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 Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 11:19 pm
@Belfire: I'll give it a more thorough read tomorrow, but right now, I can tell you that your application's font is incorrect and your length is insufficient. Please don't edit it yet, though--I'd like to give it a full critique so that you don't have to edit it a few times in a row.
And for whatever reason, they locked the roleplay thread? I'll talk with the crew tomorrow and work it out so we can get things going. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 11:59 pm
Locked = booooooo! crying
Hehe, any reason why...? eek
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 8:06 pm
crying What's up with the lock?
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 7:31 pm
Uh, Dreadnaught, are you sure you've got the right thread?
I have no idea why our roleplay's thread was locked. I sent the guild's mule a PM about it, but there hasn't been any reply and now the thread has been sent to the Deadzone. I'm a little bit frustrated over this, but I'll try and get to the bottom of things so we can start from the top.
Belfire: The length is the biggest issue for me. I want two paragraphs in Personality and Appearance, and three in History; other than that, you've got a few missing commas here and there that could be solved with a quick beta read.
On the whole, I like the concept, and you've got some nice ideas, but he needs to be fleshed out. If you're stumped for history, detail his relationship with his family; you could also bring that into his personality, if you'd like.
And don't forget to resize the application, either. That's the only time in this thread I'll be nitpicky about font.
And to everyone: I'm sorry I died for almost a week. My sleep schedule's been really screwed up lately, and while I'm hoping it'll iron out within the week, it might get worse temporarily--I'm doing some community theater starting next Thursday, and I will be dead on Thursday and Friday.
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:35 pm
Ooh, bummer. gonk
Anyway, have a fun time doing your theater thing. Make sure to get lots of rest (if possible!) blaugh
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Posted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 3:16 pm
I am Freakylittleone, and my circumstances has changed, because I am now able to play until Tuesday.
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:49 pm
Oh, okay, then; I'm glad to see you're still with us.
I'm trying to hash out things with whomever is manning the Guild's mule right now, but I'm getting the feeling I may be causing some friction. If the unthinkable happens (and it shouldn't), I'll probably wind up moving this thing into Barton or something and PMing all of you about it.
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 8:39 pm
Okay, I'll be on the watch-out~ 4laugh
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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 11:51 pm
scream Wow, what's going on here? The moderators are getting angry over your inquiring into why things aren't working in this sub-forum? Unbelievable. If we move into Barton Town, finding our thread will probably be somewhat annoying. The pace over there is hectic. Anyways, I hope you get everything resolved before you get started with your theater work. Good luck.
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:36 am
It has to be some big misunderstanding, I think. GodSoul was moved in here while it was just an OOC thread, but I don't think she had any trouble getting her actual thread up; they probably just overlooked this thread here, is all. (Although I admit that I'm getting a bit frustrated, because they should've checked that sticky up there if that is indeed the case.)
Well, whatever happens, happens. I just remembered that I have an old guild that I was going to use for one roleplay, so I might refurbish that if things go south here.
But enough talk of this! It's far too depressing, I think, so I believe we ought to move onto happier topics. Halloween is almost here, we ought to have something else to talk about...
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:37 am
well word says it's ok and my english lit a-level says it's ok gramatically. so tada it's been edited
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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 4:46 pm
I might just go as my avatar, but I would have to change my avatar which could look cool
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 4:15 pm
is it up yet? if not just make another thread.
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 10:09 pm
The roleplay thread was moved back into this forum while I was away, so we can begin posting! All of you, get out there and start!
Belfire: I noticed a few errors here and there in your profile, but I'll accept it. Just watch out in the roleplay thead, though, because I'm going to be something of a hardass about posts in that.
Dread: I see that I haven't accepted your profile yet; just bump his age (and mentioned ages in his history) up by about three years or so and you'll be set.
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