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 Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 8:14 pm
Marilyn Manson remade that song awesomely!
And I can't wait to read your songs!
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:06 pm
If we could be perfect one last nightWell I guess I'll post a song later but for now here's a poem.
The Genius(yeah, this is about you-know who)
The Genius hid himself
Behind waves of facepaint and fake blood
After watching the Towers fall
Inside bottles of Vodka
His soul screamed for help
His mouth screamed for the fans
The Genius walked around venues
Looking for pipes to hang himself from
Every breakdown ridden with thoughts of scuicide
Breaking out of the daze
Of the long-kept hypnosis
Falling to his friends
Today the Genius is born again
He lives for the fans
He lives for his freinds
He lives in the music
Not afraid to keep on living
Ready to live again
So yeah that's it. It's about his struggle with drugs n' stuff.
and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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I EAT BRAINZ! Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:56 pm
vampzgrl16 I wish my poems were better than yours. But I'd be lying if I said mine were better. Yours was just so incredible. How'd you come up with that? And Queen, if you could, could you post them? Cause I love reading other peoples work! Nahh, I feel the opposite. But everyone's their own best critique. I dunno, I just wrote down how I was feeling. I doubt I'd be able to write like that now. Wow, great poetry Queen. && eekay, lame is the farthest from what I'd call that. It's brilliant. && Hizaku, that's an amazing poem about Gerard. I love it. You guys all have such talent! Remember me when you're way famous for your poetry and song writing? xD
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 9:36 am
Pfft, as if I could ever get famous for my poems. Mine are pretty bad and kinda disturbing to read. Now anyone else, including you BRAINZ, could easily become famous for your poems.
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 11:10 am
If we could be perfect one last nightYay! *does teh wave* I have a fan! and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 11:16 am
*continues wave* Yays! You have a fan!
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 3:01 pm
If we could be perfect one last night I'm listening to Desert Song. It's making me cry. I'm serious. and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:38 pm
That song was what was playing while I was writing my poems. There were tear drops on my paper and it was damp cause I was crying so much. Desert Song is sad! *cries* crying
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 6:56 pm
I only have two songs that need work, so I'll start posting mine.
Demon in Me
Darkness is sinking through me
Emptiness is all I could be
Loneliness is my only company
Leave me alone
Stay away from me
My looks can kill
I'm not normal
I'm dangerous
I'm quite a sight to see
You can't do anything
It's already too late
I can't resist the demon in me
Shadows are filling the sky
Many lives are always passing by
Everyone I know and love will surely die
Leave me alone
Stay away from me
Or you'll be killed
Chaos is growing
Toxic winds are blowing
I am breaking the law
Strange signs are showing
Everyone is knowing
That I'm the cause
Don't bother trying
Everyone is dying
Do not disagree
Please don't ask me how
Please, just kill me now
I can't resist the demon in me
Now I Hate You (about an ex-crush who broke my heart)
When I was young
I was dumb
For falling for you
You broke my heart
Now we're apart
I'm happy too
Now that you're gone
You are out of my life
You wanted to hurt me with a knife
You never liked me anyway
Now I'm living cheerful days
I've met someone new
He's sweeter than you
Then I liked you
Now I hate you
You were a creep
And hard to keep
Now I let you go
It's over now
Don't ask me how
You already know
I'm so happy you're gone
I like someone else now
And he's a lot better than you
I don't want you in my sight
Be forever gone
Young Love (about my first love who turned out to be gay)
Hello stranger
Do you remember me?
In middle school, you brightened up my life
Hello achiever
I smile when you pass me
I cheer for you when I hear you play
But now graduation’s past
I wish that it could last
I miss you
You are all I think about
You are all I talk about
Why must it be this way?
I’d do anything to see you
I’d do anything to say
This is how much I love you
Prince Charming
Have you ever noticed
That when you’re not looking I smile at you?
I wonder
If you’ll remember me
If you ever see me again
Now that graduation’s past
And with memories that will last
I dream about you every night
Oh, why did we have to separate?
