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Dean_Cain

PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 6:00 pm


Very Good Story..

I can tell you put alot of thought into it. Good Job
PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:45 pm


You know orignally i was planning to kill Takano to add to Yuri's Character, or to give add a Funeral to the thing but, well Takano is too important to kill off so quick, therefore for reasons I will not name at the moment, Also Elana_Chan's Crying about her being Injured.
Speaking of which Elana's been really Quiet lately...

NekoTalim


Elana_chan
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Jul 13, 2005 3:21 pm


NekoTalim
You know orignally i was planning to kill Takano to add to Yuri's Character, or to give add a Funeral to the thing but, well Takano is too important to kill off so quick, therefore for reasons I will not name at the moment, Also Elana_Chan's Crying about her being Injured.
Speaking of which Elana's been really Quiet lately...
the reason why is because I'm on vacation and have a very narrow window open for net access while I'm in euroupe. I just read the whole thing and I commend you for your work...I hope to see more soon
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2005 1:09 am


XV: A Copout Check up on the rest of everyone

"HOW IN THE HELL DID THAT IDIOT FALL OUT" Elaine shouted at the top of her lungs.
"simple the Psychic strain of that shield you made caused you to lose consciousness..." a voice said "That AND Fen's Driving..."
they were in a small meeting circle many people were groaning.
"..Yuri could be the Key to this whole thing. she is the strongest of all of us, or at least has the potential to be anyway."
"and someone with that kind of power, I believe it even Unnerves you Fenrir."
Fenrir didn't answer, but Yuri's untapped power was a terrifying prospect, espicially if it was released the way it was last night.
"..we cannot let another Torayou be made from this, Yuri must be found."

* * *

Torayou looked around the camp the next day, many of the soldiers were angry at her, though Fenrir attacking was an unforseen event. she headed towards the Captains quarters, where he was again mulling over some Maps and charts, always the stratagist.
"...Permission to.."
"Granted Torayou. we need to talk."
"Sir yes sir." she stated
"...Before we attacked this place you put so much Stock in you told me that you were the only Animalistic being still alive. but this...Fenrir was definately still alive."
"...Sir."
"...what no explanation?"
"If it was the Real Fenrir, the original one he would be well over 60 years old." Torayou said, after all Fenrir was made when Krovankan was only a boy, perhaps even before he was born, and Krovankan was around 50 or even 70 "the only explanantion for his age is that the Serum he took was less advanced and had affects on the Aging process."
"....Unh-huh.." it was quite obvious that Kemen had no to little clue what Torayou was talking about
"what about that Other Girl, that Elaine."
Torayou growled at the mention of it. the Captain chuckled.
"..I have no idea where she comes from, though she looks Mercadian."
Kemen sighed "...Dismissed, oh and stay within camp tonight, we're still in enemy territory and don't need you...stealing all of the men's fun." he grinned, odds are that if Torayou met any enemy soldiers they'd all die before the night was done.
Torayou nodded and was about to leave.
"Oh and Torayou," he said handing her some Documents", here are the MIA/KIA lists, I'd like someone to have these posted in the Mess Tent."
"Sir." she said and walked back to the Mess hall, holding the Confirmed KIA list at the top, she nearly dropped it when she read the 9th name.
"Mark J. Kannoth."
Torayou did not cry, she did not shout, she didn't do anything, she just pinned up the damn pictures and walked out of the Mess tent and jumped into a tree and feel all of her feelings pour out from there.

NekoTalim


Elana_chan
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:36 am


uh am I missing something? I thought Takano was yuri's mom, Melissa... now your saying she's a boy? confused
PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:36 pm


Elana_chan
uh am I missing something? I thought Takano was yuri's mom, Melissa... now your saying she's a boy? confused
Err what? holy crap she did say that xd

Rokkr


NekoTalim

PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:39 pm


Rokkr
Elana_chan
uh am I missing something? I thought Takano was yuri's mom, Melissa... now your saying she's a boy? confused
Err what? holy crap she did say that xd
..Oh my god.
*hits herself Kenichi style*
STUPID STUPID STUPID
*Rolls on the ground like in Chobits*
...I meant Krovankan the old man who supposed to be like 60 or something. god i was tired That night
*goes off to edit that part and fix it*
PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 10:07 am


NekoTalim
Rokkr
Elana_chan
uh am I missing something? I thought Takano was yuri's mom, Melissa... now your saying she's a boy? confused
Err what? holy crap she did say that xd
..Oh my god.
*hits herself Kenichi style*
STUPID STUPID STUPID
*Rolls on the ground like in Chobits*
...I meant Krovankan the old man who supposed to be like 60 or something. god i was tired That night
*goes off to edit that part and fix it*
lmao, it's alright.... *ish waiting to read more*

Elana_chan
Crew


Unidofuri
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 10:43 am


eek ELANA!!!*pounces Elana* blaugh
PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 11:31 am


Wow. Your story is really progressing well. (wish I could say the same about my own-not posted) I can't wait to see what happens to Yuri next. blaugh

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NekoTalim

PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:33 pm


Chapter 15: Sympathy for The Devil

Mark... Torayou thought squeezing her tears out of her eyes not you Mark..
Mark was the man who found her, who took her to Kemen and one of the few soldiers that did not fear her, of all of the people who could've died why Mark? she held her arms across her chest as though cold and looked up at the stars.
why Mark?
she felt so alone and so Vunerable, Mark who had always been there for her Mark who had always been her friend, Mark was dead
* * *

Christa laughed as her latest rescue scratched this girls nose.
"you're being really nice letting me in Christa, you don't even know me.."
"Well its not like you even know who you are." the cat batted Yuri with her paw
"hey!" Yuri squeeked
"So do you have a name yet?" Christa said on her computer she was E-mailing a friend of hers in Mercadia, since her father was moved on duty she was living in this Villa of Eastern Konekoa quite far from the Rebel Red Zone.
"..I think my name is...Melissa." Yuri said brightly after all in her jumbled Memories she had heard that name a lot.
* * *

Back at the Hospital Takano was finally getting out, she was in a wheelchair and would be for a few monthes but still she was out of that place, many people were dying in there, it chilled Takano, Krovankan was also quite happy with Takano condition though he would have to go along with Yamato westward to answer a few questions and be kept under visiual contact, Takano would stay with her family a few miles away from the attack site.
Takano painted a smile on her face and hid the tears of her Yuri who no doubt was dead.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 6:20 am


Unidofuri
eek ELANA!!!*pounces Elana* blaugh
hi uni!!! I return home tommorow where I can post daily 3nodding

Elana_chan
Crew


Unidofuri
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 8:05 am


Elana_chan
Unidofuri
eek ELANA!!!*pounces Elana* blaugh
hi uni!!! I return home tommorow where I can post daily 3nodding
Your not allowed to leave for extended amounts of time anymore. Everybody missed you 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 8:27 am


Unidofuri
Elana_chan
Unidofuri
eek ELANA!!!*pounces Elana* blaugh
hi uni!!! I return home tommorow where I can post daily 3nodding
Your not allowed to leave for extended amounts of time anymore. Everybody missed you 3nodding
it's not my fault that my mom was required to take 6 weeks off (the reason for the trip).... any way in the future we'll probably just be doiing our usual 2 week vacations...*moves conversation to the catnip lounge*

Elana_chan
Crew


NekoTalim

PostPosted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 10:52 pm


Merh, this is getting sad, my Chapters have gotten shamefully short. I'll have to really burn the Midnight Oil on my next Chapter, Welcome Back Elana..
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