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 Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:41 am
Katon: Hibashiri- How about I raise it to C-rank? The flames should be hot enough to inflict second degree burns on contact with flesh and heat up a metal weapon to a point where the victim is forced to release it. To allow the flames to become three feet higher or extend another 3 meters costs an additional two chakra points. I'll set the maximum range to about 10 meters. Blossoming Dragon: The costs remains at B-rank, it is the users skill with this jutsu that allows it to become stronger. I'm not sure if this is allowed or not, but I decided to give it a short sweatdrop I can make that reduction with no problem Kyoushin: Yes, Kyoushin works best when used in a team smile Konsui: I can bump it up to B-rank. If you still feel a little uncomfortable I can try to think of method to detect it a little easier. Yoen Dizorubu: Awseome, thanks!
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:45 am
iAkura-kun utsu Type: Ninjutsu Jutsu Name: Blizzard Swallow Jutsu Rank: B Jutsu Description: Just like it's predecessor, Tsubame Fubuki, the user creates swallows out of ice. Unlike the original, these swallows are much larger and faster, around two feet long and a foot tall. Using this technique, the user creates up to three swallows, which last up to two posts. Jutsu Type: Nin Jutsu Name: Ice Manipulation Jutsu Rank: E-S Jutsu Description: Like the name suggests, this technique allows the ninja to manipulate their Hyouton Ice. This technique is gained once the bloodline is awakened and the user has trained the fifteen posts needed to master it. This technique allows the user to manipulate their ice, up to a certain level, allowing the user to create, and expand ice to a shape which they desire. E rank: A maximum of 2 feet. D rank: A maximum of 4 feet. C rank: A maximum of 8 feet. B rank: A maximum of 12 feet. A rank: A maximum of 15 feet. S rank: A maximum of 20 feet. Note: The user can only use up to one rank above them when it comes to the manipulation, in other words, a Genin can use up to C rank, a Chunin up to be and so on. Also, this technique can be melted by Katon jutsu one rank bellow them, since it isn’t as powerful as the normal Ice used on the Hyouton Jutsu. Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Jutsu Name: Claws of Ice Jutsu Rank: D - B Jutsu Description: Focusing their chakra on to their hands, the user Is able to create up to five claws of ice, each one up to a foot long. This ice is strong enough to cut through Wood at D rank, through Iron at C rank, and is able to dent steel at B rank. The claws can be adjusted to do the amount of damage the user wishes by paying the needed amount of chakra, and consequently, they can be shattered by whatever the other rank can cut; D rank can be destroyed by Iron, C and B rank by steel. These claws last up to five posts, but the user can pay chakra equivalent to one rank under the decried power to keep them active for 3 more posts. Jutsu Type: Nin Jutsu Name: Blade of Ice Jutsu Rank: D-B Jutsu Description: The user creates a blade of ice which is at par in strength with most normal steel blades. By paying a D rank equivalent of chakra, the user is able to create a blade up to two feet in length, by paying a C rank amount of chakra, the user is able to create up to a four foot katana, and by paying a B rank equivalent, the user can create a large cleaver. This blade is also able to freeze any suiton jutsu it comes in contact with by paying the same amount of chakra as the jutsu that is being frozen. Maximum rank: A rank.
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:47 am
Harass Martin, it's his job. heart
...I was just trying to make you think about your submissions more expansively.
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:55 am
Ah you could have told me that sweatdrop
Sorry Cobra
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:00 pm
Jutsu Name: Uchigawa no kokoro no kyōfu (Inner Mind's Fear)
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu-Signature Jutsu
Jutsu Rank: C
Jutsu Description: After countless hours and endless nights studying the inner workings of the human psyche, Takasugi discovered something that plagued nearly every human other then the fear of death, and that is the fear of failing themselves and the ones they loved. Thus, Takasugi began to craft a jutsu that would play on this deep inner fear of the human race. This jutsu is activated when Takasugi makes eye contact with the opponent while holding a handseal. Once activated, a gust of wind seems to pass over the area and the victims eyesight blacks out for but a brief moment. Once they regain their sight, they are shown an image of a worst case scenario. For a Kage or loyal village member, they may see their village in ruins, for those who tend to lean towards more selfish means, they may see themselves defeated under the heel of their hated rival. The jutsu is intensely personally, as every person's failure is different. Friend, Lovers, Family and Rivals can all appear in the illusion, also Takasugi is able to bend the victims 5 senses to his will and affect not only their sight, but all their other senses as well to increase the realism of the illusion. If the victim can see though the illusion, then they can Kai out of it or wait for the illusion to run its course. If the victim is unable to see though the illusion, the overwhelming sense of failure and grief will overwhelm their cerebral cortex and cause the victim's brain, and therefore their entire body to shut down for one whole post, enabling Takasugi and his allies to do as they please.
