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 Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 6:43 pm
ok i switched the smoking and i hope its correct now
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:10 pm
The Real P_Dub ok i switched the smoking and i hope its correct now Okay! Remember to roleplay according to the flaws and personality you gave him! He will be accepted and will be staying in the malachite dorm. Also, you need to put his profile in the accepted character profile subforum and sign him up for classes. Today is Week 2: Monday so it's 4th period. ^^
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 11:22 am
 Character Information:
Student Name:Kats Nei Species:Human/demoness Age:17 Gender:female Personality:cocky,smart,fun-loving,wild,responsible,shyish,caring,arrogant Bio:Kats comes from a rich family and is very spoiled although her parents never spent time with her instead she was taken care of by the maids.She is a half demoness and her own parents dont even know that as she only turns to a demoness when shes upset or angry.Her father had an affair with a woman who was half demoness and he didnt know that and has never told her mother.She thought it was time for her to go to school instead of being home-schooled so she took all her pocket money and some money from the safe and ran off to this place with only the maids knowing.She still has loads of money with her.Kats has many friends although they have all either moved to different countries or different schools,she misses them alot. Skills and Abilities:Kats has good aiming when it comes to gun fight etc. She can remember many things perfectly eg:studying for an exam in every subject she has In her human form she really only has her martial arts skills. Character Flaws:short-tempered is too arrogant all the time which messes up her relationships with people she does not think about things before she does them Sexual Orientation:straight Status: single Likes: (at least 3) -cookies -boys -reading Dislikes: (at least 3) -snobs -brussel sprouts -being treated like she cant look after herself
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 4:21 pm
Hello! There are some problems and inconsistencies you will have to fix before your character can be approved. First of all--how can her parents not be aware she is half demon? To be half demon, logically, one of her parents would need to be one. So it should be obvious that she is only half human and half demon. I really have no idea how it's possible her parents aren't aware of this. Secondly, she is simply over powered. Moving things around and shattering them with her mind--regardless if she ever uses it--is too much. This power needs to be severely limited to avoid godmodding. Also, you really can't give her a skill that would prevent her from ever being harmed. Again, that is godmodding. You will need to add limitations to her skills. Third--be sure she doesn't bring any knives to school. It's against the guild rules because it just makes for awkward RPing when characters are constantly whipping out weapons willy nilly. For her flaws. The only real flaw listed is being short tempered. Being "sometimes" arrogant is not a flaw. A flaw would be like....being arrogant all the time. Not 'going down' in fights and arguments is honestly not even remotely a flaw. Perseverance (which is what that is) is a virtue, really. Before she can be approved you will need to limit her abilities and add in at least two more real flaws. Thank you!
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 4:30 pm
thank you for looking at it and i have fixed some bits so tell me if it works out now smile
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 4:38 pm
KawaiiKatsumi-chan thank you for looking at it and i have fixed some bits so tell me if it works out now smile Okay, you still have some powers that aren't going to work as stated:
Kats can tell by a persons's appearance wether they are good or bad This power is absolutely not okay. We have a lot of "undercover" bad people and this ability would basically ruin the entire plot. Basically any skill that allows your character to always win a fight, always be protected, or instantly know anything about another character are not going to be an option for this guild.
She can run very fast You need to specify how fast--are we talking running like a pro athlete, or running like The Flash. You need to clarify how fast she can run and if it's very far above normal, you'll need to be sure to add in limitations to her endurance to ensure the power is balanced. Thanks!
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 4:48 pm
lolz sorry im wild minded but how about now??
