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@ Hark
It looked like I copy and pasted because I'm only doing the first stage info... which is pretty much nothing... I can literally type the entire thing, but i did leave out some things.

@ Hinote
You are reading the second Stage aren't you? I'm only putting the first stage info down. And the part about molding with your thought, I removed. Although I could have sworn that it was there.

That is the only thing that you said you had a problem with. My ninja types permit me for using two jutsu per post, as well as I am faster by one rank. I didn't even use my bloodline's ability to use one handed seals.

I'm reading the one on the bloodline page.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=17319659#211427551

I do understand the bloodline, atleast the first stage at this point. Although I Left out the part about me being able to use one handed symbols.

I did... Did you not notice me using the mist to pwn the suna ninja? The mist was from my psuedo-gourd that held his water.

The Traumatic experience is literally in the bloodline.

Rpc Name:
Kenji Kana

Village:
( Whichever needs me. )

Rank:
academy student

Bloodline or Clan applied for:
Hyouton

What you know about the clan/bl:
I've only Read the first stage at this point in time, not seeing a reason to read ahead because I have to hit Jonin first.

Hyouton- Haku's kekkei genkai, Ice manipulation

The users are able to mold water and wind to create ice.
This ice isn't able to withstand much, and melts against fire jutsu one rank above the jutsu's rank. However the bloodline must be activated through a tramatic experience. Hyouton ninja are able to create their own ice, unlike other ninja who use Snow and Ice. Also they are capable of using one handed seals.

Rp Sample:
Events up to now:
Kenji has infiltrated the Suna Village. He has assimilated to their way of life perfectly hiding his Hyouton bloodline by Getting sand wet and manipulating th water on the sand. He has feigned having the Sand attribute up until now. He has just Released his Ice technique, Killing two Genin Suna Nins. He Froze both to death in a sphere of cold Breeze. Making it powerful enough to hold them in the air. the hole was Created by his Glacier that he had created first, then he Began the Cold breeze inside of the Glacier, making the Breeze colder and colder, until it had broken through the Glacier and made all three of the fighters succumb to the Cold. Kenji escaped certain death, only because he was capable of withstanding the cold of the Storm. He had wrapped himself in Ice armor, reducing the damage to nothingness. He escaped with his Gourd, and a couple of Suna ninja Techinques written down in a journal that he was keepingto bring more techniques to his village.

Now, The Story begins the Day after the Two Genin were buried. Kenji is almost back to Iwagakure when he is suddenly attacked.

" Man... I shouldn't have done that... That was so stupid. I jeapordised the mission. " He said sighing, placing his hand on his gourd he sat down on the dune, a knot apearing on the back of his head as the gourd hit the ground and whacked him when his head popped up and fell back onto the Gourd, a metal thud being hear. " ow... " He hais laughing a little. I wonder if I'll get to The Village, or if someone will try to stop me... " He said taking off his gourd, and beginning to unscrew the top. " Time to see if it still smells like home... I need a little blast from the past. " He said smiling, Hearing Sand rushing down the side of the dune. He Jumped over his Gourd, Ceasing to unscrew the top. His hand placed on the gourd, he hit the ground infront of it and ran forwards vigorously. He turned to See a small puff in the Sand where he had been sitting a moment ago. " Damn... what the hell? " He thought, looking at the top of the dune at a ninja whose hand was outstretched. He was dusting himself off slowly, taking his sweet time.

" I'm a Suna nin. My name is not important because you are going to die before you can even comprehend what my name was. " The Ninja said, moving his glasses up farther on his face. " You have two choices. Eithercome back with me and Go through our court system and recieve judgement. Or you can die here quickly without ever seeing your Tsuchikage ever again. " He said smiling, looking down at Kenji.

" I'd preffer not to. You see, I know what yur Court system is, It is just a glorified way of killing someone for their crimes. I read your files, no one who has ever gone into your court system has ever survived. All were persieved as guilty, and all were killed. " Kenji said laughing at the options given. " But how will I die if I am stronger than you? " Kenji said smiling up at the Suna ninja. " Well, I preffer option three. Just winging it. " He said laughing, Throwing a Senbon at his Gourd, Hehit the Edge of the almost unscrewed Top. He listened for the sound of Metal on metal, hoping that he would have made it through. He Heard a tink. This meant he had atleast hit it, he then heard a grating noise. He had done it. He hand made the Senbon enter the Psuedo shell, and then it turned just enough.

" Tch! insolent little fool! " The Suna ninja said, Unsheathing a ninja to, and running forwards, Taking out another one. It would appear to Kenji that he was moving slowly, about as fast as the Genin were moving. But to anyone else, it would appear that he was moving at the Normal speed for a Chuunin. He smiled as he neared Kenji. He Swung both blades quickly attempting to Cleave Kenji into three peices.

