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He Ran Vigorously... That is a working sentence.

And I don't think mine has Spell check... Or atleast I don't see it anywhere.

That doesn't tell how he had infiltrated and became recognised as one of the ninja. I think they would notice if he had used his Ice jutsu before hand. and the bodies were literally right infront of him before he made an escape. People saw him using his Technique, he just used the air around him and Made a cold Breeze that covered him as he fled, making it so that the Suna ninja wouldn't have run after him for a time. Not to mention the Genin had to be buried before they sent a ninja after him.

But that would require more Posts than what you just mentioned. Because I use one jutsu to Create the mist, and one on my Cold Breeze technique. He can't counter Cold Breeze completely with his fire blades, making that null and void. Then I'd have to god mod, seeing as it is a chunnin on chunnin match, and my Character in the rp sample is long ranged, and can't do short range. I Could have had him Die by running into the Spears in the Hail jutsu, but then that would have just sucked.

And I split it into a prargraph for me, a paragraph for him. That way I can get info on both sides into the Fight, instead of just my character's info. It is basically what it would look like during Rp.

I'll change it, But that was just how I was doing it.

Rpc Name:
Kenji Kana

Village:
Iwagakure

Rank:
Academy student

Bloodline or Clan applied for:
Hyouton

What you know about the clan/bl:

Hyouton- Haku's Kekkai Genkai, Ice manipulation

The users are able to mold water and wind to create ice.
This ice isn't able to withstand much, and melts against fire jutsu one rank above the jutsu's rank. However the bloodline must be activated through a traumatic experience. Hyouton ninja are able to create their own ice, unlike other ninja who use Snow and Ice. Also they are capable of using one handed seals.

Rp Sample:

Kenji rested on the Warm sand; he could see the border that would inevitably lead to his Life that is if he could make it. He had enough energy left to make it about half way. Unlike those stupid Sand Ninja he couldn't use instantaneous body jutsu and just go miles however he felt. He had to walk. "Man that sucked horribly! Those two Genin saw me manipulating water, and then saw me wetting down the stupid sand... "He said sighing.” Too bad, those two were pretty good guys. They showed me their techniques step by step. "He said laughing.” Perfect! I really wish I hadn't have needed to kill them. "He said snickering.” But it was so fun! "He said, looking up at the Sky. Man, that dune is oddly shaped. "He said, noticing the top of the Dune shifting. He saw a Kunai fly out of the Dune, and a ninja jump out of the top. "Oh s**t!” Kenji said laughing, Flipping backwards from where he lay on the ground, dodging the Kunai, and landing where he stood originally. "Who are you? Kenji asked, looking at the Suna Ninja.

"My name isn't important. What is important is that you killed two Genin that were eligible for the Genin exams. As well as destroying an entire block of Sunagakure with a Glacier. "The Suna ninja said, Jumping off the Dune and yelling,” Now prepare to die! "He drew two Ninja-to, and slashed at Kenji.

"Heh. Kenji said, Picking up his gourd with one hand and blocking the two blades. He Smiled, making hand signs with his free hand, The Water that poured out turned to mist quickly. "Ninja art, Hidden mist Jutsu.” He said smiling, his body disappearing into the mist. He Left his gourd there, and jumped back. he pulled out a handful of Senbon and threw them at his opponent, Making hand signs with his other hand, He began to create a Glacier, with a small air pocket within it. "Let’s see if the same trick works twice on these stupid Suna Ninja. Ninja art, Glacier creation. "He said smiling, Waiting for the Senbon to strike their target. He would be unable to defend against them; he was too busy being blinded by the Mist.

"Damn!” he suna ninja said, His Right side getting plastered by five Senbon. " Son of a! " He said, Noticing the Glacier, he thought it was moving towards him as there was a growing sensation about it. "Tch! You think that is going to work? "He said running forwards, his blades igniting he pushed his blades into the huge expanding glacier he Hit the Cold breeze jutsu, and made the Glacier explode. Dousing his Ninja-to, the Ninja hid his face, which was already in pain from having the Cold air suddenly hit it. He Focused again and reignited his Ninja-to. He smiled and ran forwards, twirling one in front of him so that he wouldn't get too cold, and holding the other one close to his back. "I will never let you out of this alive!” He Yelled, Pin pointing where Kenji had been standing from his voice. He aimed to run Kenji through as he swung at him, clearly able to see him now.

"Tch! You think that you can beat me? "Kenji said smiling he made hand signs with one hand, and clasped the Flaming blade.” Ninja art, Ice Sphere! "He said smiling, Widening his hands. He smiled as water formed along the blade, and then automatically froze. "Now for the other one.” He Said, Repeating the Process for the Second blade. He smiled. "Now both are completely frozen, which means!” He said Spinning and kicking them both, senbon flying from his hand at the Suna Ninja. "That they have become brittle.” Kenji said laughing as they broke against his leg.

"Damn!” He Said, The Senbon hitting him in precise spots on his face. The Suna ninja suddenly felt a soothing feeling through his entire body. He couldn't feel anything anymore. " What the hell did you do? "He said, his eyesight beginning to vanish. The suna ninja tried to let go of his blades, but they had become frozen to his forearms.

"I didn't do anything.” Kenji said laughing, Making more hand signs he threw more senbon into the Suna ninja. "Another Cold Breeze just for you, since you didn't let my other one finish cooling, I'll have to do this the hard way. With one cold breeze jutsu spinning one way, and one spins the other. "He said smiling. Kenji made another set of hand signs, The Water vapor that touched his body now turning to ice, except for over his mouth which that part became a barrel looking thing with a filter look at the end so ice couldn't get inside. He just sat there in his ice shell, until the Suna ninja in front of him quit moving and just stood there. He Broke the Ice, and placed a kick directly into the Suna ninja's stomach, a hole appearing where Kenji had placed his foot. "Good, Now.” He said, roundhouse kicking the hole, the sides gave out, and the entire body came crashing down and broke into pieces. "There. Time to go home. "He said, revitalized by the Cold air around him. He canceled his jutsu, gathered his belongings, and began skipping off to the border where he could see a Jonin waiting for him. "Shinji-Kun!” Kenji said, realizing who it was that was waiting for him.

Very Cute, making Shinji a Jounin.

...however, I'm not the final judge here. this is certainly a much more manageable Bloodline application, but you'll have to see if Hinote approves.

(You however should remove the first sentence of the "What you know" section...)

crying I wonder when hinote will be online next...

You're Welcome. Hopefully it'll work out for you and you can get the character you want.

Erm... I don't know about all the stuff Cobra went over with you, but the "What you know" section still contains stuff I can't find anywhere on the bloodline page. Seriously, if that actually exists, give me a link to it. I have asked for a link several times, because I want to be sure I'm not somehow reading the wrong thing, but you just give vague references instead.

Yeah, that's the one I was reading. Nowhere on it though does it mention a particular rank of flames it's able to resist, or the supposed trauma his application references. The only things in his application that are true to the bloodline is the ability to create ice, and the one handed seals. The rest is just fluff he apparently made up.