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Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 10:24 pm
Character Name ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name:Koizumi Nastuki Nicknames: Koi, Nastu Title(s): N/A Rank: Academy Student Village:Sunagakure Background Info Physical Description Age: 19 Sex:female Hair Color: light brown Natural Eye Color: royal blue Body Type: perfect shape Distinguishing Features:metallic blue streaks in her hair ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Last post(pending) Bloodline/Clan Stage: Condar Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan: he clan has 5 stages: So, Shi, Chōzai, shisai, Condor. From So-Chozai they still need to touch and have complete eye contact with the person they are using the technique on. From Shisai-Condor they can stop touching and only need to have contact with one eye. Then in condor they can confess whoever they see. Everyone who has this clan has to find the truth inside themselves before it can be activated. Then they started at So. 1. the people to tell is one is lying just by looking into someone's eyes, 2. the ability to tell if the person has a bloodline ONLY ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Assassin Profession Base Benefit: Shadow's Shroud: Assassin's are incredibly adept at moving unseen and unheard, learning to hide themselves from all but the most perceptive of individuals. (cannot be found by shinobis of equal rank when hiding unless they have a Kekkai Genkai with extrasensory abilities; Shinobis of greater rank without an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the Assassin's presence, but not the exact location of the shinobi; Shinobis of lower rank with an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the presence of the Assassin, but not the exact location)
Stealth Focus: Assassin's are also highly skilled in the use of stealth based jutsus. Any stealth based jutsu is treated as if it were equal to the Assassin's rank in terms of effectiveness. (stealth based jutsus treated as equal to the Assassin's rank) Learning Information: None Weakness: 1) Weak-Bodied: Assassin's focus on stealth and quickly ending battles leads to a lack of physical endurance. (When hit with a damaging jutsu of equal or greater rank to the Assassin, the Assassin treats the jutsu as if it were one rank higher in terms of damage done)
2) Fewer Weapon/Taijutsu Styles: [description here] (The Assassin Can learn only 2 taijutsu/weapon styles, and can only learn up to 1 rank below their current rank for their secondary style, the primary style can be mastered up to their rank) Rank Benefits
Genin (place chosen genin rank benefit here)
Chuunin (place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin (place chosen Jounin rank benefit here) Shinobi Type(s) Speed Shinobi Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja) Chakra Control This Shinobi is a master of Chakra Control, allowing them to more easily learn to mold their chakra to perform jutsus, as well as allowing them to use their chakra more effeciently when using jutsus. At higher ranks they even learn to mold chakra without the use of hand-seals. (-2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals.) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level:[/bHigh
Chakra Point: +5 chakra points/10 max chakra points
Chakra Control: None
Elemental Affinities: Fire Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: (Fire • • • • • Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: (Name of Element) • • • • • Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: (what type of animals do you summon, dog, snake, toad, etc.) Summons Known: (don't worry about filling this out just yet) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Name of Weapon: (name of your weapon if applicable; if it's a custom weapon link the name to the description of the weapon) Base Range:(The effective range of the weapon without utilizing any jutsus or special abilities) Shinobi Tools Kunai: Shuriken: 15 Makibishi: 20 light bomb: 25 smoke bomb: 30 steel wire:5 feet long Apparel Head-Band Style: straight Head-Band Location: arm Head-Band Color: brown Flak-Jacket style: none yet Flak-Jacket color: none yet ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Statement Total Number of Mission Completed: 0
Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: o
Mission Record:
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:05 pm
Just so it is not looked over I changed over to Kiri... Talked to Luo and it seemed better for what I want for my RPC.
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:26 pm
@Everyone: Please REPOST your profiles when done. Its easier to look over both to be 110% sure I didn't miss anything. @Havik: Since its dormant to begin, the sharingan can stay. Just don't make its activation your top priority, or you'll be severely disappointed at the lack of things that you'll be able to do. Instead, I recommend building up jutsu or mission points. Please add your genin rank benefit for your Shinobi Profession. @Panthers: I still have major qualms about the sarutobi clan, but for now, this is acceptable.  @TvIm: Please include descriptions for Profession Base Benefit, Learning Information, Weakness, and Rank Benefits (If any certain field doesn't have a description, don't worry about it. Chakra points are incorrect. The headband is a carving on his headphones? Don't get me wrong, its allowed, but where is the carving? If they're anything like the ones in the picture, there doesn't seem to be any room for a symbol. @Allegra: Please replace the big bold section labeled "Character name" at the top with your character's name. You may start out as an academy student. As a student, you would not begin with an unlocked bloodline, much less one in it's fourth stage. You only need to take one weakness. In addition, you may select one genin rank benefit. Genin do not start with high chakra. At most, a genin with aclan may have medium chakra. Please place your total chakra points in the "Chakra point" section, not just your bonus. Please add your primary element to your genjutsu section.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:12 am
@ Greg Edited those descriptions in
25+7 ( Because of class )=32, so my chakra is correct.