Odds of seeing through the Illusion based on Stamina Drain:
Full Stamina: 75% chance of breaking out of the illusion.
3/4 Stamina: 50 % chance breaking out of the illusion
1/2 Stamina: 25% chance of breaking out of the illusion
Below 1/2: 10 % chance of breaking out of the illusion
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:29 am
iHarkyInferni-kun Can all of these techniques be set aflame? Ash Spray: It will be extremely suspectible to changes in wind, whether from an explosive note or Fuuton technique. Water will also be able to wash it away and for clarifications sake, how much space will this cloud occupy? Burning Ash: It needs a range and a description of the type of damage it can inflict on an enemy or object. Also it should have an elemental weakness to water. Also are you saying that if it doesn't strike an object when it goes far enough the jutsu just comes apart? Smokers Lung: Strong enough winds can send the smoke right back to the user while water will just wash it away. Also, can this smoke be ignited like your previous jutsu? Ash Bullet: Range? Also even though it is a solid ball, Fuuton techniques or at least strong winds can alter the course of the projectile. C-rank Fuuton techniques can easily take the bullet apart and countinue on. A Water Bullet would just cancel out the ash and also be destroyed. Water Body Absorb: I remember this from VR! I only have a few questions. Exactly how many hours back would the user be able to experience? I would prefer if this technique could only be learned with special permission from a Hokage and only taught to Sp. Jounin and above. I mean, it's not something that would be casually taught by a sensei unless he was training Hunter ninja or ANBU. Does this sound okay to you or am I just thinking to hard? Blizzard Swallow: Exactly how fast would these swallows be able to move? They are pretty large. Also they should be suspectible to blunt force such as from a Doton technique or a strong punch/kick. Ice Manipulation: If using a rank of Ice Manipulation above themselves, a penalty to chakra and/or stamina should be put in place. Also if you manipulate a path of ice into shapes, the size of the patch will shrink as the ice moves to form the shape. So be mindfull of the size of your manipulations. Claws of Ice: Ice denting steel and cutting through Iron? I understand this is Naruto and all but this is still very strong. Instead of cutting Iron and denting Steel, perhaps the claws could match those materials without being damaged. Blade of Ice: For the freezing suiton ability you can allow it to freeze techniques two ranks below the blade without paying a cost, one rank below it by paying half the chakra cost, and equal rank pays the chakra cost. Freezing an A-rank technique however would not work and would be pretty hard considering alot of them involve a large amount of water. Make sure when using this blade you do not freeze entire lakes or even rivers. Something like a large, deep puddle should be the max amount of water than can be frozen. How can you decide if the victim 'fails' to penetrate the illusion? Do they have to be below a certain rank? You could make the technique last a certain number of posts before the shutdown occurs, but then again I feel like the victims will take advantage of this and automatically Kai out of the technique :/ Okay, how about you allow the techniques success to be determined by the victims current chakra and/or stamina level? For example, someone with only a fourth of their chakra left would be highly suspectible while another ninja with full chakra will be able to escape easier. Also do you have to hold eye contact with the victim and hold the handsign?
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:37 am
Martin Spiralwave Water Body Absorb: I remember this from VR! I only have a few questions. Exactly how many hours back would the user be able to experience? I would prefer if this technique could only be learned with special permission from a Hokage and only taught to Sp. Jounin and above. I mean, it's not something that would be casually taught by a sensei unless he was training Hunter ninja or ANBU. Does this sound okay to you or am I just thinking to hard?
...and I would actually agree with this stipulation. It is really a Hunter-nin skill, so I can add a note in the description that it can only be learned with a Kage's approval and can only be learned by Special Jounin who are also ANBU.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:42 am
Cobra_X Martin Spiralwave Water Body Absorb: I remember this from VR! I only have a few questions. Exactly how many hours back would the user be able to experience? I would prefer if this technique could only be learned with special permission from a Hokage and only taught to Sp. Jounin and above. I mean, it's not something that would be casually taught by a sensei unless he was training Hunter ninja or ANBU. Does this sound okay to you or am I just thinking to hard?
