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 Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:50 pm
Eh, I think I'll just rewrite my entire talent, since I don't particularly like the fact that I'd have to change so much of it to the point it isn't what I wanted it to be in the first place.
I'll have a new one up in a day ot two, or maybe an hour or so.
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:00 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Beatriz-chan Username: Beatriz-chan
RPC Name: Shiro Hanazawa
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline: Trendrill
Profession: Medical Shinobi
Ninja Types: Chakra Control / Summon Specialist
Talent Description: Shiro is able to learn one of two ranks above her. (She still needs to learn it from someone) The power of her Medical and Bloodline Jutsu are increased by one rank.
Talent Sacrifice: Shiro is unable to learn Taijutsu aside from a Taijutsu/Weapon style created for her body and that involves the continuous usage of chakra or her Bloodline, or both (can learn only one). Her strength is reduced by one rank (does not count for threads' strength).
How it happened: Being one with the Trendrill Bloodline, Shiro has a quite different body. She can detach body parts at her will, but because she tested that recklessly there was a permanent damage to her muscles and the girl became unable to use her full strength. With that condition, Shiro found herself unable to practice and learn Taijutsu that was not suited for her body's condition. Yet the girl found herself still able to be as good as an ordinary shinobi by focusing on the areas not affected by her condition. That focus being on Medical and Bloodline Jutsu. Your learning bonus should also not stack with the learning bonuses gained from Chakra Control and your profession. (Basically instead of specifying teachers and training grounds, say it can't stack at all.) With all of those things not stacking though, it'd be fine to allow the teacher bonus to still stack. For this weakness, I will require that you take Weaker Gen/Ninjutsu as your profession weakness. That way you aren't cheating the profession weaknesses. Now, rather than the way you have it designed, where you can still learn a style if it's based on your bloodline, or chakra usage, make it so that you can only learn taijutsu techniques made specifically for the bloodline. And they can't be personal customs either. Also, with your strength reduction, you should include speed as well. Your description states that her muscles were damaged. Speed relies on the muscles just as much as strength. If that bonus would not work along with the types/profession then there is no purpose to having it seeing as it would be that big of a change to the bonuses. I removed that and put something else. The weakness, it is simply making her unable to learn any Taijutsu, only the custom style. The weakness of the profession allows the learning of Taijutsu and two styles, while only one can be mastered and the other is learned up to one rank below the user. That way it is not cheating the weakness, but creating a more detailed weakness. If you prefer, that one style could be mastered only to one rank below the user. Not any ordinary Taijutsu for the Bloodline would suit her condition, unless it involved direct usage of the threads or chakra to enhance the physical characteristics. As for the speed reduction, it is true that both speed and strength rely on muscles, yet they are used in two different forms. Someone who is really strong, is not necessarily fast and vice-versa. One with incredibly developed muscles might have an incredible strength and explosive power, but that not always turns that person faster. Likewise, someone incredibly fast is not necessarily incredibly strong. It all depends for what purpose the muscle is developed. Varying when it is to make quick performances of great speed, extended performance of stable speed, etc.
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:45 am
Username: -o-Havik-o-
RPC Name:Death "The Monkey Man" Spank
RPC Rank: Jounin
Talent Description: Vice of the Devil Meat!: Due to Death "The Monkey Man" Spank's unending, and unwavering love for Bacon (yes, with a capital B!) when he consumes the delicious meat he gains a +1 to his strength, speed, and clogged arteries. This buff will last for 5 posts per piece of Bacon, and 15 posts for a meal involving Bacon.
(The buff of this talent has a 15 post cap, no matter how much Bacon is consumed.)
Talent Sacrifice: The problem with this is when he goes more than ten posts with out eating any Bacon (again with the capital B!) he suffers withdraws, taking a -1 from all his speed, and strength. He also becomes cranky, and more irritable when he does not get his fix in time.
Bacon will cost 30g raw, 40g cooked, 90g in a meal from restaurants, or market places.
Every five posts the Bacon buff is avtive there is a three post CD after deactivation.
To activate bff Death "The Monkey Man" Spank must have at least two pieces of Bacon, one will stop withdraws, but not allow access to the unending joy gained from the meat of meats.