The carving is inside the headphones, like the location says. You know where the sound comes out? it is embroydering that with a bunch of the symbols for his village. It is to allow him to more easily walk through an enemy village if need be.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:43 am
Laxus Makarov ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Laxus Makarov Nicknames: N/a Title(s): N/a Rank: Genin Village: Kumogakure Background Info Physical Description Age: 18 Sex: Male Hair Color: Blonde Natural Eye Color: Blue Body Type: Average, Lanky Distinguishing Features: Scar across his right eye in the shape of a lightning bolt. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline, Clan, or Demon:N/aBloodline/Clan Stage:N/aAbilities of the Bloodline/Clan: 1. N/a2. N/a3. N/a Companion Info. Companion Type:N/a Companion Name:N/a Bug Evolutions: 1. N/a2. N/a3. N/a4. N/a Transplant Info Bloodline/Clan Transplant: N/a Transplant Stage: N/a Abilities of Transplant: 1. N/a 2. N/a 3. N/a ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession:Ninjutsu SpecialistProfession Base Benefit:Increased Chakra PoolGenin: +7 chakra points Chuunin: +14 Jounin: +21 Sannin/Kage: +28 Learning Information:Ninjutsu Specialists receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning ninjutsu, but receive a + 1 post penalty for learning genjutsu and a +2 post penalty for learning taijutsu/weapon techniques and styles.Weakness:Fewer Taijutsu Styles(The Ninjutsu Specialist can learn only 2 taijutsu/weapon styles, and can only learn up to 1 rank below their current rank for their secondary style, the primary style can be mastered up to their rank)Rank Benefits Genin Improved Chakra Control(The Ninjutsu Specialist receives a -1 chakra point bonus for all ninjutsus, this bonus stacks with any other chakra control bonuses.)Chuunin Elemental Resistance ( Raiton )(The Ninjutsu Specialist chooses an element that they can use, offensive jutsus of the chosen element 3 ranks or lower than the Ninjutsu Specialist cause no harm, offensive jutsus of 1 rank or lower are half as effective against the Ninjutsu Specialist)Jounin Elemental Mastery ( Raiton )(The Ninjutsu Specialist chooses an elment that they can use, ninjutsus of that element no longer require hand-seals for jutsus of C-rank or lower; if the Ninjutsu Specialist also has the chakra control shinobi type they can use ninjutsus of up to their current rank without hand-seals for the chosen element) Shinobi Type(s) Chakra Control:(-2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs (see Chakra System), can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals.) Elemtal Control ( Raiton ) :(-3 posts learning of jutsu of their element, +1 rank to jutsu used normally, +2 ranks around the elemental ninjas element, +1 post when learning jutsus not of the shinobis chosen element, -1 rank to power of jutsu when used in an extreme environment near their elements weakness) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level:Low Chakra Point:32Chakra Control:Chakra Control Shinobi Type:-1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniquesElemental Control ( Raiton ) Shinobi Type:-1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques for the chosen element.Improved Chakra Control Genin CLass Benefit:The Ninjutsu Specialist receives a -1 chakra point bonus for all ninjutsus, this bonus stacks with any other chakra control bonuses. Elemental Affinities:RaitonJutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
Raiton: • • • • • Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
Raiton: • • • • • Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: N/a Summons Known: N/a ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- N/a: current stage: Maneuvers
Abilities ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon:N/aName of Weapon:N/aBase Range:N/a Shinobi Tools Kunai:5Shuriken:10Makibishi:7light bomb:2smoke bomb:0steel wire:50 feet Apparel Head-Band Style:Dog TagsHead-Band Location:Inside of shirt outside of a village, outside while in a village.Head-Band Color:SilverFlak-Jacket style:N/aFlak-Jacket color:N/a ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Statement Total Number of Mission Completed:
Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:
Mission Record:
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 11:53 pm
Forgive me, I had thought you had included a bloodline. That was my mistake.