Oh, I wanted to tell how I feel, but it was too late
I miss you
I miss you
I miss you
I want to see your face again
So I can tell you how I feel
Dude in My Dreams
Who are you? You’re just the dude in my dreams
I want to know who you are, who you are
Because I love you and can’t stop thinking of you
But do you even exist? Tell me please
Tell me why you’re here, tell me why you care
I was just depressed, but then you came
You’re the one and only dream companion
And I never thought I’d fall in love ever again
So don’t drift away, I’ll really miss you
If I had one wish, I’d fall asleep forever
What are you? You’re my figment of imagination
I really wish you were here by my side
So I can touch you and finally know you’re for real
I really wish you exist in this world
I need you every day, I need to get away
So I can finally see your smile again
Who are you? You’re just the dude in my dreams
I want to know who you are
Inuyasha (Spongebob theme parody)
Who lives in the feudal era of Japan?
Inuyasha!
Who is half dog demon and half man?
Inuyasha!
Who looks for jewel shards with Kagome?
Inuyasha!
Who gets a ‘sit’ almost every day?
Inuyasha!
Whose older brother is Sesshomaru?
Inuyasha!
Who’s looking for a demon named Naraku?
Inuyasha!
Who travels with three humans and a fox?
Inuyasha!
Who is the guy that totally rocks?
Inuyasha!
Inuyasha!
Inuyasha!
Inuyasha!
Inuyasha!
Negative
Every time I talk to you
You put yourself down
When you’re feeling so screwed up
You say you wanna drown
It makes me sad you have no self-esteem
So I’ll come to you and I’ll come clean
Please stop
Don’t wanna hear this
You’re just makin’ me cry
Stop puttin’ down yourself
I care about you
Why do you have to be so negative?
I understand you
I felt that way before
But don’t go all the way
Why must you hate yourself?
Please stop it
I just want to say
I think about you
I talk about you
I care about you
I’d scream without you
Destination Tokyo
I want to go where samurai lived
I want to go where manga was born
I want to learn more about this country
So please let me go
Destination Tokyo
Onigiris, haiku poetry
Playstation, these are good for me
Calligraphy, anime
Dancing video games, let’s go play
I can find all of these, so let me go
Please send me to Tokyo
I want to go where they drink green tea
I want to go where I can make origami
I want to learn more about this country
So please let me go
Destination Tokyo
Martial arts, Buddhism
Computers, I want to know more
Kimonos, pretty language
Karaoke bars, sushi galore
Take me to this foreign land
A place called Tokyo, Japan
I want to go where they use chopsticks
I want to go where kids my age wear uniforms
I want to learn more about this country
So please let me go
Destination Tokyo
J-pop, J-rock
Flip flops with socks
Japanese culture
I want to know more
Tokyo made iki tai’n desu ga . . . . .
Get Off My Sidewalk
It's Monday afternoon
I'm alone with you
You're annoying me
Look, I'm freaking out
I am singing really fast
I can't stand your company
Get the hell away from me
So shut up and freeze
And please let me talk! (Insert silence & deep breath)
Get off my sidewalk
Don't even talk to me
Also don't touch me
Your annoyance is contagious
You've got questions, I've got answers
I won't give them, ha ha ha ha ha
Get the hell out of my face
And get off my sidewalk
You don't understand
I am sensitive
My hair's standing up
Look, I'm turning pale
I can't say a single word
I don't need your company
I don’t want you to know me
I don't give a damn
I just want to be alone . . . . .
Leave me alone
Don't talk to me
Go back to your home planet
And just leave me be
Changes
I remember the days I’d sit and watch Rugrats
Running around and playing with the cats
Staying up until seven-thirty for The Simpsons to come on
Doing each other’s hair like we had our own beauty salon
But that was then, and this is now
It’s time to change no matter how
We’re going through changes every day
They’re either all right or never okay
One day you’re carefree and always here
But then you grow up and then disappear
This thing called adulthood seems so frightening
This lonely feeling is always tightening
But while you’re away as things are changing too fast
I’ll be waiting in your unforgettable past
The time we spend together makes me feel less lonely
Although I feel left out when you’re with your one and only
I miss our little circle when we’d just talk and laugh
And now you’ve found a someone and you’re now cut in half
I miss the past, but now’s the present
I’ll find my way to fix this dent
Don’t separate because of me
This song is not a plea
I just feel left out
It makes me wanna shout
Old New Jersey (an Old McDonald parody)
Old New Jersey had a band, it was MCR
And in that band, they had a Gerard, oh my goodness gosh
With a Gee squee here and a Gee squee there
Here a squee, there a squee, everywhere a Gee squee
Old New Jersey had a band, all hail New Jersey!