If Bacon is eaten once withdraws have stared then he does not gain his bonus, however, if he eats a large amount of the Bacon (ten pieces, or two meals.) once from a withdrawn state, for 3 posts he will be over joyed with the taste, he will be fueled with +2 strength, and speed, after that three posts for seven he will return to his normal +1
How it happened: Through out his life Death "The Monkey Man" Spank had many meals that involved Bacon... Okay, they all did, after having it once he could not help but have it with any meal he ever had. They joy from the Bacon always fueled him, making him feel more alive, and more powerful than he was before. Learning this he about himself he went even further, and many times kept Bacon on his person for those bad situations that ninjas tend to get themselves in.
The meat of all meats even tended to get Death "The Monkey Man" Spank into fights, mostly with animal activists, vegetarians, or vegans, because when they saw him eating his BLT, Bacon cheeseburger, Bacon jerky, fried Bacon, teryiaky Bacon, Bacon dipped in various things like honey mustard, BBQ sauce, chocolate, ranch, that sauce that one restaurant serves with chicken strips, steak sauce, or ice cream (Just some of his favorites dips.) Bacon wrapped hot dogs, Bacon wrapped asparagus, fully loaded potato with extra Bacon and sour cream, or any of his other Bacon based meals they would try to convert him to there ways, and the thought of no more Bacon enraged him cause him to slash out violently and scream "I WILL NEVER STOP EATING BACON!" (All caps that time!). This some times got him in trouble with his Kage, or restaurant owners, but for some reason those none meat eating bastards always piss him off.
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2012 1:35 pm
-o-Havik-o- Username: -o-Havik-o-
RPC Name:Death "The Monkey Man" Spank
RPC Rank: Jounin
Talent Description: Vice of the Devil Meat!: Due to Death "The Monkey Man" Spank's unending, and unwavering love for Bacon (yes, with a capital B!) when he consumes the delicious meat he gains a +1 to his strength, speed, and clogged arteries. This buff will last for 5 posts per piece of Bacon, and 15 posts for a meal involving Bacon.
(The buff of this talent has a 15 post cap, no matter how much Bacon is consumed.)
Talent Sacrifice: The problem with this is when he goes more than ten posts with out eating any Bacon (again with the capital B!) he suffers withdraws, taking a -1 from all his speed, and strength. He also becomes cranky, and more irritable when he does not get his fix in time.
Bacon will cost 30g raw, 40g cooked, 90g in a meal from restaurants, or market places.
Every five posts the Bacon buff is avtive there is a three post CD after deactivation.
To activate bff Death "The Monkey Man" Spank must have at least two pieces of Bacon, one will stop withdraws, but not allow access to the unending joy gained from the meat of meats.
If Bacon is eaten once withdraws have stared then he does not gain his bonus, however, if he eats a large amount of the Bacon (ten pieces, or two meals.) once from a withdrawn state, for 3 posts he will be over joyed with the taste, he will be fueled with +2 strength, and speed, after that three posts for seven he will return to his normal +1
How it happened: Through out his life Death "The Monkey Man" Spank had many meals that involved Bacon... Okay, they all did, after having it once he could not help but have it with any meal he ever had. They joy from the Bacon always fueled him, making him feel more alive, and more powerful than he was before. Learning this he about himself he went even further, and many times kept Bacon on his person for those bad situations that ninjas tend to get themselves in.
The meat of all meats even tended to get Death "The Monkey Man" Spank into fights, mostly with animal activists, vegetarians, or vegans, because when they saw him eating his BLT, Bacon cheeseburger, Bacon jerky, fried Bacon, teryiaky Bacon, Bacon dipped in various things like honey mustard, BBQ sauce, chocolate, ranch, that sauce that one restaurant serves with chicken strips, steak sauce, or ice cream (Just some of his favorites dips.) Bacon wrapped hot dogs, Bacon wrapped asparagus, fully loaded potato with extra Bacon and sour cream, or any of his other Bacon based meals they would try to convert him to there ways, and the thought of no more Bacon enraged him cause him to slash out violently and scream "I WILL NEVER STOP EATING BACON!" (All caps that time!). This some times got him in trouble with his Kage, or restaurant owners, but for some reason those none meat eating bastards always piss him off.