Kenji smiled and Disappeared from the Chunnin's sight. He made it look somewhat odd. He moved right, then he shot left, making the Chunnin's eyes miss his entire movement, making it appear as if he had just disappeared. In truth he had ducked the Ninja's Left Ninja-to and ran over to his gourd. He placed his hand upon it and smiled as the Suna ninja noticed that he wasn't there. Kenji held up one hand and made a jutsu sign for it. He smiled and laughed. " Hidden mist jutsu. " He said, laughing as Mist shot out of the Gourd's top, the Mist enveloping both of them qiuckly.

" What the hell? " The suna nin said, looking around. He had never been in fog. He had only left the village once. He wasn't a fighter ninja. He relied on his wits and so he had been given a desk job, doing all of the Kazekage's paperwork. Atleast what he could do. Some things the Kazekage had to do himself. " s**t! Is this mist? " He said, hearing Kenji's words. " Fine then, I'll just light my way out of this. " He Said laughing, He Focused and Both of his Ninja-to Became wrethed in flames. " Ha! Try to hit me with your ice now! I will melt it to nothingness! " He said laughing.

" Yay! I'm trained to pinpoint my opponent in the mist, But you just gave me a light source! " Kenji said laughing and jumping up and down. He Made a single set of handsigns with one hand, Throwing Senbon with the other. " Cold Breeze. " He said smiling. He then made another set of handsigns as the Mist began to swirl arounf the Two ninja, getting colder and colder, and making the Suna Nin's face blister and become red with blood. " Ice Swallow. " he said as his Senbon Became wrapped in icecicles he Adjusted them slightly so that the Ice would break on the Blades, but the Senbon within Would go directly into the Ninja.

" The Ninja turned and slashed at the Icecicles, not seeing the small grey instruments, He Broke every single Icecicle, and got hit by every single Senbon. " Gah." He Said, One of his shoulders hit perfectly so that he couldn't move it. " Damn... My Shoulder is damaged horribly now... " He Said sighing, Dropping that Ninja-to, the Flame on it going out. " Ha! Nice parlor trick! But I'll be the judge of if you win this fight or not! " He Said laughing, Running in the Direction of the Senbon needles.

" Oh, Thinking you can just come right at me? " Kenji said laughing, Making handsigns. " Hail! " He Said laughing, Making the Spears developed by the Jutsu rain down infront of the Ninja, A few skimming him, making open wounds. " Heh, Time for a special guest. " He Said laughing he began making more handsigns, smiling as a Glacier appeared infront of him. " Glacier creation. " He Simply said letting out a small snicker he Kicked the Glacier, and waited until the perfect moment to throw his Senbon which he held in both hands.

" Damn... One of those stupid spears drove the Senbon in deeper! " He said, Looking at his shoulder that now had only about a Cm of a Senbon sticking out. " Time to move forward again! " He said, restarting his run, Cutting all the spears in his way. He Saw the glacier right before it was too late. He held the Ninja-to inbetween his index and middle finger and twirled it rapidly, smiling as a Hole was bored through the Glacier, Putting him on the other Side.

Kenji laughed, that was a rather unorthodox way of doing it, but he had achieved what Kenji wanted him to. Kenji laughed as he threw ten Senbon at the ninja and then made handsigns for another Jutsu. " Ice Sphere. " He Said, Water appearing inbetween his palms. It formed into a sphere and He threw it at the Opponent's blade, The water would douse the Blade, and then it would solidify, keeping the blade inactive.

" Gah! Guh Hregh! " The Suna ninja said, Getting hit with tewnty Senbon. 'Even though this Ninja was trained in the mist it seems he doesn't quite have it down yet. ' The Suna ninja Thought to himself, Raising his arm to block the Ball of water. It hit the blade, and little lines of it hit his face. The Water instantly froze, freezing part of his face along with the blade. " Damn! " He Said, Yanking on the Ice stuck to his face, Ripping off parts of his skin. " GYAHHHHHHH!!!! " He Yelled falling to his knees. Soon the Blood was stopped due to it freezing because of the Cold Breeze jutsu used earlier. " Damn you! you stupid Ice Ninja! " He said shaking his fist in the direction he thought Kenji was.

" Yay! Let's see here... Let's try this one... " He Said, making handsigns. He Ran, and jumped above the Enemy ninja. He let out a howl of laughter and Disappeared. a block of ice taking his place. He was an exact replica. It showed him on one knee giving two peace signs. It was blown up of course, to make a larger than life replica of him. the Enemy ninja was crushed. The Real Kenji sat atop this Ice sculture fit for a Banquet. Atleast one he would have thrown. " Well, I guess We are done now. " He Said laughing, He Took out his notebook and wrote down the contents of the Fight had had just endured. Granted most of it was obscured by the Cold breeze and the mist, it was still a great ifhgt for info. The Village of Sunagakure Has, or atleast Had someone who could focus Fire chakra into his blades. Kenji jumped down and Canceled both of his jutsu. He grabbed his gourd and unscrewed the top. he placed the Two Blades in the Gourd, using water manipulation jutsu to put all of the water e used back into his Gourd. He then Froze both blades, and noticed that his gourd was overflowing. he smiled and made some handsigns. He smiled and said gently " Ice armor. " the Excess water in his gourd came forth and wrapped around him, giving the impression of a Roman Suit of armor. he Picked up his gourd and walked over to the Suna Ninja's body. He had been kileld, but the Sand had made it so that he didn't get crushed. His body was still intact. Kenji grabbed the body by it's hair and began to drag it back to Iwagakure with him. He whistled as he did so. This was going to be great! The research squad would have a hay day with this. He Would probably get a bonus.

