveheart Darion72 Fenrir Graveheart darion: Denied. booooooooo! WTF WHY? It only lowers it by two posts. What its the Ki boosts? then remove that then >P The whole thing dude. The whole thing is just...bad. lol No sample. No real reason why he should have it. Unoriginal. Everything man. My guy is a genius man, He studies everything and every one. like really XD
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 6:02 pm
RPC Name: Yuki Kamisama
Level: 1
Main Style: Kinetic Weaponry
Talent Description:
Best Pain:
Yuki has been street fighting for so long that he forgot what his first fight was. His intense fighting for trying to get huge amounts of money for his sister and him had increase his speed and strength quite dramatically and even his punches could dent metal and his kicks could send a person flying for a good 5 feet. The speed of his punches and kicks is also twice as fast of a normal person which could catch people off guard and could help Yuki in martial arts. Yuki had trained his body without even realizing it for a long period of time, challenging himself even if the tides seem to turn for him.
Talent Weakness:
Scardead:
This could also be a double edge sword as Yuki without realizing could cause internal damage within his legs, feet, arms, and fist if he continues to keep on fighting. Many times he was sent to the hospital mostly because his fist were either broken or he would suffer many lacerations within his feet and hands. Also he won't know the pain until the fight has stopped or he himself have been put out. This was also one of the main reasons why Mikan hates to see his brother fight so much.
How did the character get this talent?: Many fights within his street fighting before he came to Ludus
Sample:
Yuki had finally finished with 5 out of the 7 people he was facing, people cheering him on as the bets for money were stacking high for him. Yuki was only wearing his his shorts, shoes and gloves while his bare chest was showing, sweat dripping from his his face and torso, his fist was mixed with the blood of both his and the opponents he recently put down. There was only two people standing in his way as both were back up a little, fist high in front of their face, almost as if they were boxing or something. Yuki himself had suffer some punches and kicks from them but this was nothing to him. Yuki using his speed which was faster than the average human was already in front of the left opponent, he himself tried to throw a punch at Yuki but with a quick dodge to move his body slightly to the left. A smirk came onto his face as Yuki quickly countered with a jab to the man's face, hearing his nose break in the process as blood and teeth flew from every direction, knocking the man onto his back with an instant knock out, his fist's skin tearing a little from that punch but he didn't feel a thing yet. The other panic a little as the crowd booed on the last man standing, see how he was acting like a coward. If the last man wasn't gonna make a move Yuki will as with a quick jump int he air he was already behind the man, taking a quick sweep to knock him off his feet and with the last of his attack while the man was still in mid air Yuki quickly turn and preformed a mid kick tot he man's stomach where blood was spat out of his mouth. Yuki's last opponent was sent flying to a nearby wall which he smacked right into, cracking the cement as the sound of bones breaking was herd, falling to the in pain. Yuki this time felt the tears within his feet happen as he stumbled back onto the fest, the crowd going wild as he had finally defeated 7 people at once which sent a new record for him. The Ludus agent watching the while thing was amazed as he was speechless at what just happen which he planned on making Yuki join no matter what now. A smile ran across the agent's mouth as he had plans to make sure he joins.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 12:03 pm
dsw: This needs more weakness to it. Realistically, I know that trying to force a young boy's body to train and fight to this kind of point would've actually probably given him muscle degeneration and cripple him somewhere in puberty, especially considering his described condition now. So its doubtful this could even happen but it isn't so off the wall crazy that I'm prepared to fully deny it. However, I'm not going to make your character twice as fast as everyone else just for some achy muscles after the opponent is already down for the count or ******** dead, so you need to fix that in whatever way you can.