You may want to fix up the grammar a bit in some areas though.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2012 1:56 pm
Beatriz-chan Beatriz-chan Username: Beatriz-chan
RPC Name: Shiro Hanazawa
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline: Trendrill
Profession: Medical Shinobi
Ninja Types: Chakra Control / Summon Specialist
Talent Description: Shiro is able to learn one of two ranks above her. (She still needs to learn it from someone) The power of her Medical and Bloodline Jutsu are increased by one rank.
Talent Sacrifice: Shiro is unable to learn Taijutsu aside from a Taijutsu/Weapon style created for her body and that involves the continuous usage of chakra or her Bloodline, or both (can learn only one). Her strength is reduced by one rank (does not count for threads' strength).
How it happened: Being one with the Trendrill Bloodline, Shiro has a quite different body. She can detach body parts at her will, but because she tested that recklessly there was a permanent damage to her muscles and the girl became unable to use her full strength. With that condition, Shiro found herself unable to practice and learn Taijutsu that was not suited for her body's condition. Yet the girl found herself still able to be as good as an ordinary shinobi by focusing on the areas not affected by her condition. That focus being on Medical and Bloodline Jutsu. If that bonus would not work along with the types/profession then there is no purpose to having it seeing as it would be that big of a change to the bonuses. I removed that and put something else. The weakness, it is simply making her unable to learn any Taijutsu, only the custom style. The weakness of the profession allows the learning of Taijutsu and two styles, while only one can be mastered and the other is learned up to one rank below the user. That way it is not cheating the weakness, but creating a more detailed weakness. If you prefer, that one style could be mastered only to one rank below the user. Not any ordinary Taijutsu for the Bloodline would suit her condition, unless it involved direct usage of the threads or chakra to enhance the physical characteristics. As for the speed reduction, it is true that both speed and strength rely on muscles, yet they are used in two different forms. Someone who is really strong, is not necessarily fast and vice-versa. One with incredibly developed muscles might have an incredible strength and explosive power, but that not always turns that person faster. Likewise, someone incredibly fast is not necessarily incredibly strong. It all depends for what purpose the muscle is developed. Varying when it is to make quick performances of great speed, extended performance of stable speed, etc. The bonus would simply have stacked too high, that's all. This new one... She can learn one of what? The weakness of not being able to learn taijutsu except for that one style that you really want because it's designed for your... Wait, hold on. See where I'm going with that? It's not a weakness if it has that clause in it. As for your reasoning for the weakness being "More detailed", that's not the point. The point is that by having the removal of taijutsu as your weakness in both removes the weakness taken from the profession. Take it this way. A serial killer allows you to escape if you let him cut off one hand, or one foot. You ask him to also let your family escape, by giving him the wrist to the hand he cut off. It was useless to you now anyways, so why not lose a bit more of it? By making a more detailed taijutsu weakness in your talent, you invalidate the medic weakness. That is why profession is part of the application, so I can check that. Now, the clause I offered still allows you to learn the taijutsu techniques, it just disallows the learning of "Chakra based" taijutsu, and should probably also not allow you to learn the passive abilities some styles give. If you don't like that, you can try another sacrifice. I am fully aware of the distinction between speed and strength in muscle development. However, that has no bearing on my reasoning. Any damage to your muscles significant enough to make you weaker physically, is also going to make it harder for you to move quickly. Your muscles can't be damaged in one way and still work perfectly in another. If I break my leg, I'm going to have a hard time not only standing or pushing things with it, but I won't exactly be able to run either. ~ To be quite honest Bea, this talent is fairly blatantly trying to gain one advantage, while not truly losing anything in the process. With losing taijutsu being the main weakness, yet still being able to learn the only one you really wanted anyways, there's no real weakness. It's one thing to ditch taijutsu completely on a character you didn't intend to learn it with anyways, it's another to claim to ditch it, but have a clause allowing you to learn it still.
