-Is his name pronounced "Mack-ee" or "Mah-quee" or... like how? -I'm really confused on why showing his "abilities" off in a city would do them any good at all. It would get him found out by authorities since they were public, plus they aren't anything that is really showy, like for crowds. Except his ears and tail, I guess. Also, Atlantis wouldn't have taken him in just for that either, otherwise they would have orphans from all over the world. I think it would make a lot more sense for them to have heard of the place and Zach to have just brought him to Atlantis and pleaded for them to take him in, or some other circumstance where it would make him not just one more kid without a home. -trust issues doesn't count as a flaw -"100... that's as high as I can go" XD YES
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-"Mah-quee" :3 but he prefers to be called Ray biggrin (in love with the name Ray for no reason besides it beautiful ) -Yeah , had no idea how to get him down in Atlantis and no clue if people were allowed to take him down there, so I was stuck on that one BUT I can do that now! -I'll think of another flaw :3 -XD Yeah that's his topper
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Name: Raphael Blackmoor Student or Professor: Student Nickname: Raphael Age: 17 Gender: Male Race: Vampire/Human Orientation: Pansexual Relationship Status: Single
History: Raphael Blackmoor was born in Florence, Italy. His mother was a human and his father was a vampire. His father was very well respected and was leader of one of the biggest vampire clans in Italy and was soon going to pass the throne down to Raphael when he got older, but of course, him being bullied and him not being full vampire stopped his father from doing so. Raphael was always bullied as a child and decided to be alone and away from his family. He knew nothing of werewolves and their 'destruction's' to vampires. One day, Raphael's father showed him the book that included everything that werewolves have ever done to vampires which made Raphael grow a hatred towards werewolves. His father taught him how to use his bite of death. Seeing that's one of his only "powers", he carries around a dagger made out of steel (since silver does effect him). After all of this, even being somewhat stronger, Raphael still tends to be alone and keep away from big groups of people since he is afraid that they're all making fun of him behind his back... He is also still very depressed but keeps it inside. His parents also forced him to come to the Academy since his father graduated from there and he wanted Raphael to follow in his footsteps, which Raphael strongly dislikes since he hates demons and socializing.
Weapons and/or Powers: ۰Dagger of steel. (Weapon) ۰Bite of Death- A bite taught by his father that, when bitten, the person looses control of their muscles and becomes paralyzed for a long amount of time. The only downfall is that it takes some time for the poison to travel through the body.
Personality: Due to Raphael being bullied most of his life, he was always the quiet one. He had only one true friend as a child yet he was taken away from him which made him depressed. Because of that, he became even more alone and distant from everyone. Raphael always enjoyed being alone and reading good books under a tree in the nighttime. He's real good at controlling his emotions and keeping everything bundled inside which is one of his strengths. He hates loud, annoying, upbeat, happy people since he was never one. He also is very monotone since he doesn't care much about life at the moment.
Character Flaws: -Raphael is depressed, so he really doesn't care about winning, or loosing, or anything at the moment. -He has no motivation towards anything so he really doesn't give it his all. -He Is gratified by the sight of someone else bleeding, which could be used against him.
Habits: Reading books and Messing with his hair when he's nervous. Quirks: He walks away a lot and he sighs a lot. Fears: Spiders and Demons. Aspirations: Leaving his 'shell' and finding true love. Loves: Books, hair, humans, vampires. Likes: ۰Being alone ۰Reading a good book ۰Quietness ۰Nature ۰Blood ۰His hair ۰Birds ۰Nighttime ۰The cold Is Indifferent To: Raphael is indifferent the other races of people who aren't vampires, humans, or werewolves. Mainly because he is half vampire half human. And he also strongly dislikes werewolves for obvious reasons. Dislikes: ۰Werewolves ۰Demons ۰Loud annoying people ۰Overpopulated areas ۰Groups of people ۰Hotness Hates: Werewolves, annoying people, big groups.
Describe your character's voice: Deep, monotone. Describe your character's walk: Awkwardly with hands in pockets. Describe your character's face: (Picture) Describe your character's body: Skinny, lanky. Describe your character's style: Sweatshirts, skinnyjeans. Describe your character's posture: Slouchy. Describe any physical characteristics you feel necessary: He's very skinny.
