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Sorry no auto ranks. You do realize that by doing this, you wont be able to participate in the chuunin exams, right?

Well then that makes things easy. Since your last RPC had the sharingan, and that RPC doesnt exist, I suppose I can let this one have it now.

Ok first off, make your font the regular size.

Now then, First off, Konoha is closed. As of now, I'm only letting people into Rock

Ninjutsu is not a ninja class. Go look at the ninja classes thread. Taijutsu specialist is, but make sure you understand it.

Chain of emotion is not a bloodline, And we arent allowing custom bloodlines. If you want a bloodline, look through the bloodline list, or PM the owner of an accepted custom bloodline and ask if you can be in it. Then you have to apply for said bloodline.

"Medium bordering high" is not a chakra level. If you are a ninja without a bloodline/clan, chakra level is low. If you are a member of a bloodline/clan, your chakra level is medium. If you have a demon or are the head of a clan/bloodline, chakra level is high.

Change those shinobi special skills.

If your weapon has a special ability, it has to be approved as a custom weapon.

70 makibishi is ridiculous. Make that more reasonable.

You start out with NO jutsu except the basic 3.

Done

Final Update (I hope)

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Once upon a time, there was a beautiful girl named Etsusho. She lived a happy and carefree life, growing up to become a kunoichi of Iwagakure. She never stopped smiling, and always seemed to make other people smile. Years passed, and she grew to be a beautiful girl. She even had a lover, whom she would bear his child. Everything was perfect.

But every fantasy has to end sooner or later. When she was in her second trimester, her lover was attacked and killed on a mission; leaving her alone. She thought she would be okay, because she had the baby to remind her of her lover. But one day, on her way to bath in a hot spring outside of Iwa, she tripped and fell, causing her to go into labor two weeks early. She screamed, as her baby came into the world; and when she gave birth, she realized it was a beautiful baby girl. She named her Chiyo.

Her happiness was short lived. A gang of rogue bandits heard her screaming, and attacked her, looking for money or any valuable possessions. Her baby was killed in front of her eyes. It was at that moment, that her mind snapped. After losing the only two things in the world to her, by rogue ninja, and rogue bandits, she swore to herself, that she would kill every single bandit and ninja in the world, even if she lost her life trying.

Even with the wounds of her pregnancy, Etsusho lashed out, and killed the bandits, drenching herself with blood. It was at that moment, also, that she came to love the sight of blood, and craves it constantly, like an addict.

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Shira- I'll wait till your done, but is this that sadistic RPC?

Calypso- We start off as academy students.

You can out down the Byakugan when you have been accepted into it. I think Lament of the Lonely went over the new applications yesterday. When your accepted you may change your chakra to medium as well.

"Pretty developed" is not a bloodline stage. The stages are stage 1 (Basic Byakugan) and stage 2 (Neo Byakugan, but this on is very hard to get).

I dont see how an academy student has won 34 fight, but lost none. In fact, an academy student has probably been in zero fights.

Shinobi special skills are the bonuses given by your bloodline and/or ninja classes (In your case, the taijutsu specialist ninja type, though you may have 1 more).

As an academy student, you will have completed zero missions, let alone an S rank.

What makes your custom kunai different from any other kunai?

You start off with NO ninjutsu, genjutsu, or taijutsu except for the basic 3.

Finally, how the heck is your character 15 feet tall? and 12" is just another foot, so thats 16 feet. Again...........how?