A Village symbol must be present and clearly visible on whatever you choose for your "headband" to be. Its a means of identifying yourself to your home village, and diplomats. What you described is exactly what we want to avoid with headbands, and partially why I'm skeptical on not making everyone use a headband headband. Besides, if you really want to sneak into a village, take the headband off, and pose as a civilian.
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 5:42 am
Edited Greg, I don't see why I'd repost it since it is right there, and it'll only page stretch.
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 3:30 pm
As i stated before, its easier for me to read over both profiles to check for mistakes. In addition, imagine if someone had to make edits three separate times, but instead of reposting, just said "Edited". Others will have posted profiles in the meantime, so this most likely means it will be pushed back. That means I need to open a new tab and hunt for their profile, as well as looking at the ones underneath the post I'm writing. In addition, its easier for you, since it allows you to look over your mistakes and be sure you never make them again. But the profile is complete, so disregard that spiel until you make another character.
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 4:59 pm
Allegra Kori no Tamashi Koizume Nastuki ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name:Koizumi Nastuki Nicknames: Koi, Nastu Title(s): N/A Rank: Academy Student Village:Sunagakure Background Info Physical Description Age: 19 Sex:female Hair Color: light brown Natural Eye Color: royal blue Body Type: perfect shape Distinguishing Features:metallic blue streaks in her hair ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline, Clan, or Demon:I want the clan i had before but it says that its unavailable so what do i do? Bloodline/Clan Stage:N/A Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan:N/A 1. 2. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Assassin Profession Base Benefit: Shadow's Shroud: Assassin's are incredibly adept at moving unseen and unheard, learning to hide themselves from all but the most perceptive of individuals. (cannot be found by shinobis of equal rank when hiding unless they have a Kekkai Genkai with extrasensory abilities; Shinobis of greater rank without an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the Assassin's presence, but not the exact location of the shinobi; Shinobis of lower rank with an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the presence of the Assassin, but not the exact location)
Stealth Focus: Assassin's are also highly skilled in the use of stealth based jutsus. Any stealth based jutsu is treated as if it were equal to the Assassin's rank in terms of effectiveness. (stealth based jutsus treated as equal to the Assassin's rank) Learning Information: None Weakness: 1) Weak-Bodied: Assassin's focus on stealth and quickly ending battles leads to a lack of physical endurance. (When hit with a damaging jutsu of equal or greater rank to the Assassin, the Assassin treats the jutsu as if it were one rank higher in terms of damage done) Rank Benefits
Genin 2) Shadow's Sight: Assassin's spend so much time in the shadow's that many of them gain the ability to see clearly no matter how dark it is. In addition these Assassin's come to realize just how much the average shinobi relies on sight, and more importantly they realize the advantage of taking away that sense. (can see clearly no matter how dark it is, can still be affected by supernatural darkness; gain the Kurayami no Jutsu [see below])
Kurayami no Jutsu (Darkness technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Variable (equal to Assassin's rank up to A) Cost: Variable (costs chakra equal to its rank up to B) Description: This genjutsu can be triggered any time the target's vision is hindered (through the use of a smoke or flash bomb for example). The Genjutsu causes the target to feel as if they have been stricken blind, the other senses are not affected. This effect lasts up to 3 posts or until the target breaks free
Chuunin (place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin (place chosen Jounin rank benefit here) Shinobi Type(s) Speed Shinobi Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja) Chakra Control This Shinobi is a master of Chakra Control, allowing them to more easily learn to mold their chakra to perform jutsus, as well as allowing them to use their chakra more effeciently when using jutsus. At higher ranks they even learn to mold chakra without the use of hand-seals. (-2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals.) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level:edium
Chakra Point: 20
Chakra Control: None
Elemental Affinities: Fire Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: (Fire) • • • • • Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: (Fire) • • • • • Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: (what type of animals do you summon, dog, snake, toad, etc.) Summons Known: (don't worry about filling this out just yet) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Name of Weapon: (name of your weapon if applicable; if it's a custom weapon link the name to the description of the weapon) Base Range:(The effective range of the weapon without utilizing any jutsus or special abilities) Shinobi Tools Kunai: Shuriken: 15 Makibishi: 20 light bomb: 25 smoke bomb: 30 steel wire:5 feet long Apparel Head-Band Style: straight Head-Band Location: arm Head-Band Color: brown Flak-Jacket style: none yet Flak-Jacket color: none yet ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Statement Total Number of Mission Completed: 0
Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: o
Mission Record:
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:17 pm
I am so sorry, I just realized where I meant to say "genin", I said "academy student". My apologies, what I meant to say is that you may start out as a genin.