...and I would actually agree with this stipulation. It is really a Hunter-nin skill, so I can add a note in the description that it can only be learned with a Kage's approval and can only be learned by Special Jounin who are also ANBU.Okay, that sounds good. Once you edit in that note, I can approve of this jutsu.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:47 am
@Martin
I liked the idea of it being determined by stamina, also wither a person is a specialized in Genjutsu or know alot about Genjutsu. For example, if a person knows only a couple or no Genjutsu techniques, then they are more likely to fail seeing though the illusion because they don't know about crafting illusion..know what I mean?
And no, once he makes contact, they fall into the illusion until they break out of it or shutdown.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:47 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:03 am
Malfrost @Martin I liked the idea of it being determined by stamina, also wither a person is a specialized in Genjutsu or know alot about Genjutsu. For example, if a person knows only a couple or no Genjutsu techniques, then they are more likely to fail seeing though the illusion because they don't know about crafting illusion..know what I mean? And no, once he makes contact, they fall into the illusion until they break out of it or shutdown. Okay, just make a chart for the effects on the enemy based on stamina and both of us can look through it until we are both satisfied. And the number of Genjutsu they know doesn't directly link to their skill in resisting it. Approved! I'll add it and the rest of the jutsu to the list later today
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:24 am
Full Stamina: 75% chance of breaking out of the illusion.
3/4 Stamina: 50 % chance breaking out of the illusion
1/2 Stamina: 25% chance of breaking out of the illusion
Below 1/2: 10 % chance of breaking out of the illusion
I just figured that system up on the rolling of a 6 sided die, so 75% would be rolling a 1,2,3, or 4 50 % would be 1,2 or 3. 25% would be a 1,2 and 10% would be a 1. I'm not sure where you all stand on rolling of dice, but that was the only fair thing I could really think of..of course I can adjust the numbers and percentages around, but I think dice rolling is the only fair way to determine it...and how would the rank of a Genjutsu play into because technically I get to increase the rank of all my Genjutsu by 1.5 ranks. So I'm alttile confused on how rank plays in on breaking or not breaking out of a genjutsu.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:58 am
iHarkyInferni-kun Note: All of these are Private and only to be used by Nexus Uchiha. They may be copied by Sharingan.
Username: iHarkyInferni-kun
Rpc Name: Nexus Uchiha
Rpc Village: Leaf
Rpc Rank: Genin
Jutsu Name: Ash Spray
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu - Private
Jutsu Rank: D
Jutsu Description: Nexus inhales on his cigarette until it is mostly ash and he swallows it. By focusing chakra on the flames, Nexus makes them grow and it creates large amount of smoke and soot in his lungs. In a large blast, Nexus releases it and sends a cloud of smoke and ash into the air, limiting vision and causing dehabilitating effects. (-1 more Stamina when using Techniques) This lasts for 3 posts and then the effects are cleared.
The ash can be set aflame once it is in the air by a C-Rank of higher Fire Jutsu and covers an area of 5 meters around the user. If a D-Rank or higher Water Jutsu is used or a D-Rank Wind Jutsu is used, the cloud can get wetted or blow away.
Jutsu Name: Burning Ash
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu - Private
Jutsu Rank: C
Jutsu Description: Nexus inhales on his cigarette until it is mostly ash and he swallows it. By focusing chakra on the flames, Nexus makes them grow and it creates large amount of smoke and soot in his lungs. Nexus then releases it and send flames, ash, and smoke at a target. The blast is sent in a small orb of all the contents, but it has a violent combustion upon impact. This is best aimed at the ground. If it misses and does not make contact, the contents just fall to the ground and the flames die out.
This technique can travel 10 meters in a straight line, but can be wetted down and rendered useless by a C-Rank or higher Water Jutsu. The explosion is about 5 meters wide and causes second degree burns. There's also a small concussion blast that will either disorient the target or push them back a bit after getting burned.
Jutsu Name: Smoker's Lung
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu - Private
Jutsu Rank: C
Jutsu Description: Nexus inhales a large amount of air and uses his chakra to change the composition of it by adding smoke to it from his bad smoking habits. Nexus then spews the smoke out into the air, trying to infect the target with this smoke. This smoke, however, is toxic and will infect someone's lungs, causing some bad effects. (-1 Stamina ever post and -2 more Stamina on every technique) This lasts for a total of 3 posts.
A C-Ranked or higher Wind Jutsu can blow this away, but this jutsu cannot be ignited by a Fire Jutsu. This is a point-blank range attack. The target must be within 1 meter of the user.