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 12:24 pm
Username: Cobra_X
RPC Name: Oniwa,Kye
RPC Rank: Kage
Talent Description: "Satetsu Prodigy" - Kye does not require the use of hand seals to initiate her Satetsu techniques or any specialized Satetsu Ninjutsu. All techniques are triggered at will and require no specific movements or incantations to activate. Additionally, Kye has developed an ability to channel Raiton chakra through her Iron Sand techniques so long as part of the construct created is touching her body... an ability which is usually only reserved for Sakin branch Jiton users.
Talent Sacrifice: Kye only has one arm. This has drastically altered her life in a variety of ways, which for many years limited what she was capable of achieving and continues to limit her in many, despite the ways she has developed to overcome the missing limb.
How it happened: Born to a poor family in the Rice Country during a warring period, Kye was born with only one arm and has struggled to survive her entire life. The ability to control Iron Sand had always been within her, but had never manifested itself until triggered by an immense trauma in her life. After this event however, as she saw the iron Sand floating around her, seemingly without any instruction, Kye began to reach out to the sand, only to see it follow the movements of her hand. Initially, Kye had no idea what was happening, but over time, she found that she was capable of wielding the Iron Sand with great proficiency and developed the skill naturally.
After years of studying as a shinobi, Kye eventually realized that her innate ability to control Iron Sand had been drawing from her chakra the whole time. Through vast amounts of research, Kye found that her chakra was uniquely linked to the electrical impulses of her brain, her thoughts alone automatically creating the necessary electrical/magnetic fields which allowed her to manipulate the Iron Sand into any shape she wished, simply by thinking about it. After years of studying, Kye was able to use these discoveries to further advance her abilities, allowing her to channel her Raiton chakra through her Iron Sand in a way normally only Sakin branch Jiton users could... further solidifying her position as a born Satetsu prodigy.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2012 2:12 pm
I have re-submitted my custom talent now that the Bloodline Re-write is more or less complete. Please re-evaluate at your leisure.
Thanks!
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2012 4:18 pm
Cobra_X Username: Cobra_X
RPC Name: Oniwa,Kye
RPC Rank: Kage
Talent Description: "Satetsu Prodigy" - Kye does not require the use of hand seals to initiate her Satetsu techniques or any specialized Satetsu Ninjutsu. All techniques are triggered at will and require no specific movements or incantations to activate. Additionally, Kye has developed an ability to channel Raiton chakra through her Iron Sand techniques so long as part of the construct created is touching her body... an ability which is usually only reserved for Sakin branch Jiton users.
Talent Sacrifice: Kye only has one arm. This has drastically altered her life in a variety of ways, which for many years limited what she was capable of achieving and continues to limit her in many, despite the ways she has developed to overcome the missing limb.
How it happened: Born to a poor family in the Rice Country during a warring period, Kye was born with only one arm and has struggled to survive her entire life. The ability to control Iron Sand had always been within her, but had never manifested itself until triggered by an immense trauma in her life. After this event however, as she saw the iron Sand floating around her, seemingly without any instruction, Kye began to reach out to the sand, only to see it follow the movements of her hand. Initially, Kye had no idea what was happening, but over time, she found that she was capable of wielding the Iron Sand with great proficiency and developed the skill naturally.
After years of studying as a shinobi, Kye eventually realized that her innate ability to control Iron Sand had been drawing from her chakra the whole time. Through vast amounts of research, Kye found that her chakra was uniquely linked to the electrical impulses of her brain, her thoughts alone automatically creating the necessary electrical/magnetic fields which allowed her to manipulate the Iron Sand into any shape she wished, simply by thinking about it. After years of studying, Kye was able to use these discoveries to further advance her abilities, allowing her to channel her Raiton chakra through her Iron Sand in a way normally only Sakin branch Jiton users could... further solidifying her position as a born Satetsu prodigy.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2012 6:31 pm
Username:
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
RPC Name:
Laxus Makarov
RPC Rank:
D
Bloodline/Clan/Demon:
Satetsu
Profession:
Ninjutsu
Ninja Types:
Chakra Control
Elemental Control ( Raiton )
Talent Description:
Laxus gains a +1 to Satetsu jutsu used in terms of strength. Because of Laxus' power in raiton, he is constantly generating a larger field of magnetism than most other members of the bloodline. His magnetic field is around the size of someone a rank larger than his current rank, and just as powerful. This allows him to make stronger constructs, and maintain a better control.