As far as your bloodline, the current head of bloodline development will have to judge whether to allow it or not. I believe there were parts of it being disputed, which is why it was made unavailable.
Please change your chakra points.
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Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2012 6:54 pm
[u/c] (awaiting criticism) Yamazaru Komihachi ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name:Yamazaru Komihachi Nicknames: Yama Title(s): Rank: Genin Village:Kirigakure Background Info Physical Description Age: 15 Sex: Male Hair Color: Silver Natural Eye Color: Pale Blue Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Stark Silver Hair ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: (awaiting approval) Bloodline/Clan Stage: Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan:
1. 2. 3. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Taijutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefit: Increased Number of Taijutsu Styles: Because of their focus and training in the martial arts, Taijutsu Specialists are able to practice more taijutsu styles others. (see below)
Academy Student: 1 Taijutsu Style Genin: 2 Taijutsu Styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style Chuunin: 3 Taijutsu Styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style Jounin: 4 Taijutsu Styles, 2 Weapon or Taijutsu Styles
Strong Bodied: (Physical strength of the Taijutsu Specialist is increased by 1 rank)
Learning Information: -1 Taijutsu, +1 Weapon Styles, +2 Nin/Genjutsu Weakness: Less Elements
Rank Benefits
Genin Warrior's Rush: (The Taijutsu Specialist forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack.)
Chuunin Improved Reflexes: Most Taijutsu Specialists learn early on that the key to any successful fight is being able to quickly react the moves of their opponent, and a few of them learn to read and react to their opponents so well that they almost seem to have a sixth sense. (can read movements as if the Taijutsu Specialist had a 1 tomoe sharingan, or the ushio clan reaction speed; does not increase the effectiveness of the sharingan or ushio clan reaction speed)
Jounin Whirlwind: (The Taijutsu Specialist spins their body so quickly that they actually create a whirlwind around their body. When in this state the Taijutsu Specialist moves much faster, as if they were one rank higher. Any jutsus of equal or lower rank than the Taijutsu Specialist are deflected away from the Taijutsu specialist while in this state. The Taijutsu Specialist can attempt to ram into opponents, dealing massive damage if a direct hit as well as sending the opponent flying away from them.
If the opponent is of lower rank than the Taijutsu Specialist, then they will be sucked into the whirlwind if hit directly. As the opponent rises to the top of the whirlwind, they will be buffeted by both the strong winds, and strong fists of the Taijutsu Specialist. Once the opponent reaches the top, the Taijutsu specialist will appear above them and then slam them into the ground. Once this attack is initiated it is inaccessible from the outside.)[5 post cool-down] Shinobi Type(s) Speed Shinobi: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja)
Tactical Ninja: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation. (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Medium 3/10
Chakra Point: 18
Chakra Control:
Elemental Affinities: Suiton Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
Suiton: • • • • • Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: (Name of Element) • • • • • Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type:Summons Known:---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Name of Weapon: Base Range: Shinobi Tools Kunai:15 Shuriken: 20 Makibishi: 30 light bomb: 5 smoke bomb: 5 steel wire: 10 yards Apparel Head-Band Style: Bandana Head-Band Location: Head/Half Under Hair Head-Band Color: Black Flak-Jacket style: Coat Flak-Jacket color:White ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Statement Total Number of Mission Completed:
Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:
Mission Record:
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:37 am
U/c Character Name Niajhay Kaguya ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Niajhay Kaguya Nicknames: none Title(s): none Rank: Genin Village: Suna http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php/?t=22643221&page=last&_gaia_t_=5844Physical Description Age: 14 Sex: Shinobi Hair Color: Black Natural Eye Color: Green Body Type: Lean Distinguishing Features: None except some times when you look into his eyes they seem more demon then human.
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Main Info Bloodline:none Bloodline/Clan Stage:none 1. 2. 3.