Jutsu Name: Ash Bullet
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu - Private
Jutsu Rank: D
Jutsu Description: Nexus inhales on his cigarette until it is mostly ash and he swallows it. By focusing chakra on the flames, Nexus makes them grow and it creates large amount of smoke and soot in his lungs. This is then released in the form of a solid ball of ash and soot. Upon contact with a target, this ball explodes with smoke, ash, and soot all over, causing blindness for one posts, allowing for great sneak attacks.
A C-Rank of higher Wind Jutsu will be able to blow this technique away and continue on through. A D-Rank Water of Fire Jutsu will nullify or ignite this Jutsu. This has a range of 10 meters and causes a ash cloud of 5 meters around upon impact.
Martin Spiralwave Ash Spray: Edited
Burning Ash: Edited. And yes, if it doesn't hit anything for the whole range of the Jutsu, then it falls apart. But that's why you shoot it at the ground. It'll hit and then explode.
Smoker's Lung: Edited
Ash Bullet: Edited
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 11:40 am
Martin Spiralwave Blizzard Swallow: Exactly how fast would these swallows be able to move? They are pretty large. Also they should be suspectible to blunt force such as from a Doton technique or a strong punch/kick. Ice Manipulation: If using a rank of Ice Manipulation above themselves, a penalty to chakra and/or stamina should be put in place. Also if you manipulate a path of ice into shapes, the size of the patch will shrink as the ice moves to form the shape. So be mindfull of the size of your manipulations. Claws of Ice: Ice denting steel and cutting through Iron? I understand this is Naruto and all but this is still very strong. Instead of cutting Iron and denting Steel, perhaps the claws could match those materials without being damaged. Blade of Ice: For the freezing suiton ability you can allow it to freeze techniques two ranks below the blade without paying a cost, one rank below it by paying half the chakra cost, and equal rank pays the chakra cost. Freezing an A-rank technique however would not work and would be pretty hard considering alot of them involve a large amount of water. Make sure when using this blade you do not freeze entire lakes or even rivers. Something like a large, deep puddle should be the max amount of water than can be frozen. Swallows: Is matching the user in speed acceptable? And yes, a jutsu which uses blunt force will destroy them, I'll add that once you look this over. Manipulation: How about a +3 CP/Stamina penalty for doing so? Blade: Nah' I'd like to keep it the way it is so it can remain balanced, I know that freezing an A ranked technique would be hard since they are huge, but that is why I'd like to keep the chakra penalties as they are, for balancing reasons. And despite their size, I'm pretty sure it's possible since the user will freeze the frontal area of the attack, and what's behind will soon follow, a domino effect if you will. Claws: Alright then, how about it dents Iron and is matched by steel at B rank?
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 9:42 am
Malfrost Full Stamina: 75% chance of breaking out of the illusion. 3/4 Stamina: 50 % chance breaking out of the illusion 1/2 Stamina: 25% chance of breaking out of the illusion Below 1/2: 10 % chance of breaking out of the illusion I just figured that system up on the rolling of a 6 sided die, so 75% would be rolling a 1,2,3, or 4 50 % would be 1,2 or 3. 25% would be a 1,2 and 10% would be a 1. I'm not sure where you all stand on rolling of dice, but that was the only fair thing I could really think of..of course I can adjust the numbers and percentages around, but I think dice rolling is the only fair way to determine it...and how would the rank of a Genjutsu play into because technically I get to increase the rank of all my Genjutsu by 1.5 ranks. So I'm alttile confused on how rank plays in on breaking or not breaking out of a genjutsu. Yeah, the dice system works out. Also, know that your Cunning score does not add to the Genjutsu Class Perk. But I'm actually thinking about creating a system for Genjutsu so for now, try not to worry too much about how rank plays in. Ash Spray: An equal rank water jutsu should be able to wet this. It is only a cloud of ash. Also it needs a range and amount of space it can occupy. Burning Ash: Again, an equal rank water jutsu can neutralize this and the range is pretty far. Something like 1o meters would be more appropriate. Smokers Lung: It needs a range and a size Ash Bullet: Blindness for two posts is alot for a D-rank jutsu. You can either have blindness for one post, or poor vision for two posts though. Swallows: Yes but because of their size nothing past Sp. Jounin. Manipulation: Yes that would be acceptable. Once you edit, I can approve of the technique. Blade: I can't allow freezing an entire A-rank jutsu with a melee weapon. Especially since higher rnaked Water jutsu tend to be especially large and can do some serious envriomental damage. To be honest, freezing a B-rank jutsu is somewhat pushing it. Claws: Yes, that would be much better.
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