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 12:27 pm
Demonic Slayer Wasuken RPC Name: Yuki Kamisama Level: 1 Main Style: Kinetic Weaponry Talent Description: Best Pain: Yuki has been street fighting for so long that he forgot what his first fight was. His intense fighting for trying to get huge amounts of money for his sister and him had increase his speed and strength quite dramatically and even his punches could dent metal and his kicks could send a person flying for a good 5 feet. The speed of his punches and kicks is also a little bit faster than that of a normal person which could catch people off guard and could help Yuki in martial arts. Yuki had trained his body without even realizing it for a long period of time, challenging himself even if the tides seem to turn for him. Talent Weakness:Scardead:This could also be a double edge sword as Yuki without realizing could cause internal damage within his legs, feet, arms, and fist if he continues to keep on fighting. Many times he was sent to the hospital mostly because his fist were either broken or he would suffer many lacerations within his feet and hands. Also he won't know the pain until the fight has stopped or he himself have been put out. This was also one of the main reasons why Mikan hates to see his brother fight so much. After a while of fighting as well his speed will slowly decrease, the same with his strength as he'll be pushing his body to the max. (When post 20 hits his body will now feel the effects and with every post after post 20 his speed and strength will slowly decrease. When post 30 hits his body is so weak that he'll simply pass out from exhaustion and pain.)How did the character get this talent?: Many fights within his street fighting before he came to Ludus Sample:Yuki had finally finished with 5 out of the 7 people he was facing, people cheering him on as the bets for money were stacking high for him. Yuki was only wearing his his shorts, shoes and gloves while his bare chest was showing, sweat dripping from his his face and torso, his fist was mixed with the blood of both his and the opponents he recently put down. There was only two people standing in his way as both were back up a little, fist high in front of their face, almost as if they were boxing or something. Yuki himself had suffer some punches and kicks from them but this was nothing to him. Yuki using his speed which was faster than the average human was already in front of the left opponent, he himself tried to throw a punch at Yuki but with a quick dodge to move his body slightly to the left. A smirk came onto his face as Yuki quickly countered with a jab to the man's face, hearing his nose break in the process as blood and teeth flew from every direction, knocking the man onto his back with an instant knock out, his fist's skin tearing a little from that punch but he didn't feel a thing yet. The other panic a little as the crowd booed on the last man standing, see how he was acting like a coward. If the last man wasn't gonna make a move Yuki will as with a quick jump int he air he was already behind the man, taking a quick sweep to knock him off his feet and with the last of his attack while the man was still in mid air Yuki quickly turn and preformed a mid kick tot he man's stomach where blood was spat out of his mouth. Yuki's last opponent was sent flying to a nearby wall which he smacked right into, cracking the cement as the sound of bones breaking was herd, falling to the in pain. Yuki this time felt the tears within his feet happen as he stumbled back onto the fest, the crowd going wild as he had finally defeated 7 people at once which sent a new record for him. The Ludus agent watching the while thing was amazed as he was speechless at what just happen which he planned on making Yuki join no matter what now. A smile ran across the agent's mouth as he had plans to make sure he joins. There, edited. Tell me what else needs to be done if anything was left out in the edit. Note that the text in black is what has been edited.
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:07 pm
Satsui-No-Hadou21395 RPC Name:Kappa Tetsuou Level:1 Main Style:Hell's Grasp See No Evil Talent Description:Within battle, if Kappa is blinded in any way possible, his hearing and smell senses heighten, allowing himself to hear the opponent's movements and smell the opponent's direction of attack and their position better than other students. Same level and lower are heard and smelled by the See No Evil talent, it doesn't work on higher levels Talent Weakness:-Only works if hes blinded, nothing else, it doesn't work if they're blurred a bit or even if hes stunned or dizzy and recieves short sight loss. How did the character get this talent?:Kappa was taught at a young age by his family to survive and fight without his eyes and use his other senses to defend himself if his sight was ever taken from him Sample:Kappa clutched his eyes in pain as a new opponent had appeared, one who had control of the main style that involved blood and used it well to blind Kappa during their fight. Kappa grasped his face and looked around, he couldn't see, everything was a serious red, he could only see the outlines of some things and could barely make anything out. His new opponent ran around him and launched serious punches to Kappa's midsection but that didn't mean that he wasn't waiting for him, the opponent's attacks were blocked and dodged and for some reason, he didn't know why. Kappa sniffed and turned to face his opponent with his red eyes staring into his opponent's sould, he struck his opponent in the chin and caused him to stumble back yet he soon regained his balance and got ready to strike once again. He ran around Kappa and decided to strike him in the side with an elbow rush, Kappa's ear twitched a little as he heard his opponent come in from the side with a strike. Kappa sidestepped and tripped his opponent up, causing him to fall over and grunt in pain, along with recieving a stomp to the chest. Kappa grinned with satisfaction, his talent really helped him out in this battle. Added Sample
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