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:01 pm
KawaiiKatsumi-chan lolz sorry im wild minded but how about now?? She is approved and will be staying in Amethyst dorm. Today is Week 2, Tuesday--Free Period. She doesn't have to go to class and can interact freely. But before you post anywhere else, you need to create a profile thread in the Accepted Characters subforum, and choose a class schedule for her. Please take the time to familiarize yourself with the school system and how the guild works by reading through all the stickied threads in the main forum! Thank you and welcome to Rosentale. =3
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:03 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie KawaiiKatsumi-chan lolz sorry im wild minded but how about now?? She is approved and will be staying in Amethyst dorm. Today is Week 2, Tuesday--Free Period. She doesn't have to go to class and can interact freely. But before you post anywhere else, you need to create a profile thread in the Accepted Characters subforum, and choose a class schedule for her. Please take the time to familiarize yourself with the school system and how the guild works by reading through all the stickied threads in the main forum! Thank you and welcome to Rosentale. =3 Thank you and i shall make her schedule and put it in the accepted characters subforum but then i must leave as its past 1am here lolz thanks again X3
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:50 pm
Character Information:
Student Name: Sasha Brackensick Species: Witch Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: If she feels like you're kind of in the "friend" zone with her, she'll always be bright and will smile, but she can be shy if you're not socially close to her. Bio: Growing up in a small house wasn't as easy as it seemed for Sasha. Her bedroom was crammed inside with her 12 year old brother and 8 year old sister who were always taking too much space in one bed, so Sasha just decided to sleep by the bedroom window 6 years ago. Now, she is going to an academy, a REAL one, not some made up one her parents did. But she grew up with shyness in her family. Her mom, grandma, grandpa, but not her dad. He was very brave, but now he's an old geezer who always loses in chess. As Sasha grew older, she was too big to fit in the bedroom window fitting so she slept on the floor. The dirty floor with socks and knickers under the bed with some banana peels and bread crumbs. So when her parents decided to let their daughter go, they did. Now it was time for her to leave the home and go out to an amazing world, one where she had never been to. She had never been outside of the house for 13 years and now she is stepping out in the open. It was the same day her brother died from leukemia: April 10. Skills and Abilities: - Cooking - Intelligent at schoolwork - Playing piano - Electrical Transportation ( Ability to travel through electrical conduits (such as power lines or telephone lines). Can enter through devices such as televisions, electrical poles or computers. ) Character Flaws:- Humorless - Absentminded - Temperamental Sexual Orientation: Straight Status: Not interested. Likes: - Coffee flavoured ice cream - Milk chocolate - Lasagna Dislikes: - Dark chocolate - Odd odors - Messy rooms
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 12:50 pm
Character Information:
Student Name: Persephone Mikelovitch
Species: Human
Age: 16
Gender: Usually female
Appearance description: five foot eleven inches when male, and five foot six when female
Personality: Quiet and shy, Persephone isn't really used to any sort of social interaction. She's a kind and energetic person who really does love to talk, it's just getting past her self imposed introverted personality that could prove to be a problem.
Bio: Persephone Mikelovitch has by no means led a troubled life. Her parents are still happily married, she has always been comfortably middle class, and has never really experienced any sort of... tragedy, that turned her life upside down. No, the only reason why Persephone doesn't make many friends is because of the strange ability her and her twin brother percy share. It has led to many an awkward situation, and as a result, the twins never really went out of their way to make any friends besides each other. In a hope that the two could live normal lives, Persephone's parents sent her to a boarding school in Scotland, and Percy to a school in England. Persephone spent the first two years of her high school life there, and as a result, has a slight scottish accent. However, she didn't really make any lasting friends, and, after telling her parents how much she missed her brother, the two were transferred here.
Skills and Abilities: Whenever Persephone and her twin brother Percy look each other in the eyes, they swap sexes, Persephone becoming an almost identical copy of Percy (named Pierce) and Percy becoming an almost identical copy of Persephone (named Penelope)
Character Flaws: Persephone is rather naive, having never really had anybody betray or hurt her. Not putting yourself out in society as a whole will do that to a girl. She also can be prone to thinking that her opinions are the right opinions, as her and her brother, in most instances, think on rather similar wavelengths, so there wasn't any real opposition to her opinions there. She's also terrified of snakes... or anything to do with snakes for that matter.