Laxus is capable of charging a Satetsu technique with raiton chakra by doubling the cost of the technique. This means that the Satetsu delivers a shock equal to the rank of the technique upon touch. The electricity Laxus produces makes it so that his magnetic wave is charged with raiton chakra, crackling every now and then. The constructs he creates are capable of acting like a lightnng rod and absorbing all of the raiton charged around Laxus' body. This permits that he doubles the cost of the technique and makes small barbs along the sides of a technique, so that all of the electricity is absorbed into the technique.
Laxus is treated as always grounded. This is because of his control of electricity, and the electricity coursing through his body. His body is more capable of dispersing it, and in much larger quantities. Laxus gains a +1 stackable resistance to raiton techniques up to B rank because of this.
Talent Sacrifice:
Laxus suffers a -.5 rank to Doton jutsu. We all know that Doton is weak against raiton, so since Laxus generates electricity on the sheer scale he does, it weakens his doton techniques.
Laxus loses main body function ( Basically loses control of his body and chakra system, often lashing out randomly. ) around high levels of magnetism, and receives debilitating headaches which once every 3 posts of him being in thisstate make him cease moving completely, and grasp his head. staying within range of the magnetic field for 12+ posts makes him begin to bleed from his eyes, ears, and nose as his mind begins to hemorrhage.
Laxus has to roll a 100 sided die every week IRP and if a 90-100 is rolled, he is out of commission for that many posts. While in this state he is to be under constant surveillance of medical ninja. Because of Laxus' severe electrical charge, his nervous system is extremely worn. It not only affects his magnetic field, it even affects his system terribly.
How it happened:
Laxus's body produces a much larger amount of electricity than the average human. The average human produces around 10 volts of electricity, where as Laxus produces about 100 volts. This leads to his magnetic field being much stronger than most, and allowing him to make much more usage of his bloodline. Laxus's high electrical production reduces the effects of his ground based techniques, and makes him prone to severe and instant horrific reactions to magnetic fields that are stronger than his own.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 6:40 am
Hello TvIa,
So, I've been asked to judge this since I was the one that recently re-vamped the Magnet Release Bloodline. sufficed to say, there are changes that you are not aware of yet, but I'll cover what you do and don't need to know...
So as I see it, there are a couple of problems with your talent, so I'm going to have to say its denied. Here are my list of gripes:
1. I can understand your character's increased amounts of electricity surging through them increasing the strength of your magnetic fields, thus increasing the power and range of Satetsu techniques... but I don't think it increases the STRENGTH of your constructs.
Sure... it would increase the speed and therefore the force behind a construct... but a shield or platform wouldn't increase in durability due to your talent. If anything, the excess lightning would weaken your control of such things and possibly even make your defensive structures weaker and less intricate in their composition. So I can understand larger and faster... but not Stronger and Increasing in Control. (Control seems to be your weakness in a lot of ways)
2. As to charging your Satetsu with Raiton chakra... I'm going to have to disagree for the same reason stated above. Channeling Raiton into your techniques would require nuiance and control... not wild amounts of Raiton chakra thrown at them randomly. Iron itself is not a particularly good conductor (as compared to other metals)... so I'm not sure this fits. (Plus, you're already increasing the rank of your techniques... electrical conductivity would be a bit much as well)
3. What do you mean Stackable resistance to Raiton up to B-rank? I don't understand this. also... I can understand that you'd be able to tolerate your own electricity... but I would imagine that being hit with even MORE Raiton would make your entire system go haywire... like when chakra is injected into a Konaga.
4. Sacrifice of -.5 to Doton?... How does that even manifest itself? I'd just take the full rank reduction. (Since you're increasing the rank of Satetsu)
5. What does "around high levels of magnetism" mean? Is this You using any Jiton ability? So as soon as you trigger your abilities... in 2 more posts, you freeze up? This needs to be described better.