Answer the following ten questions in character:
What do you think is your best quality? "I'm intelligent..." What do you think is your worst quality? "Why do I have to answer this?" How do you react to confrontation? To kindness? "I hate confrontation." What do you think makes something funny? "Nothing." How many licks would it take you to get to the center of a tootsie pop? "I hate candy." If you could change one thing about yourself - physical, mental, or otherwise - what would you change? "I want to be a butterfly." Tell me about the best relationship you've ever had - with a sibling, friend, parent, significant other, or anyone. "Psh. Next." In a nutshell, how do you think people who like you would describe you? "Perfect. What do you think?" In a nutshell, how do you think people who dislike you would describe you? "They are jealous, don't ask them." How would you describe yourself? "Uh... Happy...?"
Class Schedule: (for students only - delete if not a student) 1- World History 2- Art 3- Philosophy
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Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2013 7:48 pm
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Is this ready? It looks finished but you didn't quote me so I want to make sure either way.
Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2013 7:50 pm
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Is this ready? It looks finished but you didn't quote me so I want to make sure either way.
-what are the "few things" that got in the way of the vampire thrown or whatever? his non-socialness?
-both of the mind powers are not allowed here, sorry. How much time does it take for the poison to take effect and how long does it last?
-not being social isn't a flaw
-he both dislikes and hates werewolves? wow. this just got real. xD
-ok ill change his race
-What? *confused face*
-Aw, alright but Idk what else to substitute in for that. & Depends on the person/being. Usually 15 minutes.
-Oh, whoops..
-and he despises werewolves x3
-You don't have to change his race. I was just letting you know.
-"His father was very well respected and was leader of one of the biggest vampire clans in Italy and was soon going to pass the throne down to Raphael but a few things got in the way." but you didn't really explain what those things were that got in the way, unless it was just that he was bullied.
- It lasts 15 minutes or it takes 15 minutes to take effect? And how long for whichever one of those it isn't?
-what are the "few things" that got in the way of the vampire thrown or whatever? his non-socialness?
-both of the mind powers are not allowed here, sorry. How much time does it take for the poison to take effect and how long does it last?
-not being social isn't a flaw
-he both dislikes and hates werewolves? wow. this just got real. xD
-ok ill change his race
-What? *confused face*
-Aw, alright but Idk what else to substitute in for that. & Depends on the person/being. Usually 15 minutes.
-Oh, whoops..
-and he despises werewolves x3
-You don't have to change his race. I was just letting you know.
-"His father was very well respected and was leader of one of the biggest vampire clans in Italy and was soon going to pass the throne down to Raphael but a few things got in the way." but you didn't really explain what those things were that got in the way, unless it was just that he was bullied.
- It lasts 15 minutes or it takes 15 minutes to take effect? And how long for whichever one of those it isn't?
Just let me know once you're finished, thanks ^^
I fixed all you told me to, and it takes 15 minutes to take effect. And only about 5 minutes (enough time to let him get away)
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Posted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 2:56 pm
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Not being strong isn't a character flaw. Sorry, I know this bit can be a little frustrating sometimes.
Posted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 7:01 pm
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Not being strong isn't a character flaw. Sorry, I know this bit can be a little frustrating sometimes.
Then I honestly dont know what to put haha.
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Posted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 7:11 pm
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Name: Raphael Blackmoor
Not being strong isn't a character flaw. Sorry, I know this bit can be a little frustrating sometimes.
Then I honestly dont know what to put haha.
Did you try the link? There's a whole huge list you could just pick one ^^
Posted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 7:42 pm
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Name: Raphael Blackmoor
Not being strong isn't a character flaw. Sorry, I know this bit can be a little frustrating sometimes.
Then I honestly dont know what to put haha.
Did you try the link? There's a whole huge list you could just pick one ^^
he isn't immortal?
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Posted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 7:51 pm
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Name: Raphael Blackmoor
Not being strong isn't a character flaw. Sorry, I know this bit can be a little frustrating sometimes.
Then I honestly dont know what to put haha.
Did you try the link? There's a whole huge list you could just pick one ^^
he isn't immortal?
You know, I'm a little bit offended that you think I'm flawed simply because I'm not immortal. =/
Try this: think of someone you don't like. What makes you not like that person? Are they judgmental? Are they insensitive? Or if you have a sibling, what is it about that sibling that really just gets your goat? (I cannot believe I just used that phrase. No shame.) Really just pick apart different people to see what makes them tick, and choose one of the bad things.
(Well. In any other situation, that would be the worst advice I could possibly give. Please don't take that out of context.)
