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 Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:40 pm
Yeah, heels.
OH YOUR AVERAGE CAPSLOCKING CROSBYFAG
...Isn't that what I am
I'm not watching the Summer Olympics either.
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:42 pm
@Luna: THANKS FOR CORRECTING MY ENGLISH.
I find this somewhat pathetic since English is my first language and yours is not. ; ;
LOL no, you're tolerable and awesome and they're not. talk2hand
*brofist*
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Blacklight Virus Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:43 pm
UHM IT'S ALRIGHT i cleaned it all up and now my screen is pretty
well parise is better at hockey than kaner so kaner can be better at twister |D
I HAVE NO IDEA WHY I DON'T LIKE 'EM
dammit do i have to kill you
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:45 pm
Also, you gotta say ''not-too-subtle''
Well, I've been bathing(what) in English since I'm 5
I blame video games
...SO I'M NOT THAT BAD~?
*brofists without the picture because she's on PS3*
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:46 pm
HOORAY!!!!!111
this is true even though CK and I make fun of Parise a lot because of his s**t performance during that Blackhawks game oops
HURR WE'RE JUST THAT COOL
maybe
OK SO UMMMM I need to change this part of the fic, I think. <___>
Ru hugged her boyfriend and he smiled at her. "Oh, look at the time!" Parise exclaimed nervously. "It's almost midnight! We have to get to bed before Santa comes."
Ru raised her eyebrow. "You still believe in Santa Claus?" CK and Kane's derpy face snickered.
"Well... no. Not really. I mean, I believe it's the feeling in your heart, but..." Parise's voice trailed off as his mind wandered to other places that manly minds go.
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SHOULD I CHANGE THE CONVERSATION TO CK AND KANE AND THEN HAVE PARISE INTERUPT AND GO "NO, SANTA CLAUS ISS NOT REAL I WILL PROVE IT!!!!" or something
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:49 pm
@Luna: Nah, not-so-subtle works because it's sarcasm. (Oops, it was a typo.)
LOL nice. I see~
d'awwww
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:49 pm
Derp
Well, I think that part's pretty good!
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:50 pm
Blacklight Virus @Luna: Nah, not-so-subtle works because it's sarcasm. (Oops, it was a typo.)
LOL nice. I see~
d'awwww Well you wrote not-to-subtle. I thought you meant ''too''.
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:52 pm
Oh, yeah, we changed the plot a bit, Luna. So now the real Santa is Wayne Gretzky and you control the Crosby clones, but you're making them steal people's video games or something, which is why Gretzky came to get our help and take us to the North Pole which is actually the Gretzky restaurant in Toronto. And you and Crosby get married in the end and one of the clones gets married to Malkin.
Yeah, it was a typo. ; ;
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:55 pm
idk if you should change it
it sounds more like a conversation ck and kane would have though lololol
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:56 pm
I'll go ahead and change it. :U
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:57 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:58 pm
Blacklight Virus Oh, yeah, we changed the plot a bit, Luna. So now the real Santa is Wayne Gretzky and you control the Crosby clones, but you're making them steal people's video games or something, which is why Gretzky came to get our help and take us to the North Pole which is actually the Gretzky restaurant in Toronto. And you and Crosby get married in the end and one of the clones gets married to Malkin.
Yeah, it was a typo. ; ; Oh deary at least Malkin gets his happy ending. I like this plot better.
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:00 pm
@Ru: 'KAY CHANGED IT TEEHEE
@Luna: ikr
Let's see.. now they go to bed, but Zach hears noises and wakes up and shouts "ROBBER" and then s**t happens from there??
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:03 pm
Blacklight Virus @Ru: 'KAY CHANGED IT TEEHEE
@Luna: ikr
Let's see.. now they go to bed, but Zach hears noises and wakes up and shouts "ROBBER" and then s**t happens from there?? Seems good to me And if I control the clones does this mean I'm the antagonist?
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