6. Whats with the random 12 post number? 12 posts... is a LOT of posts. Shinji traveled from The Earth Country to Sunagakure in fewer posts then that. In most situations... that's an entire fight.
7. Weeks in an RP are nearly impossible to track. I've been RPing with Shinji in the same day for months now. This is a bad mechanic. Also... lets say you roll a 95... Does that mean you're out of commission for 95 posts?
...this seems like a very poor mechanic for applying a weakness to balance out the strengths gained.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 1:41 pm
Okay, is it up now? just so I can look at it. 1. Well, with increased range and strength of the magnetic fields, I thought that it would make them equally stronger, since with more strength, I'd be able to compact them with much more force, making them much more dense. That's where I was coming from with that. If this is incorrect, then I'll edit that bit. Laxus has elemental control Raiton as well as improved chakra control as his first benefit. So I was thinking that he'd have adapted to channeling his overly abundant raiton. so that's where I'm getting the improved control over his Satetsu from. Since his specific magnetic field is generated by electricity, he'd be more likely to have control over it due to his natural affinity to raiton. If this is incorrect, then please explain it so that I can get a grasp of it. 2. That was more of a little bonus for myself, I'm planning on making a jutsu that does that, as well as a Satetsu/Raiton mix of some of the Raiton techniques once they are released in their revised forms. I'm willing to give that one up completely. 3. Laxus is basically functioning as a lightning rod. He has so much coursing through his body already, that he occasionally expels it through his feet, or through any other body part touching the ground. It is a basic adaptation his body has undergone in order to still function without increased sensitivity, or action speed due to the increased stimulus. If need be, I can omit that, and just turn it into a jutsu instead. I'd make it Guild wide for Satetsu users. 4. Basically, it would mean that my doton techniques can't stand against any technique of the same rank. Basically it is so that if I used a D rank technique, someone can't walk up with an E rank attack and destroy it. If it works better, I'll edit it so that it is -1 rank up to B rank. 5. Basically if he stands within Kye's magnetic field, it's going to screw him up. If someone creates a magnetic field of greater power than his own ( I.e. D rank Laxus is treated as C rank, C.5 rank and above would make him flip out. ) I meant to have it say that around higher levels of magnetism than Laxus can produce. I'll reword that, or if it isn't a viable weakness, then I'll omit it completely. 6. Basically should he ever be in the vicinity of Kye for more than 12 posts, he'll begin to bleed because of the immense strain on his body. Or if a field is generated by another Raiton user striking a metal rod with enough power to create a magnetic field stronger than Laxus' then he'll suffer. If I need to, I'll edit it, but by the time 12 posts rolls around, I would have thought that they would have moved Laxus from the magnetic field. If this won't work, can you suggest something similar? I want to keep it as close to this as possible. 7. Okay, how about every 20 posts? That would be more frequent, and would simulate the sheer amount of strain put on his body from his raiton chakra. I could edit it so that it is that many post minus 90, so I only have a range of 1-10. I was meaning for it to be that many posts, but I now realize that it would just be amazingly annoying typing out that many posts. I thought that the weaknesses were fairly good, considering that one of them completely makes Laxus unable to function, and the others reduce Laxus' ability to use doton effectively.
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 6:13 am
When you re-submit your talent, please do so in a new post and keep in mind all that we have discussed in PMs. Thanks!
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 10:11 pm
Username:
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
RPC Name:
Ame Amaru
RPC Rank:
D
Bloodline/Clan/Demon:
Kumo Clan
Profession:
Taijutsu
Ninja Types:
Speed Shinobi
Chakra Control
Talent Description:
Ame is a home to a dark creature, her rage allows her to release a beast from within that is parallel to that of a curse mark's release. When Ame is angered and wills it, she undergoes a terrible transformation. Her jaw splits at the center, and is revealed to actually be mandibles like what a spider would have. Her body thickens and grows to make her appear as if she were a human sized spider. Her hands and feet become covered with chakra, and she gains the abilities of wall and water walking. Her forehead widens and lengthens, and more eyes open, arranged much like a spider's eyes would be. Her speed is increased by one rank, as well as her strength. She is now capable of draining a human of all bodily fluids or eating them whole, whichever suits her fancy. This shape lasts for her rank x 5 posts. ( I.e. E=5,D=10,C=15, etc etc... )
Being a connoisseur of the human body, she is well versed in the medical arts, having inquired about it to her personal care taker who, while still living, was pretty much her mother and mentor. Ame is capable of learning all medical jutsu.