Wait... did you just add like 4+ paragraphs while I was looking it over?

Dude... Bloodline applications DON'T need to be this long.

...I'm done picking at it for now. Hinote can pick up where I left off... or the next person.

Sufficed to say however, you are not yet approved for the bloodline.

I only read that far so I wouldn't have to Roleplay it as a Jonin. My character is around Chuunin rank.

Also who is Yogi Berra?

Well, Since there is little to no actual information about the Bloodline in the first stage, Besides one handed seals and can use surrounding water to create ice, I thought that I gave ample info. Also, the Difference between yuki nin and Hyouton nin has nothing to do with the Bloodline itself. It is just a bit of trivia. I knew that It would be auto denied if I didn't add the traumatic part in. Mostly because Some people in this guild like big fluffy info, so I added that for more fluff. and it worked... Until You caught it. xD

Well, Commonly you only see the Suna nin gourd which is Hardened sand. And well, Acorrding to Orchid moon's Custom Tech of it, It is made of Sand the Sand user molds into the gourd shape. Basically The research team made it look Identical to if a Byakugan looked at it.

It is meant to be Vauge, It gives a little hint of you have no idea what happened. Annoying yes, Suspenceful yes. It is called starting off on a cliff hanger. It allows for greater samples in my experience. Because if you were to read that, and I was to slowly give you the rest of the sample, the story would unfold, and You'd get subtle hints as to what he did, but it is still vauge enough for your mind to wander and give seperate beginnings.

He moved because the Kunai was flying straight at him. The person appeared before he threw the Kunai, Alerting Kenji of the clear and present Danger. So Kenji ran forwards ( I should have described that more ) In a Line. But he ran at full speed. As Far as I know, A vicious line is the same thing as running Viciously in a line. He then turned around, this means it was behind him, but he turned to see the assailant. ( Not sure if that was in this sample, My power cut out, and my old sample was deleted. )

This part is somewhat true to if this was Kenji talking about it. he would have noticed the Kunai after turning around. Then he would have looked up and saw the Suna nin using the instantaneous body technique. He wouldn't know what they were.

As to why he ran slowly, This suna Ninja was not accustomed to fighting, So he was clumsy. Not to mention Kenji is a speed ninja so to him, it was rather slow. Again, wording on this not so good. I should have put " He ran forwards quickly, but to Kenji's eyes, it would appear to be that he were moving at a Genin's pace. "

Well, Later in the Paragraph it says what he threw it at.

I did not notice the whole them thing...

Senbon are needles used in common medicinal practices. Like the ones Haku used, Mine would have been able to punture a hole in the Gourd, Based on the sheer speed that he threw it. I do not know what sizes of Senbon there are, so I just assumed that there wasn't a bunch of different sizes in the naruto world.

Ok, the Falling in Kenji quickly part was an epic typo. It should have had a period after in, making it a new sntence. I will fix that now.

Really? I did not know that. I thought if you were fast enough that you could just do it all at once... Well, Time to edit that as well.

The Hail jutsu said that it was spears. When I read it i was like WTF? But i decided not to mess with it.

Well, Haku was able to pinpoint Sasuke's weak points with Senbon, so I thought that My character would have that same ability. Granted Haku probably had training in that, who is to say my character from academy student to Chunnin could not have had such training?

I thought Nodachi were what the Leader of the Shinsengumi used against Kenshin... I think I was thinking of the Ninja-to...

And yeah... I kinda did sweatdrop I said I think I'll make it bigger in the 3rd ooc room. and you logged off so I thought that you were giving me time to do so. Sorry about that. I just thought I'd throw another jutsu in there. Although I think the way I killed him was spectacular. Although He would have to have been really good to have had his Sand clone last that long... So that isn't very Realistic.

@ Despair
Yeah, I thought I was abusing a word... I guess it was heh.

Also about the He said laughing part, I thought it would have been better to show emotion. Plus don't most Ninja think they are unbeatable in battle? I mean look at a couple of them. thy are smug little dill holes. Kenji was actually laughing because he was having fun.

>.< I haven't watched Kenshin in Years! And yeah, the oniwaban group leader is the right guy.

I Remade it, and made it mre descriptive. Althought I think I'll edit the Whole Senbon thing. ( I still didn't Change that part >.< )

USE SPELL CHECK - ITS BUILT INTO MOST BROWSERS

...It's Vigorously... and even that doesn't work right.