Transplant Info
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: None Transplant Stage: None Abilities of Transplant:None 1. 2. 3. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Weapon Master Profession Base Benefit: Mighty Rush: (The weapon master forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack.) Learning Information: Weapon Masters receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning weapon style/techniques, but receive a +1 post penalty for learning taijutsu styles/techniques and a +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsus. Weakness:: (Choose either Nin or Genjutsus, all jutsus of that type used by the weapon master are counted as if one rank lower in power to a minimum of Academy Student)
Rank Benefits
Genin (place chosen genin rank benefit here)
Chuunin (place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin (place chosen Jounin rank benefit here) Shinobi Type(s) : Speed Shinobi
: Ability Control
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Chakra Information
Chakra Level: low
Chakra Point:
Chakra Control: none
Elemental Affinities:
Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: (Name of Element) • Fire • • • • Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: (Name of Element) • • • • • Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: none Summons Known: none ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style) current stage:none
Maneuvers
Abilities ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Normal katana(for the time being i am using a normal katana but later on i will be using a wide range of custom weapons. Name of Weapon: none Base Range:close
Shinobi Tools
Kunai: 5 Shuriken: 10 Makibishi: 6 light bomb: 2 smoke bomb: 4 steel wire: 5 Apparel Head-Band Style: Head-Band Location: neck Head-Band Color: brown Flak-Jacket style: none Flak-Jacket color: none ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Statement Total Number of Mission Completed:
Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:
Mission Record:
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:48 am
@Mat: As a genin, you can start out with a base amount of 25 chakra points.
Please remove your chuunin and jounin rank benefits.
Please add your primary element to your genjutsu section.
Please be aware that if you take Improved Reflexes, it will not stack with the Tactical Bonus.
@Niaj: Please repost your profile when finished.
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:11 am
[u/c] (awaiting criticism) *EDITED Yamazaru Komihachi ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name:Yamazaru Komihachi Nicknames: Yama Title(s): Rank: Genin Village:Kirigakure Background Info Physical Description Age: 15 Sex: Male Hair Color: Silver Natural Eye Color: Pale Blue Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Stark Silver Hair ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: (awaiting approval) Bloodline/Clan Stage: Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan:
1. 2. 3. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Taijutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefit: Increased Number of Taijutsu Styles: Because of their focus and training in the martial arts, Taijutsu Specialists are able to practice more taijutsu styles others. (see below)
Academy Student: 1 Taijutsu Style Genin: 2 Taijutsu Styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style Chuunin: 3 Taijutsu Styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style Jounin: 4 Taijutsu Styles, 2 Weapon or Taijutsu Styles
Strong Bodied: (Physical strength of the Taijutsu Specialist is increased by 1 rank)
Learning Information: -1 Taijutsu, +1 Weapon Styles, +2 Nin/Genjutsu Weakness: Less Elements
Rank Benefits
Genin Warrior's Rush: (The Taijutsu Specialist forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack.) Shinobi Type(s) Speed Shinobi: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja)
Support: Support type ninja are people who use jutsu to help other ninja in attacking, defense and any other type of need a fellow ninja would have. This ninjas is usually well rounded in jutsu knowing a wide range of jutsu from long range, short range and so on. These ninja are faster at learning jutsu and faster at using them too. (Jutsu -2 posts to learn jutsu, can perform jutsus that are below their without hand-seals, jutsus of equal rank can be performed with far fewer hand-seals, allowing the support shinobi to get off a quick jutsu in close quarters, jutsus of higher rank require the normal number of hand-seals.) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Medium 3/10
Chakra Point: 25
Chakra Control:
Elemental Affinities: Suiton Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
Suiton: • • • • • Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
Suiton: • • • • • Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type:Summons Known:---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Name of Weapon: Base Range: Shinobi Tools Kunai:15 Shuriken: 20 Makibishi: 30 light bomb: 5 smoke bomb: 5 steel wire: 10 yards Apparel Head-Band Style: Bandana Head-Band Location: Head/Half Under Hair Head-Band Color: Black Flak-Jacket style: Coat Flak-Jacket color:White ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Mission Statement Total Number of Mission Completed:
Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:
Mission Record:
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:34 am
I assume you're going for the nara clan? I can't tell, because I can't find your application in the application thread. Also, you may add in the medium chakra bonus once you've bee approved for your bloodline.
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