Sexual Orientation: Technically Bi (heterosexual to her current sex)
Status: Single
Likes: Drawing and Painting, Video Games, Dubstep, Shonen, Pizza
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 1:05 pm
Character Information:
Student Name: Percy Mikelovitch
Species: Human
Age: 16
Gender: Usually Male
Appearance description: about 6 feet tall when male, and five foot six when female
Personality: Percy is a Warm and affectionate person. He can be a bit stubborn at times, but be nice to him, and he'll be nice to you. He is usually rather reserved, but won't hesitate to respond in a friendly manner if talked to.
Bio: Percy Mikelovitch's entire life has been intertwined with another's. Namely, his twin sister Persephone. As far as life's go, his has been rather good, but the unusual ability that he and his sister have shared since birth has made his life very awkward in some instances. To help him have a normal life, his parents sent him to a boarding school in england, and his sister to one in scotland. As a result, Percy speaks with a slight british accent. Percy made some good friends in the two years he spent at the boarding school, but he still missed his sister, as they were very close. He even had a girlfriend... who dumped him. Huh. Now, his parents decided that Rosentale would be the best place for the siblings to finish their high school education.
Skills and Abilities: Whenever Percy and his sister Make eye contact, they switch sexes, Percy becoming an almost identical copy of persephone (named penelope) and Persephone becoming and almost identical copy of Percy (named Pierce)
Character Flaws: Percy is very affectionate... which means that he can also be clingy. He's also rather stubborn, not so much on his opinions, but if you take an opposing side on an argument, no matter how petty, there's always the chance that he will refuse to yield. He's also got a little bit of a self image problem... especially when he's a girl.
Sexual Orientation: Technically bi (straight according to whichever sex he currently is.)
Status: Single
Likes: Music and Music theory, Video Games, Pizza, Classical music, Classic rock, Shojo
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:35 pm
Hello! There are a few changes that you will need to make before your character can be accepted. First, is her abilities. Even though she rarely uses her disappear ability, it's still there and it's still her ability. Can you be a bit more specific about it? Does it mean she can turn invisible or does she disappear completely? Second are her flaws. Can you explain to me how being desperate for sweets, most of the time and talking to herself are flaws? Remember, the flaws that Rosentale are looking for are flaws on a character's personality that negatively impacts them with interacting with each other. No one's perfect right? If you can't convince me that they are flaws, then you should probably pick other flaws. If you want, you can always go to Character Flaws - Doing it right as a reference and if you really can't think of a flaw, why don't you scroll down to the bottom of the thread and you'll find a long list of flaws to inspire you. ^^ When you make the changes, just quote me and I'll be back for another look. =D
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 5:21 pm
xLieselotte Hello! There are a few changes that you will need to make before your character can be accepted. First, is her abilities. Even though she rarely uses her disappear ability, it's still there and it's still her ability. Can you be a bit more specific about it? Does it mean she can turn invisible or does she disappear completely? Second are her flaws. Can you explain to me how being desperate for sweets, most of the time and talking to herself are flaws? Remember, the flaws that Rosentale are looking for are flaws on a character's personality that negatively impacts them with interacting with each other. No one's perfect right? If you can't convince me that they are flaws, then you should probably pick other flaws. If you want, you can always go to Character Flaws - Doing it right as a reference and if you really can't think of a flaw, why don't you scroll down to the bottom of the thread and you'll find a long list of flaws to inspire you. ^^ When you make the changes, just quote me and I'll be back for another look. =D She disappears completely, and I've made some changes to the Character Flaws.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 5:32 pm
We have a guild policy that states that before your next character, you have to wait two weeks before submitting another one. You could have one of the twins come to Rosentale Academy and then two weeks later, you can enter in the other twin and by then, the first twin can already be settled into the school. Just decide which twin can go first and I'll take a look at the profile. And when the two weeks have ended, you could post the second twin again. =D
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