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 Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2012 8:49 pm
Yeah, I've been waiting on Izzy so we can finish up with our Kokiri peeps. I know he was on earlier sometime, since he posted in the ad thread for the guild.
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 2:23 pm
New post is up for The Meteor. looks like something is watching old Jack. It would be wise that he watch his back. Now the time skip begins for Jack Sera and Douglas. so on to Darwin Nicole and Zachs situation.
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 2:45 pm
[Ho snap, it's Anti-Jack! (just thought of that name now, actually)]
I'll try and think of something for Zach's end, but I'm not quite sure what to do.
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 3:22 pm
Well, just try and explain what the situation is. um, but first you should have some conversation with miss Taylor before you meet Darwin cause thats what you were building up to. Make your character maybe do some reflecting also. like why did this esculate so quick? perhaps it was do to Zach's own blundering? make him question himself. of course these are just guidelines but they help me from time to time. oh and you could also use some of this to flesh out miss taylor as a character like have her ask questions about what they will do next or what the plan is if nothing works out.
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 9:12 pm
I know I was gonna have the chat, but when I first wrote it, it seemed very horrid, and eventually I just scrapped it so I could try and think of something better.
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 9:54 pm
Ya I had that happen abit during the development of my latest post. Oh and if nothing works out. you could always introduce a new character.
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 10:18 pm
Yay, post is up. left room for Darwin and Dune to reflect/chat/whatever before the meeting is called to order and Zach explains his tribulation.
Also I may introduce a new character soon. Dunno who. Keep ya posted.
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 11:08 pm
Awesome post. I like that you mentioned Nicole's side on the mutant matter but left it at that. since what she is actually doing is a secret. Also i'm not sure if its just a Gaia glitch but i see you posted twice.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2012 1:28 am
My longest post yet. yay! Decided to try some humor with this one.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2012 10:23 am
probably a glitch or something.
Edit: Wow, that's a good post! I'll try and get Zach's up soon, just gotta work on some minor details first.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2012 9:18 pm
Nice post. I'll get one up soon just working on other things.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2012 11:09 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2012 1:34 pm
New post is up. Sorry for the bad hook. I kinda ran out of ideas.
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Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2012 1:22 am
It happens to the best of us.
And I'm sure I can compensate with Zach's next post.
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Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2012 1:37 am
Okay, not a bad post if I do say so myself. Oh and we can now continue with Sera, Douglas and Jack's situation too.
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