Old New Jersey had a band, it was MCR
And in that band, they had a Mikey, oh my goodness gosh
With a coffee cup here and a coffee cup there
Here a cup, there a cup, everywhere a coffee cup
Old New Jersey had a band, all hail New Jersey!
Old New Jersey had a band, it was MCR
And in that band, they had a Frank, oh my goodness gosh
With a Frank scream here and a Frank scream there
Here a scream, there a scream, everywhere a Frank scream
Old New Jersey had a band, all hail New Jersey!
Old New Jersey had a band, it was MCR
And in that band, they had a Ray, oh my goodness gosh
With a Ray fro here and a Ray fro there
Here a fro, there a fro, everywhere a Ray fro
Old New Jersey had a band, all hail New Jersey!
Old New Jersey had a band, it was MCR
And in that band they had a Bob, oh my goodness gosh
With a Bobcat here and a Bobcat there
Here a cat, there a cat, everywhere a Bobcat
Old New Jersey had a band, all hail New Jersey!
Epic Warrior (about my current crush; based on my previous poem)
You’re so bright like the blinding light of death
The sight of you makes me lose my breath
What is this feeling that you’re always giving me?
I believe its love, but you simply cannot see
The sound of your voice always makes me smile
Seeing your face makes my life worth while
I wish you were a blanket to keep this warm feeling
‘Cause when I’m sad, the sight of you is healing
I think you’re so very charming, funny and weird
When you’re not around, it’s the worst I’ve feared
I wish I could talk to you, but I just can’t speak
When I can’t see you, I’d get so weak
You move like a robot every time you stand
Unlike some others, you’re easy to understand
Though you’ll soon be gone, graduated and free
You will always be an epic warrior to me
When I come to school and don’t see you, I come home sad
But the next day I see you, so then I come home glad
Some of the guys wear trench coats, but yours is not to compete
Your robot boots are so awesome, I’m jealous of your feet
You have hair like a raven, silky and long
The way you speak gives me the idea that you’re pretty strong
You always wear dark sunglasses and clothes that are all black
I don’t know about you, but I think our math teacher’s a quack
Every time I watch Robot Chicken, I think of you
Every time I see Gerard Way, I see you
Every time I hear MXC, I hear you
Every time I dream, I love you
Forgive Me
I’m just a regular girl who just wants to live
But when I do something wrong, I am hard to forgive
The thought always makes me cry
I’d sometimes end up thinking that I should die
I was picked on as a kid because kids thought I was fat
I’d feel upset the whole day until I get comfort from my cat
Everyone thought I was okay
But I cried inside every day
I’m sorry that your words make me cry
I’m sorry that I’m so freakin’ shy
So please forgive me for this action
‘Cause I might be a forever distraction
I’m sorry that I’m always like this
I’m sorry if this disturbs your bliss
But I’m not gonna change
I’ll always be one of the strange
I started to get anxious when I was sick for a week
I had a scared look on my face and people called me a freak
I’d yelp when I hear a sudden sound
But it’s just a pebble hitting the ground
Random people always talk to me like I’m their friend
They scare me so much, I’m hard to befriend
I wish I could run away and hide
So I can keep this fear inside
Why do you people do this to me?
I just wanna run so I can be free
Can’t stand the pain of thinking badly of myself
Stop thinking of me and start thinking about yourself
I plan on writing more. I have ideas for a couple.
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:59 am
If we could be perfect one last night Those are all really good! I like your InuYasha one adn the old McDonald one the bestest! and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:52 pm
Oh.
My.
Wow.
Those.
Were.
INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THAT?????????????
I'M SO JEALOUS.
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 8:32 pm
If we could be perfect one last nightso...jealous...*dies of jealousy* and die like STAR-CROSSED lovers when we fight
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 8:34 am
I really wish i could write like that *has random spasm*
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:48 am
AHAHA. That's, like, probably gonna end up being my future career. According to the aptitude tests I took, I should have a career in writing or art.
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 12:52 pm
I can totally see you having a career like that. Cause you're amazing at that!!!!
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