Talent Sacrifice:
While in the state of her horrible form, she is unable to use any type of jutsu, as she is more spider than human. She also suffers a -1 rank to all aspects for a number of IRL days equal to her rank minus 10 ( I.e. E=9, D=8, C=7, etc etc... ) And she is bed ridden for 5 days before that, as her body resets, and her stomach digests the body/bodily fluids.
She is only capable of learning two taijutsu styles, as she gives all of her extra time to learning the medical arts. She suffers a +3 learning post to learning any medical technique.
She does not have the four extra arms of the Kumo clan.
How it happened:
There is a reason she was worshiped in the first place, her bestial form would be why. She had an exceedingly rare genetic quirk, where she didn't obtain the four extra arms of the Kumo clan, but instead she gained a much more fearsome ability. After learning of her power, since she was unaware since it happened monthly when she hungered, she inquired to her care taker, the matriarch of the coven that worshiped her, as to why she always felt so bad afterward, and how this could be remedied. The matriarch couldn't answer fully, but she did say that she helped it along quite nicely by applying her medical abilities. Then Ame began to inquire as to how to preform these medical abilities. Long story short she learned enough to know she could learn the medical techniques if she so chose, and applied herself, then she ate her care taker, the last surviving member of the coven.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:27 pm
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz Username:
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
RPC Name:
Ame Amaru
RPC Rank:
D
Bloodline/Clan/Demon:
Kumo Clan
Profession:
Taijutsu
Ninja Types:
Speed Shinobi
Chakra Control
Talent Description:
Ame is a home to a dark creature, her rage allows her to release a beast from within that is parallel to that of a curse mark's release. When Ame is angered and wills it, she undergoes a terrible transformation. Her jaw splits at the center, and is revealed to actually be mandibles like what a spider would have. Her body thickens and grows to make her appear as if she were a human sized spider. Her hands and feet become covered with chakra, and she gains the abilities of wall and water walking. Her forehead widens and lengthens, and more eyes open, arranged much like a spider's eyes would be. Her speed is increased by one rank, as well as her strength. She is now capable of draining a human of all bodily fluids or eating them whole, whichever suits her fancy. This shape lasts for her rank x 5 posts. ( I.e. E=5,D=10,C=15, etc etc... )
Being a connoisseur of the human body, she is well versed in the medical arts, having inquired about it to her personal care taker who, while still living, was pretty much her mother and mentor. Ame is capable of learning all medical jutsu.
Talent Sacrifice:
While in the state of her horrible form, she is unable to use any type of jutsu, as she is more spider than human. She also suffers a -1 rank to all aspects for a number of IRL days equal to her rank minus 10 ( I.e. E=9, D=8, C=7, etc etc... ) And she is bed ridden for 5 days before that, as her body resets, and her stomach digests the body/bodily fluids.
She is only capable of learning two taijutsu styles, as she gives all of her extra time to learning the medical arts. She suffers a +3 learning post to learning any medical technique.
She does not have the four extra arms of the Kumo clan.
How it happened:
There is a reason she was worshiped in the first place, her bestial form would be why. She had an exceedingly rare genetic quirk, where she didn't obtain the four extra arms of the Kumo clan, but instead she gained a much more fearsome ability. After learning of her power, since she was unaware since it happened monthly when she hungered, she inquired to her care taker, the matriarch of the coven that worshiped her, as to why she always felt so bad afterward, and how this could be remedied. The matriarch couldn't answer fully, but she did say that she helped it along quite nicely by applying her medical abilities. Then Ame began to inquire as to how to preform these medical abilities. Long story short she learned enough to know she could learn the medical techniques if she so chose, and applied herself, then she ate her care taker, the last surviving member of the coven.
And I really don't think I need to explain why.
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